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So, I'm assuming that "Dot" is some kind of representation of a small animal that Jay made out of various materials when he was younger. Barry then defaced "Dot" in some way, possibly out of spite, leaving it in the condition it is in the photograph. Jay views this as an extremely serious act of evil and a betrayal, and as of 2013 "Dot" was still in his possession, unrepaired.

I can't zoom very well on my phone, is anyone able to confirm or correct this?
 
@CWCissey As far as we know, he hasn't strangled a gerbil. I just meant he's the kind of idiot who would do so and then justify why it was more of an epic battle instead of killing a small helpless animal.

...Although I still think even a gerbil could take him on.
 
One thing that amazes me is that Jay cannot draw the "radiation hazard" symbol. Just never gets it right. It's always wonky with the central circle being off-centre. Adobe Illustrator has an alignment function, right? If he really wanted to be lazy, I'm pretty sure the Wingdings font has that symbol as one of the characters.

Given that it's his main character's symbol (oddly appropriate that it's a logo intended to warn people away from something hazardous to all living creatures), Jay really needs to be able to draw it. Imagine how far Superman would have got if Joe Shuster couldn't draw an S...
 
I am sorry for the poor quality photos. After this message posts, I'll be headed to a friend's house who has a scanner. When the scans are done I'll edit the existing posts with the new shots.
 
Just read the comic, makes no sense to me, even if all the pages weren't blurry, and killing a cat with actual blood showing. Not surprised but it is wrong.

As for drawing nuclear symbols, they can be tricky if being a perfectionist but ALOT easier than football, the soccer types.

When I was 5, I remember being obsessed with trains, including Thomas ( I know, typical spergy me) and farms, especially cows.
 
sikotik said:
I am sorry for the poor quality photos. After this message posts, I'll be headed to a friend's house who has a scanner. When the scans are done I'll edit the existing posts with the new shots.
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You don't gotta apologize, you've done the lord's work here. That, and the blur probably made the pages that were blurry look better.

Take your time, I like to think we're all patient.
 
I can't see the images because they're too blurry. I don't know if this is a good or bad thing.

What the hell's a "Dot?"
 
What the hell did I just read :cryblood:. So he manages to kill a cat, make a Mary Sue who must battle his brother who happens to be his arch nemesis, and his use of a horrible drawing style that makes Sonichu look decent in comparison. Tinfoil then ends it with excuses on why it took a year to release his little abomination when he has nothing else going on, and whines about the cost of printing even though he has the money. As a another person mentioned the cat murder is disturbing when we think of his hatred for animals, and love of torture. I know this will sound A-Loggy but I hope he gets sent to prison where Big Bubba his cell mate uses Tinfoil like Jay uses his Blossom Power Puff Love doll. :alog:
 
Ok. I'm not prepared to accept that bloody decapitation and Jay's indifference is how it ends for the cat. This is the internet, dammit, and by Blossom we love cats here.

I propose we use our collective Great Director Kiwiforums Powers to right this wrong.

Who would be up for a collaborative 16 page comic to give this story a happy ending?

I've got a basic plot and dialogue; contributing artists would take a page each and interpret these visually in whatever style they wished.

This isn't a trolling plan, btw - we've established that Jay's not going to come to the FastPacedCWCkiForums and read it.

Just that there's a whole load of talented artists who post in this thread, and I think the end result will be a laugh.
 
I just read through the comic and... wow... this monstrosity makes Sonichu look DC/Marvel tier. At least sonichu is coherent, the characters are charming in an odd way and it's actually pretty funny. This isn't even charming in the slightest, but I think that can be attributed to the art style. There are so many things wrong with this... Why is Jay a powerpuff (or look like one)? Does he have the powers? I couldn't even tell. How does he become super jay or w/e the fuck it is with the armor? What the fuck is the point of having this in what looks like a weird spin off of the PPG universe?

Theres so many plot holes just looking at it, I couldn't even read it so I honestly don't know whats going on so I defiantly may have missed something. Thats not to say this isn't hilarious, because honestly this is in a sad way. The fact that he expects to become famous from this is cringe inducing. And heather, I'm sorry your name is on this, like, if this were my boyfriend/Ex the amount of second hand embarrassment I'd have for him would be beyond words.

Oh and just because: My secret when I was 5 was I would hide in playgrounds and growl at the other kids and scare the piss out of them. I got banned from a fast food place once for that and my mom still don't know why she was asked to leave lol
 
I don't remember what I did when I was five; therefore, I must have been really drunk and stoned back then. Definitely no foot fetish.
 
Absinthe said:
Ok. I'm not prepared to accept that bloody decapitation and Jay's indifference is how it ends for the cat. This is the internet, dammit, and by Blossom we love cats here.

I propose we use our collective Great Director Kiwiforums Powers to right this wrong.

Who would be up for a collaborative 16 page comic to give this story a happy ending?

I've got a basic plot and dialogue; contributing artists would take a page each and interpret these visually in whatever style they wished.

This isn't a trolling plan, btw - we've established that Jay's not going to come to the FastPacedCWCkiForums and read it.

Just that there's a whole load of talented artists who post in this thread, and I think the end result will be a laugh.
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Y'know what? I'm in, I wanna fucking do this, and I know just the style I'll go for.

Anyone ever play Psychonauts...?
 
schiessen said:
I just read through the comic and... wow... this monstrosity makes Sonichu look DC/Marvel tier. At least sonichu is coherent, the characters are charming in an odd way and it's actually pretty funny. This isn't even charming in the slightest, but I think that can be attributed to the art style. There are so many things wrong with this... Why is Jay a powerpuff (or look like one)? Does he have the powers? I couldn't even tell. How does he become super jay or w/e the fuck it is with the armor? What the fuck is the point of having this in what looks like a weird spin off of the PPG universe?

Theres so many plot holes just looking at it, I couldn't even read it so I honestly don't know whats going on so I defiantly may have missed something. Thats not to say this isn't hilarious, because honestly this is in a sad way. The fact that he expects to become famous from this is cringe inducing. And heather, I'm sorry your name is on this, like, if this were my boyfriend/Ex the amount of second hand embarrassment I'd have for him would be beyond words.

Oh and just because: My secret when I was 5 was I would hide in playgrounds and growl at the other kids and scare the piss out of them. I got banned from a fast food place once for that and my mom still don't know why she was asked to leave lol
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You touched on one thing that bothers me a bit about his comic, and it shows he's never read a comic in his life, let alone a superhero comic- which would be good research and kind of required reading if you're gonna attempt a superhero comic. The beginning of a superhero comic always starts with the origin of the hero, or at least heavily eludes to it throughout the first issues. There's no explanation at all in this for who Jay is, how he got his powers, who got him the suit. This is writing 101, whether for comics or anything else. The first chapters are to set the stage and give you a real idea on who the characters are.

Even Powerpuff girls explained their origin story in the opening theme, and then as the series progressed the origin story was expanded on in a few episodes.

He can't write at all. He doesn't understand how story building works. That combined with his unnatural dialogue and his clumsy writing in general makes his dream pretty laughable, and makes me wonder who the hell told this kid he could write?

Even Chris understood that when you start a comic/story, you start with the beginning. The first thing he did was write the origin stories of all his characters. When CHRIS has a better understanding of story-building than you do, it's time to put down the pencil.

/slight comic/writing sperging because I thoroughly enjoy both :(
 
Damn you folks, been lurking this thread for a while now and just had to make an account to be able to read that masterpiece of his. :)

Though wow, I just can't get over how the more you read about this dude the weirder he turns out to be.
 
gukkahattu said:
Damn you folks, been lurking this thread for a while now and just had to make an account to be able to read that masterpiece of his. :)

Though wow, I just can't get over how the more you read about this dude the weirder he turns out to be.
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Every time we dig deeper, it gets harder and harder to see the light from the bottom.
 
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