Amber the Hedgehog
kiwifarms.net
- Joined
- Aug 23, 2018
Not bad but I think her mid section area looks bit too empty now. Maybe few sparkles on stomach too or a bit more lively bikini top? Still huge improvement, the coherent colrs especially look much better. It has now lovely night life vibe that makes me happy.I couldn't help but like this mermaid, even with the SJW aspects. The tail is gorgeous, the sparkles are beautiful, I love the lighting effects, it's actually really pretty and cute. The big issues, imo, were the stretch marks (which, if she's fat because she's a mermaid and has blubber, she wouldn't have fucking stretch marks) and the weird green going on in the image. Like, this mermaid's got a pink tail with cyans and magentas and purples, why the green out of nowhere and only on her head?? That's not even contrast in character design, that's just a bad color choice.
So I just tried to paint over the stretch marks and make the hair/eyes match the tail, and figured while I was at it I'd try to get rid of some of the icky green-ness in the whole image. Like, fuck, she's a mermaid with a pink tail, can't she have a pinkish skin tone? Why do SJW artists always go for the worst shades of brown? I just don't get it. It's not like you have to have yellowy/green skin to be black, come on.