Oh boy, a hack is going to create a game that no one will buy purely for virtue signalling/bilking purposes. Let's shiv this with a plastic spork now shall we?
It looks like Hill the hack has a problem with using words. See, when I think of post-fantasy, I think that it means that's when the magic's dead ala Tolkien's Middle Earth. So he's accidentally saying he's about to kill a fun genre, which is hilariously fitting.
And the idea that pen and paper is sexist is lulzy as fuck given that only 1e of D&D did different statblocks for genders. He may need to update to a slightly more modern system there. As for racism, the average adventuring party seems to give that the finger, and violence is a part of the fucking game mechanics itself.
Sounds like you're advocating institutional violence there Hill. Can't even keep consistent for one fucking paragraph.
So all style, no substance, and dated as fuck. Got it.
Sounds more like you or your DM sucked cock at making NPCs that acted reasonably to me, since it's not that hard to do this in games that already exist. And "human"? Pretty imperialist dude.
It sounds like you only have an unfocused idea that vaguely ties into your love of cafe communism.
So you do have only a half-assed and vague idea and this is just an attempt to grift trust fund kids who pretend to be with it in geek culture. Got it.
Sounds vaguely like he might be trying to use the old Iron Kingdoms module as 'inspiration' given that originally it focused around four major players based on the Good/Evil, Law/Chaos alignments. I also love how he's too deprived creatively to be able to write about entire nations and is just doing cities.
Hill, you just contradicted your prior bit of babble where you were not going to tell us what specific myths and traditions exist. Do you just type without double checking what you already said? Or do you have just think the people who read you are stupid?
You know, for a hack writer you really seem to hate your 'passion' here Hill.
Congratulations, you just tried to upsell a feature that's been available in every iteration of D&D since like ever. What a fraud.
So despite being called "post-fantasy", you still have wizards that easily pop in. You do realize how dumb that sounds, right?
I guess not then. If they have access to arcane might, why is it so hard for them to not simply make another key like it? Is it a relic from another era? Is the knowledge lost? I'm assuming it's more that this guy is an idiot myself.
Given that wizards should rarely be visible given that they hang out in another dimension, it sounds like no one would care and this has no risk. Hill, this is why no one likes your content.
Hear that you marks? For just a few dollarydoos you can get a rusty key along with a book from a man who has no idea what the fuck fun is and who has no clue what on earth he wants to do yet.
Jesus christ this system is stupid, hypocritical, and nonsensical. Hill is describing this like your character, who may simply be some dumb bumpkin, is able to hypothesize and formulate a theory through the scientific method. From there, he pretends that consequences are not a pass/fail system because he wants to sound smarter than he really is. The last stop of this pile of idiocy is that the second die is going to be different. This is just a less newbie friendly system than normal D20 or Whitewolf in every way.
The fuck? My phone can read .pdf's just fine, so what's this stretch goal bullshit? This really screams like he just is using this goal to pad his own wallet given that detail and how easy it is to convert files to other formats.
Which if you're writing in this format, makes it far less readable and fun for a person who just wants to get into the game. This would be a format you'd use for a splat book like... a monster manual, a clan guidebook, a tour of the realms... you know, extra fluff. Hill, it's official you suck at this pen and paper stuff.
White Wolf sheet would be a better comparison Hill, since there is a one page version of their sheets. Plus, more of the audience you're trying to fool would get it since it's more popular than that shit and right up their ugu special snowflake alley.
So what you're saying is you're lying to your backers Hill. Since this is not really something that can be kept on one sheet. You'd need at least two, maybe three honestly.
Well ain't that some vanguard pigshit. The Bastille would disagree with you, and the Tunisian revolution too. I guess you can go fuck yourself if you want to play a savage barbarian warlord or any other less 'learned' field.
I get the vibe that Hill here probably could easily include more if his system is that modular; it'd only take balancing testing a bit and there you go. I love how he accidentally admits his laziness.
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You should not even be thinking about this stupid bullshit until after your rulebook is polished and selling. You are putting the cart before the horse Hill, and proving why I would never buy anything from you.
What about changing the world? Looks like you forgot about that in the midst of a food binge.
I love how Hill is demanding you to give him the price of a food bill in exchange for something
@Randall Fragg does for free because he enjoys it. I wonder if he would allow for refunds- oh who am I kidding, he won't. Probably'd refuse if you came up with something that would make him reee too.
You heard it from Hill kids, pirate that shit away.
