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360p? Piss Lord are you for real?!
Edit to add a hot take annotation:
• These guys got some nice cars… or rentend some nice cars.
• Who's the fat shirtless guy in the back seat?
• Was that a gunshot special effect while he's pacing in the party bus?
• "Natalie Portman is my baby." What?
• He's making a caricature of snorting coke.
• Bunch of bags of cocaine in ziplock double seal bags. I'm dying.
• He breaks it off with a Shy Ronnie mumble-core outro.
• Replay of him fake-snorting coke. Fade out.
He just dropped another one.
Edit for some more hot take annotation:
• 360p again. But we're seeing the exterior of some nice cars driving in a city at night. Credit where credit is due: I like it. I'd like it more if it was a crisp 1080p I could watch full screen.
• He will get a bar and a half down and it's alright, then he'll bungle the end of the second bar. It's like I'll be able to play it forward in my head and hear what he should say next and how he should say it, and then he goes somewhere else that doesn't work.
• You can hear where he gets tripped up in his flow. It's a little start of a syllable before he actually starts slightly off-beat later. Why doesn't he just do another take. Like, you can get a decent vocal recording with some free software and a decent mic in your bedroom. Go to 1:15 and listen to when he tries to say "on the top of the pool" for a good example.
• "Million Day Baby" In the first video it was Natalie Portman. Now he's after Hillary Swank.
• At 2:30 there is background noise on the audio track. It's sounds like something brushing up against a mic. Maybe he bumped the mic. Again, and I'm not trying to be Stanley Kubrick here, but you need to do another take.
• Some nice visuals of expensive homes people do coke in. I like that.
Maybe it's the beers talking, but I feel like this is an improvement over the first video. If he could really practice his bars and get a comfortable flow going, it would be alright. Have yourself a YouTube like.
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