Anyway, would it have improved if it was more episodic, vs. the one-shot style of creepypasta.com? Probably not... The core idea barely has any bone to hang off of. "I found out I'm the antichrist after some guy broke into my house and I browsed one too many web forums" isn't really all that interesting in the grand scheme of things even by itself, much less the way the guy handled it.
Think I'm starting to see Isaiah's distaste when writers reference their other works like it's all a part of some greater universe or something. Well, I still can't see exactly why he doesn't like it, but that passage where he's describing his other works was genuinely more interesting than the rest of the story. Felt like I was on the verge of stepping into something interesting. Like a grand story that incorporated so many disparate elements into one, yet is so far removed from any of them so it's a real trip of a narrative. But no, no, the writer is publicly masturbating again.