Wow, this thread got aggressive really quickly. Since no ones offering anything new to help, this thread isn't helpful anymore. To those who offered useful information to the table, I thank you and I will use it to improve the cartoon.
Just remember, we already are set on learning how to make the cartoon through the pilot. And sorry if you think it's not an efficient way to make a cartoon, but it's working for the us. Everybody working on GA is learning new and useful things that will help them out in the long run. Hell, I've learned more working on this project about art than I did from a high school teacher.
If anyone has any useful tips on how to improve the cartoon toss me a note on my DeviantArt, it's the only website I really use.
~Nayolfa
Alright, I hate to do this, but I got a soft side so I'll give you some real advice and I hope you take it to heart but understand it probably won't be what you want to hear.
I believe I've said this to literally every artist who has gotten a thread here but always, first and foremost, understand the basics of what you are doing. Judging from your art and your attitude you don't have much experience.
I would personally take a step back and look at what you are doing. You are trying to go headfirst into a project with little knowledge of the work you are doing. Like other people I also have a pet project I hold close to my heart but I know if I were to pursue it instead of honing my skills it would end tragically.
I don't know if you're experimenting with this or you actually want to follow Enter into this wild goose chase but I don't see anything good coming out of this. If you do want to get into a proper animation/design job I would drop this whole thing and get enrolled into school. As I said in a previous post, what school you graduate from in often your biggest assent into getting into the business. High school doesn't teach you shit. At college you'll learn the actual process of film, design, storyboarding and animation along with character design and proper digital media use. I guarantee you, you'll learn more from proper education than trial and error on some dude's poorly written idea.
You need to work on understanding the human form better and developing a style that sets you apart from others. What you currently have is run of the mill and what I call "15 year old who discovered photoshop". Shading needs work, backgrounds need work and don't get me started on your shaky lines.
You simply haven't scratched the surface of developing an animated short let alone a full fledged cartoon. It's ok to accept you have much to learn, then you know to improve. Hell, I'm still learning. Everyone is.
You have a passion but know that you're going down a bad path. You'll grow an ego like Enter that way if you don't.