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Substrain-Seven said:
And it was pretty hard to see the light from the beginning, what with the Christmas journal.
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Oh yeah, it was really weird reading that Christmas journal, because at first I had just occasionally seen his comments on TomPreston's stuff and he didn't seem to be that bad, just a bit odd and thinking too highly of himself and his art/writing. But then I saw the Christmas Party journal and...yeah.
 
Coster said:
Y'know what? I'm in, I wanna fucking do this, and I know just the style I'll go for.

Anyone ever play Psychonauts...?
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I want in as an artist or something, this sounds fun :evil: though i've never played psychonauts

ASoulMan said:
"Spiritual Summary: Epic"

I don't understand this. Also, one of Young Guardian's personality traits is sadistic.

YG also looks like he's relieving himself when he's putting on his boots.
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He's not even trying to hide the fact that the character is obviously him
 
balcolm said:
I may be reading too much into this, but I feel the fact that the villain of these comics is his brother is telling that their falling out may have been larger than we think.
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I think it's mostly GK being childish and petty after his brother smashed up a cardboard plaything that he cherished for some reason. Just the usual sibling squabble that GK took exceptionally hard. Certainly nothing to kill a cat over.
 
balcolm said:
I may be reading too much into this, but I feel the fact that the villain of these comics is his brother is telling that their falling out may have been larger than we think.
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They definitely dislike each other, there's no doubt about that. From the little we've observed I think a large part of it is due to Jay having a victim complex and seeing himself as never doing any wrong. The one "wrong" his brother did towards him that we know of was destroying some stupid thing Jay made in elementary school, we don't hear anything about how Jay has treated his brother though.

Honestly I wouldn't be surprised if Jay was something of a bully towards his brother, even if unintentionally. I don't have anything to back that up really, but Jay's refusal to accept his own flaws, especially when they negatively impact others, makes me wonder if he wasn't a huge pain to grow up with, and if his brother ever acted out against it Jay would frame it as his brother being evil.
 
I love my little sister but I would have gladly throttled her a few times growing up... Because she had light fingers when it came to my clothes... My expensive clothes that I saved up my Saturday job money to buy...


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*draws comic*
 
TopperHay said:
I think it's mostly GK being childish and petty after his brother smashed up a cardboard plaything that he cherished for some reason. Just the usual sibling squabble that GK took exceptionally hard. Certainly nothing to kill a cat over.
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Honestly, this comic would be 100x better if the cat was the hero and Jay was the one who got decapitated.
 
Dammit internet, why do you insist on showing me things I can never unsee?!

God that was awful.

Awful art: Check
Unlikable one-dimensional characters: Check
Incoherent story: Mega Check!

I'm working on an original story of my own but I haven't started writing the first chapter yet simply because I want to get all my world building notes down first and have a clear idea of how I want to proceed. It's obvious that he has no clue how to write a good story. I've read better things on FF.net for crying out loud!

Btw, something I would do when I was 5 or so is I would stack up all my toys into a pile on top of my little play table and sit at the top. I'd end up falling down afterwards but luckily Dad was there to catch me. That and I could sleep practically anywhere.
 
Scans are done and uploaded back on pages 80-81. There are some spots where words got cut off on the edges that I didn't notice until I got home. You can still figure out what was said mostly. My friend now has possession of the books and will try to give his input since he knows nothing of Jay except he likes the PPG's.
 
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