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It just doesn't help writing wise as they ALL sound like this. At least the suggestion would make Vox dialogue different. Is anyone else getting that if you took the characters names above their lines and just read their lines you WOULDN'T be able to tell the difference?
It's exactly why the "They just grew up to the modern times!" excuse doesn't work when everyone's acting like raging millenials. When there's no real DIVERSITY of sinners of different backgrounds, cultures, usage of speech and interaction, etc., everyone in the Pride Ring all feel like they died in the same decade or year rather than from centuries apart. Where's the group of sinners that reject this version of current hell? What was hell even like hundred years back? Did it evolve alongside human civilization? There's so much to go by but nothing to add into it because the worldbuilding came second and yaoi/angst trauma came first.
It's been said countless times but you would have not believed Vox is meant to be someone who died in the 50s. You wouldn't have believed Alastor died in the near mid-20th century. You wouldn't have believed Sir Pentious died in 1888. They all feel like they died in the same era. There's nothing that culturally/socially makes them stand out aside from their personalities.
It's such a huge let down.
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