I don't watch anime so I don't know what this is from, but I gotta ask;
1. Why did they make the pink chick a darker pink? She was already not white, so why edit it further? Also, green horns?
2. What the hell is going on with the middle girl? The edit gave her dark skin, tumblr freckles (pink girl got blasted with the pox too, on closer inspection), weird chin discoloration, some unnecessary tufts of hair sticking up in the back, orange knees, black fingernails, and pupula duplex. (Which is reportedly a condition where the eye has two irises, and I only know about because of
the Binding of Isaac.)
The rest seem mostly fine beyond the skin darkening, although I have to say I'm surprised the edit didn't make the invisible girl visible with black skin.
ETA, they also screwed up the background. It's really not hard, magic wand select the inside of the text and paint bucket fill it. It won't look amazing, but it'd be better than leaving it white.