GayDemiBoy
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- Feb 5, 2018
If you have to heavily limit yourself to just slice of life shit with some branching plot but no real adventure, sense of urgency, or just really anything that makes a slice of life good, you need to over compensate with a lot of poorly written drama.... why is this lesbian slice of life filled with more drama than a soap opera on steroids?
A lot of Lily's issues in the comic could really have not existed if she didn't put stupid headcannons into it. If she didn't have the Gardevoirs naturally live to only be 15 but can live longer if they fuck humans it would have erased the whole mating bond issue, if Lily didn't make Gardevoirs whole species into this uber powered super rare pokemon where apparently basic adoption is impossible to do so with one she wouldn't have the issue of Bonnie and could have said she knew Bill or some dumb shit and he offered to help make a kid but accidently used Gardevoir DNA over like Maikla's. Lily is her own worse enemy when it comes to writing cause she tries to limit herself by adding contrivances to make her renditions of slice of life interesting.
Anyone could make a more interesting story about a lesbian trainer with her companion Gardevoir living their usual life that builds up to learning more about the trainer's past and the taboo feelings their Gardevoir is harboring for them that affects said trainer and her own human relationships. You could even have the Gardevoir do fucked up shit like let's say make the ex girlfriend become more aggressive and abusive until the trainer broke it off before they realize how much of a shitty thing they just did by ruining their trainer's happiness by that and having this dark secret of child rape. It's more forgiveable than the mind rape but Lily makes it worse by now confirming that Marah and Cala out live G. Which means Marah probably mates/mated/rapes/raped Maikla and Cala does the same to the young child she was given to. That or G kills herself or something.
Lily is and will probably always be her own worse enemy. For all her bitching about SU and She-Ra they at least had a lesbian romance that didn't involve one of the characters being in a weird societal beastial three way with a creature that raped them mentally to live longer.