TheMysteriousMrEnter

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Reading Mr. Enter's script, I kinda wonder why the "kids" aren't referring to the "adults" as Mom and Dad.

If he was going for a whole "To Kill a Mockingbird" kind of thing, I guess that would make sense, but I think I would be giving him too much credit for that.

He probably just didn't think it through, like the rest of it. He hasn't bothered establishing anything about how this universe works, he doesn't give a damn. How the hell does the education system work, what do teenagers do in this world and why don't the adults just kick the crap out of the little brat kids and overthrow them? I think one about a teenager could actually be interesting, but he's lazy. Ugh.

 

[The Phantom on the Hill]

He probably just didn't think it through, like the rest of it. He hasn't bothered establishing anything about how this universe works, he doesn't give a damn. How the hell does the education system work, what do teenagers do in this world and why don't the adults just kick the crap out of the little brat kids and overthrow them? Ugh.

This. I asked for a series bible since I'm kinda interested in writing for the show, bit he still has yet to get back to me.

 

[Dilbertmann]

This. I asked for a series bible since I'm kinda interested in writing for the show, bit he still has yet to get back to me.

I doubt he will. In fact, it feels like everything he made was shoehorned at the last second. He might as well make up some terribly written lore and call it good.

Either way, I hope ya know what you are getting into. Who knows? You might be a better writer than what Enter conjures up.

 

[The Phantom on the Hill]

I doubt he will. In fact, it feels like everything he made was shoehorned at the last second. He might as well make up some terribly written lore and call it good.

Either way, I hope ya know what you are getting into. Who knows? You might be a better writer than what Enter conjures up.

Eh, a gig's a gig

 

[Dilbertmann]

Eh, a gig's a gig

True that.

 

[Shokew]

How the fuck does a horse make the most sense for a family pet?

Late to the punch, but I don't fucking care even a bit...

I wonder what part of "He is a mother fucking PONYFAG!" some don't, continue to not to, or outright refuse, to understand about En-tard.....

http://comments.deviantart.com/1/512749430/3744167720

ughhhh

I think I'm gonna link him this thread.

GOOD. He blocked me on dA and I could use a good laugh - better than me being unblocked and cussing his ponyfag ass out, risking stoooping to his level.

I say all of this, only because I don't expect him to take our criticism all that well.

 

[Dilbertmann]

Late to the punch, but I don't fucking care even a bit...

I wonder what part of "He is a mother fucking PONYFAG!" some don't, continue to not to, or outright refuse, to understand about En-tard.....



GOOD. He blocked me on dA and I could use a good laugh - better than me being unblocked and cussing his ponyfag ass out, risking stoooping to his level.

I say all of this, only because I don't expect him to take our criticism all that well.

He;s going to be absolutely horrified by my parodies.

 

[WhoWantsStancakes]

I might write a parody about them having incest.

 

[Blindrainbow]

The thing that bothers me most about Enter is the fact he doesn't understand or seem to care about planing, he just makes a cartoon on whim and doesn't bother to develop it. I look at his page filled with many many different scripts at this point he shouldn't be writing scripts, he not close to that point at all at this point he would be working on develop everything about his show such as the characters, the world, all that kind of stuff that goes into a series bible. A series bible however seem to be too much for him, he doesn't know how pitching or developing a cartoon works in the industry and he doesn't want to know because once the first episode is out networks will surly be wanting this and come to him.

 

[WhoWantsStancakes]

I myself am wondering what makes him, a 21 year old who is only well-known because of his polarizing "reviews" an animator. Yet, a professional artist with years of experience and/or art school under their belt isn't.

 

[Kabobs]

Another episode script.

http://mrenter.deviantart.com/art/Growing-Around-Episodes-Picture-Day-513309014

 

[Blindrainbow]

Another episode script.

http://mrenter.deviantart.com/art/Growing-Around-Episodes-Picture-Day-513309014

Why dose he feel the need to write so many scripts?, can't he at lest wait until the actual pilot is finished first.

 

[Dilbertmann]

Another episode script.

http://mrenter.deviantart.com/art/Growing-Around-Episodes-Picture-Day-513309014

Jayzuz Chyst!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (BFE reference for the win)

He just shits out more and more scripts. I do the same to get ahead of deadline, so I can understand Enter's position. But eh, another terrible script for a terrible day.

 

[Meowthkip]

The thing that bothers me most about Enter is the fact he doesn't understand or seem to care about planing, he just makes a cartoon on whim and doesn't brother to develop it. I look at his page filled with many many different scripts at this point he shouldn't be writing scripts, he not close to that at all at this point he would be working on develop everything about his show such as the characters, the world, all that kind of stuff that goes into a series bible. A series bible however seem to be too much for him, it doesn't know how pitching or developing a cartoon works in the industry and he doesn't want to know because once the first episode is out networks will surly be wanting this and come to him.

Dude doesn't seem to be able to draw and he expects people to take his pitch seriously?

He's not Ted Turner, so that ain't gonna work.

 

[Blindrainbow]

Dude doesn't seem to be able to draw and he expects people to take his pitch seriously?

He's not Ted Turner, so that ain't gonna work.

Well I found this picture of his drawing of one his character on his Deviantart

Spoiler: Mr. Enter tries to draw his own cartoon character

 

[alex_theman]

Dude doesn't seem to be able to draw and he expects people to take his pitch seriously?

He's not Ted Turner, so that ain't gonna work.

But he has someone who can draw. And remember Johnny Bravo? That shows' seasons with the creator sucked, while the seasons without the creator were amazing. Something similar might happen to growing around.

 

[Blindrainbow]

But he has someone who can draw. And remember Johnny Bravo? That shows' seasons with the creator sucked, while the seasons without the creator were amazing. Something similar might happen to growing around.

That a good point, and also his main artist Nayolfa seem to also be sort of the co creator if I remember correctly.

 

[Abethedemon]

I wonder what Enter thinks of the Itchy and Scratchy segments in the Simpsons. They are simply filled with cruelety and malice, but they're also funny as hell.

 

[SuperFilter]

I wonder what Enter thinks of the Itchy and Scratchy segments in the Simpsons. They are simply filled with cruelety and malice, but they're also funny as hell.

Now that you say it, it's kinda odd that he never mentioned those despite the fact that he loves to ramble about cartoon cruelty and sociopathy. Or at least I don't think he did.

Though those are very obvious satire so I can see him calling them distasteful at worst.

 

[Shokew]

Now that you say it, it's kinda odd that he never mentioned those despite the fact that he loves to ramble about cartoon cruelty and psychopathy. Or at least I don't think he did.

Though those are very obvious satire so I can see him calling them distasteful at worst.

Nah, I see him whining like a bigger bitch than OPL about Itchy & Scratchy - or anything like it. Too bad, unlike his shit, Itchy and Scratchy is actually pretty funny - and I'm not even into the Simpsons. I just know all this from nostalgic experiences I tend to ignore so I can pay attention to cartoons I actually like now.