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I saw a similar Jotakak fic once, maybe I'll even archive and bring it here, because I feel like this shit is the spiritual predecessor of the Jayvik crap.
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I saw a similar Jotakak fic once, maybe I'll even archive and bring it here, because I feel like this shit is the spiritual predecessor of the Jayvik crap.
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BDSM and a traffic light safety system, what could go wrong?
We begin with a half-page long description of Jayce's panic attack, all because Viktor made a dick joke. Yes, Jayce had a mental breakdown because he said a nobleman was good with his dick, leading to an existential crisis for Jayce, who is learning a bunch of shit about his (closeted?) pooner friend. Amazing what a dick joke can do.
> A clear indication of the fact that Jayce's reaction to that was a clear indication that Jayce had a reaction to that information
This was beta-read. I didn't think such NPC repetitions would make it through the editing stage, yet here we are.
> He is safe
Always about safety with these people. He had a panic attack over an attack on his manhood, remember. The Hispanic Hog does not like being reminded of competition.
Maybe for a public one, sure. But you're in a rich person's bathroom. I'm surprised there isn't music playing in there along with crystal chandeliers so your cubicle is lit up when you take a shit. I can see what Viktor is doing here: he is trying to distract Jayce by making him focus on something else, which eases the anxiety attack. As for why he's prone to them, well it's a common thing in this fandom to make him seem like a jittery himbo, when there is no proof he suffers from them in canon. Rather, he'd cause anxiety attacks IN OTHERS.
> His cranium in the vain hoe that he can remind his brain where it's supposed to be
The cranium surrounds the brain. It's like saying, 'my skull is missing from my skull'.
> His hand is warm and comfortable, and he maybe needs some comfort
Redundant.
> Like there's something else. Because there is something else
Ah, there's that queercatfan sentence structure again.
> Jayce didn't know that men were -
He means that he didn't know Viktor was 'gay'.
> Jayce isn't really used to jealousy
All over a dick joke, lmao.
A pooner fucking married men? Say it ain't so. I would also be looking at Jayce as if he said something stupid, because he is acting stupid.
> Exceedingly particularly
*Exceedingly particular. This was beta-read.
A panic attack from Viktor saying a man was good from his dick. This will eventually lead to the BDSM plot and Jayce discovering his 'true self'.
> He thinks Jayce doesn't understand
It's true, he doesn't. He never thought Viktor was into sex, found out that he was, and wonders why he's a dominatrix for hire. I wonder if that will be addressed with the BDSM tags.
> Would I lose your respect if I wanted to get in your bed?
He asks this twice (good job, beta reader) and Viktor gets mad for some reason. Why? Well, we don't know. He does say that he respects Jayce too much, and doesn't want to degrade him that way, and appears to be offended that Jayce would compare himself to the rich men who basically use Viktor. That's all implied - the textual evidence is not clear. I had to do all the heavy lifting here.
Talk about emotional whiplash. Viktor gets mad at Jayce for bizarre reasons, they don't talk for a while, then they break down sobbing and make up and all is well. That's...great, I guess.
So...what was the point of the outburst? A means for them to get together?
At least Mel isn't the token Evil Black Bitch. It's a breath of fresh air to actually see her treated like a person.
Reading ahead, the smut isn't so bad, so far. It's actually not that graphic for once.
Well, glad that minor spat was over and done with. They fixed things up better than that Coors Lite AU fic!
He pulls his hair three times. Good job, beta-reader. Needless repetition is a mistake that can be easily overlooked; that's why it's just as important for you to read your own work. I've been seeing it a lot recently.
Zippertits AND Rapunzel pubes and we still have go graphic boombaya? For shame. This is one of the 'prettiest' smut scenes I've read, where it focuses more on the feelings than the action. I reckon that will change once the BDSM stuff comes in.
Yeesh, these people sure do cry a lot over the most minor things. Jayce had an anxiety attack over a dick joke, and now this.
> Entropy cooled all energy and matter in the universe
Entropy would mean the exact opposite; it would make MORE energy and 'loose' matter. Be sure to look up words and see what they mean.
Ah, so this is where the BDSM safewords come in. As it turns out, there is no such dramatic smut scene or elaborate choking session. Jayce refuses to choke Viktor, they talk it out, and that's it.
There sure is a lot of talk for a BDSM session. I thought we'd be getting one.
> He considers that Viktor has done plenty to him that has caused pain without causing hurt
You mean the dick joke? He didn't take that well or enjoy it, btw. He had a whole-ass panic attack.
> I told you to do that because I felt safe
Great! So why are they talking so much?
> I didn't understand what you meant by it
He was being very clear: he wanted you to choke him, because that was his kink. You refused, because you didn't want to hurt him. Simple as.
What's this? Mel being an interesting character for once? Say it ain't so.
Yeah, because Noxus is an expansionist empire. They're only kept at bay because Piltover is a trading partner. You'd think Viktor would know this.
You'll never guess what Jayce proposes.
That's right: marriage! What a nice twist to something I thought was going to be a huge BDSM session. It sure did turn out to be tenderer than I imagined.
He needs that fainting couch, lmao.
That's quite the confession! I must say, I thought this fic was going to be EXPLICIT, but no, it should have an M for Mature rating. No actual sex takes place, certainly not the raunchy BDSM stuff I was expected. Talk about misleading tags.
I suppose a ranch is better than a cottage, because both of you would be required to work.
Huh. I thought it was going to be way more explicit than I thought. What a downer. It comes out more tender and, for once, Viktor is not obnoxious about his trans status. It's all very subtle. Not really a horror, but I genuinely thought it would be. Consider it a breather for the next one.
Here's a horror for ya. The one fic where a camboy got doxxed from a barista apron has a sequel. The stalker has to contend with dealing with their obsessive love, and our camboy has to mull over calling the cops. It is unavailable to non AO3 users, but you know me - I've got the tea.
So, just a recap: they are both trans in this, Jayce was a camboy, Viktor stalked him and was scoping out his house, he got caught, they fucked, and now they are in this weird, obsessive relationship.
> He seems to need that a lot
Oh? I thought trans men were proud of who they are. You're telling me that strangers with penises are taking pity on you and complimenting you to lower your guard for easy sex? You don't say.
> He's latched onto the dick of a possessive freak
Funny. Neither of you have one.
> The smaller man's dick spasms wildly in his mouth
2 inches of muscle power at work.
> The perv isn't that strong
Because he's a tiny pooner. He'd lose a fight against a stuffed animal. You are lucky because you are taller and work out, but you can be pushed around easily by men, too.
> You're lucky I'm fucking you at all
He has a point, there. And he is right that Viktor is being 'fucking annoying'. However, as time goes on, I can't sympathize with neither of these characters and just find their shenanigans hilarious. It really makes for a Jerry Springer episode.
> I'll pay for your rent and everything
It was established in the first fic that Viktor works a minimum wage job and spends most of his income on Jayce. He does not have as much money as he thinks he does. This despite him allegedly being a genius and making a lot of money. He also skips out on groceries, too.
> He finds satisfaction in being so much taller than him
Six inches in height, but no six inches of length. Sucks to be you.
> It helps that he's embarrassingly horny whenever Viktor is involved, though he'd never tell him that
So how, exactly, am I supposed to pity you when this is really an elaborate power fantasy of yours? Looks like pooners can't even get the stalker phenotype right - they can't even threaten people with bodily harm, only horniness!
He's creepy, but you're also into it, and you can't stop fucking him, so...he's not as creepy as a man would be. Pooners just can't come close to the real thing. He even admits he can't tell the difference between being creepy and being considerate, lmao.
He doxed him from his apron that was draped over a chair. It's a given that he knows what foods he eats and likes. He probably even knows what restaurants he goes to.
> And disappointed??
Why does the author herself sound disappointed at this? I would be do if my stalker fic ended up sounding as confused as this does. When a man stalks someone, you can FEEL the tension and the threat; when a pooner does it, they bake you cookies and have water in their trunk. The man would have power tools and duct tape. Can't even get the stalking right, SMH
> He's in an incredibly fucked up situation
> He doesn't find himself hating it
Is it really fucked up if you don't hate it?
> Had Viktor done something crazy because Jayce reacted so poorly?
You're asking if your STALKER is crazy? Buddy, you're a lost cause if you're pondering that shit.
> Feels like he was baited into worrying about him
Correct. You were. Because this is a woman's gaslighting in action.
Imagine that: Jayce fucks an actual man in the backseat of his car, and acts surprised when the man misgenders him. He's bigger, with bigger muscles and an actual dick, full of hair and 'dominant', and doesn't give a shit about the pooner. He treats Jayce like an object (shocker), and Jayce admits it makes him feel like shit, but he 'needs it'. Colour me surprised that the male sees the pooner exactly for what she is: a hole to fuck, and the pooner can't decide whether the male is serious about it or not. The bigger concern, naturally, was the football star calling him a girl. As we all know, trans men are men, and how dare this man see this pooner as anything but. You have to pay to misgender him, baby.
> He's a bit scared he's getting a reputation
> He doesn't want to be known as a slut
I am afraid that ship has sailed. Men love to gossip as much as women, and if they know that a pooner with self-confidence issues will get on her knees and suck dick for free, that shit is making its way across the football field whether you like it or not. They will also pick up on your lack of confidence and see you as easy meat. You should've stuck to the camming, babe.
Bending him over and fucking him with what? The stir sticks? Dinner sounds nice, though. What's he cooking?
I am not shocked that Viktor would do something like that. As to why Jayce is surprised at this, well, he's just retarded. He doxed you from an apron. Why would this be a major revelation?
> He's worried that Viktor's breaking up with him
> Why does the idea of it fill Jayce with so much pain?
You just answered your own question. And you do again with this:
> He's scared of losing the generous payments to his tuition
You are scared of losing your sugar daddy. Just say that.
> Whatever exactly Viktor does in tech, he never seems to run out of money
I don't even think the author remembers what occupation Viktor has, because she wrote in the original that he doesn't make a lot of money, and has to skip out on groceries from time to time. Now he has a fuckton of money. Did he get a promotion in that time gap, or...?
> I don't feel like I was wrong for what I did, we're not exclusive
Correct. You're being gaslit into feeling guilty.
> People like him are unhealthy, emotional, and clingy
And yet, Viktor still operates by female-typical behaviours of stalking: he wants to get close and comfort the victim, vs just terrorizing them and making them submit by raw fear as men do.
> Why is he so mad at Viktor?
Did you not just have a whole internal monologue about how you're mad/sad about losing your sugar daddy money over having an 'affair' with a random man?
> Jayce is so much bigger than him, his hands closing completely around his wrists
That's nice, but even tall pooners are never as large or as heavy as natal males. He's only 'big' because of muscle and fat.
> I've been a slut, baby
I thought you didn't want to be viewed like one?
Now it's a source of pride to anger your stalker? OK.
> His studded nipples once Jayce's binder comes off
I wonder how bad he smells with that binder. His ribs must be fucked.
> I want you to fuck me like I was cheating on you, and I want you to make it hurt
LMAO with what? You're in a janitor's closet. Is he going to use a broomstick?
> I did feel cheated on
He later says the opposite.
> The tip of Jayce's dick with his tongue
> Squeezing it between his fingers
Literally
> I don't hate you. I'm not going to hurt you with sex
You already said that.
>N...ngh
Great, we have the heart attack dialogue.
> Maybe I'm a cuck, or just a voyeur
Both. Both is good.
> Jerk off Viktor's dick
You're better off jerking off a broom handle.
This is how I know that Jayce is not threatened by Viktor's stalking: he's not afraid of him, just his money and the loss of income. He likes the controlling nature and the grounding; he likes feeling wanted and possessed. His items were not damaged or destroyed, and even though he is being gaslit into believing this, there is a mutual want there. Compare this to when Jayce is the man and the stalker: he invades Viktor's spaces and makes him feel unsafe; he steals things and marks his territory, he makes himself appear like the innocent one. Viktor here admits to what he's doing.
> If you ever left my life, I don't think there'd be a point in living
Probably the darkest bit of emotional blackmail I've seen. Will this be weaponized? We'll see.
> Hngh
> Mngh
OK who invited Joe Biden?
> His hole
And look at that, there's the 'vaginal sex' tag.
Well then! He's already made it clear the only thing he's actually afraid of is losing money. Viktor is not a threat and he knows it.
> My bike's going to get stolen
From whom? Is there a certain demographic that steals them in your area?
> Jayce is in deep, fucked in the head
I'll say. You're a masochist. You love this shit.
> It doesn't really feel genuine
You don't say. Nice bit of lampshading.
> No real way to distinguish what's clean and what's not
So, a NEET troon dungeon. Why am I not surprised?
> There's a small shelf (filled) with what seems like garbage.
All we're missing are some bedbugs and roaches.
> There's a blanket over Viktor's gaming chair, covered in stains
What a shocker he can't clean his own blanket, either. Invest in some laundry detergent, you cheap bitch.
Also, who the fuck uses POLAROID pictures in the Year of Our Lord 2025? That shit is ANCIENT. Bitch is really showing her pooner nature by going vintage, lmao
> Something heavy settles in the pit of Jayce's stomach, but it's not fear or dread
You just found out you had an NSYNC closet filled with pictures of you, and that's your reaction? TBF, I'd start laughing. It's so...teenage girl-ish.
> I'm not a doll for you to carry around as you please
You're certainly as small as one.
Why am I not shocked that there are no bedsheets on the bed? Lazy asses.
> I try to be patient and understanding
I'm sorry, who's stalking who again? Looks like Jayce is the one coming out on top, putting his 'stalker' right in his place - by including him in a webcam session! They get to fuck like animals, no cops or animal control needed.
> All they'll be able to do is jerk off
The funny thing is, most of Jayce's audience is male. They know he's an easy lay. They're just going to be watching two women go at it, and so long as they don't see the zippertit scars, the money is going to be flowing in.
> None of them are especially cute
That's a very...womanly thing to say.
> They're all of varying cleanliness
Of all the shit to gross me out, knowing Viktor has dried cum and other fluids on his sex toys irks me worse than his crimes. Fucking hell, man, bleach that shit!
> He wants to fuck him open and stuff him right there
With what? You basically said all of his sex toys were mid (and dirty). What are you going to stuff him with? Produce?
> Make you feel like a worthless little slut
> A disgusting slutty pervert
He's not exactly wrong on that.
> Flicks the tip of Viktor's dick
They're going to be fucking with two inches each. Unless his audience likes that kind of shit, I'd be laughing my ass off if I had to watch. I'd be spamminguntil I got banned.
If he is cringing away from a toy he refused to clean, I can't imagine what that shit tastes like. Eugh. Thank God I don't have an appetite. Disgusting, indeed.
Guess we're back to xenomorph egg consistency.
> Kisses the tip
He can 'kiss' the whole damn thing, that's how big he is. That dirty-ass marshmellow sex toy is a lot bigger than he is - and oh, afterwards, Jayce decides to use the dirty thing on himself. Gross.
It says something that Viktor, the so-called stalker, acts more like a scorned teenager desperate for love than a genuine creep. The only thing I can get him for that's legitimately disgusting are those unwashed sex toys - and maybe the hidden cameras. Everything else involved things Jayce found himself aroused by. Hard to press charges if you don't think a crime has been committed.
I wonder why they're so much nicer to Viktor. Is it because of his skin tone? That he's so much more feminine than Jayce? That Jayce is used to taking shit from men despite the fact he doesn't want to be seen as a slut while acting slutty? You tell me.
> I want you to tell me how much you love me
I thought this was a stalking fic? My, have the tables been turned.
> Lovey
Did he become Bri'ish all of a sudden?
I have to say, these smut scenes have so much going on, that they end up reading like nothing is happening at the same time. I actually found myself more interested in the chat than their relationship, because it is all over the place. Viktor started this by doxing and stalking Jayce as he wanted his attention; Jayce, initially miffed, eventually grows to love the affection and attention (as well as the money). They enter a will-they-or-won't-they and a 'it's not stalking if I really love you' relationship, which doesn't even manage to sound creepy despite Jayce saying it is. Viktor stalks and attaches himself to him the way a woman would - he keeps mementos, he's all about keeping their feelings light, and making sure that, emotionally, that person is never wanting - vs it being a purely sexual thrill were he a man. I found myself zoning out when these two were going at it because it was basically lesbian sex, and those dirty sex toys really turned me off. Clean your shit, you dirty bitch!
I did find it funny that Vander knew that was Viktor. Must've been the typos in that dramatic message. I bet the sequel will have him in a threesome.
Your guess is as good as mine. I thought this was a breaking-and-entering stalking fic? Well, guess it turned into an impromptu romance because pooners suck at being threatening - and sucking 'dick', it seems. There was more effort in Jayce going down on wannabe Tom Brady in the parking lot than with Viktor here. The smut scenes were plentiful, yet had no substance. They're just two women, pretending to be men, fucking.
You're horrible at those? Honey, trying writing a smut scene that sticks. The only thing that does is that dirty cum on Viktor's sex toys. God, I'm not getting over that.
We begin with a half-page long description of Jayce's panic attack, all because Viktor made a dick joke. Yes, Jayce had a mental breakdown because he said a nobleman was good with his dick, leading to an existential crisis for Jayce, who is learning a bunch of shit about his (closeted?) pooner friend. Amazing what a dick joke can do.
> A clear indication of the fact that Jayce's reaction to that was a clear indication that Jayce had a reaction to that information
This was beta-read. I didn't think such NPC repetitions would make it through the editing stage, yet here we are.
> He is safe
Always about safety with these people. He had a panic attack over an attack on his manhood, remember. The Hispanic Hog does not like being reminded of competition.
Maybe for a public one, sure. But you're in a rich person's bathroom. I'm surprised there isn't music playing in there along with crystal chandeliers so your cubicle is lit up when you take a shit. I can see what Viktor is doing here: he is trying to distract Jayce by making him focus on something else, which eases the anxiety attack. As for why he's prone to them, well it's a common thing in this fandom to make him seem like a jittery himbo, when there is no proof he suffers from them in canon. Rather, he'd cause anxiety attacks IN OTHERS.
> His cranium in the vain hoe that he can remind his brain where it's supposed to be
The cranium surrounds the brain. It's like saying, 'my skull is missing from my skull'.
> His hand is warm and comfortable, and he maybe needs some comfort
Redundant.
> Like there's something else. Because there is something else
Ah, there's that queercatfan sentence structure again.
> Jayce didn't know that men were -
He means that he didn't know Viktor was 'gay'.
> Jayce isn't really used to jealousy
All over a dick joke, lmao.
A pooner fucking married men? Say it ain't so. I would also be looking at Jayce as if he said something stupid, because he is acting stupid.
> Exceedingly particularly
*Exceedingly particular. This was beta-read.
A panic attack from Viktor saying a man was good from his dick. This will eventually lead to the BDSM plot and Jayce discovering his 'true self'.
> He thinks Jayce doesn't understand
It's true, he doesn't. He never thought Viktor was into sex, found out that he was, and wonders why he's a dominatrix for hire. I wonder if that will be addressed with the BDSM tags.
> Would I lose your respect if I wanted to get in your bed?
He asks this twice (good job, beta reader) and Viktor gets mad for some reason. Why? Well, we don't know. He does say that he respects Jayce too much, and doesn't want to degrade him that way, and appears to be offended that Jayce would compare himself to the rich men who basically use Viktor. That's all implied - the textual evidence is not clear. I had to do all the heavy lifting here.
Talk about emotional whiplash. Viktor gets mad at Jayce for bizarre reasons, they don't talk for a while, then they break down sobbing and make up and all is well. That's...great, I guess.
So...what was the point of the outburst? A means for them to get together?
At least Mel isn't the token Evil Black Bitch. It's a breath of fresh air to actually see her treated like a person.
Reading ahead, the smut isn't so bad, so far. It's actually not that graphic for once.
Well, glad that minor spat was over and done with. They fixed things up better than that Coors Lite AU fic!
He pulls his hair three times. Good job, beta-reader. Needless repetition is a mistake that can be easily overlooked; that's why it's just as important for you to read your own work. I've been seeing it a lot recently.
Zippertits AND Rapunzel pubes and we still have go graphic boombaya? For shame. This is one of the 'prettiest' smut scenes I've read, where it focuses more on the feelings than the action. I reckon that will change once the BDSM stuff comes in.
Yeesh, these people sure do cry a lot over the most minor things. Jayce had an anxiety attack over a dick joke, and now this.
> Entropy cooled all energy and matter in the universe
Entropy would mean the exact opposite; it would make MORE energy and 'loose' matter. Be sure to look up words and see what they mean.
Ah, so this is where the BDSM safewords come in. As it turns out, there is no such dramatic smut scene or elaborate choking session. Jayce refuses to choke Viktor, they talk it out, and that's it.
There sure is a lot of talk for a BDSM session. I thought we'd be getting one.
> He considers that Viktor has done plenty to him that has caused pain without causing hurt
You mean the dick joke? He didn't take that well or enjoy it, btw. He had a whole-ass panic attack.
> I told you to do that because I felt safe
Great! So why are they talking so much?
> I didn't understand what you meant by it
He was being very clear: he wanted you to choke him, because that was his kink. You refused, because you didn't want to hurt him. Simple as.
What's this? Mel being an interesting character for once? Say it ain't so.
Yeah, because Noxus is an expansionist empire. They're only kept at bay because Piltover is a trading partner. You'd think Viktor would know this.
You'll never guess what Jayce proposes.
That's right: marriage! What a nice twist to something I thought was going to be a huge BDSM session. It sure did turn out to be tenderer than I imagined.
He needs that fainting couch, lmao.
That's quite the confession! I must say, I thought this fic was going to be EXPLICIT, but no, it should have an M for Mature rating. No actual sex takes place, certainly not the raunchy BDSM stuff I was expected. Talk about misleading tags.
I suppose a ranch is better than a cottage, because both of you would be required to work.
Huh. I thought it was going to be way more explicit than I thought. What a downer. It comes out more tender and, for once, Viktor is not obnoxious about his trans status. It's all very subtle. Not really a horror, but I genuinely thought it would be. Consider it a breather for the next one.
Here's a horror for ya. The one fic where a camboy got doxxed from a barista apron has a sequel. The stalker has to contend with dealing with their obsessive love, and our camboy has to mull over calling the cops. It is unavailable to non AO3 users, but you know me - I've got the tea.
So, just a recap: they are both trans in this, Jayce was a camboy, Viktor stalked him and was scoping out his house, he got caught, they fucked, and now they are in this weird, obsessive relationship.
> He seems to need that a lot
Oh? I thought trans men were proud of who they are. You're telling me that strangers with penises are taking pity on you and complimenting you to lower your guard for easy sex? You don't say.
> He's latched onto the dick of a possessive freak
Funny. Neither of you have one.
> The smaller man's dick spasms wildly in his mouth
2 inches of muscle power at work.
> The perv isn't that strong
Because he's a tiny pooner. He'd lose a fight against a stuffed animal. You are lucky because you are taller and work out, but you can be pushed around easily by men, too.
> You're lucky I'm fucking you at all
He has a point, there. And he is right that Viktor is being 'fucking annoying'. However, as time goes on, I can't sympathize with neither of these characters and just find their shenanigans hilarious. It really makes for a Jerry Springer episode.
> I'll pay for your rent and everything
It was established in the first fic that Viktor works a minimum wage job and spends most of his income on Jayce. He does not have as much money as he thinks he does. This despite him allegedly being a genius and making a lot of money. He also skips out on groceries, too.
> He finds satisfaction in being so much taller than him
Six inches in height, but no six inches of length. Sucks to be you.
> It helps that he's embarrassingly horny whenever Viktor is involved, though he'd never tell him that
So how, exactly, am I supposed to pity you when this is really an elaborate power fantasy of yours? Looks like pooners can't even get the stalker phenotype right - they can't even threaten people with bodily harm, only horniness!
He's creepy, but you're also into it, and you can't stop fucking him, so...he's not as creepy as a man would be. Pooners just can't come close to the real thing. He even admits he can't tell the difference between being creepy and being considerate, lmao.
He doxed him from his apron that was draped over a chair. It's a given that he knows what foods he eats and likes. He probably even knows what restaurants he goes to.
> And disappointed??
Why does the author herself sound disappointed at this? I would be do if my stalker fic ended up sounding as confused as this does. When a man stalks someone, you can FEEL the tension and the threat; when a pooner does it, they bake you cookies and have water in their trunk. The man would have power tools and duct tape. Can't even get the stalking right, SMH
> He's in an incredibly fucked up situation
> He doesn't find himself hating it
Is it really fucked up if you don't hate it?
> Had Viktor done something crazy because Jayce reacted so poorly?
You're asking if your STALKER is crazy? Buddy, you're a lost cause if you're pondering that shit.
> Feels like he was baited into worrying about him
Correct. You were. Because this is a woman's gaslighting in action.
Imagine that: Jayce fucks an actual man in the backseat of his car, and acts surprised when the man misgenders him. He's bigger, with bigger muscles and an actual dick, full of hair and 'dominant', and doesn't give a shit about the pooner. He treats Jayce like an object (shocker), and Jayce admits it makes him feel like shit, but he 'needs it'. Colour me surprised that the male sees the pooner exactly for what she is: a hole to fuck, and the pooner can't decide whether the male is serious about it or not. The bigger concern, naturally, was the football star calling him a girl. As we all know, trans men are men, and how dare this man see this pooner as anything but. You have to pay to misgender him, baby.
> He's a bit scared he's getting a reputation
> He doesn't want to be known as a slut
I am afraid that ship has sailed. Men love to gossip as much as women, and if they know that a pooner with self-confidence issues will get on her knees and suck dick for free, that shit is making its way across the football field whether you like it or not. They will also pick up on your lack of confidence and see you as easy meat. You should've stuck to the camming, babe.
Bending him over and fucking him with what? The stir sticks? Dinner sounds nice, though. What's he cooking?
I am not shocked that Viktor would do something like that. As to why Jayce is surprised at this, well, he's just retarded. He doxed you from an apron. Why would this be a major revelation?
> He's worried that Viktor's breaking up with him
> Why does the idea of it fill Jayce with so much pain?
You just answered your own question. And you do again with this:
> He's scared of losing the generous payments to his tuition
You are scared of losing your sugar daddy. Just say that.
> Whatever exactly Viktor does in tech, he never seems to run out of money
I don't even think the author remembers what occupation Viktor has, because she wrote in the original that he doesn't make a lot of money, and has to skip out on groceries from time to time. Now he has a fuckton of money. Did he get a promotion in that time gap, or...?
> I don't feel like I was wrong for what I did, we're not exclusive
Correct. You're being gaslit into feeling guilty.
> People like him are unhealthy, emotional, and clingy
And yet, Viktor still operates by female-typical behaviours of stalking: he wants to get close and comfort the victim, vs just terrorizing them and making them submit by raw fear as men do.
> Why is he so mad at Viktor?
Did you not just have a whole internal monologue about how you're mad/sad about losing your sugar daddy money over having an 'affair' with a random man?
> Jayce is so much bigger than him, his hands closing completely around his wrists
That's nice, but even tall pooners are never as large or as heavy as natal males. He's only 'big' because of muscle and fat.
> I've been a slut, baby
I thought you didn't want to be viewed like one?
Now it's a source of pride to anger your stalker? OK.> His studded nipples once Jayce's binder comes off
I wonder how bad he smells with that binder. His ribs must be fucked.
> I want you to fuck me like I was cheating on you, and I want you to make it hurt
LMAO with what? You're in a janitor's closet. Is he going to use a broomstick?
> I did feel cheated on
He later says the opposite.
> The tip of Jayce's dick with his tongue
> Squeezing it between his fingers
Literally
> I don't hate you. I'm not going to hurt you with sex
You already said that.
>N...ngh
Great, we have the heart attack dialogue.
> Maybe I'm a cuck, or just a voyeur
Both. Both is good.
> Jerk off Viktor's dick
You're better off jerking off a broom handle.
This is how I know that Jayce is not threatened by Viktor's stalking: he's not afraid of him, just his money and the loss of income. He likes the controlling nature and the grounding; he likes feeling wanted and possessed. His items were not damaged or destroyed, and even though he is being gaslit into believing this, there is a mutual want there. Compare this to when Jayce is the man and the stalker: he invades Viktor's spaces and makes him feel unsafe; he steals things and marks his territory, he makes himself appear like the innocent one. Viktor here admits to what he's doing.
> If you ever left my life, I don't think there'd be a point in living
Probably the darkest bit of emotional blackmail I've seen. Will this be weaponized? We'll see.
> Hngh
> Mngh
OK who invited Joe Biden?
> His hole
And look at that, there's the 'vaginal sex' tag.
Well then! He's already made it clear the only thing he's actually afraid of is losing money. Viktor is not a threat and he knows it.
> My bike's going to get stolen
From whom? Is there a certain demographic that steals them in your area?
> Jayce is in deep, fucked in the head
I'll say. You're a masochist. You love this shit.
> It doesn't really feel genuine
You don't say. Nice bit of lampshading.
> No real way to distinguish what's clean and what's not
So, a NEET troon dungeon. Why am I not surprised?
> There's a small shelf (filled) with what seems like garbage.
All we're missing are some bedbugs and roaches.
> There's a blanket over Viktor's gaming chair, covered in stains
What a shocker he can't clean his own blanket, either. Invest in some laundry detergent, you cheap bitch.
Also, who the fuck uses POLAROID pictures in the Year of Our Lord 2025? That shit is ANCIENT. Bitch is really showing her pooner nature by going vintage, lmao
> Something heavy settles in the pit of Jayce's stomach, but it's not fear or dread
You just found out you had an NSYNC closet filled with pictures of you, and that's your reaction? TBF, I'd start laughing. It's so...teenage girl-ish.
> I'm not a doll for you to carry around as you please
You're certainly as small as one.
Why am I not shocked that there are no bedsheets on the bed? Lazy asses.
> I try to be patient and understanding
I'm sorry, who's stalking who again? Looks like Jayce is the one coming out on top, putting his 'stalker' right in his place - by including him in a webcam session! They get to fuck like animals, no cops or animal control needed.
> All they'll be able to do is jerk off
The funny thing is, most of Jayce's audience is male. They know he's an easy lay. They're just going to be watching two women go at it, and so long as they don't see the zippertit scars, the money is going to be flowing in.
> None of them are especially cute
That's a very...womanly thing to say.
> They're all of varying cleanliness
Of all the shit to gross me out, knowing Viktor has dried cum and other fluids on his sex toys irks me worse than his crimes. Fucking hell, man, bleach that shit!
> He wants to fuck him open and stuff him right there
With what? You basically said all of his sex toys were mid (and dirty). What are you going to stuff him with? Produce?
> Make you feel like a worthless little slut
> A disgusting slutty pervert
He's not exactly wrong on that.
> Flicks the tip of Viktor's dick
They're going to be fucking with two inches each. Unless his audience likes that kind of shit, I'd be laughing my ass off if I had to watch. I'd be spamming
until I got banned.
If he is cringing away from a toy he refused to clean, I can't imagine what that shit tastes like. Eugh. Thank God I don't have an appetite. Disgusting, indeed.
Guess we're back to xenomorph egg consistency.
> Kisses the tip
He can 'kiss' the whole damn thing, that's how big he is. That dirty-ass marshmellow sex toy is a lot bigger than he is - and oh, afterwards, Jayce decides to use the dirty thing on himself. Gross.
It says something that Viktor, the so-called stalker, acts more like a scorned teenager desperate for love than a genuine creep. The only thing I can get him for that's legitimately disgusting are those unwashed sex toys - and maybe the hidden cameras. Everything else involved things Jayce found himself aroused by. Hard to press charges if you don't think a crime has been committed.
I wonder why they're so much nicer to Viktor. Is it because of his skin tone? That he's so much more feminine than Jayce? That Jayce is used to taking shit from men despite the fact he doesn't want to be seen as a slut while acting slutty? You tell me.
> I want you to tell me how much you love me
I thought this was a stalking fic? My, have the tables been turned.
> Lovey
Did he become Bri'ish all of a sudden?
I have to say, these smut scenes have so much going on, that they end up reading like nothing is happening at the same time. I actually found myself more interested in the chat than their relationship, because it is all over the place. Viktor started this by doxing and stalking Jayce as he wanted his attention; Jayce, initially miffed, eventually grows to love the affection and attention (as well as the money). They enter a will-they-or-won't-they and a 'it's not stalking if I really love you' relationship, which doesn't even manage to sound creepy despite Jayce saying it is. Viktor stalks and attaches himself to him the way a woman would - he keeps mementos, he's all about keeping their feelings light, and making sure that, emotionally, that person is never wanting - vs it being a purely sexual thrill were he a man. I found myself zoning out when these two were going at it because it was basically lesbian sex, and those dirty sex toys really turned me off. Clean your shit, you dirty bitch!
I did find it funny that Vander knew that was Viktor. Must've been the typos in that dramatic message. I bet the sequel will have him in a threesome.
Your guess is as good as mine. I thought this was a breaking-and-entering stalking fic? Well, guess it turned into an impromptu romance because pooners suck at being threatening - and sucking 'dick', it seems. There was more effort in Jayce going down on wannabe Tom Brady in the parking lot than with Viktor here. The smut scenes were plentiful, yet had no substance. They're just two women, pretending to be men, fucking.
You're horrible at those? Honey, trying writing a smut scene that sticks. The only thing that does is that dirty cum on Viktor's sex toys. God, I'm not getting over that.
Feel free to. Any fandom, any horror, will do.
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It insolently throws in a dramatic #MeToo plot, despite the whole premise being a quirk chungus woman sexually assaulting some guy at random. Wokesharts just taunting you with female supremacy, where ladies can be degenerate without limit but men are evul rape monsters if they look in a woman's direction. Also some laughably stupid anatomy is described, the guy sucks an entire breast into his mouth during sex.
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Now I am tempted to read it for shits and giggles.
Before I post more content, why is it that many readers act so personally offended when suicide baiting gets brought up? These were made on a fic where Viktor tries to commit suicide after finding out Jayce is with Mel. They have only been dating for a few months, and he decided to end it all then and there. It just seems cheap to use suicide that way. A few commentators just told someone else who pointed this out to 'go fuck themselves'.
He attempted it after Sky died. This is over a woman he's angry about just for existing. I'm not joking, the reasons for the attempt are petty as fuck.
Emotional blackmail and suicide baiting = I sleep
Macabre jokes made about the shitty characterization and attempt = REAL SHIT
I do love the tonal change from 'WOW HOW DARE YOU SAY SOMETHING LIKE THIS!' to 'cry about it babe, glad you're angry'. This is a fic, again, over a man wanting to end it because the man he loves - and doesn't even KNOW he loves him - is in a relationship with a woman that he cannot stand. You don't get to play the victim while telling someone else they're immature.
People tend to project themselves onto this character; any accusation of feminization is real, because I've seen that shit personally. The person who made the original comment was being perfectly fair, and this is their response. I've long since lost any respect for AO3 commenters/users because they are petty borderlines at heart.
He attempted it after Sky died. This is over a woman he's angry about just for existing. I'm not joking, the reasons for the attempt are petty as fuck.
Emotional blackmail and suicide baiting = I sleep
Macabre jokes made about the shitty characterization and attempt = REAL SHIT
I do love the tonal change from 'WOW HOW DARE YOU SAY SOMETHING LIKE THIS!' to 'cry about it babe, glad you're angry'. This is a fic, again, over a man wanting to end it because the man he loves - and doesn't even KNOW he loves him - is in a relationship with a woman that he cannot stand. You don't get to play the victim while telling someone else they're immature.
People tend to project themselves onto this character; any accusation of feminization is real, because I've seen that shit personally. The person who made the original comment was being perfectly fair, and this is their response. I've long since lost any respect for AO3 commenters/users because they are petty borderlines at heart.
This Easter Sunday, say a prayer for these sons of bitches because Jesus don't want them on his day.
Another day, another post where an author doesn't even try to hard their race-play shotacon shit. Add on ABO and you have a recipe for Gary Plauche to be revived from the dead.
As is typical, Jayce is the big, beefy, masculine alpha, used to getting what he wants and holding a lot of prejudice for Undercity people. He does not see them as human or worthy of respect; a Latin King through-and-through. That classism doesn't stop him from getting his lil shota - who is a whopping 12 years old.
> Desperate, defiled and used bodies
Nothing like a candid description of 'sex work'. Predictably, Viktor is the omega here, and I want you to pay attention to the language used to describe him. As for what scared omegas smell like...your guess is as good as mine. Probably unripe fruit.
Viktor is described as delicate, small, docile, sweet, pale and beautiful and oh-so-white like he's Snow White, compared to our hulking, dusky Alpha Male. Feminization is OK when it's ~queer~
Add prey to the list. He's also described as beautiful and otherworldly, a perfect virginal canvas that is just waiting to be despoiled by our well-hung alpha. Jayce being the dark-skinned rapist is not something I'd expect, but it is funny in hindsight: the darker skinned animal is raping the pale and beautiful woman/man. Who knew shotacons instinctively knew that brown people were beasts?
> It was torment
Ah, the classic, "I had to rape them, they were just too beautiful to resist."
> How could someone so young, so fragile, remain untouched by the harshness around him?
This suggests child rape is common in the Undercity, and we can thank Piltover for sitting by and letting it happen. From the way it sounds, Zaun is worse than India, barring the street shitting.
> His small frame
You're going to be reading that a lot.
> I'm twelve
Great, we have a 12-year-old omega with a vagina, who is going to be 'broken in' by our alpha male here.
So that's what underage omegas smell like: honey, along with a copious amount of salt from their tears. What a horrible way to live.
> Animalistic need
It's perfectly fine to call Jayce a penis nigger, because that's what he is, and that's all I'm going to refer to him as.
In case you were wondering: yes, this is the classic 12'' long, 3'' thick, dog dick that is common in ABO fics, and the fact the author outright admits it's used as a weapon of war is very, very telling. Alphas are born and bred rapists who ruin the bodies of those they claim because It's Just Biology for them to rape, okay?
> You're so small, so fragile. But you'll take it. Every inch of me
Suuuuuuure he will. Because omegas don't die from being penetrated with a police baton. Being 'split wide' and being 'so full you won't know where you and I begin' is just oh so hot when it's being told to a 12-year-old rape victim.
> Just feel me. Let me take. Let me bury myself so deep inside you
You already wrote this, you sick bitch.
> I want to stretch you open, fill every inch of you until there's no space left, just me
You already wrote this. Every time he opens his mouth, I want molten lead poured into his ass. Just to hear that 'alpha male' scream.
> Sounding almost like a petulant child throwing a tantrum
BECAUSE HE IS ONE, YOU SICK BITCH.
Feral and hungry and animalistic, all words to describe the penis nigger as he squeezes the life out of a 12-year-old. Who needs Planned Parenthood when you've got this guy?
> Not because you want to, not because you have a choice. But because I'm your fucking alpha
If there was any race of people that needed to be wiped out, these 'alphas' should be the first to go. They're worse than Indians, ffs.
> Keep fighting me, and I'll show you what bad really fucking feels like
Or what? You're going to go in all raw and just kill your 'perfect little omega' with your dick? As if the rape fetishist author needs any other ideas.
This man is strangling the life out of a 12-year-old child and I am expected to believe this is hot. Girl, if I wanted to watch or read torture, I'd just read what happened in Ciudad Juarez.
Nothing like choking the life out of someone to get them 'ready for bitching'. Sounds like he needs to become a bridge ornament.
He's not joking about the large hands thing. Viktor is 12, and he's tiny. This is literally a long-winded sex torture session involving a child. White Jayviks have a problem and we need to figure out what it is.
> Brutal, hungry
These words are used a lot to describe Jayce. It's almost as if he's an animal incapable of higher thinking and would probably stab you in the heart if you asked him to leave. He dindu nuffin to that keed, mayne.
> You're nothing but my good little omega, just the way I like you
The more he acts like a dog, the more I want to see him eat a firecracker. Alphas tend to act like shitbulls and this is no exception.
> You only make me want you more
Words you never want to hear from your rapist, ever.
> His lips were pulled, torn, and abused over and over again
So he's getting his face bitten off like a zombie. OK.
> You deserve these kisses from your alpha
You deserve a piece of rebar up your ass, but that's just me.
> As if his body couldn't help itself
Uh huh. Anything to take away blame from the penis nigger. He just can't help himself, he couldn't resist, etc. All this for a 12-year-old.
> Thankful that your fucking alpha wants to stuff you full
Thankful? Sir, I'd rather jump off a building or be eaten by piranhas. There's nothing to be thankful for with your threats.
> You're nothing but a hole for me to fuck, to fill
He's saying this to a white child. Talk about a metaphor.
> Every fucking inch
This is the third time he's said this.
> You're nothing but my omega now. You belong to me. My fucking property
I'm very happy the author has made the mixed race man a rapist and pedophile. Well done for those optics, girl. Progshit white women really showing their true colours in the least expected places.
> His primal instincts
Oh? Brown men are natural-born rapists? That's uh, that's kinda based. And from an ABO underage rape fic no less.
> Not when his cock was screaming at him to show his omega how to properly obey and follow the commands of his alpha
He admitted his penis was a literal weapon, and that it's used to 'break people in'. It really is something when so many of these fics have Jayce, the mixed race man, have the monster dick that is used to 'break' Viktor, a smaller, pale white man, and then proceed to accuse others of 'race baiting' when people notice their fetish.
I don't know where or why these shotacon fics are coming from, but the authors are the most entitled cunts you can imagine. There's no use being 'polite' with them. They're rape fetishists who make the unironically based argument that brown men are natural born rapists and they're saying this shit in their progshit circles. The optics of said mixed race man raping a white child, when those things are happening in real life, is verrrrrrrry interesting.
Or we can just get to the easy part and conclude that progshit white women are fucked up and we need to stop them until we can figure out what's going on. There should not be this kind of obsession over darker men fucking 12-year-olds.
This Call Me By Your Name homage may not have 12-year-olds doing things they shouldn't, but you will get a lecture on transphobia and hot doctors instead.
Right off the bat we have: 1. the author admitting she's projecting her own problems onto fictional characters and 2. transphobia! They were calling our poor pooner a weak faggot while...trying to get him to grope their penises. Just teenage boy things!
Of course the doctor has to be a smelly old geezer who keeps 'ancient beliefs' like gender totally being different from sex and that testosterone totally makes a girl a man. In any case, you DO need a therapist's letter to get those hormones you love so much, unless he ran to Planned Parenthood and got them quick there. The geezer is right, in a way
> 17-years-old
OK, so Bella Swan territory. It ain't 12, at least.
I'm afraid that disinfectant alcohol is going to overpower than fabric softener. It's going to smell like stale bodies soon enough.
> Incredibly hot
He describes Jayce like this 2-3 times, as a swooning teenager does. And swoon indeed: it's the first meeting and Jayce is awakening that inner woman of Viktor's. You go, dood!
> Of course he wanted to be treated by him, in various ways, actually
Hm, you want him to be a proctologist or a gynecologist?
Next you're going to tell me this doctor had kids crawling on his lap, and he loves it when kids crawl in his lap.
> That there were only two genders
*Two sexes. This author will take biology seriously when it comes to the ABO universe, but not our own.
> Now he had a man who was way too handsome at his disposal
The old geezer was such a meanie, saying there were only two genders, and yet, your Inner Gender is coming right out to a handsome, well-hung male. Place your bets on how big the Hispanic Hog is.
> He was so attractive
You've said that four times already.
> Infecting him with her platonic taste for older men
How does she know what men are? What about age? If that geezer would have identified as young, that had to have made him young, right?
> Viktor was acting like a real hormonal teenager over a simple massage from his hot doctor
And yes, this does eventually get sexual.
Typical faghag. No personality aside from lifting up her sister who is pretending to be her brother.
> I swear he's so handsome I couldn't even describe him
Yet you described him as handsome five times for the audience.
> They were still teenagers, and like a true teen, Viktor felt a small spark of jealousy flare up inside
Oh, so he's acting like a hormonal teenage girl. Has he even gotten his T shots, yet?
> Just thinking about stripping his attractive doctor of his glasses and tie
Let me guess. He's 12'' and there will be a belly bulge. 'Barely legal teen gets FUCKED on their doctor's exam table!' is what this should be titled.
Notice how Sky mentions female doctors here and she is not called out for her 'transphobia', but the old geezer was shamed because he's a stinky old geezer and that boomer needed to fucking die. The new, hot, sexy dcotor is in, and he'll fuck the woman right back into our dear pooner.
Would this 'more' include a beef injection?
There's hot for teacher and now we have Hot for Doctor. It's only acceptable because Jayce is hot. In real life, predatory doctors usually look like creeps or are Indians. You can make any predatory sex act hot if you make the man hot.
I wonder why your classmates stopped talking to you. Was it them being transphobic, or you demanding that they see you as a boy when you clearly aren't? The fact that they wanted you to cope a feel on a bunch of boys shows that they still saw you as 'easy meat'. You were made an outcast because you were insufferable. Hot girls who become 'hot guys' can usually get away with a lot of shit - the fact you didn't means it was a personality issue.
> Delicate curves of his body
All that work and the hips don't lie.
> His infatuation with Viktor over the years
Who is the 'he' here? The pain? Then it should be 'it' because there's no one else with that pronoun who is aware of his pain.
> The relief from tension, the certainty of being desired
Did you not just say you were desired by your classmates? It seems he's aware of his worth and was able to snag an older, hot doctor real quick.
> Felt like a toy in the private garden of that man
I don't know why he has toys in his garden, but you sure are a HOE
> Use his body at his own pleasure
> Be a pooner
> Insist and demand that others see you as male
> Your pussy gets wet for a really hot doctor
> You start hyperventilating
> You do this because your dad left and you needed a new father figure
Just Pooner Things.
We don't actually get a description of Jayce's size until he starts fucking Viktor, and yes there is a belly bulge. Not maximum strength Hispanic Hog Jayce, but close. Viktor is doing well for taking an older man's above-average penis in his mouth. He really is a HOE.
> Have his milk dripping from his lips
Got Milk?
> Spitting it into his hand to masturbate for hours, pretending that his doctor was filling him to the brim
If you want your pussy to smell like the New Jersey shoreline, that's one way to do it. God, I can just smell it through the screen.
> He swore to God that he wanted to feel those veins pulsing inside of him
Oh, Jayce has really prominent veins, eh? The kind where if you poke 'em with a dart they pop? Funny how that's the only mention of Jayce have a thick'n'veiny penis.
> He would have his shape perfectly molded in his insides
Cliché. Been around the 6th time I've read this exact sentence. It's getting up there with 'his hands met in the middle'.
> Squeezing his cock tightly
Uh, we're talking about Jayce here, right?
> He was so desperate for something big inside him
He'll get the beef injection soon enough.
> He began to enter in Viktor's tight hole
And look at that, there's 'vaginal sex' as a tag right there.
> The thrill of losing his virginity with a man the age of one of his teachers
This is a common female fantasy. Women have a thing for older, mature men, while men tend to want younger, more robust women. Even while projecting her fantasies, it's all female typical ones, lmao.
> Wanted to be fucked like a cheap prostitute by his doctor
I don't think you want that. That would involve you being riddled with STDs and having deformities from all the drugs you take. If you're a virgin, you shouldn't be calling yourself a 'cheap prostitute'. Have some self respect.
> It were thoughts that he wouldn't say sober
*They were thoughts he wouldn't say sober
> Jayce's cock stretching him painfully was enough to make him feel drunk with pleasure
Are the veins rubbing against that g-spot, or not? Will they pop if his pussy squeezes too hard?
> A senior high school student being penetrated by a doctor who was twice his age
If you want rumours of you being a cheap prostitute spread around, that's one way to do it.
> When Viktor thought about being Jayce's lover
Better hope he's single. Because then a woman would be cucked by a 17-year-old pooner.
> The splashing that the desperate thrusts of the older one caused
Eh? Is Viktor's vagina squirting that much it's SPLASHING? Did it evolve into Splash Mountain? Odd choice of words, there.
> Obedient little slut
I wouldn't be using that language when this person is a virgin, pursued you first, and is a person you can lose your job over. 'Strumpet' is the word you want.
> He felt the doctor's cock stretching a part of his flat belly
Told ya. It probably isn't the legendary 12'' but it's close. Just your typical teenage (?) fantasy about getting railed by a big dicked doctor. Who knew Jayce was cosplaying as Johnny Sins?
> Jayce to fill him with warm semen
Who knew this could get so clinical, lmao.
> Came out of his interior
...what a weird way to call a vagina. 'Interior'? Really? That's some creative interior decorating you got there, with a thick n veiny meat delivery.
> He took a little of the liquid and brought it to the boy's lips
Uh, don't tell me he's just carrying around cups of semen like that.
Terror because he was old, or a terror because he was a transphobe? Usually doctor transfers don't go that smoothly, especially if they die like that out of the blue. It's administrative hell before you get a new one. How convenient he got a new one AND a hot one.
> Since his father left him
Ah, it all makes sense now. He's looking for a new 'father' through his doctor.
His weak stomach can take a 12'' dick HEYO
So. Anyone gonna ask where that cum cup went? I bet Jayce chugged it, the dog. Fucking teens is still fucking creepy but at least it wasn't a 12-year-old this time. Can't believe I'm saying that
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This AOT fic taking place in a modern AU sums up today's writing as a whole:
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“I swear it’s really popular and there are girls who post pics on there all the time!” Armenian clenched his fists.
“What kind of pics though?” Erin raised a brow as Albert leaned towards him.
“Bobbies” he whispered.
Ereh covered his mouf in shock.
“Like Dan nicky ur bobbie s?” he whispered as quietly as he could.
“No bro… like tits out for harambe.”
“Not harambe…” Erry gasped.
“Yeah bro… bless up.” Arwin poured out his coffee as he crossed himself. Ere followed his lead and did the same.
“You guys are being ridiculous.” You said from behind them. They both jumped and you could swear a piss stain started forming on both of their crotches. “Ew” you thought to yourself.
“It’s not like you’ve ever seen the server.” Armrest cried.
You were almost offended by that comment.
“I’ll have you know I’m a mod.” You said, flipping your hair over your shoulder.
The two of them got excited and started begging you to prove it.
“Fine” you sighed. You pulled out your phone and opened the Discord app.
“Here’s the server.” You said as you tapped on an icon of a chug jug.
The two of them snatched your phone and started going through the channels together. They had always heard rumors about the growing Discord server owned by your college’s greatest Fortnite gamer. Floch was strict about who could have access to the Tomato Town server, and some said that Tomato Town was now just the nickname for his harem. Some even said it was a sex cult.
Switching from chat to chat, they got excited looking at the lewd photos that people had sent. Many of them with Floch’s initials written on their naked bodies with lipsticks. They tapped around a few more times before
“f u c k….” they whispered to each other before you snatched your phone from them again.
“I think you’ve seen enough.” You said.
Knowing that there was no use for them to beg for you to hand it back, they walked off.
“Okay then see you around I guess.” They both mumbled as they walked away from you.
“Fucking weird-” You thought to yourself but before you could even finish that thought, your phone got bombarded with notifications from Discord.
“Stop ignoring me.” One of the messages read.
“Get on VC.” Another notification zoomed in before you saw another banner with angry emojis pop up after another.
“What the hell is going on?” you thought to yourself. You opened the chat and it was Floch. He did not seem too happy and you couldn’t help but to wonder what it was that had set him off.
“Do you think this is a joke?” one of the messages said
“You obviously don’t take your job seriously so I’m demoting you.”
“You’re no longer a moderator.”
“Scratch that! You’re banned from the server.”
You felt your heart sink. What could possibly have led to this. You had no access to the server anymore and couldn’t help but to break down at this point.
“I see you’re online. Call me.” His last message read.
Not understanding what this was about, you tried calling him but instead he hung up.
“Come to my house. I’m not in the mood to talk over the phone.” He messaged you.
You scratched your head in annoyance. What was the meaning of this? You had worked so hard on that server it had taken you hours to set up the bots and roles. If anything, he should’ve promoted you to admin.
You arrived at his door. Nervous about meeting him, you took a deep breath before knocking.
The door flew up and you were met with a red-haired man who was at least a ft taller than you.
“You wanted to talk to me?” your voice was shaking.
He grabbed you by the collar and pulled you inside before shutting the door behind you.
“Do you know why you’re here, kitten?” he whispered angrily. His voice was unsettling.
“Answer me.” He whispered as he leaned closer to you. You could feel his breath hit your lips. You couldn’t help but to pout in return.
He pushed a lock of hair behind your ear before he leaned into your ear.
“You’ve made daddy angry.” He whispered and his breath hit your skin once more. You felt the hair in your neck stand up and he could tell. You had goosebumps all over your body.
“You’ve given daddy no choice but to punish you kitten.” He whispered to you again.
You shut your eyes in fear. This man was unpredictable! One time he doxxed someone for disliking one of his reuploaded Fortnite streams against Ninja. He grabbed your wrist and lead you to one of the rooms down the corridors.
It was dark and smelled funky. The walls were covered in mold and the room was almost empty. Inside there were a bunch of stained mattresses stacked on top of each other and a nightstand.
“Go, sit over there, kitten.” He commanded you.
Hesitant at first, you looked at him. His expression told you that he wasn’t asking you, he was telling you to sit, so you obliged.
“I called you here today because you’ve disappointed me, kitten.” He said as he started taking off his belt.
“You’ve been a bad kitten and daddy has to punish you now.” He folded his belt in half before tucking at it, so it made a loud whipping sound. It echoed through the room.
You felt your throat get itchy from how dry it was. Not sure if you were allowed to speak yet, you nervously looked around the room.
Floch had anger issues, you had witnessed it on stream numerous of times. He was the angriest when his teammates didn’t build quick enough and when he got shot by 12-year olds.
As a grown man, it hurt his pride and he would always get on vc on discord later to scream at the people from his server, usually blaming you guys for his poor performance. You had witnessed several girls break down in private chats after Floch had called them all sorts of nasty names. You couldn’t make any excuses for his behavior. But Floch was just Floch and that’s just how he was. He had never hurt you before though, in fact he had always been there to make you feel good. Sometimes he would stay up until morning and listen to you talk. On nights like that, he’d whisper sweet nothings to you and you’d be lying if you didn’t get on video calls with him and stripped in return for his teasing.
If you went on for long enough, he’d let you watch him stroke himself. You’d always feel a little embarrassed by how shy you were while he sat there on your screen, leaned back in his chair and moaning your name with his dick in his hand. That Floch wasn’t the same Floch as the one who was standing before you. Floch from your calls was sweet and he’d have a gentle way with his words. He didn’t call you by your pet name, the same pet name he used for all the girls in the server.
You wanted to hear your name leave his lips right now, but you could tell from how aggressive his tone was earlier, there was no way you’d see that side of him right now.
“Well? Are you gonna answer me?” he walked towards you, still with the belt in his hand.
“I-“ you felt like you had to cough but your throat was too dry to even force one out. You made a water drinking motion and pointed at your throat. He just looked at you before kicking open the bottom drawer on his nightstand.
Yellow liquid splashed everywhere as he shot it open. It smelled foul and you knew exactly what it was.
“Drink up while it’s still cold kitten.” He chuckled before pulling down his pants. You shook your head in disgust. He couldn’t be serious. He had a piss drawer next to his bed.
You felt the shame rise in you. Was this the man you had fantasized about at night. You started thinking about the times you had touched yourself to the sight of him pleasuring himself. You didn’t know whether to laugh or cry.
“Do as you please. I won’t let you go until you swallow every last drop from that drawer. That’s your punishment.”
You crossed your arms and turned your head away from the drawer.
He cupped your face with his free hand and clenched your jaw, forcing you to open your mouth. He spat right into your mouth. You swallowed as a reflex. You felt his cold slimy saliva run down your throat, it felt good how it was now lubricating the inside of your gullet.
Embarrassed by what you had done, your cheeks started burning in his grip.
“You’re a dirty little kitten aren’t you?” he smirked.
You physically tried to stop yourself from nodding, but your head still moved in a “yes” motion.
You wanted the taste of him back into your mouth. You suddenly missed the feel of his hot breath against your face. He seemed so intimidating earlier, but now you wanted all of him.
You tried to pull yourself close to his lips, but he was quick to grab your throat and push you away. You gasped at the sensation that was now running through your body. Trying to hold back your excitement, you bit your bottom lip (not like Lin-Manuel Miranda. It’s supposed to be in a sexy way.)
He smirked and leaned in for a kiss, with his hand still on your throat. His wet tongue felt good against yours and you couldn’t help but to let out a small moan for each time he pulled away.
“I’m gonna ask you one last time. Do you know why you’re here?” he whispered before licking your lips.
You shook your head.
“No.” you whispered.
“No what?”
“No Daddy.” You tucked your lips. There was something you hated about that word. It never turned you on. In fact it made you cringe.
“Then you don’t know why Daddy has to punish you either now?” he whispered again, kissing your cheek between each word.
You shook your head again in response.
“Daddy is disappointed in you.” He sighed. He let go of your throat. He was standing with his back to you now. You could tell by his whole body that he was disappointed.
“You posted a meme in #general.” His voice was shaking.
You felt your heart sink.
“There must’ve been a mistake! I couldn’t have done that.” Your voice cracked. “When was this?” you asked.
“Just this afternoon. Right before I texted you.” He sniffed.
“Oh no.” you thought to yourself. Those bastards must’ve accidentally sent it while scrolling through the channels.
“Can you explain this mistake, then?” Floch turned back around to face you.
“I accidentally sent it while holding my phone.” You mumbled. If you told him that you let an outsider see the server, you don’t know what he’d do to you.
“You do understand that I need to punish you then, right?” he sighed. You nodded.
Floch took off his pants completely before pulling off his briefs.
The sight was familiar, but you had only seen him through the screen.
He spit into his palm before he started stroking his dick. He was bigger than you had anticipated. He stood with his crotch close to your mouth, you looked up at him, who was looking down on you, pushing your hair behind your ear.
You wrapped your lips around his tip, licking it gently before wrapping your lips around it as you still played with the tip with your tongue. He grabbed the back of your head and shoved his cock deeper into your mouth as he pushed you closer.
You clenched your throat around his dick as it slid further to the back of your mouth. You tried not to gag as you took deep breaths through your nose. He pulled out before taking one last look at you. He grabbed you by the wrists and tied them together behind your back with his belt he had taken off earlier. He laid you on the bed again, with your head hanging off the edge. He unbuttoned your shirt and dragged off your jeans which he then threw aside. He unhooked your bra that he then dragged over your shoulders.
He gently started sucking on your nipple, fondling with the other one. You felt him brush his tooth against it, which caused you to whimper.
He pinched your other nipple before twisting it between his fingers, causing you to moan.
Floch pulled off your panties that were now damp. He smirked before curling it up and stuffing it in your mouth. He covered your mouth before turning you around, laying you on your stomach with your ass up. He spread your legs before rubbing his dick against your clit. You were wet, if you didn’t know any better, you’d say you were dripping onto his dick. He rubbed himself against your coochie again, but you couldn’t take it. You started humping every inch you could get between your thighs. At this point you were desperate. Your head felt light and all you could think of was how you wanted him to fuck you.
You groaned as you felt him slide his dick away from your clit. You felt his finger slide between your thighs.
“Fuck you’re a wet little whore aren’t you.” He chuckled. You were embarrassed by his comment. Was it really that obvious that you wanted him? You closed your legs with your ass still in the air. You felt him spit on you once more, the saliva was now running down your ass and you could feel it make a puddle by your hole, in which he slid a finger into.
You moaned at the pleasure and he was quick to slide yet another finger in. Your muffled cries were drowned when you buried your face into the mattress. He picked up the pace and slid his fingers deeper inside you before sliding a third finger in. You whimpered harder into the mattress, almost choking on your lingerie. He quickly pulled his fingers out, in which you relaxed in relief. He went to the drawer and grabbed a pack of condoms, which he wrapped around his cock before slamming himself into your ass again.
Gasping from the pain, you tensed up again, but that did not stop him from thrusting into you.
“Relax, it’s gonna hurt less.” He whispered to you. It was easy for him to say. He wasn’t the one getting his hole torn right now.
Grabbing onto the belt, he thrusted faster and harder, it started to feel good. You managed to slide a pillow between your thighs that you were now humping in pace with him. You moaned when the fabric hit your right spot, but it wasn’t enough for you to get off.
Floch noticed what you were doing and quickly grabbed the pillow from between your legs.
“You’re not allowed to have this.” He turned you around and pulled the panties out of your mouth.
“I’m still not done punishing you.” He smirked.
Pulling the condom off and throwing it aside, he turned you around so that your head was once again hanging from the edge. He started fucking your throat once more.
“I’m gonna piss.” He moaned. Before you could register what he had just said, you felt the warm liquid run down your throat. You gulped it down like it was the hydration you had been craving all day. You swallowed every drop he gave you before you felt his thick cum splash into you right after.
He pulled out and looked you with your tear-filled eyes.
“We’re almost done, kitten.” He smirked. He ran out of the room before returning with a funnel and what seemed like a roll of FlexTape™ (not sponsored).
“I told you I was gonna make you finish every last drop.” He turned you back on your stomach and made you hold the funnel as he shoved it into your ass.
You could hear him pull out something from besides the bed, but you couldn’t see what it was because of all the hair that was in the way.
He walked back to stand over you and you felt a cold liquid fill you up quickly through the funnel.
When he was done emptying the piss from the drawer into you, he pulled the funnel before quickly ripping off a strip of the tape and slapped it on your ass, sealing your hole. "They weren't lying. It does instantly patch, bond and seal." he whispered. "Too bad it can't repair." he chuckled before kissing your forehead.
“Daddy’s gotta go and stream kitten. Tomato Town needs me. I’ll be back to let you go when I’m done.” He whispered to you, placing a pillow between your thighs before leaving the room.
You felt dirty on all sorts of levels. You didn’t know what you were gonna do when he came back, but right now all you could do was finish off where he had interrupted you. Slowly you started rubbing your clit against the pillow once more, ashamed of the state you were in, you humped the pillow in hopes of eventually reaching a high you almost had reached moments ago.
“What kind of pics though?” Erin raised a brow as Albert leaned towards him.
“Bobbies” he whispered.
Ereh covered his mouf in shock.
“Like Dan nicky ur bobbie s?” he whispered as quietly as he could.
“No bro… like tits out for harambe.”
“Not harambe…” Erry gasped.
“Yeah bro… bless up.” Arwin poured out his coffee as he crossed himself. Ere followed his lead and did the same.
“You guys are being ridiculous.” You said from behind them. They both jumped and you could swear a piss stain started forming on both of their crotches. “Ew” you thought to yourself.
“It’s not like you’ve ever seen the server.” Armrest cried.
You were almost offended by that comment.
“I’ll have you know I’m a mod.” You said, flipping your hair over your shoulder.
The two of them got excited and started begging you to prove it.
“Fine” you sighed. You pulled out your phone and opened the Discord app.
“Here’s the server.” You said as you tapped on an icon of a chug jug.
The two of them snatched your phone and started going through the channels together. They had always heard rumors about the growing Discord server owned by your college’s greatest Fortnite gamer. Floch was strict about who could have access to the Tomato Town server, and some said that Tomato Town was now just the nickname for his harem. Some even said it was a sex cult.
Switching from chat to chat, they got excited looking at the lewd photos that people had sent. Many of them with Floch’s initials written on their naked bodies with lipsticks. They tapped around a few more times before
“f u c k….” they whispered to each other before you snatched your phone from them again.
“I think you’ve seen enough.” You said.
Knowing that there was no use for them to beg for you to hand it back, they walked off.
“Okay then see you around I guess.” They both mumbled as they walked away from you.
“Fucking weird-” You thought to yourself but before you could even finish that thought, your phone got bombarded with notifications from Discord.
“Stop ignoring me.” One of the messages read.
“Get on VC.” Another notification zoomed in before you saw another banner with angry emojis pop up after another.
“What the hell is going on?” you thought to yourself. You opened the chat and it was Floch. He did not seem too happy and you couldn’t help but to wonder what it was that had set him off.
“Do you think this is a joke?” one of the messages said
“You obviously don’t take your job seriously so I’m demoting you.”
“You’re no longer a moderator.”
“Scratch that! You’re banned from the server.”
You felt your heart sink. What could possibly have led to this. You had no access to the server anymore and couldn’t help but to break down at this point.
“I see you’re online. Call me.” His last message read.
Not understanding what this was about, you tried calling him but instead he hung up.
“Come to my house. I’m not in the mood to talk over the phone.” He messaged you.
You scratched your head in annoyance. What was the meaning of this? You had worked so hard on that server it had taken you hours to set up the bots and roles. If anything, he should’ve promoted you to admin.
You arrived at his door. Nervous about meeting him, you took a deep breath before knocking.
The door flew up and you were met with a red-haired man who was at least a ft taller than you.
“You wanted to talk to me?” your voice was shaking.
He grabbed you by the collar and pulled you inside before shutting the door behind you.
“Do you know why you’re here, kitten?” he whispered angrily. His voice was unsettling.
“Answer me.” He whispered as he leaned closer to you. You could feel his breath hit your lips. You couldn’t help but to pout in return.
He pushed a lock of hair behind your ear before he leaned into your ear.
“You’ve made daddy angry.” He whispered and his breath hit your skin once more. You felt the hair in your neck stand up and he could tell. You had goosebumps all over your body.
“You’ve given daddy no choice but to punish you kitten.” He whispered to you again.
You shut your eyes in fear. This man was unpredictable! One time he doxxed someone for disliking one of his reuploaded Fortnite streams against Ninja. He grabbed your wrist and lead you to one of the rooms down the corridors.
It was dark and smelled funky. The walls were covered in mold and the room was almost empty. Inside there were a bunch of stained mattresses stacked on top of each other and a nightstand.
“Go, sit over there, kitten.” He commanded you.
Hesitant at first, you looked at him. His expression told you that he wasn’t asking you, he was telling you to sit, so you obliged.
“I called you here today because you’ve disappointed me, kitten.” He said as he started taking off his belt.
“You’ve been a bad kitten and daddy has to punish you now.” He folded his belt in half before tucking at it, so it made a loud whipping sound. It echoed through the room.
You felt your throat get itchy from how dry it was. Not sure if you were allowed to speak yet, you nervously looked around the room.
Floch had anger issues, you had witnessed it on stream numerous of times. He was the angriest when his teammates didn’t build quick enough and when he got shot by 12-year olds.
As a grown man, it hurt his pride and he would always get on vc on discord later to scream at the people from his server, usually blaming you guys for his poor performance. You had witnessed several girls break down in private chats after Floch had called them all sorts of nasty names. You couldn’t make any excuses for his behavior. But Floch was just Floch and that’s just how he was. He had never hurt you before though, in fact he had always been there to make you feel good. Sometimes he would stay up until morning and listen to you talk. On nights like that, he’d whisper sweet nothings to you and you’d be lying if you didn’t get on video calls with him and stripped in return for his teasing.
If you went on for long enough, he’d let you watch him stroke himself. You’d always feel a little embarrassed by how shy you were while he sat there on your screen, leaned back in his chair and moaning your name with his dick in his hand. That Floch wasn’t the same Floch as the one who was standing before you. Floch from your calls was sweet and he’d have a gentle way with his words. He didn’t call you by your pet name, the same pet name he used for all the girls in the server.
You wanted to hear your name leave his lips right now, but you could tell from how aggressive his tone was earlier, there was no way you’d see that side of him right now.
“Well? Are you gonna answer me?” he walked towards you, still with the belt in his hand.
“I-“ you felt like you had to cough but your throat was too dry to even force one out. You made a water drinking motion and pointed at your throat. He just looked at you before kicking open the bottom drawer on his nightstand.
Yellow liquid splashed everywhere as he shot it open. It smelled foul and you knew exactly what it was.
“Drink up while it’s still cold kitten.” He chuckled before pulling down his pants. You shook your head in disgust. He couldn’t be serious. He had a piss drawer next to his bed.
You felt the shame rise in you. Was this the man you had fantasized about at night. You started thinking about the times you had touched yourself to the sight of him pleasuring himself. You didn’t know whether to laugh or cry.
“Do as you please. I won’t let you go until you swallow every last drop from that drawer. That’s your punishment.”
You crossed your arms and turned your head away from the drawer.
He cupped your face with his free hand and clenched your jaw, forcing you to open your mouth. He spat right into your mouth. You swallowed as a reflex. You felt his cold slimy saliva run down your throat, it felt good how it was now lubricating the inside of your gullet.
Embarrassed by what you had done, your cheeks started burning in his grip.
“You’re a dirty little kitten aren’t you?” he smirked.
You physically tried to stop yourself from nodding, but your head still moved in a “yes” motion.
You wanted the taste of him back into your mouth. You suddenly missed the feel of his hot breath against your face. He seemed so intimidating earlier, but now you wanted all of him.
You tried to pull yourself close to his lips, but he was quick to grab your throat and push you away. You gasped at the sensation that was now running through your body. Trying to hold back your excitement, you bit your bottom lip (not like Lin-Manuel Miranda. It’s supposed to be in a sexy way.)
He smirked and leaned in for a kiss, with his hand still on your throat. His wet tongue felt good against yours and you couldn’t help but to let out a small moan for each time he pulled away.
“I’m gonna ask you one last time. Do you know why you’re here?” he whispered before licking your lips.
You shook your head.
“No.” you whispered.
“No what?”
“No Daddy.” You tucked your lips. There was something you hated about that word. It never turned you on. In fact it made you cringe.
“Then you don’t know why Daddy has to punish you either now?” he whispered again, kissing your cheek between each word.
You shook your head again in response.
“Daddy is disappointed in you.” He sighed. He let go of your throat. He was standing with his back to you now. You could tell by his whole body that he was disappointed.
“You posted a meme in #general.” His voice was shaking.
You felt your heart sink.
“There must’ve been a mistake! I couldn’t have done that.” Your voice cracked. “When was this?” you asked.
“Just this afternoon. Right before I texted you.” He sniffed.
“Oh no.” you thought to yourself. Those bastards must’ve accidentally sent it while scrolling through the channels.
“Can you explain this mistake, then?” Floch turned back around to face you.
“I accidentally sent it while holding my phone.” You mumbled. If you told him that you let an outsider see the server, you don’t know what he’d do to you.
“You do understand that I need to punish you then, right?” he sighed. You nodded.
Floch took off his pants completely before pulling off his briefs.
The sight was familiar, but you had only seen him through the screen.
He spit into his palm before he started stroking his dick. He was bigger than you had anticipated. He stood with his crotch close to your mouth, you looked up at him, who was looking down on you, pushing your hair behind your ear.
You wrapped your lips around his tip, licking it gently before wrapping your lips around it as you still played with the tip with your tongue. He grabbed the back of your head and shoved his cock deeper into your mouth as he pushed you closer.
You clenched your throat around his dick as it slid further to the back of your mouth. You tried not to gag as you took deep breaths through your nose. He pulled out before taking one last look at you. He grabbed you by the wrists and tied them together behind your back with his belt he had taken off earlier. He laid you on the bed again, with your head hanging off the edge. He unbuttoned your shirt and dragged off your jeans which he then threw aside. He unhooked your bra that he then dragged over your shoulders.
He gently started sucking on your nipple, fondling with the other one. You felt him brush his tooth against it, which caused you to whimper.
He pinched your other nipple before twisting it between his fingers, causing you to moan.
Floch pulled off your panties that were now damp. He smirked before curling it up and stuffing it in your mouth. He covered your mouth before turning you around, laying you on your stomach with your ass up. He spread your legs before rubbing his dick against your clit. You were wet, if you didn’t know any better, you’d say you were dripping onto his dick. He rubbed himself against your coochie again, but you couldn’t take it. You started humping every inch you could get between your thighs. At this point you were desperate. Your head felt light and all you could think of was how you wanted him to fuck you.
You groaned as you felt him slide his dick away from your clit. You felt his finger slide between your thighs.
“Fuck you’re a wet little whore aren’t you.” He chuckled. You were embarrassed by his comment. Was it really that obvious that you wanted him? You closed your legs with your ass still in the air. You felt him spit on you once more, the saliva was now running down your ass and you could feel it make a puddle by your hole, in which he slid a finger into.
You moaned at the pleasure and he was quick to slide yet another finger in. Your muffled cries were drowned when you buried your face into the mattress. He picked up the pace and slid his fingers deeper inside you before sliding a third finger in. You whimpered harder into the mattress, almost choking on your lingerie. He quickly pulled his fingers out, in which you relaxed in relief. He went to the drawer and grabbed a pack of condoms, which he wrapped around his cock before slamming himself into your ass again.
Gasping from the pain, you tensed up again, but that did not stop him from thrusting into you.
“Relax, it’s gonna hurt less.” He whispered to you. It was easy for him to say. He wasn’t the one getting his hole torn right now.
Grabbing onto the belt, he thrusted faster and harder, it started to feel good. You managed to slide a pillow between your thighs that you were now humping in pace with him. You moaned when the fabric hit your right spot, but it wasn’t enough for you to get off.
Floch noticed what you were doing and quickly grabbed the pillow from between your legs.
“You’re not allowed to have this.” He turned you around and pulled the panties out of your mouth.
“I’m still not done punishing you.” He smirked.
Pulling the condom off and throwing it aside, he turned you around so that your head was once again hanging from the edge. He started fucking your throat once more.
“I’m gonna piss.” He moaned. Before you could register what he had just said, you felt the warm liquid run down your throat. You gulped it down like it was the hydration you had been craving all day. You swallowed every drop he gave you before you felt his thick cum splash into you right after.
He pulled out and looked you with your tear-filled eyes.
“We’re almost done, kitten.” He smirked. He ran out of the room before returning with a funnel and what seemed like a roll of FlexTape™ (not sponsored).
“I told you I was gonna make you finish every last drop.” He turned you back on your stomach and made you hold the funnel as he shoved it into your ass.
You could hear him pull out something from besides the bed, but you couldn’t see what it was because of all the hair that was in the way.
He walked back to stand over you and you felt a cold liquid fill you up quickly through the funnel.
When he was done emptying the piss from the drawer into you, he pulled the funnel before quickly ripping off a strip of the tape and slapped it on your ass, sealing your hole. "They weren't lying. It does instantly patch, bond and seal." he whispered. "Too bad it can't repair." he chuckled before kissing your forehead.
“Daddy’s gotta go and stream kitten. Tomato Town needs me. I’ll be back to let you go when I’m done.” He whispered to you, placing a pillow between your thighs before leaving the room.
You felt dirty on all sorts of levels. You didn’t know what you were gonna do when he came back, but right now all you could do was finish off where he had interrupted you. Slowly you started rubbing your clit against the pillow once more, ashamed of the state you were in, you humped the pillow in hopes of eventually reaching a high you almost had reached moments ago.
“.... red lights stop signs, I still see your face in the white cars” you heard a familiar voice sing as a pair of heavy footsteps approached the room. It sounded like metal clinking against the hardwood floors with every step that was taken.
Laying on your stomach with your arms still tied behind your back. Your body was trembling from the drafty air in the room and the pillow between your thighs that was now soaked in your own urine, due to Floch leaving you in there for god-knows-how-many-hours, had now turned cold. A tall silhouette stopped in the doorway and you could feel him stare at you.
Floch was wearing nothing but a pair of cowboy boots and a thong with and American flag print. He had completed the outfit with a Stetson hat and a toothpick peeking out from between his teeth. If mama Ru had seen him, he would NOT be lip synching for his life tonight that’s for sure!
He galloped to the bed on his invisible horse and neighed before stopping right next to you.
“Easy now boy.” he shushed to his horse before plopping his bare ass right next to your face.
The smell of his sweat that had been collecting between his cheeks over the past few hours hit you like a heatwave on a hot July afternoon, and you felt that you were closer than ever to throwing up.
Floch noticed that you weren’t feeling too well, and you could see a worried expression grow on his face.
He took off his cowboy hat and brushed your hair aside so that he could take a good look at your face.
“What’s wrong kitten?” he asked as he stroked your cheek. Your whole body was ice cold and his warm hand felt nice against your freezing skin.
“I feel gross.” You pouted.
He quickly reached for the belt around your wrists and unbuckled it. You curled up into a ball, still shaking uncontrollably from the cold.
“We need to get you warmed up, kitten.” Floch said as he put his hat back on and scooped you up before galloping out into the hallway on his invisible horse. Neighing with every other step he took, he made way to the bathroom.
He let you sit on the edge of the tub that was placed in the middle of the room next to a brown toilet that once was white and a sink that had endured the same trauma as that toilet bowl. On the other side of the bathroom there was a shower that somehow looked too clean to belong to this room. Maybe it was because of how often it had been used.
He pushed you into the tub, causing you to fold in with your legs hanging above your head. He placed his hand between your thighs, rubbing your clit with his fingers softly before ripping the FlexTape® off like a band-aid.
You squealed at the sharp pain that shot through your body, causing you to clench, which lead a fountain of yellow urine to shot out through your ass as it rained down on your face.
“Feel the rain on your skin-” he whispered. “-no one else can feel it for you. Only you can let it in.”
“What the fuck?” you cried. With tears running down your cheeks you tried to get up but Floch pushed you back in and grabbed the shower head that he then sprayed you with.
“You’re a wet little kitty, aren’t you?” he almost sounded like Ben Shapiro. He turned the water back off and got in the tub with you, letting his legs hang from each side of the tub. His taint was almost in your face and you swore you could see curled up toilet paper sticking to his ass hairs from under his thong.
“You know what kitten? I think you’re being a little too silly right now. You’re a silly little goose.” He reached to bop your nose and let out a fart right as his finger hit your nose.
Closing your eyes, you held your breath, trying to calm down but the smell had already hit you and the aroma of rotten eggs filled your nostrils, causing you to gag. You couldn’t keep whatever was in your stomach down any longer.
You were about to get up but Floch grabbed your wrist, trying to drag you back down.
“Floch please. I need to throw up.” You cried.
“No you don’t.” he said with a smirk forming on his face.
“What?”
“Prove it.”
“Prove what?”
“Let’s say hypothetically that you needed to throw up. Wouldn’t you have to actually vomit instead of announcing that you were feeling sick. So technically you’d already be throwing up which would prove that you had to throw up right here right now.” He did the white people smile where you tuck your lips and looked at you.
You raised a brow and leaned back down. Trying to understand what his thought process was right now, you just stared at him dumbfounded.
“That’s what I thought kitten.” He chuckled. “Now if you’ll excuse me, I need to get these boots off so if you could help me, that would be splendid.”
He moved his foot to your face, and you grabbed his cowboy boot, it came off easily as you pulled. But something fell onto your lap as the boot flew off and not daring to touch it, you just looked at it in shock. It was a stuffed sock that contained something warm and squishy. The odor from it smelled as foul as Floch’s bedroom.
Floch laughed at your reaction.
“It’s just my poop sock you silly little goose.” He laughed so hard he had to grab his stomach as he leaned his head back.
“Ew!” you squealed as you pinched the end of the sock and flung it, the sock landed right in Floch’s mouth and he bit down as a reflex, causing shit to fly everywhere.
You froze up in shock, not knowing if he’d get mad at you and force that sock down your mouth next or if he would think of something a million times worse.
“Floch… I’m so sorry!” you covered your mouth.
He glared at you, scanning you up and down before busting out into laughter again.
You’re lucky I’m into scat.” He laughed.
“Scat?” you were confused. “Like Skiddi-di-bap-bap-boop-beep-boop?” you frowned.
“No, silly…just never mind, don’t worry about it“ he sighed.
Starting to feel uncomfortable with the vibes in the tub, you decided to tell him that you really wanted to go.
“Please kitten. I need this.” He begged in return. He pushed his lips against yours, trying to lick your lips, but you shut them together. The thought of him still having fecal particles in his mouth made you finally throw up. Yellow vomit shot out everywhere, covering both you and Floch. You looked at him in shock, not knowing if you should run or sit down and cry, your eyes met with Floch’s, who wasn’t saying anything. The silence made you so uncomfortable you started sobbing uncontrollably. You were exhausted from this nightmare and just wanted to go home, take a bath and sleep for the rest of your life at this point.
Floch wrapped his arms around you and kissed your forehead.
“I’m so sorry mama. I never meant to hurt you.” He whispered apologetically. “Let’s get you cleaned up, shall we?”
You nodded as he gave you a kiss on the cheek.
Soaking in the bath after a long shower you looked at Floch who was sitting on the opposite side of the tub. With your legs up in his face, he was kissing the arch of your foot, making his way down to your heel before moving back to your big toe, which he then started sucking and leaving small pecks on.
He let go of your foot and crawled on top of you before planting small kisses on your neck. As much as you enjoyed this, you felt your stomach start to get upset.
“Floch…” you whispered softly.
“Hmm?” he moaned into your neck.
“Floch I need to use the bathroom.”
He leaned back and pointed to the toilet.
“It’s all yours.” He said.
“I’d like to have some privacy.” You said nervously.
“Why? We’re having an intimate moment, aren’t we? So why not make it more intimate?” he replied.
You knew there was no point in arguing with him so you got up and marched to the toilet.
He looked at you from the tub, waiting for you to pee, but nothing would come out. You were too uncomfortable.
“Well?” he said.
“Stop pressuring me!” you yelled back, still sitting there with nothing coming out.
“I’ll help you, kitten.” Floch said. He walked to the sink and let the faucet drip before hunching over you. He stroked your hair as if he was trying to encourage you to pee.
“Want me to force it out of you?” he whispered with raised brows before he bit his lower lip.
Confused by his comment, you just shrugged and before you could really do anything else, he placed his palm on your stomach, pressing on it. You quickly grabbed his hand.
“Floch… I really think you should get out. I have to go number two.” You mumbled nervously.
“It’s okay. I want this for us.” He whispered before pressing his lips against yours. He placed his free hand on the back of your head. Kissing him back, you bit softly onto his bottom lip before releasing it.
“Are you ready, kitten?” he whispered to you. You nodded in return and he started pressing his palm against your stomach. You let out a fart, but he didn’t pay it any attention and before you knew it, your diarrhea started running like there was no tomorrow. Through the process Floch tried to kiss you below the belt, but each time, you had to bring him back up to your face and keep his lips hostage with yours. Getting eaten out in this position was just not something you were ready for yet.
As you finished shitting, you reached to flush the poop down the toilet, but Floch stopped you.
“I wanna see it.” He whispered to you.
Not surprised by this, you sighed and got up.
He took a good look inside the toilet bowl before he gave you a kiss on the lips and sat down on the warm toilet seat. He let out a fart followed by a duce plopping into the toilet bowl. The toilet water splashed and hit his ass. He flinched as it hit his hole.
“Poseidon just gave me a kiss haha.” He chuckled right when he shit out another piece.
Not knowing if this was the end of your friendship with Floch or the start of something magical, you brushed your fingers through Floch’s hair as he continued shitting. Whatever the outcome of this would be, you were just glad to be with him in this moment.
Laying on your stomach with your arms still tied behind your back. Your body was trembling from the drafty air in the room and the pillow between your thighs that was now soaked in your own urine, due to Floch leaving you in there for god-knows-how-many-hours, had now turned cold. A tall silhouette stopped in the doorway and you could feel him stare at you.
Floch was wearing nothing but a pair of cowboy boots and a thong with and American flag print. He had completed the outfit with a Stetson hat and a toothpick peeking out from between his teeth. If mama Ru had seen him, he would NOT be lip synching for his life tonight that’s for sure!
He galloped to the bed on his invisible horse and neighed before stopping right next to you.
“Easy now boy.” he shushed to his horse before plopping his bare ass right next to your face.
The smell of his sweat that had been collecting between his cheeks over the past few hours hit you like a heatwave on a hot July afternoon, and you felt that you were closer than ever to throwing up.
Floch noticed that you weren’t feeling too well, and you could see a worried expression grow on his face.
He took off his cowboy hat and brushed your hair aside so that he could take a good look at your face.
“What’s wrong kitten?” he asked as he stroked your cheek. Your whole body was ice cold and his warm hand felt nice against your freezing skin.
“I feel gross.” You pouted.
He quickly reached for the belt around your wrists and unbuckled it. You curled up into a ball, still shaking uncontrollably from the cold.
“We need to get you warmed up, kitten.” Floch said as he put his hat back on and scooped you up before galloping out into the hallway on his invisible horse. Neighing with every other step he took, he made way to the bathroom.
He let you sit on the edge of the tub that was placed in the middle of the room next to a brown toilet that once was white and a sink that had endured the same trauma as that toilet bowl. On the other side of the bathroom there was a shower that somehow looked too clean to belong to this room. Maybe it was because of how often it had been used.
He pushed you into the tub, causing you to fold in with your legs hanging above your head. He placed his hand between your thighs, rubbing your clit with his fingers softly before ripping the FlexTape® off like a band-aid.
You squealed at the sharp pain that shot through your body, causing you to clench, which lead a fountain of yellow urine to shot out through your ass as it rained down on your face.
“Feel the rain on your skin-” he whispered. “-no one else can feel it for you. Only you can let it in.”
“What the fuck?” you cried. With tears running down your cheeks you tried to get up but Floch pushed you back in and grabbed the shower head that he then sprayed you with.
“You’re a wet little kitty, aren’t you?” he almost sounded like Ben Shapiro. He turned the water back off and got in the tub with you, letting his legs hang from each side of the tub. His taint was almost in your face and you swore you could see curled up toilet paper sticking to his ass hairs from under his thong.
“You know what kitten? I think you’re being a little too silly right now. You’re a silly little goose.” He reached to bop your nose and let out a fart right as his finger hit your nose.
Closing your eyes, you held your breath, trying to calm down but the smell had already hit you and the aroma of rotten eggs filled your nostrils, causing you to gag. You couldn’t keep whatever was in your stomach down any longer.
You were about to get up but Floch grabbed your wrist, trying to drag you back down.
“Floch please. I need to throw up.” You cried.
“No you don’t.” he said with a smirk forming on his face.
“What?”
“Prove it.”
“Prove what?”
“Let’s say hypothetically that you needed to throw up. Wouldn’t you have to actually vomit instead of announcing that you were feeling sick. So technically you’d already be throwing up which would prove that you had to throw up right here right now.” He did the white people smile where you tuck your lips and looked at you.
You raised a brow and leaned back down. Trying to understand what his thought process was right now, you just stared at him dumbfounded.
“That’s what I thought kitten.” He chuckled. “Now if you’ll excuse me, I need to get these boots off so if you could help me, that would be splendid.”
He moved his foot to your face, and you grabbed his cowboy boot, it came off easily as you pulled. But something fell onto your lap as the boot flew off and not daring to touch it, you just looked at it in shock. It was a stuffed sock that contained something warm and squishy. The odor from it smelled as foul as Floch’s bedroom.
Floch laughed at your reaction.
“It’s just my poop sock you silly little goose.” He laughed so hard he had to grab his stomach as he leaned his head back.
“Ew!” you squealed as you pinched the end of the sock and flung it, the sock landed right in Floch’s mouth and he bit down as a reflex, causing shit to fly everywhere.
You froze up in shock, not knowing if he’d get mad at you and force that sock down your mouth next or if he would think of something a million times worse.
“Floch… I’m so sorry!” you covered your mouth.
He glared at you, scanning you up and down before busting out into laughter again.
You’re lucky I’m into scat.” He laughed.
“Scat?” you were confused. “Like Skiddi-di-bap-bap-boop-beep-boop?” you frowned.
“No, silly…just never mind, don’t worry about it“ he sighed.
Starting to feel uncomfortable with the vibes in the tub, you decided to tell him that you really wanted to go.
“Please kitten. I need this.” He begged in return. He pushed his lips against yours, trying to lick your lips, but you shut them together. The thought of him still having fecal particles in his mouth made you finally throw up. Yellow vomit shot out everywhere, covering both you and Floch. You looked at him in shock, not knowing if you should run or sit down and cry, your eyes met with Floch’s, who wasn’t saying anything. The silence made you so uncomfortable you started sobbing uncontrollably. You were exhausted from this nightmare and just wanted to go home, take a bath and sleep for the rest of your life at this point.
Floch wrapped his arms around you and kissed your forehead.
“I’m so sorry mama. I never meant to hurt you.” He whispered apologetically. “Let’s get you cleaned up, shall we?”
You nodded as he gave you a kiss on the cheek.
Soaking in the bath after a long shower you looked at Floch who was sitting on the opposite side of the tub. With your legs up in his face, he was kissing the arch of your foot, making his way down to your heel before moving back to your big toe, which he then started sucking and leaving small pecks on.
He let go of your foot and crawled on top of you before planting small kisses on your neck. As much as you enjoyed this, you felt your stomach start to get upset.
“Floch…” you whispered softly.
“Hmm?” he moaned into your neck.
“Floch I need to use the bathroom.”
He leaned back and pointed to the toilet.
“It’s all yours.” He said.
“I’d like to have some privacy.” You said nervously.
“Why? We’re having an intimate moment, aren’t we? So why not make it more intimate?” he replied.
You knew there was no point in arguing with him so you got up and marched to the toilet.
He looked at you from the tub, waiting for you to pee, but nothing would come out. You were too uncomfortable.
“Well?” he said.
“Stop pressuring me!” you yelled back, still sitting there with nothing coming out.
“I’ll help you, kitten.” Floch said. He walked to the sink and let the faucet drip before hunching over you. He stroked your hair as if he was trying to encourage you to pee.
“Want me to force it out of you?” he whispered with raised brows before he bit his lower lip.
Confused by his comment, you just shrugged and before you could really do anything else, he placed his palm on your stomach, pressing on it. You quickly grabbed his hand.
“Floch… I really think you should get out. I have to go number two.” You mumbled nervously.
“It’s okay. I want this for us.” He whispered before pressing his lips against yours. He placed his free hand on the back of your head. Kissing him back, you bit softly onto his bottom lip before releasing it.
“Are you ready, kitten?” he whispered to you. You nodded in return and he started pressing his palm against your stomach. You let out a fart, but he didn’t pay it any attention and before you knew it, your diarrhea started running like there was no tomorrow. Through the process Floch tried to kiss you below the belt, but each time, you had to bring him back up to your face and keep his lips hostage with yours. Getting eaten out in this position was just not something you were ready for yet.
As you finished shitting, you reached to flush the poop down the toilet, but Floch stopped you.
“I wanna see it.” He whispered to you.
Not surprised by this, you sighed and got up.
He took a good look inside the toilet bowl before he gave you a kiss on the lips and sat down on the warm toilet seat. He let out a fart followed by a duce plopping into the toilet bowl. The toilet water splashed and hit his ass. He flinched as it hit his hole.
“Poseidon just gave me a kiss haha.” He chuckled right when he shit out another piece.
Not knowing if this was the end of your friendship with Floch or the start of something magical, you brushed your fingers through Floch’s hair as he continued shitting. Whatever the outcome of this would be, you were just glad to be with him in this moment.
Floch put his hand inside the toilet bowl to scoop out the marinated mixture you two had created from your feces together.
“He’s beautiful,” he whispered. “but not as beautiful as you.” Floch held your dookie lovechild against his chest, squeezing it tightly against himself, you could see parts of it squeezing through between his fingers and in a way, it was sort of poetic. You weren’t sure if it was because you were blinded by your love for him, or if the past 24 hours had been an eye opening experience. Either way, you were glad to be sharing this very moment with him.
“Uhm… Floch?” you asked cautiously.
He raised a brow at you, requesting you to refer to him by his gamer tag.
“I apologize, FaZe_FlochSMP.” you corrected yourself. “I should’ve known my place.”
“Tsk tsk tsk” he clicked his tongue before shushing you.
He then reached his shit covered hand out to you, waving you closer to him to let him pat your head. You bowed your head before him as he ran his doodoo hand through your newly washed hair.
“That’s what I thought, kitten whiskers.” he smirked. “You wouldn’t want daddy to punish you, would you?”
You glanced up at him.
“Don’t give me that look, you know how daddy gets when you do that.” he leaned closer to your face. You couldn’t help but blush at how close he was to you.
Floch grabbed you by the thighs, making you wrap your legs around him before he carried you to the sink in his bathroom. He then pushed his lips against yours. Causing you to part your lips, letting him brush his tongue against yours as you tried to suck on his bottom lip. He pulled you out of the kiss by grabbing your hair back with his shit covered hand as he started kissing you down your neck, he put his clean hand on your lips. You started licking on his index and middle finger and felt a hangnail scrape against the inside of your mouth as you fought the urge to bite it off. Trying to ignore it, you couldn’t take it anymore and finally gave in. So you started nibbling on the hangnail before you finally managed to bite it off.
Floch stared at you in disbelief.
“Wow…” he chuckled. “...not gonna lie, that was kinda hot. Just promise you won’t do that to my foreskin.”
You ignored what he just said and started kissing his fingertips again, he pushed them to the back of your throat, as you rolled your tongue around them, while licking up the saliva you were collecting between the crevices of his fingers. He slid his index and middle finger up your tongue, causing your drool to slide down the length of his fingers as they exited your mouth.
He smirked with his eyes fixed on yours, before he placed his hand on your thigh. Caressing your skin with the same fingers, his hand made its way to your knee only to push your legs apart.
Floch leaned his face closer to yours as he slowly started rubbing his fingers between your thighs. You let out a soft gasp, only to have it be muffled by his lips. Leaning deeper into the kiss, you placed your arms around his neck, with your fingers running through his hair. You could feel his hand move a little faster than before. You felt his fingers rub against your walls, causing you to whimper from his movements.
He pulled away from the kiss to then continue kissing you down your neck.
Your face was burning, and your body had goosebumps all over it and with Floch’s fingers moving inside you, your mind was going blank.
“Fuck you’re wet.” he whispered, with his hand still moving.
You cupped his face and brought him back up to kiss him again. With his lips on yours, you slid your hand down his abs and made your way down to his pelvis. You wrapped your fingers around his cock as you began stroking him. He was already hard and all you could think of was how you were gonna hint at him that you wanted him to fuck you. Those thoughts were quickly interrupted by Floch, whose fingers had moved deeper and found the spot that was now making you thrust yourself on his hand.
You grabbed his wrist, trying to push him away, but the more you resisted, the faster his hand moved.
“It’s not fair.” you gasped. Trying to muffle your moans, you buried your face in his collar, but they were only getting louder as he kept going.
“Please, I’m about to-” you couldn’t finish the sentence as you felt a wave of electricity flow through your body. Your ears were ringing as you released yourself into his hand.
“Damn I didn’t know this bitch could spit.” Floch licked his fingers before he started stroking his dick. He wrapped his other hand around your waist and pulled you closer as he forced himself into you.
You squirmed, with your hands gripping onto his shoulders, you tried to push him away, but he got that gorilla grip around you and pulled you closer as he thrusted his hips slowly.
You felt weak, but his body hitting yours was a pleasure you couldn’t resist. The sound of flesh hitting flesh echoing through the bathroom walls sounded like a violent melody that reminded you of Dream’s Mask.
Floch’s pace was slowing down and you could feel that he was close to finishing, but you didn’t want it to end, not yet.
“More..” you whispered “...I want more of you…please” you wrapped your legs around his waist and tightened your grip around him.
He grabbed both of your wrists and held them above your head, against the mirror behind you. He pressed his lips against yours before you could let out another moan.
You wrapped your legs around his waist before he could pull out and you felt his warm load fill you up.
He panted with his sweaty forehead resting on your shoulder.
You were a bit hesitant about asking for a jar to preserve your creampie in, so instead you asked him to leave the bathroom so that you could wash up. He nodded and said he would cook you something to eat.
Sitting on the sink, you scooped out the cum that was gushing out of you, only to smear it all over your body like it was sunscreen and you were on a beach in Florida.
You washed yourself up in the shower, trying to scrub off the dried doodoo he had smeared all over you.
Wearing Floch’s shirt and his boxer shorts, you were met with him in the kitchen where he was cooking up breakfast for the two of you. He was wearing nothing but an apron around his waist. You took a seat by the table as he started serving you charred bacon and raw eggs with coffee on the side.
He plopped his bare ass on the seat opposite of you and the air collecting between his ass cheeks and balls caused him to queef.
“There’s something I need to tell you, kitten.” Floch started.
You looked up at him with concern written all over your face. This couldn’t be good.
“I haven’t been honest with you… or should I say… I haven’t been open with you.” he started fidgeting with his apron as he tried to not make eye contact with you.
“Go on..” you took a sip of your coffee, which for some reason had egg shells in it.
“I don’t want you to think I’m lying to you, but there is another woman in my life.”
You choked hearing that last part. You thought you were special to him. At least after what you had let him do to you for the past day or two.
“I’ve got to go.” you tried to get up, but Floch pushed the table towards you, trapping you between it and your chair.
“It’s not what you think, I was going to tell you but I was just so caught in the moment.” he walked around the table and embraced you from behind.
“What you and I have is so much more special than what I’ve had with anyone.” he whispered.
You pouted at his words. You hated that he always knew the right things to say.
“I- I just feel so used.” your voice was shaking.
Floch’s embrace tightened around you.
“I’m sorry I’ve made you feel that way.” he inhaled sharply into your newly washed hair, with his lips pressed against your head. “I would’ve kept it hidden from you if my intentions were bad, I swear.”
You turned around to face him, his eyes were getting teary and all you could do now was embrace him back.
It was at this moment that you realized that you loved this man too much. He meant more to you than you knew and nothing could really come between the two of you, especially not a third person.
He grabbed your hand and led you to the living room where you sat down on the couch. He wrapped his arms around you as you rested your head on his chest.
“Are you ready to talk about it?” he asked you nervously.
You nodded your head.
“So I’ve got this…person, who comes by from time to time. There’s nothing serious going on, she just helps me with certain needs I can’t fulfill myself.” he mumbled.
“What about me? Aren’t I good enough to satisfy you?” you felt upset, you couldn’t believe how greedy he was.
“It’s not like that. There are just certain things your body can’t do that other people’s can. I’ll show you if you’re open to meeting her.”
You sighed, it wasn’t like you had any choice at this point. There was no way you were gonna lose Floch to some competition you didn’t even know about.
“Yeah… I’ll meet with her.” you hesitated.
Before either of you could say anything else, the doorbell rang.
“I’ll be right back.” Floch rubbed his palms together before disappearing out into the hallway.
He walked back in to the living room with a tall big titty goth bitch walking behind him.
“Kitten, I’d like you to meet Mikitaka. She’s the girl I was telling you about.” Floch skipped over to you and grabbed your hands.
“Hi… sorry for bad English.” she said.
You introduced yourself and complimented her good English.
“So, do we do this right away or do you wanna walk her through it?” she asked Floch as she was starting to undress.
“Erm… do you mind grabbing a few pillows?” Floch asked you.
You looked at them both before you finally asked him what the hell was going on, in which he replied with “I wanna take what we have even further.”
“Further?” you stuttered. “Wasn’t pouring piss into my hole far enough?”
He rushed to cup your face before embracing you.
“I wanna do it all with you.” he whispered. “Fill you up with all I’ve got.”
You felt like crying, seeing him include another woman in what you two had going felt like he was cheating on you. Especially since she came out of nowhere. But the part that frustrated you the most was that he expected you to just accept this.
“Please… just grab the pillows from the bedroom, it’s very important to me that you see this part of me. I don’t wanna keep any more secrets from you!”
“Aight damn, chill I’ll get you pillows bro.” you snapped. “What is your obsession with these pillows?” you mumbled to yourself as you got up and made your way to the bedroom. You grabbed the pillows that you had been humping the night before. They were still drenched in your bodily fluids and as bad as you felt for thinking this; you were glad they hadn’t dried because they were gonna use those pillows now.
“Here.” you said as you threw them at Floch who was sitting on the couch. He stacked them up on Michael’s lap, then waved you over to sit next to her.
You rolled your eyes, but did as he said.
“Aw, come on now. Don’t be upset, I’d do this with you instead but I need you to see how we do it first. I really don’t want you to commit to something you aren’t comfortable with.” he reassured you.
You sighed and told them to go ahead and show you what they were so secretive about.
Floch laid his head on the pillows, then grabbed Milkasa’s shirt and popped her titty out before sucking on it.
You could see milk spilling from the side of his mouth and the voice in your head urged you to wipe it away and lick it.
“Go ahead, it wouldn’t hurt to taste.” Mikussy giggled at you.
As goth and big titted she was, you realized that she was actually kinda cute. A little hesitant at first, you finally got up and sat on top of Floch to grab her other tit.
“Dan Miky your bobbie s” you whispered before you put her nipple in your mouth. You looked up at her, who was waiting in anticipation for you to start sucking, and boy did you suck. The sweet warm liquid that gushed through the teet of this goddess gave you the warmth and feeling of protection that only a mother could give her newborn baby. You felt like that one food critic from Ratatouille after he tasted that rat’s food. The only difference was that you weren’t French (thank god).
Floch watched as you shriveled up Marco’s tit like a raisin.
“Damn she fuckin that shit up.” he chuckled.
You stopped drinking and smiled at him, before feeling something come up.
Floch grabbed your face and pressed his lips against yours, allowing you to spit up milk into his mouth. You gagged up a big blob of milk that you felt enter his mouth. With no hesitation he swallowed it and waited in anticipation for your next load. Just when you thought you were done, you gulped up yet another slurp that Floch welcomed into his mouth.
You pulled away and hid your face in embarrassment when you suddenly felt his arms embrace you.
“Are you okay?” his voice was so soft, so gentle, like a light breeze hitting your butthole after you’ve used the Head&Shoulders menthol shampoo.
You nodded as you wiped his mouth with your palm before kissing him.
His hands traveled under your shirt and you could feel his hands make their way up to your chest.
“Do you understand now?” he whispered.
All you could do was nod and reach for another round of Mikasa’s nectar.
“He’s beautiful,” he whispered. “but not as beautiful as you.” Floch held your dookie lovechild against his chest, squeezing it tightly against himself, you could see parts of it squeezing through between his fingers and in a way, it was sort of poetic. You weren’t sure if it was because you were blinded by your love for him, or if the past 24 hours had been an eye opening experience. Either way, you were glad to be sharing this very moment with him.
“Uhm… Floch?” you asked cautiously.
He raised a brow at you, requesting you to refer to him by his gamer tag.
“I apologize, FaZe_FlochSMP.” you corrected yourself. “I should’ve known my place.”
“Tsk tsk tsk” he clicked his tongue before shushing you.
He then reached his shit covered hand out to you, waving you closer to him to let him pat your head. You bowed your head before him as he ran his doodoo hand through your newly washed hair.
“That’s what I thought, kitten whiskers.” he smirked. “You wouldn’t want daddy to punish you, would you?”
You glanced up at him.
“Don’t give me that look, you know how daddy gets when you do that.” he leaned closer to your face. You couldn’t help but blush at how close he was to you.
Floch grabbed you by the thighs, making you wrap your legs around him before he carried you to the sink in his bathroom. He then pushed his lips against yours. Causing you to part your lips, letting him brush his tongue against yours as you tried to suck on his bottom lip. He pulled you out of the kiss by grabbing your hair back with his shit covered hand as he started kissing you down your neck, he put his clean hand on your lips. You started licking on his index and middle finger and felt a hangnail scrape against the inside of your mouth as you fought the urge to bite it off. Trying to ignore it, you couldn’t take it anymore and finally gave in. So you started nibbling on the hangnail before you finally managed to bite it off.
Floch stared at you in disbelief.
“Wow…” he chuckled. “...not gonna lie, that was kinda hot. Just promise you won’t do that to my foreskin.”
You ignored what he just said and started kissing his fingertips again, he pushed them to the back of your throat, as you rolled your tongue around them, while licking up the saliva you were collecting between the crevices of his fingers. He slid his index and middle finger up your tongue, causing your drool to slide down the length of his fingers as they exited your mouth.
He smirked with his eyes fixed on yours, before he placed his hand on your thigh. Caressing your skin with the same fingers, his hand made its way to your knee only to push your legs apart.
Floch leaned his face closer to yours as he slowly started rubbing his fingers between your thighs. You let out a soft gasp, only to have it be muffled by his lips. Leaning deeper into the kiss, you placed your arms around his neck, with your fingers running through his hair. You could feel his hand move a little faster than before. You felt his fingers rub against your walls, causing you to whimper from his movements.
He pulled away from the kiss to then continue kissing you down your neck.
Your face was burning, and your body had goosebumps all over it and with Floch’s fingers moving inside you, your mind was going blank.
“Fuck you’re wet.” he whispered, with his hand still moving.
You cupped his face and brought him back up to kiss him again. With his lips on yours, you slid your hand down his abs and made your way down to his pelvis. You wrapped your fingers around his cock as you began stroking him. He was already hard and all you could think of was how you were gonna hint at him that you wanted him to fuck you. Those thoughts were quickly interrupted by Floch, whose fingers had moved deeper and found the spot that was now making you thrust yourself on his hand.
You grabbed his wrist, trying to push him away, but the more you resisted, the faster his hand moved.
“It’s not fair.” you gasped. Trying to muffle your moans, you buried your face in his collar, but they were only getting louder as he kept going.
“Please, I’m about to-” you couldn’t finish the sentence as you felt a wave of electricity flow through your body. Your ears were ringing as you released yourself into his hand.
“Damn I didn’t know this bitch could spit.” Floch licked his fingers before he started stroking his dick. He wrapped his other hand around your waist and pulled you closer as he forced himself into you.
You squirmed, with your hands gripping onto his shoulders, you tried to push him away, but he got that gorilla grip around you and pulled you closer as he thrusted his hips slowly.
You felt weak, but his body hitting yours was a pleasure you couldn’t resist. The sound of flesh hitting flesh echoing through the bathroom walls sounded like a violent melody that reminded you of Dream’s Mask.
Floch’s pace was slowing down and you could feel that he was close to finishing, but you didn’t want it to end, not yet.
“More..” you whispered “...I want more of you…please” you wrapped your legs around his waist and tightened your grip around him.
He grabbed both of your wrists and held them above your head, against the mirror behind you. He pressed his lips against yours before you could let out another moan.
You wrapped your legs around his waist before he could pull out and you felt his warm load fill you up.
He panted with his sweaty forehead resting on your shoulder.
You were a bit hesitant about asking for a jar to preserve your creampie in, so instead you asked him to leave the bathroom so that you could wash up. He nodded and said he would cook you something to eat.
Sitting on the sink, you scooped out the cum that was gushing out of you, only to smear it all over your body like it was sunscreen and you were on a beach in Florida.
You washed yourself up in the shower, trying to scrub off the dried doodoo he had smeared all over you.
Wearing Floch’s shirt and his boxer shorts, you were met with him in the kitchen where he was cooking up breakfast for the two of you. He was wearing nothing but an apron around his waist. You took a seat by the table as he started serving you charred bacon and raw eggs with coffee on the side.
He plopped his bare ass on the seat opposite of you and the air collecting between his ass cheeks and balls caused him to queef.
“There’s something I need to tell you, kitten.” Floch started.
You looked up at him with concern written all over your face. This couldn’t be good.
“I haven’t been honest with you… or should I say… I haven’t been open with you.” he started fidgeting with his apron as he tried to not make eye contact with you.
“Go on..” you took a sip of your coffee, which for some reason had egg shells in it.
“I don’t want you to think I’m lying to you, but there is another woman in my life.”
You choked hearing that last part. You thought you were special to him. At least after what you had let him do to you for the past day or two.
“I’ve got to go.” you tried to get up, but Floch pushed the table towards you, trapping you between it and your chair.
“It’s not what you think, I was going to tell you but I was just so caught in the moment.” he walked around the table and embraced you from behind.
“What you and I have is so much more special than what I’ve had with anyone.” he whispered.
You pouted at his words. You hated that he always knew the right things to say.
“I- I just feel so used.” your voice was shaking.
Floch’s embrace tightened around you.
“I’m sorry I’ve made you feel that way.” he inhaled sharply into your newly washed hair, with his lips pressed against your head. “I would’ve kept it hidden from you if my intentions were bad, I swear.”
You turned around to face him, his eyes were getting teary and all you could do now was embrace him back.
It was at this moment that you realized that you loved this man too much. He meant more to you than you knew and nothing could really come between the two of you, especially not a third person.
He grabbed your hand and led you to the living room where you sat down on the couch. He wrapped his arms around you as you rested your head on his chest.
“Are you ready to talk about it?” he asked you nervously.
You nodded your head.
“So I’ve got this…person, who comes by from time to time. There’s nothing serious going on, she just helps me with certain needs I can’t fulfill myself.” he mumbled.
“What about me? Aren’t I good enough to satisfy you?” you felt upset, you couldn’t believe how greedy he was.
“It’s not like that. There are just certain things your body can’t do that other people’s can. I’ll show you if you’re open to meeting her.”
You sighed, it wasn’t like you had any choice at this point. There was no way you were gonna lose Floch to some competition you didn’t even know about.
“Yeah… I’ll meet with her.” you hesitated.
Before either of you could say anything else, the doorbell rang.
“I’ll be right back.” Floch rubbed his palms together before disappearing out into the hallway.
He walked back in to the living room with a tall big titty goth bitch walking behind him.
“Kitten, I’d like you to meet Mikitaka. She’s the girl I was telling you about.” Floch skipped over to you and grabbed your hands.
“Hi… sorry for bad English.” she said.
You introduced yourself and complimented her good English.
“So, do we do this right away or do you wanna walk her through it?” she asked Floch as she was starting to undress.
“Erm… do you mind grabbing a few pillows?” Floch asked you.
You looked at them both before you finally asked him what the hell was going on, in which he replied with “I wanna take what we have even further.”
“Further?” you stuttered. “Wasn’t pouring piss into my hole far enough?”
He rushed to cup your face before embracing you.
“I wanna do it all with you.” he whispered. “Fill you up with all I’ve got.”
You felt like crying, seeing him include another woman in what you two had going felt like he was cheating on you. Especially since she came out of nowhere. But the part that frustrated you the most was that he expected you to just accept this.
“Please… just grab the pillows from the bedroom, it’s very important to me that you see this part of me. I don’t wanna keep any more secrets from you!”
“Aight damn, chill I’ll get you pillows bro.” you snapped. “What is your obsession with these pillows?” you mumbled to yourself as you got up and made your way to the bedroom. You grabbed the pillows that you had been humping the night before. They were still drenched in your bodily fluids and as bad as you felt for thinking this; you were glad they hadn’t dried because they were gonna use those pillows now.
“Here.” you said as you threw them at Floch who was sitting on the couch. He stacked them up on Michael’s lap, then waved you over to sit next to her.
You rolled your eyes, but did as he said.
“Aw, come on now. Don’t be upset, I’d do this with you instead but I need you to see how we do it first. I really don’t want you to commit to something you aren’t comfortable with.” he reassured you.
You sighed and told them to go ahead and show you what they were so secretive about.
Floch laid his head on the pillows, then grabbed Milkasa’s shirt and popped her titty out before sucking on it.
You could see milk spilling from the side of his mouth and the voice in your head urged you to wipe it away and lick it.
“Go ahead, it wouldn’t hurt to taste.” Mikussy giggled at you.
As goth and big titted she was, you realized that she was actually kinda cute. A little hesitant at first, you finally got up and sat on top of Floch to grab her other tit.
“Dan Miky your bobbie s” you whispered before you put her nipple in your mouth. You looked up at her, who was waiting in anticipation for you to start sucking, and boy did you suck. The sweet warm liquid that gushed through the teet of this goddess gave you the warmth and feeling of protection that only a mother could give her newborn baby. You felt like that one food critic from Ratatouille after he tasted that rat’s food. The only difference was that you weren’t French (thank god).
Floch watched as you shriveled up Marco’s tit like a raisin.
“Damn she fuckin that shit up.” he chuckled.
You stopped drinking and smiled at him, before feeling something come up.
Floch grabbed your face and pressed his lips against yours, allowing you to spit up milk into his mouth. You gagged up a big blob of milk that you felt enter his mouth. With no hesitation he swallowed it and waited in anticipation for your next load. Just when you thought you were done, you gulped up yet another slurp that Floch welcomed into his mouth.
You pulled away and hid your face in embarrassment when you suddenly felt his arms embrace you.
“Are you okay?” his voice was so soft, so gentle, like a light breeze hitting your butthole after you’ve used the Head&Shoulders menthol shampoo.
You nodded as you wiped his mouth with your palm before kissing him.
His hands traveled under your shirt and you could feel his hands make their way up to your chest.
“Do you understand now?” he whispered.
All you could do was nod and reach for another round of Mikasa’s nectar.
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Looking for some dummy bunny bimbos this Easter Monday? I got you covered. We've got AGP dreams, buck teeth, an Easter Egg hunt up someone's cervix, and more. Enjoy this campy bucktooth bunny dream.
I love how Jayce is called out for his shitty talk no jutsu, and how he's surprised that it worked. As to how, exactly, it moved Squid Viktor here...you're about to find out.
I'm sure you were about to wonder how such a thing was possible. A male giving birth? Impossible. Well, with the thanks of magic and some sci-fi hand-waving, we have a solution: make Jayce into an actual woman during a process every troon would kill to have.
Yes, he gets a uterus, cervix, fallopian tubes, ovaries, the works. He gets a dose of extra estrogen without harm to his body and he gets his sac zapped away so it can form into a labia. I have to say, this is one of the more interesting takes on it, and actually uses the magic in an interesting way. However, I did have a good chuckle at Jayce's despair at losing his nuts. I needed that after his atrocious penis nigger attitude in that prostitute ABO fic.
> Jayce was being jacked off and fingered at the same time
I wonder how he is going to ejaculate, now that he no longer has sperm. Unless he's going to spurt vaginal secretions out of his penis? Never mind that, he gets his dick shrunken, too. Why couldn't this have happened to rapist Jayce?
> Six
Man, our Hispanic Hog got nerfed to Hell.
Completely smooth, eh? No pubic hair? No Rapunzel pubes to dive into?
> Drooling hole
If you can use 'vaginal sex' as a tag, you can use vagina. Don't be a coward.
> His pussy was a perfect replica of a cisgender woman's
Note the language here. I hear all the time that transwomen are women and that their inverted dicks are just like our vaginas. To hear the clear use of 'cis women' here means that even this bitch knows a stinkditch isn't a vagina. He got all the bits and pieces of female anatomy and he even gets anime tits. Think I'm exaggerating? Oh, just wait and see.
> The more aroused you feel, the stupider you become
So this is the plot of a hentai. He's literally about to get 'fucked silly' and become retarded during sex because that's how women are, right?
> Rather than force you to wallow over it
You pretty much told him the more aroused he'd become, the dumber he'd get, so that's really not much of an exchange.
> Jayce knew it wasn't genuine
He's in your mind. He is going to know if it is genuine or not.
> Viktor was huge
That's a first. Usually, Jayce is the one with the 12'' man meat.
> The appendage split him in twain
Are we trying to sound like a Victorian author, here?
> Vibrations abruptly wracked Jayce's insides
He's using magic to create a magic pocket inside him so he can't tear him apart. Considerate AND creative.
> Caught between pleasure and pain
Cliché.
> Nothing was draining out of him physically
He just told you that you'd literally lose IQ points the hornier you'd get. So yes, something IS draining out of you physically.
> Guh -good
Are we cosplaying Forrest Gump, now?
> An already slim waist and thick thighs were further exaggerated
Somewhere out there is a troon salivating over this. Who needs expensive SRS when you can have literal magic turn you into an anime girl?
> His entire bottom half became as jiggly as his head
This makes me think his vulva is so meaty it bounces when he walks. That's...a very interesting mental image.
> Wail like a bitch in heat
Literally, in this case
> Shamelessly
This does not need a semi colon, because it isn't a separate sentence.
> He meant to ask why Viktor needed to change more than his genitals
He already told you: he needs you as an incubator. It's more than just female genitalia that allows for pregnancy. Our whole bodies are involved.
> Massaged into existence
From pecs to an DDD-cups. A real anime girl!
> He liked being pretty
In which Jayce becomes an AGP.
> They were nearly brought to his chin
See? Anime titties. Who knew Viktor was such a breast enthusiast?
> Your milk would have been a delicacy
*Insert Stone Cold Steve Austin meme here*
> It was easier to think with his pussy than his actual brain. And all his pussy wanted was to cum
The author wasn't kidding with the bimboification thing. It reads more like an MTF wrote it than an FTM. All this talk about bimbos, being fucked stupid, feeling like a slut, and being sooooo wet definitely sounds like something a troon would want. There are even lines of Jayce getting 'pink mist' in his brain, because girls are stupid, you know? We just become dumb sluts when we get dicked down.
What's this? Jayce gets FFS, too? Oh the trannies are PISSED now.
> Jayce was a slutty, barely conscious mess. He sucked. He moaned. He fucked
You sure Andrea Long Chu didn't write this? It has his, 'To be female is to be fucked' mantra all over it.
> His holes were emptied
I don't recall there being any anal.
> My huh
Jayce having the mentality of an IG influencer wasn't on my list, but here we are.
Hentai breasts? Check. Long, sexy legs? Check. Oh this is definitely an AGP's dream.
> Picturing himself as anything besides a drooling slut was getting harder moment-by-moment
I am really wondering if a man wrote this. If it's a woman, congrats - you got the AGP mentality down pat.
> Like grease
That's not the word I'd use to describe 'breathless ecstasy'.
> You enjoy being a slut
He's not exactly wrong there.
> Pink niceness in his head
Get it? Because pink means feminine and feminine means dumb. Tee hee, I'm such a silly bunny slut!
> I've already flushed all those complicated thoughts good girls don't need away
I should be offended at this, but it's so fucking campy and ridiculous that I find myself laughing more at IG Bimbo Jayce than the 'non con' aspect of it. ESPECIALLY the buck teeth thing: now all I can see him in is a fucking Confederate shirt and a shotgun perching across his shoulder. Roger Rabbit ain't got nothing on this boy.
Ehhhhh what's up doc?
> Jayce didn't need to be smart to be fucked, so why bother?
If you're already a dumb bimbo slut...why are you having thoughts like this
> Dummy bunny
Okay, THAT is absolutely going into my 'shit shippers say' list. That is fucking amazing.
> She was Viktor's cute dumb breeding slut and she loved it
She's just his dummy bunny bimbo, 'kay?
> That impact did the trick
I'm surprised the egg wasn't skewered on Viktor's cock. That shit must be made out of porcelain.
> Fist-sized mass etched her insides
Guess the Arcane truly is magical: girl has a pocket dimension inside that pussy. Fist-sized eggs? Wew. That's gonna be fun seeing them pop out.
> Can't see her stomach past her breasts
Just how big as these tatas? Can they crush a watermelon?
> Forcibly shoving their third born past rim
They aren't born yet, they are just eggs. They need to be incubated. Plus, you mean 'past THE rim', and I assume that 'rim' is the cervix.
> Her cervix was dilated to a gaping size
You're lucky none of the other eggs are falling out.
> Jayce was too lost in a daze of pink to pay attention
Get it? Pink means feminine and feminine means dumb. We all lose our intelligence once we see a big dick, and then we all cry out for babies.
(Though, based on the shit FTMs write, I can't say this is exactly untrue.)
> Cumming my thinkines out
Fucking hell, there's another one. Not as cringe as 'his pussy drooled like a dog' but damn is that funny.
> Might cause permanent brain damage
'Might'? Nigga you got that bimbo talking like she's a more retarded Paris Hilton. You are past the point of brain damage.
> I don't wanna be more thinky. I wanna be full more eggies
> The Hexcore made Viktor straight
Well he was fucking Jayce as a man, and then turned him into a woman, so that makes him bisexual. For people who insist Viktor cannot, under any circumstances, fuck women, this one had no issue making Jayce a woman. An Easter treat indeed. Who knew we'd get an IG bimbo who talks about cummies and wanting more eggies and being so pink-pilled she wants to be filled up like an M&M dispenser? There is some wild shit out there.
Wanted to touch base with Rekki again, who posted a very long two-chapter fic. I will cover the first today, and the second tomorrow. Similar to MGCraig, the woman she beta-reads for, she got fanart for this work from the yaoi Chad chin child-dick artist TamSekai.
Big hands, yaoi faces, tumblr noses. What's not to like?
Right off the bat we have the gender affirming lectures, where our True and Honest emo dood feels more excited over proper gender markers than good grades in an actual field. Our engineering genius is nerfed to a music producer, listening to basic bitch music like Arctic Monkeys. What a downgrade.
> Because he is perfection
With bass slappers that he can fight Bigfoot with. See fanart above.
> A much paler complexion, and startlingly blue eyes
When I first read this, I wondered, 'What the fuck? Ximena is darker than that' and it turns out that Jayce is ADOPTED. Why? Uhhh plot reasons that's why.
> Enormous hands
The male always has monstrous hands that can engulf the wee pooner. I bet this guy could plug up the US-Mexico border with those hands.
> They might be the same height, if not for Viktor's scoliosis
Does he seek treatment for that? No. It's the GENDER shit he cares about, first.
> Viktor is a blade of straw compared to the earthy trunk of Jayce's body
Always gotta highlight those sex differences. I truly could not tell that the 'flustered and shy' one was female.
He's probably clocking you from those thighs.
> He's probably straight
Technically? Yeah, he is. He's fucking a woman, that makes him straight.
> Little to the imagination in terms of nipple mass
...what? No, literally. What the fuck? NIPPLE MASS?
> Not sure what the fuck he's on about
You and me both, buddy.
> He stuffs the paper towel against his leaking nose
Awww, he even got an anime nosebleed! How cute!
> Having a one-night stand with his mostly likely straight roommate
You aren't gay, regardless of whether you say so or not (spoiler: he does). Penis-in-vagina sex isn't gay. It's straight sex. Cry about it all you like - faggots don't like pussy.
> The passive aggression
And why are you acting like a BPD bitch? Must be that testosterone acting up.
> Definitively feminine
Oh, we can tell the difference now?
> It's probably too early into their partnership
You aren't even partners. You're roommates.
> Viktor isn't jealous
Spoiler: he's totally jealous. How dare those bitches get that Adonis while that trans pussy is waiting right there.
And there we have it: the confession that Viktor is, in fact, a woman, and Jayce is a 'total airhead' because he totally doesn't know what being trans means. Last I checked, Viktor never made his trans status known - they prefer it when they don't get clocked - and he's calling him an airhead because he genuinely didn't know. Hard to feel sympathetic for the emo trans dood when they act like that.
> I don't specifically love trans people
The author just had a major SNAFU with this line, and Viktor does not comment on it. Jayce just said he doesn't love trans people, and Viktor does not call him a transphobe because he is too 'airheaded' and hot. That's a very egregious thing to overlook. That's 'genocide talk' to them.
> And I'm gay
No you aren't. You're a female attracted to males. That means you're straight.
> The kind of technique perfect for him - slopping and quick, easy and effective
So. Raccoon eyes. Or the 'eyeliner after standing in the rain' look. Anyone can tell you that actual women (and gays) will ROAST THE FUCK OUT OF YOU for a bad eyeliner job. Too thick and you're a raccoon. Too thin and you didn't apply enough. Too smudged and you look edgy. Too much and your eyes get too big, etc. Even emos knew how to do eyeliner properly.
> Where do you even get testosterone?
Planned Parenthood, probably.
> That's hardcore
Definitely hardcore on his liver.
> Poppy interests
Do you mean 'preppy'? Arctic Monkeys isn't even emo or metal. Screamo belongs in the 2007 era, and the fact this emo dood never mentions bands like Bathory or even Marduk (or Mgla) means he's a poser. No Norwegian Black Metal? Not even Nightwish, a symphonic metal band? Pussy. Rekki probably can't even name a screamo band and just listed it off as something she thinks is 'edgy'. All this talk of eyeliner and there's no Amy Winehouse? POSER.
> Jayce is adopted
Well, that's one way to argue away the fact that he didn't match his mom's race, lmao
Arctic Monkeys and no Lana del Rey? No Winehouse? No MARIAH CAREY? Fucking POSERS.
*Czech. Proper noun, it should be capitalized.
> Don't really like sports
> I don't really like sports
Thanks, you already told us.
> Whether it's sports
You just told us twice he didn't like them. Now he does, even if he doesn't play them. Can you stay consistent for once, Rekki? You're a fucking beta-reader. Take your own advice.
> Jayce is a tender. Like a gardener with plants. He tends to people
What the fuck is this line? You better not have been high when writing this because I sure as shit don't do this when I'm high. Must be that Quebecer XQC English coming through.
> looks like I care less
You sure do care enough about your appearance to try to seem male, though. You spend more time on your eyeliner than your nail polish, which won't just be scraped off by the scissors you use - it'll damage your nails, too.
> Like the very center of an orange
So...white? The center of an orange is white.
> Like a field of wheat
Wheat is more of a tawny gold/light tan, depending on how long it's been out there. Neither are the shade of Jayce's eyes.
> He could probably write circles around them just thinking about Jayce's eyes
Try getting the colour right, next time.
Viktor is not a genius in this - he's just a music producer kid. He isn't into STEM at all, and has to get help with inferential statistics. If you think the field is easy, that should mean you know math. Turns out, he just thought it was easy just cuz, and it wasn't.
> Jayce knows math. Loves math.
He just told you that a sentence go, retard. Rekki does this a lot. She has the memory of Joe Biden when it comes to remembering what the fuck she wrote.
> Neglecting his personal hygiene
Well, at least this pooner bitch showers.
> Despite his dislike of bugs and mud
You inject testosterone, yet never inherited the 'manly' like of the outdoors. I bet seeing a fucking bee would give you a seizure.
> Skinny jeans
OK, maybe he really is a faggot. Skinny jeans with your brace is not going to look good, and it's gonna hurt your circulation. If you want to hide your disability from people, go with the cargo pants.
> Not one Ed Sheeran track in sight
Not Ed Sheeran! There better not be any Ethel Cain or Taylor Swift in this, either.
> Our parents are super homophobic
Luckily for Jayce, he won't be seen as 'truly gay', but a spicy kind of straight. Can't wait for Cassandra to find out he's been fucking a 'man with a vagina'.
> The man who adopted him was also a trans man
Let me guess. It was Silco. Bitch couldn't be satisfied with Viktor being a pooner, she had to make Silco one, too.
> Feeling so very foolish for his presumption
Yeah, making assumptions is pretty bad, isn't it? Call it a taste of your own medicine.
I also find it curious that Viktor is surprised at the Kirammans being the typical homophobes, yet never jumped on Jayce when he said he didn't like trans people. It seems like a statement the author herself glossed over.
> It's so much more of a feeling than precise instructions
Correction: it's physics. You'd expect Viktor to talk about the physics of it, but no. He's an emo music producer in this and his only defining trait is that he's trans.
> He feels a lot more than the overwhelming flashes of lust, the intrusive lewd thoughts
Aww, is our pooner falling in love? Well, you're in luck. The smut is in the next chapter and they fuck in the cabin - and there's anal, woohoo.
If this was beta-read, her betas are sure as hell lazy. "Melodt"? Really, nigga? You proofread other people's work but not your own? Reminder that this is the same bitch who wrote Jayce not knowing what crabs were in one fic.
> Soft, raspy voice
I can see why he doesn't like singing. The testosterone would have fried his vocal chords. He might do a good impression of a tropical frog, but not a human.
> He tells himself it's just his carnal desires overreacting
In the business we call this foreshadowing. Betting right now I am going to see that 'Jayce's hands were so large they met in the middle'. Because they're nothing else they can fucking write.
A pooner interested in astrology? You don't see. Am I gonna see any 'stick your Pisces in my Virgo' jokes or no?
> Swimming together in a sea of swirling, celestial milk
Why would fish swim in milk? I get it - you're referencing the MILKY WAY, but 'celestial milk' brings up something else. 'Celestial shine' has a better tune to it. Celestial milk just makes me think of an Oreo - and Viktor's about to become a reverse Oreo very, very soon.
I love how Jayce is called out for his shitty talk no jutsu, and how he's surprised that it worked. As to how, exactly, it moved Squid Viktor here...you're about to find out.
I'm sure you were about to wonder how such a thing was possible. A male giving birth? Impossible. Well, with the thanks of magic and some sci-fi hand-waving, we have a solution: make Jayce into an actual woman during a process every troon would kill to have.
Yes, he gets a uterus, cervix, fallopian tubes, ovaries, the works. He gets a dose of extra estrogen without harm to his body and he gets his sac zapped away so it can form into a labia. I have to say, this is one of the more interesting takes on it, and actually uses the magic in an interesting way. However, I did have a good chuckle at Jayce's despair at losing his nuts. I needed that after his atrocious penis nigger attitude in that prostitute ABO fic.
> Jayce was being jacked off and fingered at the same time
I wonder how he is going to ejaculate, now that he no longer has sperm. Unless he's going to spurt vaginal secretions out of his penis? Never mind that, he gets his dick shrunken, too. Why couldn't this have happened to rapist Jayce?
> Six
Man, our Hispanic Hog got nerfed to Hell.
Completely smooth, eh? No pubic hair? No Rapunzel pubes to dive into?
> Drooling hole
If you can use 'vaginal sex' as a tag, you can use vagina. Don't be a coward.
> His pussy was a perfect replica of a cisgender woman's
Note the language here. I hear all the time that transwomen are women and that their inverted dicks are just like our vaginas. To hear the clear use of 'cis women' here means that even this bitch knows a stinkditch isn't a vagina. He got all the bits and pieces of female anatomy and he even gets anime tits. Think I'm exaggerating? Oh, just wait and see.
> The more aroused you feel, the stupider you become
So this is the plot of a hentai. He's literally about to get 'fucked silly' and become retarded during sex because that's how women are, right?
> Rather than force you to wallow over it
You pretty much told him the more aroused he'd become, the dumber he'd get, so that's really not much of an exchange.
> Jayce knew it wasn't genuine
He's in your mind. He is going to know if it is genuine or not.
> Viktor was huge
That's a first. Usually, Jayce is the one with the 12'' man meat.
> The appendage split him in twain
Are we trying to sound like a Victorian author, here?
> Vibrations abruptly wracked Jayce's insides
He's using magic to create a magic pocket inside him so he can't tear him apart. Considerate AND creative.
> Caught between pleasure and pain
Cliché.
> Nothing was draining out of him physically
He just told you that you'd literally lose IQ points the hornier you'd get. So yes, something IS draining out of you physically.
> Guh -good
Are we cosplaying Forrest Gump, now?
> An already slim waist and thick thighs were further exaggerated
Somewhere out there is a troon salivating over this. Who needs expensive SRS when you can have literal magic turn you into an anime girl?
> His entire bottom half became as jiggly as his head
This makes me think his vulva is so meaty it bounces when he walks. That's...a very interesting mental image.
> Wail like a bitch in heat
Literally, in this case
> Shamelessly
This does not need a semi colon, because it isn't a separate sentence.
> He meant to ask why Viktor needed to change more than his genitals
He already told you: he needs you as an incubator. It's more than just female genitalia that allows for pregnancy. Our whole bodies are involved.
> Massaged into existence
From pecs to an DDD-cups. A real anime girl!
> He liked being pretty
In which Jayce becomes an AGP.
> They were nearly brought to his chin
See? Anime titties. Who knew Viktor was such a breast enthusiast?
> Your milk would have been a delicacy
*Insert Stone Cold Steve Austin meme here*
> It was easier to think with his pussy than his actual brain. And all his pussy wanted was to cum
The author wasn't kidding with the bimboification thing. It reads more like an MTF wrote it than an FTM. All this talk about bimbos, being fucked stupid, feeling like a slut, and being sooooo wet definitely sounds like something a troon would want. There are even lines of Jayce getting 'pink mist' in his brain, because girls are stupid, you know? We just become dumb sluts when we get dicked down.
What's this? Jayce gets FFS, too? Oh the trannies are PISSED now.
> Jayce was a slutty, barely conscious mess. He sucked. He moaned. He fucked
You sure Andrea Long Chu didn't write this? It has his, 'To be female is to be fucked' mantra all over it.
> His holes were emptied
I don't recall there being any anal.
> My huh
Jayce having the mentality of an IG influencer wasn't on my list, but here we are.
Hentai breasts? Check. Long, sexy legs? Check. Oh this is definitely an AGP's dream.
> Picturing himself as anything besides a drooling slut was getting harder moment-by-moment
I am really wondering if a man wrote this. If it's a woman, congrats - you got the AGP mentality down pat.
> Like grease
That's not the word I'd use to describe 'breathless ecstasy'.
> You enjoy being a slut
He's not exactly wrong there.
> Pink niceness in his head
Get it? Because pink means feminine and feminine means dumb. Tee hee, I'm such a silly bunny slut!
> I've already flushed all those complicated thoughts good girls don't need away
I should be offended at this, but it's so fucking campy and ridiculous that I find myself laughing more at IG Bimbo Jayce than the 'non con' aspect of it. ESPECIALLY the buck teeth thing: now all I can see him in is a fucking Confederate shirt and a shotgun perching across his shoulder. Roger Rabbit ain't got nothing on this boy.
Ehhhhh what's up doc?
> Jayce didn't need to be smart to be fucked, so why bother?
If you're already a dumb bimbo slut...why are you having thoughts like this
> Dummy bunny
Okay, THAT is absolutely going into my 'shit shippers say' list. That is fucking amazing.
> She was Viktor's cute dumb breeding slut and she loved it
She's just his dummy bunny bimbo, 'kay?
> That impact did the trick
I'm surprised the egg wasn't skewered on Viktor's cock. That shit must be made out of porcelain.
> Fist-sized mass etched her insides
Guess the Arcane truly is magical: girl has a pocket dimension inside that pussy. Fist-sized eggs? Wew. That's gonna be fun seeing them pop out.
> Can't see her stomach past her breasts
Just how big as these tatas? Can they crush a watermelon?
> Forcibly shoving their third born past rim
They aren't born yet, they are just eggs. They need to be incubated. Plus, you mean 'past THE rim', and I assume that 'rim' is the cervix.
> Her cervix was dilated to a gaping size
You're lucky none of the other eggs are falling out.
> Jayce was too lost in a daze of pink to pay attention
Get it? Pink means feminine and feminine means dumb. We all lose our intelligence once we see a big dick, and then we all cry out for babies.
(Though, based on the shit FTMs write, I can't say this is exactly untrue.)
> Cumming my thinkines out
Fucking hell, there's another one. Not as cringe as 'his pussy drooled like a dog' but damn is that funny.
> Might cause permanent brain damage
'Might'? Nigga you got that bimbo talking like she's a more retarded Paris Hilton. You are past the point of brain damage.
> I don't wanna be more thinky. I wanna be full more eggies
> The Hexcore made Viktor straight
Well he was fucking Jayce as a man, and then turned him into a woman, so that makes him bisexual. For people who insist Viktor cannot, under any circumstances, fuck women, this one had no issue making Jayce a woman. An Easter treat indeed. Who knew we'd get an IG bimbo who talks about cummies and wanting more eggies and being so pink-pilled she wants to be filled up like an M&M dispenser? There is some wild shit out there.
Wanted to touch base with Rekki again, who posted a very long two-chapter fic. I will cover the first today, and the second tomorrow. Similar to MGCraig, the woman she beta-reads for, she got fanart for this work from the yaoi Chad chin child-dick artist TamSekai.
Big hands, yaoi faces, tumblr noses. What's not to like?
Right off the bat we have the gender affirming lectures, where our True and Honest emo dood feels more excited over proper gender markers than good grades in an actual field. Our engineering genius is nerfed to a music producer, listening to basic bitch music like Arctic Monkeys. What a downgrade.
> Because he is perfection
With bass slappers that he can fight Bigfoot with. See fanart above.
> A much paler complexion, and startlingly blue eyes
When I first read this, I wondered, 'What the fuck? Ximena is darker than that' and it turns out that Jayce is ADOPTED. Why? Uhhh plot reasons that's why.
> Enormous hands
The male always has monstrous hands that can engulf the wee pooner. I bet this guy could plug up the US-Mexico border with those hands.
> They might be the same height, if not for Viktor's scoliosis
Does he seek treatment for that? No. It's the GENDER shit he cares about, first.
> Viktor is a blade of straw compared to the earthy trunk of Jayce's body
Always gotta highlight those sex differences. I truly could not tell that the 'flustered and shy' one was female.
He's probably clocking you from those thighs.
> He's probably straight
Technically? Yeah, he is. He's fucking a woman, that makes him straight.
> Little to the imagination in terms of nipple mass
...what? No, literally. What the fuck? NIPPLE MASS?
> Not sure what the fuck he's on about
You and me both, buddy.
> He stuffs the paper towel against his leaking nose
Awww, he even got an anime nosebleed! How cute!
> Having a one-night stand with his mostly likely straight roommate
You aren't gay, regardless of whether you say so or not (spoiler: he does). Penis-in-vagina sex isn't gay. It's straight sex. Cry about it all you like - faggots don't like pussy.
> The passive aggression
And why are you acting like a BPD bitch? Must be that testosterone acting up.
> Definitively feminine
Oh, we can tell the difference now?
> It's probably too early into their partnership
You aren't even partners. You're roommates.
> Viktor isn't jealous
Spoiler: he's totally jealous. How dare those bitches get that Adonis while that trans pussy is waiting right there.
And there we have it: the confession that Viktor is, in fact, a woman, and Jayce is a 'total airhead' because he totally doesn't know what being trans means. Last I checked, Viktor never made his trans status known - they prefer it when they don't get clocked - and he's calling him an airhead because he genuinely didn't know. Hard to feel sympathetic for the emo trans dood when they act like that.
> I don't specifically love trans people
The author just had a major SNAFU with this line, and Viktor does not comment on it. Jayce just said he doesn't love trans people, and Viktor does not call him a transphobe because he is too 'airheaded' and hot. That's a very egregious thing to overlook. That's 'genocide talk' to them.
> And I'm gay
No you aren't. You're a female attracted to males. That means you're straight.
> The kind of technique perfect for him - slopping and quick, easy and effective
So. Raccoon eyes. Or the 'eyeliner after standing in the rain' look. Anyone can tell you that actual women (and gays) will ROAST THE FUCK OUT OF YOU for a bad eyeliner job. Too thick and you're a raccoon. Too thin and you didn't apply enough. Too smudged and you look edgy. Too much and your eyes get too big, etc. Even emos knew how to do eyeliner properly.
> Where do you even get testosterone?
Planned Parenthood, probably.
> That's hardcore
Definitely hardcore on his liver.
> Poppy interests
Do you mean 'preppy'? Arctic Monkeys isn't even emo or metal. Screamo belongs in the 2007 era, and the fact this emo dood never mentions bands like Bathory or even Marduk (or Mgla) means he's a poser. No Norwegian Black Metal? Not even Nightwish, a symphonic metal band? Pussy. Rekki probably can't even name a screamo band and just listed it off as something she thinks is 'edgy'. All this talk of eyeliner and there's no Amy Winehouse? POSER.
> Jayce is adopted
Well, that's one way to argue away the fact that he didn't match his mom's race, lmao
Arctic Monkeys and no Lana del Rey? No Winehouse? No MARIAH CAREY? Fucking POSERS.
*Czech. Proper noun, it should be capitalized.
> Don't really like sports
> I don't really like sports
Thanks, you already told us.
> Whether it's sports
You just told us twice he didn't like them. Now he does, even if he doesn't play them. Can you stay consistent for once, Rekki? You're a fucking beta-reader. Take your own advice.
> Jayce is a tender. Like a gardener with plants. He tends to people
What the fuck is this line? You better not have been high when writing this because I sure as shit don't do this when I'm high. Must be that Quebecer XQC English coming through.
> looks like I care less
You sure do care enough about your appearance to try to seem male, though. You spend more time on your eyeliner than your nail polish, which won't just be scraped off by the scissors you use - it'll damage your nails, too.
> Like the very center of an orange
So...white? The center of an orange is white.
> Like a field of wheat
Wheat is more of a tawny gold/light tan, depending on how long it's been out there. Neither are the shade of Jayce's eyes.
> He could probably write circles around them just thinking about Jayce's eyes
Try getting the colour right, next time.
Viktor is not a genius in this - he's just a music producer kid. He isn't into STEM at all, and has to get help with inferential statistics. If you think the field is easy, that should mean you know math. Turns out, he just thought it was easy just cuz, and it wasn't.
> Jayce knows math. Loves math.
He just told you that a sentence go, retard. Rekki does this a lot. She has the memory of Joe Biden when it comes to remembering what the fuck she wrote.
> Neglecting his personal hygiene
Well, at least this pooner bitch showers.
> Despite his dislike of bugs and mud
You inject testosterone, yet never inherited the 'manly' like of the outdoors. I bet seeing a fucking bee would give you a seizure.
> Skinny jeans
OK, maybe he really is a faggot. Skinny jeans with your brace is not going to look good, and it's gonna hurt your circulation. If you want to hide your disability from people, go with the cargo pants.
> Not one Ed Sheeran track in sight
Not Ed Sheeran! There better not be any Ethel Cain or Taylor Swift in this, either.
> Our parents are super homophobic
Luckily for Jayce, he won't be seen as 'truly gay', but a spicy kind of straight. Can't wait for Cassandra to find out he's been fucking a 'man with a vagina'.
> The man who adopted him was also a trans man
Let me guess. It was Silco. Bitch couldn't be satisfied with Viktor being a pooner, she had to make Silco one, too.
> Feeling so very foolish for his presumption
Yeah, making assumptions is pretty bad, isn't it? Call it a taste of your own medicine.
I also find it curious that Viktor is surprised at the Kirammans being the typical homophobes, yet never jumped on Jayce when he said he didn't like trans people. It seems like a statement the author herself glossed over.
> It's so much more of a feeling than precise instructions
Correction: it's physics. You'd expect Viktor to talk about the physics of it, but no. He's an emo music producer in this and his only defining trait is that he's trans.
> He feels a lot more than the overwhelming flashes of lust, the intrusive lewd thoughts
Aww, is our pooner falling in love? Well, you're in luck. The smut is in the next chapter and they fuck in the cabin - and there's anal, woohoo.
If this was beta-read, her betas are sure as hell lazy. "Melodt"? Really, nigga? You proofread other people's work but not your own? Reminder that this is the same bitch who wrote Jayce not knowing what crabs were in one fic.
> Soft, raspy voice
I can see why he doesn't like singing. The testosterone would have fried his vocal chords. He might do a good impression of a tropical frog, but not a human.
> He tells himself it's just his carnal desires overreacting
In the business we call this foreshadowing. Betting right now I am going to see that 'Jayce's hands were so large they met in the middle'. Because they're nothing else they can fucking write.
A pooner interested in astrology? You don't see. Am I gonna see any 'stick your Pisces in my Virgo' jokes or no?
> Swimming together in a sea of swirling, celestial milk
Why would fish swim in milk? I get it - you're referencing the MILKY WAY, but 'celestial milk' brings up something else. 'Celestial shine' has a better tune to it. Celestial milk just makes me think of an Oreo - and Viktor's about to become a reverse Oreo very, very soon.
- Joined
- Sep 9, 2021
Here is the second chapter to Rekki's fic. Turns out, both Craig and 'lukewarmoatmeal', the one who wrote that 'cowboy' barn fucking fic, beta-read for her. Let's tip our hats for allowing them to bring this fic to life.
> How the song would actually sound with a proper singer
Something tells me that this pooner did, in fact, have a proper singing voice once, but testosterone torched that ability. Many FTMs complain that T takes away their singing voice, as it thickens their laryngeal chords.
> Russet skin and Viktor feels like some sort of Edwardian era purist, drinking in the sight of a bulging ankle
If he has russet skin like a potato and his ankle is 'bulging', I'd suggest taking him to a doctor because that sounds like gout.
> Not fully Viktor's style, but not fully not his style
> He'd had to bend on his preferences a little
This is a contradictory statement. If it is, yet isn't, his style, it means his preferences bend if it does appeal to his taste. He's a screamo and emo rock band snob - and if he likes Bring Me The Horizon, those genres overlap. Talk about a poser.
So, does Viktor sound like a frog when he sings or does he capture his 'innate male essence' when he does?
> The clear alarm has something uncomfortable twisting in Viktor's gut
I can think of something else that is going to be twisting in his guts.
This guy clearly has no makeup tools and decides to use his dirty ass fingers to rub his eyeliner in. Protip: a cotton swab will work just fine, even a bit of tissue. Rubbing that in with dirty fingernails is a nice way to get pink eye or some weird parasite that will land you on Monsters Inside of Me.
I suppose I should be grateful that Sky isn't a cuck, but turns out, she's doing it as 'payment' for her friend rejecting her (lesbian) advances in school. Doesn't she realize that's a gay man right there?
> Jayce Talis doesn't kiss guys
Cue the tongue-twisting extraordinaire, the French be damned. Viktor, turned on by this display, gets another anime nosebleed and runs to the bathroom where these two finally confess they're 100% gay for each other.
Like I said, it's an anime thing. Our poor little pooner can't handle such sexiness so the blood pressure rises until something pops. Don't worry, the only thing that's gonna be popping are his insides once the Hispanic Hog gets involved.
You know, this WOULD be a hot scene, if Viktor was an actual male and not some poser trying to be one. No, my dear, you are not 'gay', you are a straight woman. You like dick, and are a slave to the dick. The smut scene is coming up so get ready for all the tropes you know and love.
> Jayce jams his thumb into the hard, sensitive numb there
Two beta-readers. She meant, 'nub', but neither of them caught this. Also, fucking OW.
> Jayce's touch soothes over his hard cock instead
Uh huh. When Jayce whips out his, let's compare sizes.
> His jaw drops a little as he feels Jayce up, the girth of him a rigid lump in his pants
Alright, place your bets. Are we getting the 12'' Legendary Edition or a meager 10''? I know we're getting a belly bulge.
> Jayce is molten hot, dry and curving wantonly into his fist
I don't know why, but a dry dick is a turnoff. Why does it remind me of sandpaper?
> A cock just as beautiful as the man possessing it
Of course. Smut always has the prettiest people fucking. There are no ugly cocks here.
> He refuses to not suck Jayce's cock after waiting this long
Yes, there is a deepthroating scene. Let's see how long (hehe) it is.
> A little bitter, quite salty
> Salty, heady, fresh taste of Jayce
If he's fresh, how is he bitter? Those are two contradictory adjectives.
> Slots himself a politely small bit deeper into his mouth
This doesn't read right. "He slots himself a bit deeper" works just as fine.
> Not to mention growing a cock of his own, no matter how small, has helped him to understand them better
A clitoris is not a cock, you fucking retard. You are talking about a 'growth' of two fucking inches and you want to compare it to the monster that's between Jayce's legs. For fuck's sake, you idiots really don't know how ridiculous you sound to outsiders. You can't even piss with your roid clit, and you can't penetrate with it, so how do you know what having a dick is like?
> The thick cock breaching his airways as if it were entitled to be there
That's really the endgame of being a pooner, isn't it? Sucking and fucking cock - and that's all they're ever good for.
> Pushes his fingers harder into his cock between his legs
Cute, but you can't choke on your cock. You are choking on Jayce's, though.
> He's sputtering and choking
> By the choke and cough
We know he's choking, thank you very much.
> Viktor's only heard that sound after a particularly successful dinner recipe
So you're saying this guy moans like he's had sex after eating food? OK?
> His dick throbs for contact
Two inches. Two inches and you want to think that's anything comparable to the real thing.
> Sucking you off is just a little more involved
There's nothing to suck off, for starters.
> Slaps
*Straps. Two beta-readers.
So, we find out that Viktor likes anal sex because it's more 'gender affirming', and it 'just feels right'. Well, testosterone doesn't thicken the anal walls and they are more fragile than male anuses, so you're going to be needing surgery like that one OF 'model' who had 50 guys do it in hers.
> My cock and both my holes
You'll call your asshole an asshole but your vagina is just a 'hole' because hurrr muh gender dysphoria. Fuck off, bitch. I can see your 'vaginal sex' tags clear as day.
> He feels a hot flash of shame as it reminds him of a certain parallel
Let me guess. It's like taking off his binder.
> Still throbbing in his boxers
We have established you are a tiny, two inch little gremlin, so stop acting as if it holds any weight.
> Then a hot, acutely wet rub right against his asshole
In which Viktor gets his ass ate.
> Over his hole
Which one? See, when you describe the anus AND vagina as a 'hole', it makes me wonder which one he's tonguing.
> Jayce's fingers are enormous
As they usually are. Pooner authors love making him have huge hands, just to highlight the size difference between them, but all I can see are hands that are so huge they're the size of tennis rackets. I don't call them 'Bigfoot mitts' for nothing.
> He feels so fucking full, but it's so different from his previous experiences with penetrative sex in his other hole
> This pressure feels much less like he's accommodating a biologically designed intrusion, and more like Jayce is forcing a space open inside him
And there you have it: he doesn't like vaginal sex because it reminds him of his femaleness, but getting fucked in the ass is more gender affirming because it makes him feel more like a male. Just shut up and write the sodomy.
> Jayce's finger curls against something extremely tender
Rekki is apparently under the belief that testosterone gives transman a prostate. It does not. What he is feeling is the G-spot through the anal walls, which can happen, and he does have Bigfoot fingers so anything is possible. When authors do these anatomical SNAFUs, the smut starts looking ridiculous and less hot.
> Relishing the delicious stretch
> Appreciate the stretch
Redundant.
> My fingers must not be long enough
Because you have dainty lady fingers, get it? Jayce has the man hands because he's a Man's Man, yo.
> With two digits, it's already more girth than Viktor has ever had
I thought you, Jayce can slap Bigfoot with those hands. You don't need a gun when you've got Jayce for cryptid hunting.
> Lowering his head to kiss him
Ah, yes, Ass-To-Mouth. A nice way to get gonorrhea. Better hope that ass is squeaky clean.
> Suck my cock while you?
Boy, that is not a cock. It's not a 'thick little thing', it's two inches long and as it stands, it's not even as thick as Jayce's thumb. You are fooling no one aside from your menagerie of retarded pooners.
> Viktor keeps his pubic hair buzzed
Aw, man. No Rapunzel pubes? Would've expected it as MGCraig is a huge fan of them.
> Rubbing against that hardened, engorged growth
And it's as big as a Ring Pop.
> The base of them as so thick that he widens Viktor's hole with each push. Splitting him open
And you want me to believe that roid clit is a cock when Jayce's fingers do a better job of penetration. Ho hum.
Lotion is not lube. It's certainly not anal lube and it's not going to protect you from tears. This is like capyshota (a fic that Rekki and Craig also beta'ed for) writing machine oil as lube. Just get proper lube, people.
> Jayce's fingers pale in comparison to the real thing, the real girth splitting him open
So either Jayce's hands were monstrous or his dick is so big it's Boss Hog thickness. These pooners love giving him the largest penis in existence so it can make their spicy straight smut look better.
> The edge between pleasure and pain is so much more ambiguous like this
Cliché.
> Muddled by the sheer size of Jayce's dick
Any numbers? Inches? He can list off Pi but not his dick size? Is he 3.14'' thick like Pi?
> Jayce's thick cock spears him open
You already made that clear with the first paragraph.
> His other hole sluices slick down his thigh
Oh thank God you wrote, 'other hole', I wouldn't have known which one it was!
> Jayce's eyes fall to his tiny, twitching cock
I thought it was plump and girthy? Guess not, compared to the Hispanic Hog.
> Tastes the faintest tang of himself - still masculine and heady on Jayce's tongue
So which part of it was masculine? The ass taste or...? Because there really is nothing masculine about Viktor aside from the T shots, and that's just cheating. What, exactly, is a masculine taste?
> Squelching sounds of the lube
Cute, but remember, it's hand lotion, not lube. Lotion is not anal lube.
> Fucks him so deeply, Viktor feels it in his throat
Cliché.
> His cockhead seems to find that perfect angle
Well it won't be rubbing against a nonexistent prostate, that's for sure.
> Three firm, forceful fingers
Those three fingers were big enough to stretch Viktor open, not they are small enough to rub against that 'tiny dick'. Which is it? How's he able to find it if his fingers are so big?
> Content to be hammered into and used merely for Jayce's pleasure at this point
Funny how it always boils down to this, lmao. Getting speared by a huge dick.
> Jayce is punching into the depths Viktor's never felt before
I thought he was 'in his throat' by now? Hmm. Wasn't he already taking his full girth? What was he doing before? And how big is Jayce, exactly?
> Viktor's eyes nearly cross at the rapid, bucking rhythm
Great, now I have retard Viktor in my mind.
> His cock cleaves into Viktor's hole, fucking him so hard Viktor sees stars even with eyes wide open
But is he in his throat yet?
You know, I would have been fine with the smut as is - it does its job and it's pretty good all things considered - but when the author wants to pull the gender shit like this I have to call bullshit. Jayce is a 'closeted gay man', who has experience fucking other men's assholes, and yet, this author doesn't seem aware that even male and female anuses are different. You have more space in a male's anus thanks to physics; the female anus is packed in by the vaginal canal the next space over. There are subtle differences, including the thickness. If Jayce keeps that up with his 1 Guy 1 Jar penis, Viktor is going to need surgery just to tighten that ass up.
I wonder how Cassandra Kiramman would react once Jayce told her he was 'gay': 'Yeah mom, I am into dudes...but I'm also into fucking dudes with vaginas, but not in their vaginas, I'm totally gay because I fuck assholes, especially female assholes. Don't disown me, okay?' It's straight with extra steps, but not gay enough to where Jayce can declare he's solely into men. Viktor claims he's gay when he's solely into men, despite him being female, and hates vaginal sex because it reminds him of what he is; he'd rather have his asshole torn open by a 12'' Boss Hog as a 'gender affirming' tactic instead.
What else is there to say? If you want to write spicy straight sex with extra steps, keep the gender shit out of it. No matter how hard you stomp you fear and scream to the heavens, this is not 'gay sex', and you might as well stop the homophobe plot while you're at it. It just looks ridiculous. As for the smut - on its own, it's fine. You get what you pay for, so to speak. But whenever someone writes dumb shit like trying to find a prostate in a female anus or how a trans man is 'growing his own dick', I'm out. I will not take you seriously.
I don't think her other stuff includes that much smut, because the one I remember her for is the one where Jayce didn't know what crabs were. I've read several others and they were not very good; it's clear Craig helped a lot with this, because I recognize her fingerprints. In any case, people are not here for the gender euphoria or how Viktor is a 'gay man'. They are here for the big dick in the small pussy, and if you look at the comments you'll see brainless THANK YOU FOR THE FOOD over and over again. Smut wise, it is her best work. But there are retarded aspects of it, as you can see highlighted. There's nothing more to say until she posts more content - which is a given.
Time to scratch that old man itch - with a touch of Mpreg.
So, what is our resident pervert doing, aside from being able to go home early after hitting pigeons with his windshield? Masturbating furiously in the company bathroom because he's attracted to a silver fox. He's definitely got a thing for granny trannies.
Turns out, his little crying session and begging not to be fired was for naught - he ends up changing the subject anyways.
> It's sexual harassment. People get fired for it all the time
I mean, you ARE confessing you furiously masturbate on company time, but is it sexual harassment? Maybe, maybe not. The person you're masturbating to had no idea until you confessed.
> Hearts in his eyes
Jesus Christ, we're living in a Looney Tunes episode.
> I suppose you would say that age is just a number too
And miraculously, at his age, he's able to get as wet as a water slide. Read on to find out.
> Are there really that many numbers between the numbers 22 and 58?
Yeah. And you didn't need to repeat yourself.
> Fuck, you taste amazing. Let me eat you out
OK, man, damn. Going right into it with the dialogue from an 80s porno.
> I would be so good for you. Would make you feel so good.
Someone's programming is malfunctioning.
Ah, the frog eyes method. I would consider that to be a more potent form of sexual harassment than the private masturbation sessions, because everyone can see your erection.
> His long cock standing out proudly along his abdomen
> Fuck you're hung
How long? I need some numbers for the Hispanic Hog.
So much for a blowjob. At least Rekki put in effort with hers.
> Adult in the bush administration
Is that literal, or figurative?
> He has been slacking on his personal grooming habits
And he is NOT joking about that. See below:
I suppose menopause would have helped, but he would have gotten that early with the T shots. This means there's an untamed pube jungle down there. I bet you can find a few extinct species if you look hard enough.
> Not even when he was sleeping his way through all the closeted Piltover frat boys
Closeted as in way? Them being gay, or them being attracted to pooners? I think the easier explanation is that they knew you were easy pussy and took it. I don't know why you're complaining about chasers when they are the only ones who will fuck you without issue.
> Sucking on Viktor's clit like a starving man
Cliché.
> His dick
> His clit
Pick one.
> I would say it's not cute but would make anything attractive, truth be told
What?
> Those tailored vests do nothing to hide your sinful waist
*Female waist, that is
> Are you secretly an incel or something?
That isn't what an incel is. Pretty sure they wouldn't be so attracted to 58-year-old pooners.
Yes, he's already dreaming about being a husband after one round of cunnilingus. Can you say 'whipped'?
> I, er, really like you
As if the NPC malfunctioning bit wasn't obvious.
Not only that, those decades of testosterone would have destroyed his female reproductive organs. Miss me with that 'people with uteruses' shit - you know what men are. You instinctively know that penis = male, and that they're the ones who can sire children. Their language is never changed, but ours is.
> Not to mention how fucking delicious you would look pregnant with my baby
Guess we're just gonna forget all the problems that come with advanced maternal age, eh? Downie babies will be the least worse thing you can get.
> You're shocked I want to have a baby with you?
I would be. We just started having sex - boy, the fuck you doing proposing this shit without a ring?
Turns out, it's super easy: all Jayce has to do is call Cait and brag about what kind of snatch he's bagging.
> Viktor has every right to feel the way he does
Correct. Problem is, he's not allowed to be angry. He's just a hungry orifice that just wants to be stuffed full of babies. How quaint.
> Any respectable man
> Viktor had never been a respectable man
> Viktor is not respectable
We fucking get it. I can see why it would be hard to say no to Jayce, what with that Hog that swings between his legs. Everyone just wants a piece of that action.
'Collection' is an understatement. It's an untamed jungle. Bet you'll find some old Mesoamerican pyramids in there.
> If he's actually lucky, he will get Viktor pregnant
Press X to doubt.
> They could be fathers together
A father is a male parent. The sex that gestates cannot be a father, regardless of how they identify.
Again with the cervical stimulation thing. Yes, it is possible, but you have to do it with care. These pooners are so porn-brained they think a man can just shove it in there and slam it in and everything will be OK, when it won't be. Women have gone to the ER when their male partners do it by accident. Belly bulge or not (of course it's the 10-12 incher), be fucking careful!
> His chest is small, barely there, and must have always been that way, considering the lack of scarring
No zippertits? Hmm. Was he on T, too?
> Anyone who says that vaginas get looser with age
Look at that. The first and only time the author has used the term 'vagina'! Give her a round of applause!
I'm glad that 22 year old men produce enough sperm to put stud horses to shame. It's like a literal cream pie in there, where you can glob it on and there will still be enough left over. These ladies love their cum.
> There's no fucking way he isn't pregnant
Your ejaculate volume will not guarantee a pregnancy. Your swimmers still have to find a suitable egg, and that's if the egg even accepts them at all. That's IF eggs are even released anymore. Keep flying high on that baby fever.
?? This is their first time sleeping together and they're already discussing babies and white-picket fences. Talk about (female) delusion. The best thing you're going to get out of this are Downies - and not the dryer sheet kind.
> How the song would actually sound with a proper singer
Something tells me that this pooner did, in fact, have a proper singing voice once, but testosterone torched that ability. Many FTMs complain that T takes away their singing voice, as it thickens their laryngeal chords.
> Russet skin and Viktor feels like some sort of Edwardian era purist, drinking in the sight of a bulging ankle
If he has russet skin like a potato and his ankle is 'bulging', I'd suggest taking him to a doctor because that sounds like gout.
> Not fully Viktor's style, but not fully not his style
> He'd had to bend on his preferences a little
This is a contradictory statement. If it is, yet isn't, his style, it means his preferences bend if it does appeal to his taste. He's a screamo and emo rock band snob - and if he likes Bring Me The Horizon, those genres overlap. Talk about a poser.
So, does Viktor sound like a frog when he sings or does he capture his 'innate male essence' when he does?
> The clear alarm has something uncomfortable twisting in Viktor's gut
I can think of something else that is going to be twisting in his guts.
This guy clearly has no makeup tools and decides to use his dirty ass fingers to rub his eyeliner in. Protip: a cotton swab will work just fine, even a bit of tissue. Rubbing that in with dirty fingernails is a nice way to get pink eye or some weird parasite that will land you on Monsters Inside of Me.
I suppose I should be grateful that Sky isn't a cuck, but turns out, she's doing it as 'payment' for her friend rejecting her (lesbian) advances in school. Doesn't she realize that's a gay man right there?
> Jayce Talis doesn't kiss guys
Cue the tongue-twisting extraordinaire, the French be damned. Viktor, turned on by this display, gets another anime nosebleed and runs to the bathroom where these two finally confess they're 100% gay for each other.
Like I said, it's an anime thing. Our poor little pooner can't handle such sexiness so the blood pressure rises until something pops. Don't worry, the only thing that's gonna be popping are his insides once the Hispanic Hog gets involved.
You know, this WOULD be a hot scene, if Viktor was an actual male and not some poser trying to be one. No, my dear, you are not 'gay', you are a straight woman. You like dick, and are a slave to the dick. The smut scene is coming up so get ready for all the tropes you know and love.
> Jayce jams his thumb into the hard, sensitive numb there
Two beta-readers. She meant, 'nub', but neither of them caught this. Also, fucking OW.
> Jayce's touch soothes over his hard cock instead
Uh huh. When Jayce whips out his, let's compare sizes.
> His jaw drops a little as he feels Jayce up, the girth of him a rigid lump in his pants
Alright, place your bets. Are we getting the 12'' Legendary Edition or a meager 10''? I know we're getting a belly bulge.
> Jayce is molten hot, dry and curving wantonly into his fist
I don't know why, but a dry dick is a turnoff. Why does it remind me of sandpaper?
> A cock just as beautiful as the man possessing it
Of course. Smut always has the prettiest people fucking. There are no ugly cocks here.
> He refuses to not suck Jayce's cock after waiting this long
Yes, there is a deepthroating scene. Let's see how long (hehe) it is.
> A little bitter, quite salty
> Salty, heady, fresh taste of Jayce
If he's fresh, how is he bitter? Those are two contradictory adjectives.
> Slots himself a politely small bit deeper into his mouth
This doesn't read right. "He slots himself a bit deeper" works just as fine.
> Not to mention growing a cock of his own, no matter how small, has helped him to understand them better
A clitoris is not a cock, you fucking retard. You are talking about a 'growth' of two fucking inches and you want to compare it to the monster that's between Jayce's legs. For fuck's sake, you idiots really don't know how ridiculous you sound to outsiders. You can't even piss with your roid clit, and you can't penetrate with it, so how do you know what having a dick is like?
> The thick cock breaching his airways as if it were entitled to be there
That's really the endgame of being a pooner, isn't it? Sucking and fucking cock - and that's all they're ever good for.
> Pushes his fingers harder into his cock between his legs
Cute, but you can't choke on your cock. You are choking on Jayce's, though.
> He's sputtering and choking
> By the choke and cough
We know he's choking, thank you very much.
> Viktor's only heard that sound after a particularly successful dinner recipe
So you're saying this guy moans like he's had sex after eating food? OK?
> His dick throbs for contact
Two inches. Two inches and you want to think that's anything comparable to the real thing.
> Sucking you off is just a little more involved
There's nothing to suck off, for starters.
> Slaps
*Straps. Two beta-readers.
So, we find out that Viktor likes anal sex because it's more 'gender affirming', and it 'just feels right'. Well, testosterone doesn't thicken the anal walls and they are more fragile than male anuses, so you're going to be needing surgery like that one OF 'model' who had 50 guys do it in hers.
> My cock and both my holes
You'll call your asshole an asshole but your vagina is just a 'hole' because hurrr muh gender dysphoria. Fuck off, bitch. I can see your 'vaginal sex' tags clear as day.
> He feels a hot flash of shame as it reminds him of a certain parallel
Let me guess. It's like taking off his binder.
> Still throbbing in his boxers
We have established you are a tiny, two inch little gremlin, so stop acting as if it holds any weight.
> Then a hot, acutely wet rub right against his asshole
In which Viktor gets his ass ate.
> Over his hole
Which one? See, when you describe the anus AND vagina as a 'hole', it makes me wonder which one he's tonguing.
> Jayce's fingers are enormous
As they usually are. Pooner authors love making him have huge hands, just to highlight the size difference between them, but all I can see are hands that are so huge they're the size of tennis rackets. I don't call them 'Bigfoot mitts' for nothing.
> He feels so fucking full, but it's so different from his previous experiences with penetrative sex in his other hole
> This pressure feels much less like he's accommodating a biologically designed intrusion, and more like Jayce is forcing a space open inside him
And there you have it: he doesn't like vaginal sex because it reminds him of his femaleness, but getting fucked in the ass is more gender affirming because it makes him feel more like a male. Just shut up and write the sodomy.
> Jayce's finger curls against something extremely tender
Rekki is apparently under the belief that testosterone gives transman a prostate. It does not. What he is feeling is the G-spot through the anal walls, which can happen, and he does have Bigfoot fingers so anything is possible. When authors do these anatomical SNAFUs, the smut starts looking ridiculous and less hot.
> Relishing the delicious stretch
> Appreciate the stretch
Redundant.
> My fingers must not be long enough
Because you have dainty lady fingers, get it? Jayce has the man hands because he's a Man's Man, yo.
> With two digits, it's already more girth than Viktor has ever had
I thought you, Jayce can slap Bigfoot with those hands. You don't need a gun when you've got Jayce for cryptid hunting.
> Lowering his head to kiss him
Ah, yes, Ass-To-Mouth. A nice way to get gonorrhea. Better hope that ass is squeaky clean.
> Suck my cock while you?
Boy, that is not a cock. It's not a 'thick little thing', it's two inches long and as it stands, it's not even as thick as Jayce's thumb. You are fooling no one aside from your menagerie of retarded pooners.
> Viktor keeps his pubic hair buzzed
Aw, man. No Rapunzel pubes? Would've expected it as MGCraig is a huge fan of them.
> Rubbing against that hardened, engorged growth
And it's as big as a Ring Pop.
> The base of them as so thick that he widens Viktor's hole with each push. Splitting him open
And you want me to believe that roid clit is a cock when Jayce's fingers do a better job of penetration. Ho hum.
Lotion is not lube. It's certainly not anal lube and it's not going to protect you from tears. This is like capyshota (a fic that Rekki and Craig also beta'ed for) writing machine oil as lube. Just get proper lube, people.
> Jayce's fingers pale in comparison to the real thing, the real girth splitting him open
So either Jayce's hands were monstrous or his dick is so big it's Boss Hog thickness. These pooners love giving him the largest penis in existence so it can make their spicy straight smut look better.
> The edge between pleasure and pain is so much more ambiguous like this
Cliché.
> Muddled by the sheer size of Jayce's dick
Any numbers? Inches? He can list off Pi but not his dick size? Is he 3.14'' thick like Pi?
> Jayce's thick cock spears him open
You already made that clear with the first paragraph.
> His other hole sluices slick down his thigh
Oh thank God you wrote, 'other hole', I wouldn't have known which one it was!
> Jayce's eyes fall to his tiny, twitching cock
I thought it was plump and girthy? Guess not, compared to the Hispanic Hog.
> Tastes the faintest tang of himself - still masculine and heady on Jayce's tongue
So which part of it was masculine? The ass taste or...? Because there really is nothing masculine about Viktor aside from the T shots, and that's just cheating. What, exactly, is a masculine taste?
> Squelching sounds of the lube
Cute, but remember, it's hand lotion, not lube. Lotion is not anal lube.
> Fucks him so deeply, Viktor feels it in his throat
Cliché.
> His cockhead seems to find that perfect angle
Well it won't be rubbing against a nonexistent prostate, that's for sure.
> Three firm, forceful fingers
Those three fingers were big enough to stretch Viktor open, not they are small enough to rub against that 'tiny dick'. Which is it? How's he able to find it if his fingers are so big?
> Content to be hammered into and used merely for Jayce's pleasure at this point
Funny how it always boils down to this, lmao. Getting speared by a huge dick.
> Jayce is punching into the depths Viktor's never felt before
I thought he was 'in his throat' by now? Hmm. Wasn't he already taking his full girth? What was he doing before? And how big is Jayce, exactly?
> Viktor's eyes nearly cross at the rapid, bucking rhythm
Great, now I have retard Viktor in my mind.
> His cock cleaves into Viktor's hole, fucking him so hard Viktor sees stars even with eyes wide open
But is he in his throat yet?
You know, I would have been fine with the smut as is - it does its job and it's pretty good all things considered - but when the author wants to pull the gender shit like this I have to call bullshit. Jayce is a 'closeted gay man', who has experience fucking other men's assholes, and yet, this author doesn't seem aware that even male and female anuses are different. You have more space in a male's anus thanks to physics; the female anus is packed in by the vaginal canal the next space over. There are subtle differences, including the thickness. If Jayce keeps that up with his 1 Guy 1 Jar penis, Viktor is going to need surgery just to tighten that ass up.
I wonder how Cassandra Kiramman would react once Jayce told her he was 'gay': 'Yeah mom, I am into dudes...but I'm also into fucking dudes with vaginas, but not in their vaginas, I'm totally gay because I fuck assholes, especially female assholes. Don't disown me, okay?' It's straight with extra steps, but not gay enough to where Jayce can declare he's solely into men. Viktor claims he's gay when he's solely into men, despite him being female, and hates vaginal sex because it reminds him of what he is; he'd rather have his asshole torn open by a 12'' Boss Hog as a 'gender affirming' tactic instead.
What else is there to say? If you want to write spicy straight sex with extra steps, keep the gender shit out of it. No matter how hard you stomp you fear and scream to the heavens, this is not 'gay sex', and you might as well stop the homophobe plot while you're at it. It just looks ridiculous. As for the smut - on its own, it's fine. You get what you pay for, so to speak. But whenever someone writes dumb shit like trying to find a prostate in a female anus or how a trans man is 'growing his own dick', I'm out. I will not take you seriously.
I don't think her other stuff includes that much smut, because the one I remember her for is the one where Jayce didn't know what crabs were. I've read several others and they were not very good; it's clear Craig helped a lot with this, because I recognize her fingerprints. In any case, people are not here for the gender euphoria or how Viktor is a 'gay man'. They are here for the big dick in the small pussy, and if you look at the comments you'll see brainless THANK YOU FOR THE FOOD over and over again. Smut wise, it is her best work. But there are retarded aspects of it, as you can see highlighted. There's nothing more to say until she posts more content - which is a given.
Time to scratch that old man itch - with a touch of Mpreg.
So, what is our resident pervert doing, aside from being able to go home early after hitting pigeons with his windshield? Masturbating furiously in the company bathroom because he's attracted to a silver fox. He's definitely got a thing for granny trannies.
Turns out, his little crying session and begging not to be fired was for naught - he ends up changing the subject anyways.
> It's sexual harassment. People get fired for it all the time
I mean, you ARE confessing you furiously masturbate on company time, but is it sexual harassment? Maybe, maybe not. The person you're masturbating to had no idea until you confessed.
> Hearts in his eyes
Jesus Christ, we're living in a Looney Tunes episode.
> I suppose you would say that age is just a number too
And miraculously, at his age, he's able to get as wet as a water slide. Read on to find out.
> Are there really that many numbers between the numbers 22 and 58?
Yeah. And you didn't need to repeat yourself.
> Fuck, you taste amazing. Let me eat you out
OK, man, damn. Going right into it with the dialogue from an 80s porno.
> I would be so good for you. Would make you feel so good.
Someone's programming is malfunctioning.
Ah, the frog eyes method. I would consider that to be a more potent form of sexual harassment than the private masturbation sessions, because everyone can see your erection.
> His long cock standing out proudly along his abdomen
> Fuck you're hung
How long? I need some numbers for the Hispanic Hog.
So much for a blowjob. At least Rekki put in effort with hers.
> Adult in the bush administration
Is that literal, or figurative?
> He has been slacking on his personal grooming habits
And he is NOT joking about that. See below:
I suppose menopause would have helped, but he would have gotten that early with the T shots. This means there's an untamed pube jungle down there. I bet you can find a few extinct species if you look hard enough.
> Not even when he was sleeping his way through all the closeted Piltover frat boys
Closeted as in way? Them being gay, or them being attracted to pooners? I think the easier explanation is that they knew you were easy pussy and took it. I don't know why you're complaining about chasers when they are the only ones who will fuck you without issue.
> Sucking on Viktor's clit like a starving man
Cliché.
> His dick
> His clit
Pick one.
> I would say it's not cute but would make anything attractive, truth be told
What?
> Those tailored vests do nothing to hide your sinful waist
*Female waist, that is
> Are you secretly an incel or something?
That isn't what an incel is. Pretty sure they wouldn't be so attracted to 58-year-old pooners.
Yes, he's already dreaming about being a husband after one round of cunnilingus. Can you say 'whipped'?
> I, er, really like you
As if the NPC malfunctioning bit wasn't obvious.
Not only that, those decades of testosterone would have destroyed his female reproductive organs. Miss me with that 'people with uteruses' shit - you know what men are. You instinctively know that penis = male, and that they're the ones who can sire children. Their language is never changed, but ours is.
> Not to mention how fucking delicious you would look pregnant with my baby
Guess we're just gonna forget all the problems that come with advanced maternal age, eh? Downie babies will be the least worse thing you can get.
> You're shocked I want to have a baby with you?
I would be. We just started having sex - boy, the fuck you doing proposing this shit without a ring?
Turns out, it's super easy: all Jayce has to do is call Cait and brag about what kind of snatch he's bagging.
> Viktor has every right to feel the way he does
Correct. Problem is, he's not allowed to be angry. He's just a hungry orifice that just wants to be stuffed full of babies. How quaint.
> Any respectable man
> Viktor had never been a respectable man
> Viktor is not respectable
We fucking get it. I can see why it would be hard to say no to Jayce, what with that Hog that swings between his legs. Everyone just wants a piece of that action.
'Collection' is an understatement. It's an untamed jungle. Bet you'll find some old Mesoamerican pyramids in there.
> If he's actually lucky, he will get Viktor pregnant
Press X to doubt.
> They could be fathers together
A father is a male parent. The sex that gestates cannot be a father, regardless of how they identify.
Again with the cervical stimulation thing. Yes, it is possible, but you have to do it with care. These pooners are so porn-brained they think a man can just shove it in there and slam it in and everything will be OK, when it won't be. Women have gone to the ER when their male partners do it by accident. Belly bulge or not (of course it's the 10-12 incher), be fucking careful!
> His chest is small, barely there, and must have always been that way, considering the lack of scarring
No zippertits? Hmm. Was he on T, too?
> Anyone who says that vaginas get looser with age
Look at that. The first and only time the author has used the term 'vagina'! Give her a round of applause!
I'm glad that 22 year old men produce enough sperm to put stud horses to shame. It's like a literal cream pie in there, where you can glob it on and there will still be enough left over. These ladies love their cum.
> There's no fucking way he isn't pregnant
Your ejaculate volume will not guarantee a pregnancy. Your swimmers still have to find a suitable egg, and that's if the egg even accepts them at all. That's IF eggs are even released anymore. Keep flying high on that baby fever.
?? This is their first time sleeping together and they're already discussing babies and white-picket fences. Talk about (female) delusion. The best thing you're going to get out of this are Downies - and not the dryer sheet kind.
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Cottagecore, babies, and accidental misgendering, oh my! The long-awaited sequel to a cottage by a stream is here. You don't need to read the first one to understand this one - it was just tradwife posturing.
I bet you thought, 'wow, so weird for the author to misgender a trans character right in the tags!' Well, turns out the author does know what mothers are...when she wants to use them as nannies-for-hire.
> Talk about whatever nonsense or complete sense he wants
So...this fic. It's nonsense but also complete sense because it's a pooner's tradwife confession.
Now, for a little summary: they don't exactly live in the middle of nowhere. They do live close to a town, with a library and a doctor's office, where they can get care and supplies. Not sure if this was the same one where they had gas-powered electricity or not (and they were trying to introduce steam engines to the area), but it's the one where Jayce got found out by one of Cait's spies trying to buy baby formula, because Viktor has no breast tissue to breastfeed. Like I said, you did not miss much.
Better hope you don't need a C-section then.
> Their sloppy fucking into him
Why did I think of a stale, wet sandwich when I read this?
> Rub his palm against Viktor's cock
Le sigh. At this rate, you might as well write more Frankendongs. Creepy as they are, you can at least say they are a pseudo-cock.
> Jayce probably would have loved pregnancy
Yeah, why isn't he pregnant in these fics? Oh yeah, because Viktor is the smaller man and we know smaller men are actually women. If Jayce 'probably would have loved' pregnancy, maybe Viktor should have given him female parts a la the Arcane, just to even the odds.
In the first fic, they left behind their friends and family because they did not want to face consequences for their actions. Instead, they think the universe is thanking them and decides to honour them by giving him a cottage by the stream and for Viktor to pop out babies. IIRC, Jayce even says there is no point to returning 'because he has a new family now', preferring to let his own mother think he is dead not because he feels regret, but because he has no shame.
The author thinks she wrote a very touching moment here, but all I got was that Viktor doesn't love his kids. He is being used as a broodmare and THINKS he's doing it out of love for Jayce, for repentance of what he's done, but really they're just 'successors of the bloodline' and a means to an end. This was made clear in the first fic as their method of 'forgiveness' was to RETVRN to tradition and have those (half Aryan) babies in a wheat field.
Why, because it's too Slavic? Are the people here racist against Slavs? Do they have untermenschen posters lying around? Do tell.
> You're still trouble
Not really. Viktor's only personality is just to sit around, get fucked, and give birth. He doesn't really do much.
> Daniel perhaps
Fitting you're picking a HEBREW name.
> But I think it's a girl
Based on what? Maternal instinct? I thought we just couldn't tell.
> They could some day decide they've been Daniel all along
So he gets a 'feeling' his child is a girl, decides they're really a theybie, and then concludes that if they identify as something else they weren't a girl at all. Defeats the whole purpose of you knowing what sex your fetus is. It's as if it's important until they reach kindergarten, then it's a matter of 'I feel like X, therefore I am X.'
> They didn't seem perturbed when, at a young age, he cast the name aside
But not his biology. He seems content using his female reproductive organs and being treated as a tradwife. Funny how all FTM fantasies go back to this one point.
And what are they putting together? What are they researching? Nothing, really. They don't do any scientific work at all, because they're too busy playing at family life, because despite all the 'fuck you dad' mentality, FTMs would love nothing more than to start a family - provided the guy is hot. If you're mid you ain't fucking the man out of them.
> It's ridiculous, really, when of all of the things that nearly killed Viktor, this has had the best ending so far
He's lucky for someone who doesn't take vitamins or have regular checkups, or take testosterone. Can't have a pregnancy that's so brutal he starts losing his teeth or develops gestational diabetes, now can we?
What a twist: Ximena returns and doesn't have any hatred for her son for up and leaving all of Piltover to fornicate and reproduce with the man who nearly ended the world. We're just going to skip over that era of her life because look at how cute the babies are!
> They've got their life handled
They literally ran away to a remote area like they're a German escaping to Argentina so they won't suffer punishment for what they did. Handled? Try 'weaseled'.
> Continuing to work and pursue research
On what? Neither of you have achieved anything.
> got a glorified parasite pressing on his bladder
What a way to refer to your unborn child. The author did this in the first chapter, too.
> Not a husband and stealer of sons
That's not the worst thing. Viktor killed many thousands of people and stole their souls that will never return to their bodies or the mortal realm but uhhh hey, look at these pretty kids! Aren't they cute?
This really does hammer home the point that Viktor doesn't love his kids, he just plops them out to keep Jayce happy. You never really see him enjoy being pregnant or spending time with the kids.
> His changing body and his body's natural state have very different ideas about where it should go
Your body's 'natural state' is a female one, because you are female. There is no testosterone in your neck of the woods (literally), and you can't even breastfeed because you have no breast tissue, but you can use your ovaries and eggs just fine to do the thing billions of women have done throughout history. So much for gender dysphoria - these bitches are only ever famous for getting pregnant, and they take great pride in it.
> Perhaps we should not project our separation anxiety onto our daughter
Too late. It's also sad in hindsight that the only female connection Mena has is with her namesake, Ximena. She has no mother-figure and assumes her 'tata' is just a man who happened to give birth to her. She's gonna be confused as fuck when she finds out it's only women who are capable of that.
> Finally, Viktor is tired of both the discomfort of pregnancy and Jayce's attention
Despite that, Jayce will keep impregnating Viktor because it seems it's an impetus to 'make up' for the lives lost vs actual family planning. The more this goes on, the more it seems Viktor never wanted to be pregnant at all, but was gaslit into it.
> They've chosen a day that's pleasantly warm for late October
Huh, we went from summer to autumn that fast? Damn. What happened to 'two weeks'?
> Where they can cut the damn thing out of him if they need to
Again with the dehumanizing language. If this is a wanted pregnancy, why are you calling your little girl - that you conclude is a little girl until the kindergarten teacher decides - a parasite?
> She may change her mind some day
That's not going to erase her sex. You living this tradwife life confirms yours.
> But no more of this. Probably.
There's going to be one more because it's FOUR kids and a cottage, and we only have three. Get ready for another parasite, Viktor!
> Poor man
Bitch, please.
> I didn't purposely make a fat, big headed baby
You're lucky your big dick got that vag ready. And yes, you did purposely make a big headed baby because the genes carried by your sperm would have decided. Whoopsie.
> It's allowed, when he doesn't know when he'll see his mother again
Sorry, is Viktor making the decisions here? This makes it sound as if he hates Ximena's guts. They moved away and pretended they were dead so they wouldn't be judged for what they did. She's being remarkably complacent and forgiving and THIS is his reaction?
> Two fathers
One of them is the 'gestational parent', so they cannot be a father.
> Lenka wakes them for a feeding
They have to use baby formula, because Viktor has no breastmilk. Thanks, zippertit scars.
Notice how it's always about Jayce and HIS needs, and never Viktor. Viktor ends up being relegated to the barefoot-and-pregnant stereotype and the dumbshit author doesn't have a single clue. Well done, lass!
> Like a man starved
Cliché.
> Cunt drunk
Well, guess it's better than 'his pussy drooled like a dog'.
> taking Viktor's cock into his mouth
He won't be choking on it, that's for sure.
Because men have needs, mmmkay? You're lucky he's so devoted because most men are gonna start straying.
Oh, so NOW they're worried about money? You should have thought about that before popping out kids back-to-back. What were they doing for winter clothes? Did they make them or break bank to buy coats? Funny how that aspect of childcare isn't brought up.
Viktor is lucky all of his followers are dead, because he'd 100% be recognized. Perks of cosmic genocide, I guess.
Someone didn't edit this. With what and his dad? His mom and dad? Dad and dad? What kind of disease did they die from? Rabies? Arcane AIDS? I'd love to know.
Yeah, toddler tantrums have a nice way of killing baby fever. Wouldn't it be nice if Viktor was a person aside from an incubator?
I'll sound like a broken record, but it really is revealing when pooners keep saying they don't want to be reduced to their reproductive organs and are oh-so terrified of pregnancy, when they turn around and write the most basic bitch tradwife fantasies in existence. Viktor isn't even a person here. He only exists to give birth as a means of repentance of what he's done; he has no personality aside from being a helicopter parent and a doting mother - which is stretching it a bit. Ximena is a nanny-for-hire and has no misgivings over her son being presumed dead and living out his life in a nice place. He gets to have his needs fulfilled, while Viktor is never asked about what he wants. He just goes along with it because it has been established that the world can get fucked - having babies and raising them is the true 'revolt against the modern world'.
Progshit in the streets, tradwife in the sheets. Any kind of stereotype you can think of, pooners have it. Trans men want to be seen as men, yet keep obsessing over pregnancy and children while lecturing you that that doesn't make them female. They want to live in a cottage and be served hand and food while never working aside from childcare, as if that is their fate. It honestly sounds miserable, but since a pooner is writing it, it's supposed to be 'challenging gender roles' or some shit. How are you challening anything if all you are missing is the wifejack dress and blonde hair?
The fact they keep doing this to a character they deeply project themselves onto is hilarious and telling. You need to see them as men, but they want to be mothers without the word. Now shut up and let them play dollhouse! That's manly!
Time-traveling incestuous daddy kinks from a trad fujoshi? You see something new every day.
Turns out, it really is better if Viktor is dead, because hobo Jayce is otherwise a daddy defilier.
> Like he's a real do-gooder in this universe
You're not a do-gooder if you look like a homeless bum, sleeping on benches at night. He looks like a completely different person; how would people recognize him?
> He feels a bit like an impersonator
Because you are one.
Yes, a minor, however old Viktor is, is working at a pub. I suppose it's better than a 15-year-old working at a gay bar, which was the case a page back.
> In his teenage years. Maybe
You mean you can't tell?
> They've experimented with roleplaying before, okay?
Did Viktor ever pretend to be a young teen? Something tells me no.
> But it's bad! Abhorrent!
Not according to Miss Trad Fujo over here. Incest is just one of her fetishes because daddy gave her too much love at night.
> It feels a little more than gross to word it like that
I'll say. You're already sexualizing this alternate Viktor DESPITE knowing he's underage. Well done. I guess anything goes because bottoms can do anything huh?
> The Talis family home is actually pretty nice
How did he know where their home was? Earlier, she wrote that he broke into apartments and labs and found nothing, and he didn't know Viktor was his 'son'. I guess Viktor told him on the way home.
> Jayce tries not to think about how he doesn't see any graduation related ones
So I assume Viktor is 16-17, unless an age is specifically dropped.
> You're not my Jayce
That's obvious: he looks, sounds and dresses like a bum and doesn't try to clean himself up. I think at this point Viktor was leading him on because he WASN'T his actual dad - but there's a twist, as there usually is.
> He's from a universe where they're exes and not related
You weren't together in the original universe, either. This is one of those incest-lite fics, where the character resembles the parent yet isn't actually the parent.
> This Jayce would probably do the same if his child encountered some weird homeless guy posing as himself
I do wonder how Viktor ever figured out how you were not 'his Jayce'.
Such a mystery.
> You're dumb
He's actually a genius, but they love the himbo Jayce thing because it makes their shitty yaoi look better.
Ah, there we go: dainty wrists, small hands, and I bet there will be that infamous 'his waist was so small his hands met in the middle'. All the stops to pull out just how small Viktor is, because we need that size difference for our special brand of yaoi.
> But a sadistic part of Jayce wants him to say it
Says a lot when the so-called masculine male gets a thrill over the chance to take someone's virginity. Almost like he's conquering uncharted territory, or something.
> Gross old man
Jayce is in his 30s, if it helps. He's not Joel's age.
> Kid's crush on his dad goes deep, he thinks
Someone got molested young.
> He really hopes the arcane doesn't have a sense of morality
Too bad it doesn't, otherwise you'd be holding the baby oil at a P. Diddy party.
> A coy, doe-eyed Viktor just kissed him and is about to suck his cock and you expect him not to get a boner immediately?
Yes, because the trans boi's only purpose is sucking cock. Funny how that works.
> Licks it like candy
Just like a tootsie pop.
> It's fucking gross if he thinks about it
You just hoped the Arcane didn't have a sense of morality. Don't try to back out now when you clearly want to fuck an underage teen.
> Wraps his hand around the thick base, fingers just ever so slightly too small to fit around it completely
Either Jayce is our legendary Hispanic Hog, so thick he could stop a police car, or Viktor's hands are just that small. We'll see when it comes to the fucking.
> He wouldn't know, actually. He hasn't seen many alternate Jayces - much less their dicks
But have you considered fucking them, just to complete the circle of incest?
> Dad coming home from the forge, slick with sweat and shirtless
None of this works if the dad isn't hot, remember that. If he looked like Ricky Berwick these dumb shits would get The Ick and never write incest again.
> Him fucking my throat, asking when I became such a slut. Gagging on it. Y'know the usual
The usual? I don't want to know what the unusual is. It is typical to have the pooner be a slut for the man, though.
> Jayce has never been so fucked
And yet, he does it anyways, because virginal pussy is just so fine.
> The act is so endearing that it makes Jayce want to shove his whole length down without warning
Reminder he hasn't taken a shower. That smegma would make him choke before his dick did.
> God does Viktor look good on his knees
Almost as if that's what he was made for, eh?
Honestly, Viktor would be gagging for an entirely different reason: Jayce hasn't bathed in days. He must stink to high heaven. What does day old dick meat taste like? I don't know, but if it smells like bad turkey I want nothing to do with it. Viktor would be guzzling old sweat and musk and he's a trooper for not vomiting then and there.
> Pretty little cocksleeve
Just as nature intended. The trans man is going to know their real place real soon.
> Jayce thinks in a horny daze that it looks just like a constellation
Just like the MILKY WAY haha get it?
> Such a preciously virginal way
If a man is this obsessed with your virginity, run. I would feel bad for Viktor here, but he's literally a non-person in this so it's hard to sympathize. He is a fleshlight, through and through.
Well, that Viktor is not related to that Jayce, it's just a daddy kink. However, there will be another twist you won't see that will really complicate things.
> It's adorable, so charmingly teenage, a clear display of Viktor's inexperience
I can just see the title for this: BARELY LEGAL TRANS TEEN GETS FUCKED BY HUGE HISPANIC COCK. The sad thing is...men would watch it.
I told you, Viktor doesn't really have much personality in this. Even his room is shallow and one-dimensional, because he only exists as a vessel for dick. Even other trans fics put some effort into making him a person.
> His hand is so close to encircling it entirely
Thankfully, there is no ' his hands encircled his waist' line, so you'll have to do with this. Now, it's written right here that Viktor is so wet his underwear is like a 'second skin' and he's dripping and making a mess on the sheets. Yet, when it comes to penetration, this happens:
> Jayce is, really
Really what? A cigarette?
I'm not surprised the male is so excited about taking a teenager's virginity. That's a big fetish - to claim something no man has ever claimed before. Add on the big dick energy and you have a recipe for disaster - just look at how Jayce treats Viktor here: a fleshlight, not a person.
So despite Viktor being so wet that he drips onto the sheets, Jayce thrusts inside of him so hard he makes him bleed. That's not 'popping his cherry', that's tearing out his insides. He bleeds throughout their coupling, and even turns Jayce's semen pink with how much there is. Fuckin' Hell.
> Like a man rebirthed
Who still smells like a gutter rat.
> Gorgeous, gorgeous boy
Fujos always love written the bottom as 'boy lite' or 'woman lite' because they cannot comprehend male sexual dynamics. They just want to see the cute one, the feminine one get fucked because it's not heterosexual sex if there's a yaoi tag to it.
> So pale, pretty and unmarked
Sir, you just made him bleed so much he 'made a collar' around your penis. That boy is going to need surgery.
> Brings two fingertips to his cock
Well at least that roid clit didn't cause a prolapse.
And here is the twist: Dad Jayce finds them fucking, and instead of pushing Jayce off the bed then and there, decides to have a wank, because that's what real dads do.
> Still speared on Jayce's cock
Like undercooked chicken.
> Sluts like you love an audience
He's a virgin. Calling a virgin a slut really demeans them, because they saved themselves for you. In this case, Viktor is just too out of it - and a non character - that he doesn't really have an opinion either way. Actual Viktor would not stand for that at all.
> He just keeps getting tighter, and Jayce is almost convinced his blood flow is getting cut off
Too bad you can get your dick snipped off in there. It'd teach you humility.
> His orgasm spills through him like a river, soaking the bed sheets underneath
And yet, he's still bleeding.
> He's only a man; a horribly touch-starved man
I love how fujos know what men are when it comes to the one doing the penetrating. To them, whoever is the more masculine one is the male, because that's who the tops are, when women and feminine men occupy a third space: the fucked. Men can't be gentle or non-traditionally masculine, they HAVE to be the feminine one in the fujo's mind. And that's why we get shit like this.
> It kind of looks like jam
More like strawberries on ice cream. Christ almighty, how much did you make this poor thing bleed where it is turning your semen pink? Does having all that 'pent up energy' give you the right to be an unwashed penis nigger? It appears so.
Dad Jayce didn't beat up hobo Jayce because of paternal protection. No, it was because he now can't see his child as anything other than a hole to be fucked - and since Viktor admitted to being turned on by his own dad, we know have a Virginia incest family in the making. He saw hobo Jayce as interfering on his territory and property, and now Viktor will only exist to be the 'new wife' in this new dynamic. Yeesh.
Do all of those Viktors have vaginas or is it just this one? Because the one where he actually had sex with Viktor was this one, and it was because he was 'easy'. Maybe it's better if Viktor in the other universes are dead, because Jayce is a nonce. Once he has a taste of that teen tang, he's never going back.
In sum: fujos have daddy issues and can't see feminine men as men, they MUST be women. I'll let her speak for herself on her strawpage:
Anti-censorship, but only for seme/uke yaoi bullshit. I highly doubt she'd ever defend the right to say 'nigger'. They always want to die on the hill of underage shit for some reason.
I bet you thought, 'wow, so weird for the author to misgender a trans character right in the tags!' Well, turns out the author does know what mothers are...when she wants to use them as nannies-for-hire.
> Talk about whatever nonsense or complete sense he wants
So...this fic. It's nonsense but also complete sense because it's a pooner's tradwife confession.
Now, for a little summary: they don't exactly live in the middle of nowhere. They do live close to a town, with a library and a doctor's office, where they can get care and supplies. Not sure if this was the same one where they had gas-powered electricity or not (and they were trying to introduce steam engines to the area), but it's the one where Jayce got found out by one of Cait's spies trying to buy baby formula, because Viktor has no breast tissue to breastfeed. Like I said, you did not miss much.
Better hope you don't need a C-section then.
> Their sloppy fucking into him
Why did I think of a stale, wet sandwich when I read this?
> Rub his palm against Viktor's cock
Le sigh. At this rate, you might as well write more Frankendongs. Creepy as they are, you can at least say they are a pseudo-cock.
> Jayce probably would have loved pregnancy
Yeah, why isn't he pregnant in these fics? Oh yeah, because Viktor is the smaller man and we know smaller men are actually women. If Jayce 'probably would have loved' pregnancy, maybe Viktor should have given him female parts a la the Arcane, just to even the odds.
In the first fic, they left behind their friends and family because they did not want to face consequences for their actions. Instead, they think the universe is thanking them and decides to honour them by giving him a cottage by the stream and for Viktor to pop out babies. IIRC, Jayce even says there is no point to returning 'because he has a new family now', preferring to let his own mother think he is dead not because he feels regret, but because he has no shame.
The author thinks she wrote a very touching moment here, but all I got was that Viktor doesn't love his kids. He is being used as a broodmare and THINKS he's doing it out of love for Jayce, for repentance of what he's done, but really they're just 'successors of the bloodline' and a means to an end. This was made clear in the first fic as their method of 'forgiveness' was to RETVRN to tradition and have those (half Aryan) babies in a wheat field.
Why, because it's too Slavic? Are the people here racist against Slavs? Do they have untermenschen posters lying around? Do tell.
> You're still trouble
Not really. Viktor's only personality is just to sit around, get fucked, and give birth. He doesn't really do much.
> Daniel perhaps
Fitting you're picking a HEBREW name.
> But I think it's a girl
Based on what? Maternal instinct? I thought we just couldn't tell.
> They could some day decide they've been Daniel all along
So he gets a 'feeling' his child is a girl, decides they're really a theybie, and then concludes that if they identify as something else they weren't a girl at all. Defeats the whole purpose of you knowing what sex your fetus is. It's as if it's important until they reach kindergarten, then it's a matter of 'I feel like X, therefore I am X.'
> They didn't seem perturbed when, at a young age, he cast the name aside
But not his biology. He seems content using his female reproductive organs and being treated as a tradwife. Funny how all FTM fantasies go back to this one point.
And what are they putting together? What are they researching? Nothing, really. They don't do any scientific work at all, because they're too busy playing at family life, because despite all the 'fuck you dad' mentality, FTMs would love nothing more than to start a family - provided the guy is hot. If you're mid you ain't fucking the man out of them.
> It's ridiculous, really, when of all of the things that nearly killed Viktor, this has had the best ending so far
He's lucky for someone who doesn't take vitamins or have regular checkups, or take testosterone. Can't have a pregnancy that's so brutal he starts losing his teeth or develops gestational diabetes, now can we?
What a twist: Ximena returns and doesn't have any hatred for her son for up and leaving all of Piltover to fornicate and reproduce with the man who nearly ended the world. We're just going to skip over that era of her life because look at how cute the babies are!
> They've got their life handled
They literally ran away to a remote area like they're a German escaping to Argentina so they won't suffer punishment for what they did. Handled? Try 'weaseled'.
> Continuing to work and pursue research
On what? Neither of you have achieved anything.
> got a glorified parasite pressing on his bladder
What a way to refer to your unborn child. The author did this in the first chapter, too.
> Not a husband and stealer of sons
That's not the worst thing. Viktor killed many thousands of people and stole their souls that will never return to their bodies or the mortal realm but uhhh hey, look at these pretty kids! Aren't they cute?
This really does hammer home the point that Viktor doesn't love his kids, he just plops them out to keep Jayce happy. You never really see him enjoy being pregnant or spending time with the kids.
> His changing body and his body's natural state have very different ideas about where it should go
Your body's 'natural state' is a female one, because you are female. There is no testosterone in your neck of the woods (literally), and you can't even breastfeed because you have no breast tissue, but you can use your ovaries and eggs just fine to do the thing billions of women have done throughout history. So much for gender dysphoria - these bitches are only ever famous for getting pregnant, and they take great pride in it.
> Perhaps we should not project our separation anxiety onto our daughter
Too late. It's also sad in hindsight that the only female connection Mena has is with her namesake, Ximena. She has no mother-figure and assumes her 'tata' is just a man who happened to give birth to her. She's gonna be confused as fuck when she finds out it's only women who are capable of that.
> Finally, Viktor is tired of both the discomfort of pregnancy and Jayce's attention
Despite that, Jayce will keep impregnating Viktor because it seems it's an impetus to 'make up' for the lives lost vs actual family planning. The more this goes on, the more it seems Viktor never wanted to be pregnant at all, but was gaslit into it.
> They've chosen a day that's pleasantly warm for late October
Huh, we went from summer to autumn that fast? Damn. What happened to 'two weeks'?
> Where they can cut the damn thing out of him if they need to
Again with the dehumanizing language. If this is a wanted pregnancy, why are you calling your little girl - that you conclude is a little girl until the kindergarten teacher decides - a parasite?
> She may change her mind some day
That's not going to erase her sex. You living this tradwife life confirms yours.
> But no more of this. Probably.
There's going to be one more because it's FOUR kids and a cottage, and we only have three. Get ready for another parasite, Viktor!
> Poor man
Bitch, please.
> I didn't purposely make a fat, big headed baby
You're lucky your big dick got that vag ready. And yes, you did purposely make a big headed baby because the genes carried by your sperm would have decided. Whoopsie.
> It's allowed, when he doesn't know when he'll see his mother again
Sorry, is Viktor making the decisions here? This makes it sound as if he hates Ximena's guts. They moved away and pretended they were dead so they wouldn't be judged for what they did. She's being remarkably complacent and forgiving and THIS is his reaction?
> Two fathers
One of them is the 'gestational parent', so they cannot be a father.
> Lenka wakes them for a feeding
They have to use baby formula, because Viktor has no breastmilk. Thanks, zippertit scars.
Notice how it's always about Jayce and HIS needs, and never Viktor. Viktor ends up being relegated to the barefoot-and-pregnant stereotype and the dumbshit author doesn't have a single clue. Well done, lass!
> Like a man starved
Cliché.
> Cunt drunk
Well, guess it's better than 'his pussy drooled like a dog'.
> taking Viktor's cock into his mouth
He won't be choking on it, that's for sure.
Because men have needs, mmmkay? You're lucky he's so devoted because most men are gonna start straying.
Oh, so NOW they're worried about money? You should have thought about that before popping out kids back-to-back. What were they doing for winter clothes? Did they make them or break bank to buy coats? Funny how that aspect of childcare isn't brought up.
Viktor is lucky all of his followers are dead, because he'd 100% be recognized. Perks of cosmic genocide, I guess.
Someone didn't edit this. With what and his dad? His mom and dad? Dad and dad? What kind of disease did they die from? Rabies? Arcane AIDS? I'd love to know.
Yeah, toddler tantrums have a nice way of killing baby fever. Wouldn't it be nice if Viktor was a person aside from an incubator?
I'll sound like a broken record, but it really is revealing when pooners keep saying they don't want to be reduced to their reproductive organs and are oh-so terrified of pregnancy, when they turn around and write the most basic bitch tradwife fantasies in existence. Viktor isn't even a person here. He only exists to give birth as a means of repentance of what he's done; he has no personality aside from being a helicopter parent and a doting mother - which is stretching it a bit. Ximena is a nanny-for-hire and has no misgivings over her son being presumed dead and living out his life in a nice place. He gets to have his needs fulfilled, while Viktor is never asked about what he wants. He just goes along with it because it has been established that the world can get fucked - having babies and raising them is the true 'revolt against the modern world'.
Progshit in the streets, tradwife in the sheets. Any kind of stereotype you can think of, pooners have it. Trans men want to be seen as men, yet keep obsessing over pregnancy and children while lecturing you that that doesn't make them female. They want to live in a cottage and be served hand and food while never working aside from childcare, as if that is their fate. It honestly sounds miserable, but since a pooner is writing it, it's supposed to be 'challenging gender roles' or some shit. How are you challening anything if all you are missing is the wifejack dress and blonde hair?
The fact they keep doing this to a character they deeply project themselves onto is hilarious and telling. You need to see them as men, but they want to be mothers without the word. Now shut up and let them play dollhouse! That's manly!
Time-traveling incestuous daddy kinks from a trad fujoshi? You see something new every day.
Turns out, it really is better if Viktor is dead, because hobo Jayce is otherwise a daddy defilier.
> Like he's a real do-gooder in this universe
You're not a do-gooder if you look like a homeless bum, sleeping on benches at night. He looks like a completely different person; how would people recognize him?
> He feels a bit like an impersonator
Because you are one.
Yes, a minor, however old Viktor is, is working at a pub. I suppose it's better than a 15-year-old working at a gay bar, which was the case a page back.
> In his teenage years. Maybe
You mean you can't tell?
> They've experimented with roleplaying before, okay?
Did Viktor ever pretend to be a young teen? Something tells me no.
> But it's bad! Abhorrent!
Not according to Miss Trad Fujo over here. Incest is just one of her fetishes because daddy gave her too much love at night.
> It feels a little more than gross to word it like that
I'll say. You're already sexualizing this alternate Viktor DESPITE knowing he's underage. Well done. I guess anything goes because bottoms can do anything huh?
> The Talis family home is actually pretty nice
How did he know where their home was? Earlier, she wrote that he broke into apartments and labs and found nothing, and he didn't know Viktor was his 'son'. I guess Viktor told him on the way home.
> Jayce tries not to think about how he doesn't see any graduation related ones
So I assume Viktor is 16-17, unless an age is specifically dropped.
> You're not my Jayce
That's obvious: he looks, sounds and dresses like a bum and doesn't try to clean himself up. I think at this point Viktor was leading him on because he WASN'T his actual dad - but there's a twist, as there usually is.
> He's from a universe where they're exes and not related
You weren't together in the original universe, either. This is one of those incest-lite fics, where the character resembles the parent yet isn't actually the parent.
> This Jayce would probably do the same if his child encountered some weird homeless guy posing as himself
I do wonder how Viktor ever figured out how you were not 'his Jayce'.
Such a mystery. > You're dumb
He's actually a genius, but they love the himbo Jayce thing because it makes their shitty yaoi look better.
Ah, there we go: dainty wrists, small hands, and I bet there will be that infamous 'his waist was so small his hands met in the middle'. All the stops to pull out just how small Viktor is, because we need that size difference for our special brand of yaoi.
> But a sadistic part of Jayce wants him to say it
Says a lot when the so-called masculine male gets a thrill over the chance to take someone's virginity. Almost like he's conquering uncharted territory, or something.
> Gross old man
Jayce is in his 30s, if it helps. He's not Joel's age.
> Kid's crush on his dad goes deep, he thinks
Someone got molested young.
> He really hopes the arcane doesn't have a sense of morality
Too bad it doesn't, otherwise you'd be holding the baby oil at a P. Diddy party.
> A coy, doe-eyed Viktor just kissed him and is about to suck his cock and you expect him not to get a boner immediately?
Yes, because the trans boi's only purpose is sucking cock. Funny how that works.
> Licks it like candy
Just like a tootsie pop.
> It's fucking gross if he thinks about it
You just hoped the Arcane didn't have a sense of morality. Don't try to back out now when you clearly want to fuck an underage teen.
> Wraps his hand around the thick base, fingers just ever so slightly too small to fit around it completely
Either Jayce is our legendary Hispanic Hog, so thick he could stop a police car, or Viktor's hands are just that small. We'll see when it comes to the fucking.
> He wouldn't know, actually. He hasn't seen many alternate Jayces - much less their dicks
But have you considered fucking them, just to complete the circle of incest?
> Dad coming home from the forge, slick with sweat and shirtless
None of this works if the dad isn't hot, remember that. If he looked like Ricky Berwick these dumb shits would get The Ick and never write incest again.
> Him fucking my throat, asking when I became such a slut. Gagging on it. Y'know the usual
The usual? I don't want to know what the unusual is. It is typical to have the pooner be a slut for the man, though.
> Jayce has never been so fucked
And yet, he does it anyways, because virginal pussy is just so fine.
> The act is so endearing that it makes Jayce want to shove his whole length down without warning
Reminder he hasn't taken a shower. That smegma would make him choke before his dick did.
> God does Viktor look good on his knees
Almost as if that's what he was made for, eh?
Honestly, Viktor would be gagging for an entirely different reason: Jayce hasn't bathed in days. He must stink to high heaven. What does day old dick meat taste like? I don't know, but if it smells like bad turkey I want nothing to do with it. Viktor would be guzzling old sweat and musk and he's a trooper for not vomiting then and there.
> Pretty little cocksleeve
Just as nature intended. The trans man is going to know their real place real soon.
> Jayce thinks in a horny daze that it looks just like a constellation
Just like the MILKY WAY haha get it?
> Such a preciously virginal way
If a man is this obsessed with your virginity, run. I would feel bad for Viktor here, but he's literally a non-person in this so it's hard to sympathize. He is a fleshlight, through and through.
Well, that Viktor is not related to that Jayce, it's just a daddy kink. However, there will be another twist you won't see that will really complicate things.
> It's adorable, so charmingly teenage, a clear display of Viktor's inexperience
I can just see the title for this: BARELY LEGAL TRANS TEEN GETS FUCKED BY HUGE HISPANIC COCK. The sad thing is...men would watch it.
I told you, Viktor doesn't really have much personality in this. Even his room is shallow and one-dimensional, because he only exists as a vessel for dick. Even other trans fics put some effort into making him a person.
> His hand is so close to encircling it entirely
Thankfully, there is no ' his hands encircled his waist' line, so you'll have to do with this. Now, it's written right here that Viktor is so wet his underwear is like a 'second skin' and he's dripping and making a mess on the sheets. Yet, when it comes to penetration, this happens:
> Jayce is, really
Really what? A cigarette?
I'm not surprised the male is so excited about taking a teenager's virginity. That's a big fetish - to claim something no man has ever claimed before. Add on the big dick energy and you have a recipe for disaster - just look at how Jayce treats Viktor here: a fleshlight, not a person.
So despite Viktor being so wet that he drips onto the sheets, Jayce thrusts inside of him so hard he makes him bleed. That's not 'popping his cherry', that's tearing out his insides. He bleeds throughout their coupling, and even turns Jayce's semen pink with how much there is. Fuckin' Hell.
> Like a man rebirthed
Who still smells like a gutter rat.
> Gorgeous, gorgeous boy
Fujos always love written the bottom as 'boy lite' or 'woman lite' because they cannot comprehend male sexual dynamics. They just want to see the cute one, the feminine one get fucked because it's not heterosexual sex if there's a yaoi tag to it.
> So pale, pretty and unmarked
Sir, you just made him bleed so much he 'made a collar' around your penis. That boy is going to need surgery.
> Brings two fingertips to his cock
Well at least that roid clit didn't cause a prolapse.
And here is the twist: Dad Jayce finds them fucking, and instead of pushing Jayce off the bed then and there, decides to have a wank, because that's what real dads do.
> Still speared on Jayce's cock
Like undercooked chicken.
> Sluts like you love an audience
He's a virgin. Calling a virgin a slut really demeans them, because they saved themselves for you. In this case, Viktor is just too out of it - and a non character - that he doesn't really have an opinion either way. Actual Viktor would not stand for that at all.
> He just keeps getting tighter, and Jayce is almost convinced his blood flow is getting cut off
Too bad you can get your dick snipped off in there. It'd teach you humility.
> His orgasm spills through him like a river, soaking the bed sheets underneath
And yet, he's still bleeding.
> He's only a man; a horribly touch-starved man
I love how fujos know what men are when it comes to the one doing the penetrating. To them, whoever is the more masculine one is the male, because that's who the tops are, when women and feminine men occupy a third space: the fucked. Men can't be gentle or non-traditionally masculine, they HAVE to be the feminine one in the fujo's mind. And that's why we get shit like this.
> It kind of looks like jam
More like strawberries on ice cream. Christ almighty, how much did you make this poor thing bleed where it is turning your semen pink? Does having all that 'pent up energy' give you the right to be an unwashed penis nigger? It appears so.
Dad Jayce didn't beat up hobo Jayce because of paternal protection. No, it was because he now can't see his child as anything other than a hole to be fucked - and since Viktor admitted to being turned on by his own dad, we know have a Virginia incest family in the making. He saw hobo Jayce as interfering on his territory and property, and now Viktor will only exist to be the 'new wife' in this new dynamic. Yeesh.
Do all of those Viktors have vaginas or is it just this one? Because the one where he actually had sex with Viktor was this one, and it was because he was 'easy'. Maybe it's better if Viktor in the other universes are dead, because Jayce is a nonce. Once he has a taste of that teen tang, he's never going back.
In sum: fujos have daddy issues and can't see feminine men as men, they MUST be women. I'll let her speak for herself on her strawpage:
Anti-censorship, but only for seme/uke yaoi bullshit. I highly doubt she'd ever defend the right to say 'nigger'. They always want to die on the hill of underage shit for some reason.
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Jayvik is being treated beat for beat the same way Vashwood was treated especially after Stampede dropped, with the smaller white feminine pooner and the big brown guy with the magnum dong who gets him pregnant (bonus poijts for him being compared to an animal). Though I never looked for as much bad Booktok smut in the Trigun fandom as you have in Arcane
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Not every day you read about a psychopathic pooner hunting down brown men a la Jeffrey Dahmer, but man, I keep getting surprised. Reads almost like a Rammstein song, ends up become a 90 Day Fiancé episode.
> It is rather dull at first
Right off the bat, the brown man is written like a retard. You'll never guess what Viktor's profession is in this.
> His juicy, fat thighs in the tightest skinny jeans
Why am I reminded of Swiss Chalet all of a sudden?
> One that could absolutely meet Viktor's high expectations in the bedroom
The pooner wants a tall Chad with a PAHG - Phat Ass Hispanic Guy. Go figure.
> Tucks a loose strand of hair behind his ear
That's a very feminine thing to do, btw.
> Be a brown man
> You are made a pet by the white woman
Damn, another 'white woman fuck dogs' thing, but with roleplay.
> The pup will suffice nicely
The dog metaphors will not stop until morale is improved.
> Viktor is a publisher who's well-respected in the literature scene
Funny that's mentioned as it's over 75% female controlled. He's not publishing obscure ancient languages or the history of Bronze Age helmets, that's for sure.
> Jayce eats it all up like a good dog
If you think the dog metaphors are weird, wait until you read Viktor's MO.
> Their genes will mix nicely. Beautiful, aesthetic pleasing children to round up the poster family picture
This is like 'Orphan' but sprinkle on some Aryan propaganda. Next thing you're gonna tell me is that their four children can recite the 14 words.
> Gushes out of his hole
You'll never guess what this author used a few sentences later.
> His vagina
Wow! A pooner actually used the word vagina, the word that is like the devil for them!
...and then we go right back to 'hole'. Which happens to flutter and twitch a lot.
> Can finger himself desperately on his desk chair like a cheap whore
For once, I agree with that term. Cheap whores, cheap desks. I bet if I chucked you a dollar you'd twerk.
> Robotic arms and laser technology
Nice that Jayce is taking Viktor's original field of study. He originally was into mechanics, robotics and lasers. Now he's a basic-bitch YA publisher. Boys are really stealing my white boy's fire!
> His hole twitches
You'll read this at least 2-3 more times.
> They need to make four babies at the very least.
I never thought I'd read the 'four kids and a cottage' thing in such a twisted way, but it's oddly funny. It's the tradwife life, but add a a sprinkle of Casey Anthony.
> Viktor is uncontrollably squirting like an untrained slut
Do 'trained sluts' have a controlled spray like a spray nozzle, or are 'uncontrolled sprays' the norm?
> The cashmere fabric snuggles nicely against his swollen walls
Not the cashmere! That shit is expensive! Put something else inside your pussy!
> If Jayce wants to call him a good slut, then Viktor will go down on his knees to suck cock for as long as his leg allows it
But is he a trained slut, or an untrained one?
> He wants other people to admire him for his love life
Not if they know you shove scarves up your vagina because you squirt like an untrained slut. Bad girl, bad!
> His hole twitches
This is the third time it's done this.
> He's slowly craving a good round of a dick pounding into him
Hey, I will give the fic this: there's a decent amount of lampshading. There are no qualms about what the psycho pooner wants and the author knows her audience: shamelessly horny pooners who want a good dick pounding.
> Hot cavern
That's a very interesting term for 'mouth' right there.
> He can't have Jayce chicken out over anything that isn't vanilla
OK so are you going to go all out with the race play and dog collars, because I really want to know if the author is sticking with 'the brown man is a dog' trope.
> He needs Jayce to use him like a rag doll
That's not a cliché.
> The puppy act
> Like a kicked puppy
OK, the brown man is a dog.
> Their children better not be such hesitant pussies when Viktor is breastfeeding them
1. They're infants, their instinct is to latch on 2. You're upset a man won't suck your tiny titties? My man isn't going to get breastmilk, he's going to get condensed milk!
> The red angry cock
...why do I imagine that as a Veggietales character?
> To bob on it once for good measure until his nose brushes against the thick bush of hair.
1. This makes me think he dropped down on that dick fast like a whack-a-mole, and 2. Of course Jayce has a thicket of pubes. No one trims down there.
> The nannies weren't paid enough to make up for it
A rich pooner who works in a highly racially and stratified section had nannies growing up? You don't say. That explains the easy entitlement.
Ahhh there's that belly bulge. But since it's 'slight', that means no 12'' Hog today. It might just be the 9'' coming in second.
> The happy twitch his dick does inside of Viktor's cock
Aww, his little angry red cock does a little dance when it's happy! It's like a Sanrio character!
> Viktor would have stuffed those fingers alongside that dick for an extra burn
Yeesh, Jayce isn't that thick or long enough to do the job, so you literally have to go in there wet turkey style? OK.
> He sobs
Here we go again with the crying.
This doesn't hit as hard as when Jayce is the rapist alpha and is taking advantage of a young Viktor. It doesn't have the same impact because it's virtually impossible to take a pooner as a threat seriously, as they are smaller and more fragile than the hulking muscular, 6'0 alpha male character. Jayce here is a big boy who can make his own decisions and did - even if Viktor took advantage of that.
A little too late there, as Viktor wants to baby trap Jayce with four kids and has a weird obsession with making them 'aesthetically pleasing'. I also don't know why there's so much emphasis on the content warnings when this is pretty tame compared to the shit I've read. Hell, that underage buck-broken deer fic had none and it was about a 12 year old getting fucked by an adult male. As much as the author wants to make this a psychological horror, I just can't take it seriously with the pooner aspect. They just aren't as threatening as actual males, and all their threats and actions, even their BPD, is female-typical. I do want to see if Viktor does get those four kids though - we need a good Maury Povich twist.
> They ended up adoring
> They like Jayce
Redundant.
> Slowly gets rid of each pair of skinny pants he can find in that closet
You know that is female-patterned because a male would just dispose of the clothing or just outright destroy it. This is just subtle manipulation using a woman's wiles, and it is working.
> His puppy happily wags his tail at that
I told you that these dog metaphors would be getting out of hand.
> Whom he'd confession to not having told about their little dalliance
This sentence is incomplete on its own. It should be, "He did not tell his mother, Ximena, about their little dalliance".
> His cunt that gets filled by that man's dick at the end of the day
Hey, I can appreciate the honesty. We all know what we're here for.
> A wedding magazine here
Yes, we are doing the reverse shut-up ring. Viktor wants Jayce to marry him in a gold digger style so he can baby trap him, house and wages and all. Though both sexes can use marriage to manipulate someone, wanting a ring like that is very frivolous. Wait until you see how much it costs.
$40k for a diamond ring. That's absolutely female-coded. Now, men can wine and dine the women they intend to manipulate, but for Viktor, this is all about marriage and kids and status, not control. He kind of reminds me of Anfisa from 90 Day Fiancé, and that will be the inspiration from here on out.
> He'd do anything for Jayce to ram mercilessly inside of him while Viktor smokes a cigarette?
Literally? Well, better hope the cigarette doesn't burn the sheets and you get a house fire.
Uh oh, who's the ho taking this pooner's man?
> He takes four meaty fingers to rub harshly against Viktor's wet folds
Damn, that clam is really asking for a WWE slam today.
> He's started to sometimes tug at Viktor's strands of pubic hair down there
> Then wrapping his soft hairs around his knuckles
Holy fuck, those are DEFINITELY some Rapunzel pubes. If they are so long you can wrap your fingers around them and potentially braid them, it's not just a thicket, it's a whole-ass jungle!
> His fingers abuse Viktor's pulsating pussy
Quite the onomatopoeia there.
> He gets rid of the bathrobe
I thought he already took it off?
> He knows he will have beard burn after this
How? You have a literal jungle acting as protection down there. How can you get burned if you're protected by six inches of carpet?
> He starts to ride that tongue like his life depends on it
His tongue is that big, huh?
> Oppose a problem
*Propose a problem
> Dumb, homewrecking bitch
Of course it's the secretary. No idea what she looks like; she could be mid, but she's angering that pooner and pooner pussy is the best, you hear me? YOU HEAR ME?!
> His puppy's dick
That sounds really fucking weird out of context.
> His birth control pills are running out soon
Hmm, it makes me wonder if Viktor here is even on T at all.
> Jayce would never dare to leave him and their offspring
Baby trapping AND threatening him with divorce court? Damn, he really is ticking off all the boxes!
> He can't physically get pregnant yet
This really does infer he's not on T. Otherwise it would be mentioned as one of the things getting in the way of pregnancy.
> He's not going to risk any deformation coming to this child
Better stop using the T shot and T-gels, then.
> He already plugs himself for a day or two
Sperm naturally can live inside the vagina for four days. You are just going to smell like dead fish up there from spoiled sperm.
> Wether
*Whether
Aha, there's more of that homewrecking secretary! We gotta make the 'cis' woman the villain here - and she's married, to boot!
> Olive-green
His eyes are hazel
> He starts sobbing
Which is funny, as women, more than men, will weaponize their tears. 'White woman tears' is a thing, and I'm surprised it was used seriously here - on a brown man no less.
I hope to God they're actually washed. You don't want an MLP jar recreation.
Yep, that's classic baby-trapping. I have to say, for this being a dark fic, it really isn't all that dark. The ABO fics I posted earlier, especially that one where Jayce rapes 12-year-old Viktor, are way more aggressive and volatile. This is actually very tame for a pooner-led psychopath fic, and I legit thought it was going to be some Dahmer shit. But no, it's can't be considered a Rammstein song - it truly is a 90 Day Fiancé episode.
That's not chivalry. Chivalry is usually given by men to women - this is just Mean Girl cattiness.
Viktor plans on having four, remember. Four beautiful, aesthetically pleasing children. All he's missing are the 14 words.
Like I said, this one was a downer. I thought it would be way worse, but it's very underwhelming. Pooners can't even be written as proper psychopaths and stalkers, go figure.
Another Debbie downer of a horror. This one was supposed to include a phalloplasty, yet it is only mentioned once. It has a single bookmark.
Pretty sure they have electricity in Piltover, and I don't think a gas lamp that close to the Hexcore would be safe.
> His already fragile equilibrium bound to fracture entirely
Equilibrium is balance, it can't be fragile or fractured. It can be made off-kilter, though.
He can snap Viktor like a fortune cookie thanks to those Yeti slappers. Turns out, these nightmares are a result of some trauma - what is this trauma, you ask? A cliched gang rape from a bunch of Noxians.
Yep, and the Noxians also sent a pretty letter asking him to come back for more. How tragic
Also incredibly boring.
Huh, imagine that. Our alpha male rapist got raped for once. Weird how the phalloplasty fic ends up being less toxic than the ABO ones.
That implies you can even get that flesh tube up. You would be forgiven for asking how this is a phalloplasty fic, because it's only mentioned in one line. I thought it'd be a mainstay of the fic like that one where they fuck in the Arctic base - and that one went on for 19k words!
You know, if not for the tags, you'd think this was a very tender M/M fic. You would never know that Viktor is trans aside from the 'wet spot' comment. It is a very misleading story.
> For once his dick doesn't naturally harden
Correct, he needs a steel rod and a pump in his labia-testicles to inflate it like it's a tire. The author 'did her research' to make the phalloplasty accurate and it's the vaguest thing you'll ever read. It will never be a 'raging hard on' because it is a flesh tube made of your arm or thigh. It's like a piece of salami hanging there, cold and lifeless, and they cannot even tell whether they are penetrating someone or now. Sad!
> To fuck his best friend like a beast in heat
With a flesh tube? You'd be better off using a strap-on, my guy. At least that can stay hard and mould to your body temperature. Frankendongs are just fucking weird.
Is that 'foreign feeling' rejection? Or the fact that that limp pool noodle will never compare to the real thing? I really thought this would have gone more in-depth with it, but no. What a disappointment. I went from buck-broken shotacon deer to this. Oh well, you gotta take the breaks when you can.
The trope of the smaller, whiter, paler 'feminine' one and the bigger, darker male is very common. It feeds into the paler one being refined and dainty (the feminine) and the darker aggressive and 'untamed' (the masculine). Think Tarzan and Jane - and someone even did an overlap of that with the two of them, which was promptly called out by people for the racial overtones. It happens A LOT.
> It is rather dull at first
Right off the bat, the brown man is written like a retard. You'll never guess what Viktor's profession is in this.
> His juicy, fat thighs in the tightest skinny jeans
Why am I reminded of Swiss Chalet all of a sudden?
> One that could absolutely meet Viktor's high expectations in the bedroom
The pooner wants a tall Chad with a PAHG - Phat Ass Hispanic Guy. Go figure.
> Tucks a loose strand of hair behind his ear
That's a very feminine thing to do, btw.
> Be a brown man
> You are made a pet by the white woman
Damn, another 'white woman fuck dogs' thing, but with roleplay.
> The pup will suffice nicely
The dog metaphors will not stop until morale is improved.
> Viktor is a publisher who's well-respected in the literature scene
Funny that's mentioned as it's over 75% female controlled. He's not publishing obscure ancient languages or the history of Bronze Age helmets, that's for sure.
> Jayce eats it all up like a good dog
If you think the dog metaphors are weird, wait until you read Viktor's MO.
> Their genes will mix nicely. Beautiful, aesthetic pleasing children to round up the poster family picture
This is like 'Orphan' but sprinkle on some Aryan propaganda. Next thing you're gonna tell me is that their four children can recite the 14 words.
> Gushes out of his hole
You'll never guess what this author used a few sentences later.
> His vagina
Wow! A pooner actually used the word vagina, the word that is like the devil for them!
...and then we go right back to 'hole'. Which happens to flutter and twitch a lot.
> Can finger himself desperately on his desk chair like a cheap whore
For once, I agree with that term. Cheap whores, cheap desks. I bet if I chucked you a dollar you'd twerk.
> Robotic arms and laser technology
Nice that Jayce is taking Viktor's original field of study. He originally was into mechanics, robotics and lasers. Now he's a basic-bitch YA publisher. Boys are really stealing my white boy's fire!
> His hole twitches
You'll read this at least 2-3 more times.
> They need to make four babies at the very least.
I never thought I'd read the 'four kids and a cottage' thing in such a twisted way, but it's oddly funny. It's the tradwife life, but add a a sprinkle of Casey Anthony.
> Viktor is uncontrollably squirting like an untrained slut
Do 'trained sluts' have a controlled spray like a spray nozzle, or are 'uncontrolled sprays' the norm?
> The cashmere fabric snuggles nicely against his swollen walls
Not the cashmere! That shit is expensive! Put something else inside your pussy!
> If Jayce wants to call him a good slut, then Viktor will go down on his knees to suck cock for as long as his leg allows it
But is he a trained slut, or an untrained one?
> He wants other people to admire him for his love life
Not if they know you shove scarves up your vagina because you squirt like an untrained slut. Bad girl, bad!
> His hole twitches
This is the third time it's done this.
> He's slowly craving a good round of a dick pounding into him
Hey, I will give the fic this: there's a decent amount of lampshading. There are no qualms about what the psycho pooner wants and the author knows her audience: shamelessly horny pooners who want a good dick pounding.
> Hot cavern
That's a very interesting term for 'mouth' right there.
> He can't have Jayce chicken out over anything that isn't vanilla
OK so are you going to go all out with the race play and dog collars, because I really want to know if the author is sticking with 'the brown man is a dog' trope.
> He needs Jayce to use him like a rag doll
That's not a cliché.
> The puppy act
> Like a kicked puppy
OK, the brown man is a dog.
> Their children better not be such hesitant pussies when Viktor is breastfeeding them
1. They're infants, their instinct is to latch on 2. You're upset a man won't suck your tiny titties? My man isn't going to get breastmilk, he's going to get condensed milk!
> The red angry cock
...why do I imagine that as a Veggietales character?
> To bob on it once for good measure until his nose brushes against the thick bush of hair.
1. This makes me think he dropped down on that dick fast like a whack-a-mole, and 2. Of course Jayce has a thicket of pubes. No one trims down there.
> The nannies weren't paid enough to make up for it
A rich pooner who works in a highly racially and stratified section had nannies growing up? You don't say. That explains the easy entitlement.
Ahhh there's that belly bulge. But since it's 'slight', that means no 12'' Hog today. It might just be the 9'' coming in second.
> The happy twitch his dick does inside of Viktor's cock
Aww, his little angry red cock does a little dance when it's happy! It's like a Sanrio character!
> Viktor would have stuffed those fingers alongside that dick for an extra burn
Yeesh, Jayce isn't that thick or long enough to do the job, so you literally have to go in there wet turkey style? OK.
> He sobs
Here we go again with the crying.
This doesn't hit as hard as when Jayce is the rapist alpha and is taking advantage of a young Viktor. It doesn't have the same impact because it's virtually impossible to take a pooner as a threat seriously, as they are smaller and more fragile than the hulking muscular, 6'0 alpha male character. Jayce here is a big boy who can make his own decisions and did - even if Viktor took advantage of that.
A little too late there, as Viktor wants to baby trap Jayce with four kids and has a weird obsession with making them 'aesthetically pleasing'. I also don't know why there's so much emphasis on the content warnings when this is pretty tame compared to the shit I've read. Hell, that underage buck-broken deer fic had none and it was about a 12 year old getting fucked by an adult male. As much as the author wants to make this a psychological horror, I just can't take it seriously with the pooner aspect. They just aren't as threatening as actual males, and all their threats and actions, even their BPD, is female-typical. I do want to see if Viktor does get those four kids though - we need a good Maury Povich twist.
> They ended up adoring
> They like Jayce
Redundant.
> Slowly gets rid of each pair of skinny pants he can find in that closet
You know that is female-patterned because a male would just dispose of the clothing or just outright destroy it. This is just subtle manipulation using a woman's wiles, and it is working.
> His puppy happily wags his tail at that
I told you that these dog metaphors would be getting out of hand.
> Whom he'd confession to not having told about their little dalliance
This sentence is incomplete on its own. It should be, "He did not tell his mother, Ximena, about their little dalliance".
> His cunt that gets filled by that man's dick at the end of the day
Hey, I can appreciate the honesty. We all know what we're here for.
> A wedding magazine here
Yes, we are doing the reverse shut-up ring. Viktor wants Jayce to marry him in a gold digger style so he can baby trap him, house and wages and all. Though both sexes can use marriage to manipulate someone, wanting a ring like that is very frivolous. Wait until you see how much it costs.
$40k for a diamond ring. That's absolutely female-coded. Now, men can wine and dine the women they intend to manipulate, but for Viktor, this is all about marriage and kids and status, not control. He kind of reminds me of Anfisa from 90 Day Fiancé, and that will be the inspiration from here on out.
> He'd do anything for Jayce to ram mercilessly inside of him while Viktor smokes a cigarette?
Literally? Well, better hope the cigarette doesn't burn the sheets and you get a house fire.
Uh oh, who's the ho taking this pooner's man?
> He takes four meaty fingers to rub harshly against Viktor's wet folds
Damn, that clam is really asking for a WWE slam today.
> He's started to sometimes tug at Viktor's strands of pubic hair down there
> Then wrapping his soft hairs around his knuckles
Holy fuck, those are DEFINITELY some Rapunzel pubes. If they are so long you can wrap your fingers around them and potentially braid them, it's not just a thicket, it's a whole-ass jungle!
> His fingers abuse Viktor's pulsating pussy
Quite the onomatopoeia there.
> He gets rid of the bathrobe
I thought he already took it off?
> He knows he will have beard burn after this
How? You have a literal jungle acting as protection down there. How can you get burned if you're protected by six inches of carpet?
> He starts to ride that tongue like his life depends on it
His tongue is that big, huh?
> Oppose a problem
*Propose a problem
> Dumb, homewrecking bitch
Of course it's the secretary. No idea what she looks like; she could be mid, but she's angering that pooner and pooner pussy is the best, you hear me? YOU HEAR ME?!
> His puppy's dick
That sounds really fucking weird out of context.
> His birth control pills are running out soon
Hmm, it makes me wonder if Viktor here is even on T at all.
> Jayce would never dare to leave him and their offspring
Baby trapping AND threatening him with divorce court? Damn, he really is ticking off all the boxes!
> He can't physically get pregnant yet
This really does infer he's not on T. Otherwise it would be mentioned as one of the things getting in the way of pregnancy.
> He's not going to risk any deformation coming to this child
Better stop using the T shot and T-gels, then.
> He already plugs himself for a day or two
Sperm naturally can live inside the vagina for four days. You are just going to smell like dead fish up there from spoiled sperm.
> Wether
*Whether
Aha, there's more of that homewrecking secretary! We gotta make the 'cis' woman the villain here - and she's married, to boot!
> Olive-green
His eyes are hazel
> He starts sobbing
Which is funny, as women, more than men, will weaponize their tears. 'White woman tears' is a thing, and I'm surprised it was used seriously here - on a brown man no less.
I hope to God they're actually washed. You don't want an MLP jar recreation.
Yep, that's classic baby-trapping. I have to say, for this being a dark fic, it really isn't all that dark. The ABO fics I posted earlier, especially that one where Jayce rapes 12-year-old Viktor, are way more aggressive and volatile. This is actually very tame for a pooner-led psychopath fic, and I legit thought it was going to be some Dahmer shit. But no, it's can't be considered a Rammstein song - it truly is a 90 Day Fiancé episode.
That's not chivalry. Chivalry is usually given by men to women - this is just Mean Girl cattiness.
Viktor plans on having four, remember. Four beautiful, aesthetically pleasing children. All he's missing are the 14 words.
Like I said, this one was a downer. I thought it would be way worse, but it's very underwhelming. Pooners can't even be written as proper psychopaths and stalkers, go figure.
Another Debbie downer of a horror. This one was supposed to include a phalloplasty, yet it is only mentioned once. It has a single bookmark.
Pretty sure they have electricity in Piltover, and I don't think a gas lamp that close to the Hexcore would be safe.
> His already fragile equilibrium bound to fracture entirely
Equilibrium is balance, it can't be fragile or fractured. It can be made off-kilter, though.
He can snap Viktor like a fortune cookie thanks to those Yeti slappers. Turns out, these nightmares are a result of some trauma - what is this trauma, you ask? A cliched gang rape from a bunch of Noxians.
Yep, and the Noxians also sent a pretty letter asking him to come back for more. How tragic
Also incredibly boring.
Huh, imagine that. Our alpha male rapist got raped for once. Weird how the phalloplasty fic ends up being less toxic than the ABO ones.
That implies you can even get that flesh tube up. You would be forgiven for asking how this is a phalloplasty fic, because it's only mentioned in one line. I thought it'd be a mainstay of the fic like that one where they fuck in the Arctic base - and that one went on for 19k words!
You know, if not for the tags, you'd think this was a very tender M/M fic. You would never know that Viktor is trans aside from the 'wet spot' comment. It is a very misleading story.
> For once his dick doesn't naturally harden
Correct, he needs a steel rod and a pump in his labia-testicles to inflate it like it's a tire. The author 'did her research' to make the phalloplasty accurate and it's the vaguest thing you'll ever read. It will never be a 'raging hard on' because it is a flesh tube made of your arm or thigh. It's like a piece of salami hanging there, cold and lifeless, and they cannot even tell whether they are penetrating someone or now. Sad!
> To fuck his best friend like a beast in heat
With a flesh tube? You'd be better off using a strap-on, my guy. At least that can stay hard and mould to your body temperature. Frankendongs are just fucking weird.
Is that 'foreign feeling' rejection? Or the fact that that limp pool noodle will never compare to the real thing? I really thought this would have gone more in-depth with it, but no. What a disappointment. I went from buck-broken shotacon deer to this. Oh well, you gotta take the breaks when you can.
Arcane is a popular fandom, though it has dropped off considerably since December.
The trope of the smaller, whiter, paler 'feminine' one and the bigger, darker male is very common. It feeds into the paler one being refined and dainty (the feminine) and the darker aggressive and 'untamed' (the masculine). Think Tarzan and Jane - and someone even did an overlap of that with the two of them, which was promptly called out by people for the racial overtones. It happens A LOT.
I used to do CoD ones, but even trans Soap/ Ghost fell off. I'm sure someone here is in that fandom.
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I unironically like reading "airport" fiction (military and spy type books that focus on the action plot) like some old man and honestly wish people in that fandom wrote stuff like that but it's mostly weird porn and fluffy AU shit. Not surprising but still disappointing. There isn't anything new or surprising to find there that hasn't already been covered in this thread. It sounds like the locust writers might be migrating to something else though lol
As for the Kurapika pooner fics...
Why are they like this?
too bizarre
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- Jan 8, 2025
I've seen some of the stuff posted (mostly by you) in the Arcane thread about that fandom's Twitter discourse, and it was legitimately insane. Some of the most toxic fandom discourse I've ever witnessed. Those people look like psychopaths. Why anyone could see the state of that discourse and say to themselves, "Time to wade on in, I've got my pink-and-blue-colored floaties on!" is beyond me. I mean, you generally post some crazy stuff on here that the Jayviks write, but I was looking at most of it as just some awkward people very posting awkward porn. But, figures, I should've known those same people are on Twitter having vicious beef with "Meljays" or whoever else they get into blood feuds with. I'm sorry your fandom is like that.
Anyway, there's some drama going on in r/AO3 right now. So this post isn't about any singular fanfiction, but more about fanfic authors in general going apeshit... Hope it still interests you all.
Yesterday an alarmist post appeared on the AO3 subreddit. It claimed that someone had scraped every single publicly available work posted to Archive of Our Own before March of this year. That dataset - potentially containing up to 63 million works - had been posted to huggingface.co, a repository of AI training datasets and AI models.
If we go to the link provided, we can see that this poster seems to be correct. (Archived version here.)
User nyuuzyou claims to have scraped 12.6 million public works from AO3 - or all the works with ids from 1 to 63,200,000 that were not archive-locked or otherwise hidden.
A huggingface mod claims that a DMCA takedown request was filed by the OTW, so the dataset is disabled for now and cannot be downloaded from huggingface.
Huggingface allows dataset owners to file counter-claims against DMCA requests. nyuuzyou claims to have done so, adding that he hopes the dataset will be restored within two weeks, as per huggingface policy. He reiterates that his curation and subsequent uploading of the dataset is perfectly legal, and the DMCA is unfounded.
...or maybe not?
Oh well, legality or no, it doesn't stop him from posting the dataset to other websites. (Not sure why it's strikethroughed. When he first posted it, it looked normal. As of now, 4/25/2025, the dataset has been removed from the second link but might be up at the first. Not suggesting anyone visit it, however; it seems he owns that domain and there's no telling what else he's put on it.)
How are the good people of r/AO3 dealing with this, you ask?
Well, let's find out...
I hope you have good content moderation policies, Huggingface...
Some have taken to following the advice of the role-playing website Paperdemon, which recommends that authors post notices of copyright infringement to the huggingface website. Most are following the script given by Paperdemon, which reads, in what is more or less a standard DMCA takedown request, like polite but firm legalese demanding their copyrighted works be removed from the dataset.
A few are adding their own special touches, however.
Including a few who don't seem to get that to file a DMCA request, you have to actually state what content is being infringed. Ah well, at least they got the spirit of the thing!
Inside the discussions page for the dataset, the AO3 writers begin to get even more creative with their language. One thread in particular seems to see the most activity.
Some brave men make unpopular points.
Amidst the chaos, nyuuzyou reveals himself to be a man of few words.
Meanwhile, back on Reddit...
And how about on r/AO3, the AO3 writer's home turf? Their refuge, their comfort, their inner sanctum? Are they faring any better over there?
I know what you're thinking - rageposting on reddit is all well and good. To be expected, even! But surely the good people of r/AO3 wouldn't take their anger any further... They're all such good people. Surely they wouldn't engage in - god forbid - harassment.
Right?
But it's not all bad. A few kind souls wish him well, given the average content of the fics posted to Archive of our Own.
But what is this... is there some wrongthink in my r/AO3 thread? Really, right in front of the other writers? You know they're not in a place to withstand that kind of emotional upheaval!!!
As of 4/25/2025, the original post on r/AO3 is locked. But the storm does not appear to be over. There are currently 130 some odd DCMA takedown requests on huggingface for this dataset, with more being added every hour. An official post detailing the state of things was posted by a mod to the AO3 subreddit earlier today. (Archived here.) It claims the dataset is gone from most sites, but that it may appear again on huggingface if they side with nyuuzyou and deem the DMCA takedown requests (all 130 of them, I suppose?) to be unfounded. One thing is clear: this dataset isn't gone yet. It's out there, and it could come back at any moment.
Like many r/AO3 users, I am left wondering - will this ever end? Will nyuuzyou ever be brought to justice? And just how many death threats has his email inbox received?
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If we go to the link provided, we can see that this poster seems to be correct. (Archived version here.)
User nyuuzyou claims to have scraped 12.6 million public works from AO3 - or all the works with ids from 1 to 63,200,000 that were not archive-locked or otherwise hidden.
A huggingface mod claims that a DMCA takedown request was filed by the OTW, so the dataset is disabled for now and cannot be downloaded from huggingface.
Huggingface allows dataset owners to file counter-claims against DMCA requests. nyuuzyou claims to have done so, adding that he hopes the dataset will be restored within two weeks, as per huggingface policy. He reiterates that his curation and subsequent uploading of the dataset is perfectly legal, and the DMCA is unfounded.
...or maybe not?
Oh well, legality or no, it doesn't stop him from posting the dataset to other websites. (Not sure why it's strikethroughed. When he first posted it, it looked normal. As of now, 4/25/2025, the dataset has been removed from the second link but might be up at the first. Not suggesting anyone visit it, however; it seems he owns that domain and there's no telling what else he's put on it.)
How are the good people of r/AO3 dealing with this, you ask?
Well, let's find out...
I hope you have good content moderation policies, Huggingface...
Some have taken to following the advice of the role-playing website Paperdemon, which recommends that authors post notices of copyright infringement to the huggingface website. Most are following the script given by Paperdemon, which reads, in what is more or less a standard DMCA takedown request, like polite but firm legalese demanding their copyrighted works be removed from the dataset.
A few are adding their own special touches, however.
Including a few who don't seem to get that to file a DMCA request, you have to actually state what content is being infringed. Ah well, at least they got the spirit of the thing!
Inside the discussions page for the dataset, the AO3 writers begin to get even more creative with their language. One thread in particular seems to see the most activity.
Some brave men make unpopular points.
Amidst the chaos, nyuuzyou reveals himself to be a man of few words.
Meanwhile, back on Reddit...
And how about on r/AO3, the AO3 writer's home turf? Their refuge, their comfort, their inner sanctum? Are they faring any better over there?
I know what you're thinking - rageposting on reddit is all well and good. To be expected, even! But surely the good people of r/AO3 wouldn't take their anger any further... They're all such good people. Surely they wouldn't engage in - god forbid - harassment.
Right?
But it's not all bad. A few kind souls wish him well, given the average content of the fics posted to Archive of our Own.
But what is this... is there some wrongthink in my r/AO3 thread? Really, right in front of the other writers? You know they're not in a place to withstand that kind of emotional upheaval!!!
As of 4/25/2025, the original post on r/AO3 is locked. But the storm does not appear to be over. There are currently 130 some odd DCMA takedown requests on huggingface for this dataset, with more being added every hour. An official post detailing the state of things was posted by a mod to the AO3 subreddit earlier today. (Archived here.) It claims the dataset is gone from most sites, but that it may appear again on huggingface if they side with nyuuzyou and deem the DMCA takedown requests (all 130 of them, I suppose?) to be unfounded. One thing is clear: this dataset isn't gone yet. It's out there, and it could come back at any moment.
Like many r/AO3 users, I am left wondering - will this ever end? Will nyuuzyou ever be brought to justice? And just how many death threats has his email inbox received?
But really, to be a bit more serious about all this, I think this whole debacle is an extremely interesting look at the current state of fandom culture. It seems to feature some big questions plaguing fandom spaces today - is using Generative AI okay, ever, at all? how much ownership do fanfic writers have over their works, and do they have enough ownership to protect them from unsavory actors? is there any reasonable way for a writer to protect against the unauthorized distribution of their creative labour? is fighting against the ever-increasing encroachment of AI into our lives a losing game? and so on.
And it illustrates the kind of anti-social behavior that often tears online fandom apart - this time, by some trick of fate, directed outside itself instead of within. For all that r/AO3 seems to complain about the harassing tactics of "anti-shippers," some of their users seem awfully blase about that same kind of harassment when it's instead happening to Bad People
. You know, the acceptable targets.
Feel free to discuss any of what I just brought up, or any other thing you thought about when reading this post. I'd love to see what you guys think about all this.
Or - feel free to just have a good laugh. I know I did.
And it illustrates the kind of anti-social behavior that often tears online fandom apart - this time, by some trick of fate, directed outside itself instead of within. For all that r/AO3 seems to complain about the harassing tactics of "anti-shippers," some of their users seem awfully blase about that same kind of harassment when it's instead happening to Bad People
. You know, the acceptable targets.Feel free to discuss any of what I just brought up, or any other thing you thought about when reading this post. I'd love to see what you guys think about all this.
Or - feel free to just have a good laugh. I know I did.
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I think alot of people just cant write so it comes down to sex and nonsense and ends up nothing like the source material
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The second chapter of that Reddit NEET going to an all-men's retreat has been updated. Find out who the real bigot is in this manosphere skewing. No pepes or soyjack memes are to be found here.
Viktor is your typical basement dweller who ended up going on this retreat because he wants to psychologically 'destroy' Jayce just for the crime of existing, and proceeds to act like a spiteful mutant from there on out. I am not shocked to read that Singed was Chester the Molester, and that being one reason why Viktor feels sexually inadequate.
We learn that, on dates, Viktor launches into deep web stuff like he's Alex Jones, turning off people who do not share the same interests as him, and being so autistic he can't read the room. No, bud, leaving behind books on 'feminist theory' when the only woman you have around you use as a maid to cook and clean after you is not 'true feminism'. You're just a spoiled, disgusting white boy living in a basement.
> What is he trying to prove?
Good question. It's just irrational hatred at this point.
> His man card will be revoked by a quorum of yoked strangers?
You don't know that. Besides, they might be inspired that a disabled man took the steps and wanted to improve himself. Mentally, though, you are a piece of shit and I can't pity you.
> Under horny circumstances, Viktor puts himself in Heimy's spot, trotting nude in the yard or clambering head first into Jayce's groin
Let me say that I audibly went 'what the fuck' here. This author really wants to paint Jayce as an Andrew Tate or some other intolerable manosphere guru, when this guy wants to act like a dog to earn affection. 'White fags fuck dogs' does has a nice ring to it.
> He doesn't say words like fag or cripple
Careful, you might give yourself another panic attack there. You don't know if he's actually that bad. He's never said anything homophobic, he just said he likes girls - but it is clear he has a bi streak.
> Hair clotted with grease, armpits teeming with noxious bacteria
Fucking disgusting, man. And this man calls himself a feminist?
Buddy, you're the one who smells like fried meat, here. Take a goddamn shower!
> Less repugnant
They're not going to hate you for being disabled. They will hate you because you look and smell like a disgusting bum.
> No hot garbage smell
Funny how that triggers him thinking about it, and not the fact that, you know, he literally smells like hot garbage. Talk about lacking self awareness.
> Viktor will need his consecrated hand for many future auto-diddlings
Please wash your ass.
This author really wants to poke fun at right-wingers and their terminology. It comes off as half-assed, because every fic I've read from these types include Jayce being the muscular, brown-skinned Adonis that they wish they could have, fascist haircut and all. They are not fantasizing about progshits, that's for sure.
> His half Mexican heritage could be dredged up or stashed away depending on the circumstances
Oh, girl wants to play the race game. You are going to lose with that one. Jayce got his height and muscles from his white daddy, because most Mexican men don't reach six feet in height.
> I am a ruthless machine
You had an anxiety attack getting into a taxi, calm down.
Now she wants me to hate Vander, too? C'mon, man! He sounds so sweet! I'd love to attend a barbeque with him.
Now he's accusing the black man of following a script. Why don't you call him a coon while you're at it, Viktor?
> Carcasses and pulverized bullshit, how utterly progressive
You make subtle racist comments and had a black woman fund your trip. I don't want to hear about another progressive waxing about how nice they are when they do this shit.
WASH YOUR FUCKING CLOTHES AND TAKE A SHOWER, YOU FUCKING PIG
I will never take male feminists seriously, especially as Viktor actually relies on Sky to cook, clean, and pay for his shit. All he's missing is her wiping his ass. What an ally. Such a good feminist. Besides, Viktor is gay, and showed no sign of even liking women as people before.
> The crippled fag is here, gentlemen
It's not you being a fag that's the problem. It's you being an unwashed, racist cunt.
I do not like Jayce being written as a dumb himbo here, but in his defense, he did politely ask what Viktor had and was never mean to him. Viktor wants to make this about 'fragmented masculinity' when he's the epitome of toxic masculinity - taking out his rage on others all because they are more successful than him.
> Curse this Neanderthal for being so innately erotic
Yes, calling the mixed race man a Neanderthal is very, very smart.
> Keen sting of malice
The only malicious one is Rictus -yes, he's here - because he calls Viktor a snowflake. He is right, btw. But of course Viktor makes himself look like the victim.
> I'm not about that soy life
You would expect Viktor to know about phyto-estrogens and xenoestrogens, if he's as smart as he claims. That would be one thing he'd agree with, going off of environmental principles.
A white man digging into a half-brown man's innards either invokes a cartel video, or a Tuskegee experiment. Not good optics either way. All this hate on alpha males is also moot, because I know these people love a good ABO when Jayce is the 'born alpha'.
> Dick thickening amount of bravado
I know where that dick-thickening is going in the future HEYO
Oh yeah, I forgot about the meth juice thing. I still don't have Jayce more than Viktor, lmao.
> Rape and public speaking elicit similar biomechanical terror
I fail to see how public speaking elicits the same reaction as a "nonconsensual anal entrance".
> Theiram
The bartender? What'd he do? He never struck me as a misogynist at all.
> I'm here to take you all down
Like an epic snowflake.
> Spaghetti of raw nerves and muscle
...interesting description, there.
> In the Bible somewhere
The Bible was written in a desert setting. They did not have ice baths, genius.
> Alpha male gratitude stance
If this was an ABO fic, no one would be making snarky comments, they would just take it at face value, because we know what biology is in that genre.
The author was not kidding about him being a gooner. I wonder if there will be an epic turnaround.
Vander is right. He needs to eat more protein, not brown rice, and he will better his health (and sperm health!) if he eats better. If Viktor was indeed a 'smarty pants' he would agree, even if personal issues prevent him from doing so. It is very hard to find him a sympathetic person.
If you had a 'superior intellect' you would admit that Vander is right, and would be ranting on about GMOs and whatnot if you're into the deep web. These guys would seriously eat that up.
Rictus being the token homophobic dudebro is not a surprise, even when Rictus does not act like that at all. He's a wall of meat sure, but has respect for anyone willing to put in the work. He'd be the one trying to get him to try new reps, not this.
> If you're not faggots, why do you need an entire week centered around yourselves?
I usually don't like using this term, but Viktor does have a lot of internalized homophobia and insecurity. All-male retreats do not have to be exclusively homosexual; hell, there ARE gay men in them! Gay men have retreats of their own! Not everything has to revolve around gay sex, but sure, bring up the fact you are an insecure homosexual man. You just confirmed Rictus' point, good job.
They wouldn't want to suck that gay dick anyways, because that shit probably hasn't been cleaned in weeks. That smegma must resemble a trailer park trash bag by now.
Jayce is 100% right. I assume this is where Viktor will start to change.
I can't hate Jayce here. I can't. Because he's right, and he's legit trying his best.
> Viktor is justified in the chubbing of his dick
You'll never guess what age he started watching porn.
> Knew he was gay at 3
> Started watching graphic porn at 11
I must say, 'athletic anal' is a helluva line. But the 'prepubscenet boners' raises an eyebrow. You're going to have post modernist commentary and talk nothing about that? OK.
> The bigger the phallus the better
Oh, he likes the big ones, eh? Too bad Jayce is only 8'' in this, while he is at 7''.
Damn, you've got that dog in you too, eh?
> What happened to Viktor's power?
Outside of your 4chan bubble, you didn't have any. Even then, your circles included SJWs and troons who latched onto every word, and then turned against you faster than Idubbz against H3H3.
> He's having a partial allergic reaction, a phallic swelling
Your dick gets hard when you get allergies? OK.
> That is more like a pandemic inducing virus
Sunlight is known to kill viruses thanks to the UV light, but you do you, girl.
And our incel adventure continues. More drama, more self reflection, more faggot dick sucking. Now, let's see the reactions.
Oh, this reminds me: for all this emphasis on how Viktor is a 4chan user, he doesn't talk a lot about memes, pepes, or even soyjacks, aside from doing it during his Twitter war with Jayce. He doesn't make fancy GIFs, he doesn't have any YAAAS KWEEEN moments, he just gets a few ratios and that's it. He can geolocate and can dox, but that's it. He's a basement dweller who doesn't mod, doesn't have FO:NV, doesn't even have Skyrim and plays MTG and C&C and some other popular games - no Final Fantasy XIV? for shame. If he's supposed to be an incel, she got the soyjack part right - but the 'relatable 4chan fucker' isn't there. People are saying this is snippy and well-written and while the writing IS crisp, Viktor really does seem like a weak snowflake. It'll be interesting to see if he gains any muscle and fucks the Chad, which the author swears that he does, and that Jayce is a service top. Hopefully he takes a shower for once.
Another day, another fic where a brown man is written as a dog - and raped by one pretending to be one. What are these white women trying to tell us? Archive here.
> Purgatory disguised as paradise
You won't know if it's purgatory at first glance. Purgatory is the Grey area between heaven and Hell.
> Jayce couldn't help but think it looked like a tumor
A very fitting description.
> The Viktor before him had embraced his altered body
?? The original one did as well?
> His purple-black skin
This makes me think he's an Enderman.
That's right: this woman made Jayce, the token mutt, into an actual mutt where he wears dog ears and paws, and runs around with a wagging butt plug. His penis is covered by a dog sheath - to give you the full ABO experience - and he has no humanity left. He's literally got the mind of a toddler while acting like a dog.
These are the same people who will tell you that JD Vance is weird.
> There was so little thought behind those eyes
Just as the white man wants it.
I am not getting over the fact that this is a white man who turned a brown man into a literal dog. The fucking optics of that are insane
Yes, if you thought the dog shit was weird...now Jayce is going to get raped by his alternate self, who thinks he is a dog.
> Indenpedence was a foreign, incomprehensible concept
No wonder these people are so scared of the black Kweens of fandom. They can't write a black woman because she gets in the way of her ship, but they can make the brown man a dog because of their kink. Progressive racism is something else.
> Jayce knew he was big, but this hurt
How big IS Jayce here? 8'', or the mythical 12''? Don't tell me the Hispanic Hog got nerfed here of all places.
> He'd been pegged before, it didn't hold a candle to this
...pegged by whom?
> The puppy panted and howled and moaned without restraint
OK so this is basically Furfest without the fur suits. Alt Jayce is a perverted furry rapist, go figure.
Turns out, this rubber toy changes your mental state the more you bite into it. Forget MKULTRA, give this man a chew toy!
> Jayce was actually being broken into a stupid pet
Does this mean Viktor is engaging in bestiality or is it still human sex because the dog-man is a human?
> Allowed his counterpart to fuck him better
Damn, that chew toy really is a miracle worker. Maybe you should bring that back to prevent the GE instead of blasting Viktor in the chest.
> He still understood that his lovely puppy ears were fake
You already wrote this.
> This was a blessing in disguise
> Reprieve should have been a blessing
Redundant.
> Jayce loved his paws
> That didn't change the fact that he loved his paws
Redundant.
> Fhnk - squeak - yew"
> He spasmed at the bulbous base that'd been taunting him this whole time was finally rammed inside
You get the impression that Jayce is huge - a true Hispanic Hog. However, this is later rectonned at dog Jayce is later written to only hit the other Jayce's uvula.
> Jayce had never been unloaded in before
I assume that him getting pegged involved a woman, specifically Mel. If Viktor is male he would have just fucked Jayce normally.
> And right now, it was flesh rather than thought in control
That OG sentence didn't need a semicolon.
> Post nut clarity was a depressing affair
You got that right.
> Began rutting into his playmate's throat
> It was as if he was trying to reach the other's brain and directly fuck his playmate's thoughts away
This is a real sentence. It's going into my 'shit fanficcers say' list. It's just too ridiculous to take seriously.
> Phantom limb syndrome was strengthened as Jayce's brain was tricked into believing the dog ears were a natural part of him
This was already discussed a few paragraphs ago. Mentally, he knows he doesn't have dog ears, but is tricked into thinking he has them.
> It stood red hot, never to soften again
I guess they really don't need blood flow to their other limbs, because erections lasting longer than four hours are a problem. I guess the Arcane ensures permanent boners, eh?
> Linking the concept of being a puppy to Jayce's innate praise kink
There's a difference between a praise kink and literally being written as a dog. I don't think the white woman writing this is acutely aware of how racially charged that statement is, lmao.
> Swallowed his counterpart's full length
> Deepthroating his own cock while the puppy fucked his own throat
This makes it sound as if Dog Jayce is deepthroating himself, not Hobo Jayce.
> They were a pair of horny mutts going at it like they were in heat
NOT THE MIXED RACE MEN BEING DESCRIBED AS MUTTSThat's for us racists, only!
> Puppies were too horny to care about much else
I am NOT getting over how the brown men are written to be dogs. I can't. That is just too fucking funny. If Black Arcane Twitter gets ahold of this fic, no amount of white woman tears is going to save this author.
> Any stimuli that didn't involve sex was scorched to white hot fuzz
> Be brown men
> You're written as literal slutty horndogs and explicitly called mutts
> Also described as pups that 'fuck entirely on instinct'
> The author is progressive and probably talks a lot about brown people being victims of systemic racism
Lol. Lmao.
> His playmate's dick hit his uvula
Going by the deepthroating scene, this makes it seem as if Dog Jayce isn't really that big. He should have been farther down his throat vs hitting the uvula.
> Returned stimulation fried his dumb doggie brain
I wonder if the author has tried calling brown men 'dumb doggies'. I don't think it would work as well as she thinks it does here.
> Jayce had been fucked beyond repair
If there's a more fitting statement, I haven't found one.
> He just wanted to be a dump and happy and horny pet again
Again, this is a brown man being made into a dog from a white man. You don't even see this shit with racist memes, ffs.
> Being dumb was way easier
In which a dog fetish author concludes The Bell Curve is real.
> Hextech tail plug
I'm not surprised to see that that is what the tech is used for, or that he can make 'sheaths' out of thin air. ABO ain't got nothing on this; this is really ABO lite, just without the open dog fucking. No alpha males here - we make our own.
Never getting over how Viktor, the white man, is their own. Lay on that race war shit a little thicker, eh? You don't need to tell me white men are the best!
In all seriousness, it is damn funny that this is coming from the mind of progressives, who throw a tantrum if someone as milquetoast as JKR says something they don't like. I don't see many open racists write 7k words about a white man taking two brown men as dogs, do you? It's usually just racial slurs and funny memes. Leave it to progshit white women to blow them all out of the water again.
Viktor is your typical basement dweller who ended up going on this retreat because he wants to psychologically 'destroy' Jayce just for the crime of existing, and proceeds to act like a spiteful mutant from there on out. I am not shocked to read that Singed was Chester the Molester, and that being one reason why Viktor feels sexually inadequate.
We learn that, on dates, Viktor launches into deep web stuff like he's Alex Jones, turning off people who do not share the same interests as him, and being so autistic he can't read the room. No, bud, leaving behind books on 'feminist theory' when the only woman you have around you use as a maid to cook and clean after you is not 'true feminism'. You're just a spoiled, disgusting white boy living in a basement.
> What is he trying to prove?
Good question. It's just irrational hatred at this point.
> His man card will be revoked by a quorum of yoked strangers?
You don't know that. Besides, they might be inspired that a disabled man took the steps and wanted to improve himself. Mentally, though, you are a piece of shit and I can't pity you.
> Under horny circumstances, Viktor puts himself in Heimy's spot, trotting nude in the yard or clambering head first into Jayce's groin
Let me say that I audibly went 'what the fuck' here. This author really wants to paint Jayce as an Andrew Tate or some other intolerable manosphere guru, when this guy wants to act like a dog to earn affection. 'White fags fuck dogs' does has a nice ring to it.
> He doesn't say words like fag or cripple
Careful, you might give yourself another panic attack there. You don't know if he's actually that bad. He's never said anything homophobic, he just said he likes girls - but it is clear he has a bi streak.
> Hair clotted with grease, armpits teeming with noxious bacteria
Fucking disgusting, man. And this man calls himself a feminist?
Buddy, you're the one who smells like fried meat, here. Take a goddamn shower!
> Less repugnant
They're not going to hate you for being disabled. They will hate you because you look and smell like a disgusting bum.
> No hot garbage smell
Funny how that triggers him thinking about it, and not the fact that, you know, he literally smells like hot garbage. Talk about lacking self awareness.
> Viktor will need his consecrated hand for many future auto-diddlings
Please wash your ass.
This author really wants to poke fun at right-wingers and their terminology. It comes off as half-assed, because every fic I've read from these types include Jayce being the muscular, brown-skinned Adonis that they wish they could have, fascist haircut and all. They are not fantasizing about progshits, that's for sure.
> His half Mexican heritage could be dredged up or stashed away depending on the circumstances
Oh, girl wants to play the race game. You are going to lose with that one. Jayce got his height and muscles from his white daddy, because most Mexican men don't reach six feet in height.
> I am a ruthless machine
You had an anxiety attack getting into a taxi, calm down.
Now she wants me to hate Vander, too? C'mon, man! He sounds so sweet! I'd love to attend a barbeque with him.
Now he's accusing the black man of following a script. Why don't you call him a coon while you're at it, Viktor?
> Carcasses and pulverized bullshit, how utterly progressive
You make subtle racist comments and had a black woman fund your trip. I don't want to hear about another progressive waxing about how nice they are when they do this shit.
WASH YOUR FUCKING CLOTHES AND TAKE A SHOWER, YOU FUCKING PIG
I will never take male feminists seriously, especially as Viktor actually relies on Sky to cook, clean, and pay for his shit. All he's missing is her wiping his ass. What an ally. Such a good feminist. Besides, Viktor is gay, and showed no sign of even liking women as people before.
> The crippled fag is here, gentlemen
It's not you being a fag that's the problem. It's you being an unwashed, racist cunt.
I do not like Jayce being written as a dumb himbo here, but in his defense, he did politely ask what Viktor had and was never mean to him. Viktor wants to make this about 'fragmented masculinity' when he's the epitome of toxic masculinity - taking out his rage on others all because they are more successful than him.
> Curse this Neanderthal for being so innately erotic
Yes, calling the mixed race man a Neanderthal is very, very smart.
> Keen sting of malice
The only malicious one is Rictus -yes, he's here - because he calls Viktor a snowflake. He is right, btw. But of course Viktor makes himself look like the victim.
> I'm not about that soy life
You would expect Viktor to know about phyto-estrogens and xenoestrogens, if he's as smart as he claims. That would be one thing he'd agree with, going off of environmental principles.
A white man digging into a half-brown man's innards either invokes a cartel video, or a Tuskegee experiment. Not good optics either way. All this hate on alpha males is also moot, because I know these people love a good ABO when Jayce is the 'born alpha'.
> Dick thickening amount of bravado
I know where that dick-thickening is going in the future HEYO
Oh yeah, I forgot about the meth juice thing. I still don't have Jayce more than Viktor, lmao.
> Rape and public speaking elicit similar biomechanical terror
I fail to see how public speaking elicits the same reaction as a "nonconsensual anal entrance".
> Theiram
The bartender? What'd he do? He never struck me as a misogynist at all.
> I'm here to take you all down
Like an epic snowflake.
> Spaghetti of raw nerves and muscle
...interesting description, there.
> In the Bible somewhere
The Bible was written in a desert setting. They did not have ice baths, genius.
> Alpha male gratitude stance
If this was an ABO fic, no one would be making snarky comments, they would just take it at face value, because we know what biology is in that genre.
The author was not kidding about him being a gooner. I wonder if there will be an epic turnaround.
Vander is right. He needs to eat more protein, not brown rice, and he will better his health (and sperm health!) if he eats better. If Viktor was indeed a 'smarty pants' he would agree, even if personal issues prevent him from doing so. It is very hard to find him a sympathetic person.
If you had a 'superior intellect' you would admit that Vander is right, and would be ranting on about GMOs and whatnot if you're into the deep web. These guys would seriously eat that up.
Rictus being the token homophobic dudebro is not a surprise, even when Rictus does not act like that at all. He's a wall of meat sure, but has respect for anyone willing to put in the work. He'd be the one trying to get him to try new reps, not this.
> If you're not faggots, why do you need an entire week centered around yourselves?
I usually don't like using this term, but Viktor does have a lot of internalized homophobia and insecurity. All-male retreats do not have to be exclusively homosexual; hell, there ARE gay men in them! Gay men have retreats of their own! Not everything has to revolve around gay sex, but sure, bring up the fact you are an insecure homosexual man. You just confirmed Rictus' point, good job.
They wouldn't want to suck that gay dick anyways, because that shit probably hasn't been cleaned in weeks. That smegma must resemble a trailer park trash bag by now.
Jayce is 100% right. I assume this is where Viktor will start to change.
I can't hate Jayce here. I can't. Because he's right, and he's legit trying his best.
> Viktor is justified in the chubbing of his dick
You'll never guess what age he started watching porn.
> Knew he was gay at 3
> Started watching graphic porn at 11
I must say, 'athletic anal' is a helluva line. But the 'prepubscenet boners' raises an eyebrow. You're going to have post modernist commentary and talk nothing about that? OK.
> The bigger the phallus the better
Oh, he likes the big ones, eh? Too bad Jayce is only 8'' in this, while he is at 7''.
Damn, you've got that dog in you too, eh?
> What happened to Viktor's power?
Outside of your 4chan bubble, you didn't have any. Even then, your circles included SJWs and troons who latched onto every word, and then turned against you faster than Idubbz against H3H3.
> He's having a partial allergic reaction, a phallic swelling
Your dick gets hard when you get allergies? OK.
> That is more like a pandemic inducing virus
Sunlight is known to kill viruses thanks to the UV light, but you do you, girl.
And our incel adventure continues. More drama, more self reflection, more faggot dick sucking. Now, let's see the reactions.
Oh, this reminds me: for all this emphasis on how Viktor is a 4chan user, he doesn't talk a lot about memes, pepes, or even soyjacks, aside from doing it during his Twitter war with Jayce. He doesn't make fancy GIFs, he doesn't have any YAAAS KWEEEN moments, he just gets a few ratios and that's it. He can geolocate and can dox, but that's it. He's a basement dweller who doesn't mod, doesn't have FO:NV, doesn't even have Skyrim and plays MTG and C&C and some other popular games - no Final Fantasy XIV? for shame. If he's supposed to be an incel, she got the soyjack part right - but the 'relatable 4chan fucker' isn't there. People are saying this is snippy and well-written and while the writing IS crisp, Viktor really does seem like a weak snowflake. It'll be interesting to see if he gains any muscle and fucks the Chad, which the author swears that he does, and that Jayce is a service top. Hopefully he takes a shower for once.
There were some lengthy comments in this one, and a few locals I reviewed here showed up. Here's regular Cordelia Cordate, accused of accusing other authors of plagiarism:
"These men pretending not to be gay but they're very gay"
"Why do people think gay men are sexualized?"
Here comes a big one:
> Factual statements
Such as? Sky is basically Viktor's maid. What do you think the optics of that are?
> His gender theory
> Uses the sole woman in his life as a maid
Very fitting for a progshit.
And look who showed up...Craig herself:
Another long one, waxing poetic about it:
People are relating to the stinky incel, go figure.
He was watching porn before he got raped, btw. He was watching 'athletic anal' before Salo decided to diddle him.
> He calls them females
What should he call them? Uterus owners? AFABs? We can't use 'women' because that includes males, now.
> Your writing is so authoritarian
...Interesting description, there.
Let's not forget a lil' libshit.
> Mentally I'm immortal
> Is a shitlib
OK, hun.
If Viktor had right-wing politics he would not be loved so much. But because he's a progshit, he can be a stinky gremlin and be loved at the same time. We Respect Women Here...now get the black woman in here and have her clean my ass.
Prose wise, yeah, the fic is good. But I can't take shit like 'fascism haircut' seriously from people who love that shit in their smut. Progshit in the streets, tradwife in the sheets.
Can't forget these two: ladies who love writing alpha male Jayce and small-dick Viktor, while crying about alpha males IRL:
"These men pretending not to be gay but they're very gay"
"Why do people think gay men are sexualized?"
Here comes a big one:
> Factual statements
Such as? Sky is basically Viktor's maid. What do you think the optics of that are?
> His gender theory
> Uses the sole woman in his life as a maid
Very fitting for a progshit.
And look who showed up...Craig herself:
Another long one, waxing poetic about it:
People are relating to the stinky incel, go figure.
He was watching porn before he got raped, btw. He was watching 'athletic anal' before Salo decided to diddle him.
> He calls them females
What should he call them? Uterus owners? AFABs? We can't use 'women' because that includes males, now.
> Your writing is so authoritarian
...Interesting description, there.
Let's not forget a lil' libshit.
> Mentally I'm immortal
> Is a shitlib
OK, hun.
If Viktor had right-wing politics he would not be loved so much. But because he's a progshit, he can be a stinky gremlin and be loved at the same time. We Respect Women Here...now get the black woman in here and have her clean my ass.
Prose wise, yeah, the fic is good. But I can't take shit like 'fascism haircut' seriously from people who love that shit in their smut. Progshit in the streets, tradwife in the sheets.
Can't forget these two: ladies who love writing alpha male Jayce and small-dick Viktor, while crying about alpha males IRL:
Another day, another fic where a brown man is written as a dog - and raped by one pretending to be one. What are these white women trying to tell us? Archive here.
> Purgatory disguised as paradise
You won't know if it's purgatory at first glance. Purgatory is the Grey area between heaven and Hell.
> Jayce couldn't help but think it looked like a tumor
A very fitting description.
> The Viktor before him had embraced his altered body
?? The original one did as well?
> His purple-black skin
This makes me think he's an Enderman.
That's right: this woman made Jayce, the token mutt, into an actual mutt where he wears dog ears and paws, and runs around with a wagging butt plug. His penis is covered by a dog sheath - to give you the full ABO experience - and he has no humanity left. He's literally got the mind of a toddler while acting like a dog.
These are the same people who will tell you that JD Vance is weird.
> There was so little thought behind those eyes
Just as the white man wants it.
I am not getting over the fact that this is a white man who turned a brown man into a literal dog. The fucking optics of that are insane
Yes, if you thought the dog shit was weird...now Jayce is going to get raped by his alternate self, who thinks he is a dog.
> Indenpedence was a foreign, incomprehensible concept
No wonder these people are so scared of the black Kweens of fandom. They can't write a black woman because she gets in the way of her ship, but they can make the brown man a dog because of their kink. Progressive racism is something else.
> Jayce knew he was big, but this hurt
How big IS Jayce here? 8'', or the mythical 12''? Don't tell me the Hispanic Hog got nerfed here of all places.
> He'd been pegged before, it didn't hold a candle to this
...pegged by whom?
> The puppy panted and howled and moaned without restraint
OK so this is basically Furfest without the fur suits. Alt Jayce is a perverted furry rapist, go figure.
Turns out, this rubber toy changes your mental state the more you bite into it. Forget MKULTRA, give this man a chew toy!
> Jayce was actually being broken into a stupid pet
Does this mean Viktor is engaging in bestiality or is it still human sex because the dog-man is a human?
> Allowed his counterpart to fuck him better
Damn, that chew toy really is a miracle worker. Maybe you should bring that back to prevent the GE instead of blasting Viktor in the chest.
> He still understood that his lovely puppy ears were fake
You already wrote this.
> This was a blessing in disguise
> Reprieve should have been a blessing
Redundant.
> Jayce loved his paws
> That didn't change the fact that he loved his paws
Redundant.
> Fhnk - squeak - yew"
> He spasmed at the bulbous base that'd been taunting him this whole time was finally rammed inside
You get the impression that Jayce is huge - a true Hispanic Hog. However, this is later rectonned at dog Jayce is later written to only hit the other Jayce's uvula.
> Jayce had never been unloaded in before
I assume that him getting pegged involved a woman, specifically Mel. If Viktor is male he would have just fucked Jayce normally.
> And right now, it was flesh rather than thought in control
That OG sentence didn't need a semicolon.
> Post nut clarity was a depressing affair
You got that right.
> Began rutting into his playmate's throat
> It was as if he was trying to reach the other's brain and directly fuck his playmate's thoughts away
This is a real sentence. It's going into my 'shit fanficcers say' list. It's just too ridiculous to take seriously.
> Phantom limb syndrome was strengthened as Jayce's brain was tricked into believing the dog ears were a natural part of him
This was already discussed a few paragraphs ago. Mentally, he knows he doesn't have dog ears, but is tricked into thinking he has them.
> It stood red hot, never to soften again
I guess they really don't need blood flow to their other limbs, because erections lasting longer than four hours are a problem. I guess the Arcane ensures permanent boners, eh?
> Linking the concept of being a puppy to Jayce's innate praise kink
There's a difference between a praise kink and literally being written as a dog. I don't think the white woman writing this is acutely aware of how racially charged that statement is, lmao.
> Swallowed his counterpart's full length
> Deepthroating his own cock while the puppy fucked his own throat
This makes it sound as if Dog Jayce is deepthroating himself, not Hobo Jayce.
> They were a pair of horny mutts going at it like they were in heat
NOT THE MIXED RACE MEN BEING DESCRIBED AS MUTTS
That's for us racists, only!> Puppies were too horny to care about much else
I am NOT getting over how the brown men are written to be dogs. I can't. That is just too fucking funny. If Black Arcane Twitter gets ahold of this fic, no amount of white woman tears is going to save this author.
> Any stimuli that didn't involve sex was scorched to white hot fuzz
> Be brown men
> You're written as literal slutty horndogs and explicitly called mutts
> Also described as pups that 'fuck entirely on instinct'
> The author is progressive and probably talks a lot about brown people being victims of systemic racism
Lol. Lmao.
> His playmate's dick hit his uvula
Going by the deepthroating scene, this makes it seem as if Dog Jayce isn't really that big. He should have been farther down his throat vs hitting the uvula.
> Returned stimulation fried his dumb doggie brain
I wonder if the author has tried calling brown men 'dumb doggies'. I don't think it would work as well as she thinks it does here.
> Jayce had been fucked beyond repair
If there's a more fitting statement, I haven't found one.
> He just wanted to be a dump and happy and horny pet again
Again, this is a brown man being made into a dog from a white man. You don't even see this shit with racist memes, ffs.
> Being dumb was way easier
In which a dog fetish author concludes The Bell Curve is real.
> Hextech tail plug
I'm not surprised to see that that is what the tech is used for, or that he can make 'sheaths' out of thin air. ABO ain't got nothing on this; this is really ABO lite, just without the open dog fucking. No alpha males here - we make our own.
Never getting over how Viktor, the white man, is their own. Lay on that race war shit a little thicker, eh? You don't need to tell me white men are the best!
In all seriousness, it is damn funny that this is coming from the mind of progressives, who throw a tantrum if someone as milquetoast as JKR says something they don't like. I don't see many open racists write 7k words about a white man taking two brown men as dogs, do you? It's usually just racial slurs and funny memes. Leave it to progshit white women to blow them all out of the water again.
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And LoL fics can get just as depraved as Arcane fics, this example includes Seraphine and several Yordles with shit, with a lot of text being put into way too large of paragraphs:
This comment for this fic says it all:
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This comment for this fic says it all:
After a long and exhausting concert, Seraphine walked outside of the stadium, holding a bottle of water, and making her way back to her trailer. “Jeez, even after 3 years in the business and being 20, I still get so exhausted with these performances.” Seraphine sighed, walking briskly as her juicy thighs jiggle and her wide hips sway. But, just a couple feet in front of her trailer door, a small purple thing pops out from the shadows. “Seraphine!!!” The purple figure shouts out, startling Seraphine as her bottle of water drops from her hands. “Ah! S-sorry! I didn’t mean to startle you like that!” The now visible Yordle apologies, grabbing the bottle off the ground and handing it back to Seraphine. “I-It’s fine.” Seraphine says as she grabs the bottle, then notices that the small Yordle is very cute. “What’s your name?” “ME?! I-I’m Lulu! I’m a huuuge fan of yours! I’ve been following you since your debut, your collaboration with KDA, and I think you're the best artist of this generation! I should know, I’ve seen many artists in the past 300 years, but none as good as you!” “Aw, you flatter me too much.” Seraphine giggled, now getting a better look at the small Yordle, seeing that she is wearing an oversized shirt, the exact one sold for this tour. Along with a pink beanie. The more she looked at Lulu, the more her lust grew. “Say, do you wanna see the inside of my trailer?” “What?! Of course I would!” Lulu beamed ecstatically as Seraphine opened up the door, allowing Lulu to step inside.
She looked around to find various lights draped in the cozy, pastel colored trailer, along with various plushies. “I love the look! It’s super cute!” “Thank you, I do love cute things.” Seraphine grinned behind Lulu, closing and locking the door, then dropping her panties. “Man, this place even has a big bed too! It looks super comfy! I bet it’s as soft as a cloud.” “It sure is.” Seraphine moans, reaching down to her crotch as she pulls out her penis from her ass, allowing the foot long flopper to swing out, finally free along with her baseball sized testicles, all covered in anal lube. “Wanna get on it together?” “Get on it with you?” Lulu looked puzzled, turning around before then seeing the foot-long cock dripping and dangling between Seraphine’s plump thighs. “Y-your a futa?” Lulu stuttered, eyes locked onto the penis. “Yes I am. And, as you already know, I looove cute things.” Lulu looked up to find a pair of eyes lustfully gazing down at her. Lulu stood still as Seraphine’s hands reached down, grabbing her, lifting her up, and laying her down onto the bed. “I-I want you to know that while I would l-love to have sex with you… I’ve never done it before.” Lulu stammered, blushing as Seraphine removed her oversized shirt and tiny shorts. “It’s fine, I love doing it with virgins. I’ll introduce you to lots of awesome stuff.” Seraphine said as she removed her own clothes, pausing as the two were finally naked. Seraphine stared at the tiny purple Yordle below, blushing while the tiny thing stared back at her and her large cock. Seraphine grabbed her big monster penis and flopped in onto Lulu, just as long as her whole torso. “Can you rub it for me?” Seraphine asked with a kind and gentle tone. Lulu nodded, gently stroking the cock up and down with her arms, even licking the tip with her tiny tongue. “Mmm, that’s nice. I love your idea.” Seraphine moaned as her cock grew longer and longer, soon enough, the tip passed Lulu’s lips, moved to her nose, passed her brows, and finally a good couple inches above her head as Seraphine’s cock had grown to 3 feet long. It was also thicker, and far hotter. “I-It’s so big.” Lulu trembled under the massive monster cock.
“Yes. But don’t worry, it won’t hurt.” Seraphine pulled her cock back, standing on her knees as she bent the massive monster, pointing towards Lulu’s asshole. “A-are you sure? I’m a little scared.” Lulu shivered. “Don’t worry. It’ll be fine. I’ll start off slow, ok?” Seraphine waited until Lulu nodded, leading Seraphine to slowly push the thick tip inside of Lulu’s tiny, tight, asshole. With a pop, it was in. “Ah!” Lulu moaned as her body jerked. “Feels nice huh?” Seraphine giggled, enjoying Lulu’s face melt with pleasure. “Y-yesh.” She responded. “Oh gosh, you're getting me all hot.” Seraphine moaned, pushing in more as her monster cock created a large bulge in Lulu’s belly, slowly moving up more and more. Seraphine wanted to take it slow, but she couldn’t help herself. “Lulu, am I correct that Yordles don’t breathe?” “H-huh? Y-yeah. We don’t breathe, our mouths are only for eating and ta-” Before Lulu could finish her response, she felt a large object stuffed inside, something that originated from her belly, and from her ass. Lulu was shocked to see Seraphine with hearts in her eyes, heavy breathing, and the gaze of a sexual predator. Before Lulu could fully process what was happening, Seraphine shoved her entire cock into Lulu, her hips clapped with Lulu’s butt as the tip of Seraphine’s predatory penis popped out of Lulu’s mouth, spit roasting the little Yordle. Lulu’s whole body was filled with a strangle tingle as her whole body shook due to the immense pleasure experienced by her first orgasm during sex. “Oooh? A full body orgasm? You really must be enjoying this!” Seraphine moaned, pulling her cock 6 inches back before pushing it forward quickly. “I assume that means I can go all out. Well, I would still do it even if you didn’t want me to.” Seraphine’s hips moved with incredible speed as she used Lulu like an Onahole, grabbing onto her tiny body while using every inch of her insides to pleasure her long penis. “Oooh! You're so tight and wet!” Seraphine screamed, shaking the entire trailer as Lulu continued to have orgasim after orgasim, each one turning Lulu’s brain into goo, unable to process any words inside to describe her experience or thoughts, just raw electric pleasure.
Finally, Seraphine held Lulu to the base of her penis as she came out fat and thick ropes of cum, her large balls clenched as Seraphine painted her plushies, bed, and trailer walls with her vicious cum. Holding onto Lulu tightly as her penis cream spurted out. After a good half minute of uninterpreted cumming, Seraphine finally stopped, pulling out her still erect penis out from Lulu’s limp body. Huffing and puffing, Seraphine asked Lulu, “How was it?” “...M-magical.” Lulu smiled. “Good to know, but we aren’t stopping anytime soon.” Lulu liked the sound of that, although she was puzzled when Seraphine got onto her back as well as Lulu and pressed her puffy asshole to Lulu’s tiny asshole. “This might be a bit gross, but… ah whatever! I think you’ll enjoy it as much as me!” Seraphine smiled, holding her 2 foot penis to the side, flopped onto her body. “Huh?” Lulu, still puzzled, then saw Seraphine’s face twist, the same face you make while trying to push out a massive dump, but mixed with a smile and arousal. Lulu understood what was happening as soon as she felt Seraphine’s puffy asshole stretch and something soft and warm pressed Lulu’s asshole. “Oooh.” Lulu responded with an aroused smile. Beforehand, she would have easily said no to such sex, even if it meant Seraphine not taking her virginity. But, now that Lulu experienced sex, she was willing to try anything, especially if it was with Seraphine. So, Lulu willingly accepted Seraphine’s massive turd as it penetrated Lulu’s butthole, stretching out her insides with it’s massive girth. More importantly, it was far thicker than Seraphine’s cock. Lulu felt her hips widen, growing larger to accommodate the thickness of Seraphine’s turd. Slowly, it moved it’s way up, thickening Lulu’s body until it finally made it’s way to her throat, stretching it out to be the same width as the rest of her body, then popping out Lulu’s mouth, leaving her mouth gaping as wide as her anus. Just as she expected the turd was just as long as Seraphine’s cock, but possibly even longer. Lulu was now twice as thick as she was beforehand, hell the turd was just slightly thicker than Seraphine’s torso. With such a massive and thick turd, Lulu was curious what she was gonna do. Then, Seraphine moaned, sucking the turd back into her ass just a couple of inches, then pausing for a brief moment before pushing it out once more, then sucking in, pushing out. Back and forth, back and forth with increasing speed. Seraphine’s moans grew louder and louder as she turd fucked Lulu’s tiny elastic body, absolutely smashing her prostate in the process. To increase the pleasure further, Seraphine took her 2 foot long cock and bent it so the tip would touch her lips, she kissed the pisshole before then sucking on the tip, swallowing it whole as her cock went down her throat. Seraphine moved her head forward, fully swallowing her cock to the base, even hooking her legs behind her torso to help pull her down, the cock was twisted inside of her stomach, bloating her belly with strange long and twisting bumps. Finally, Seraphine started to move her top half with the help of her legs, giving herself a deep throat of her own cock, rubbing the monster penis with the insides of her mouth, throat, stomach and even the sides of itself as it coiled inside. On top of shit fucking Lulu and herself, Seraphine was having the greatest time of her life. Never before had sex been so good until now, filled with lust and energy, Seraphine went to town. Aggressively and rapidly sucking herself and shit fucking Lulu with incredible speed, causing two muffled moans to echo in the trailer, continuing for a good 10 minutes before Seraphine and Lulu came at the same time. A large flood of thick gooey cum flooded Seraphine’s stomach, bloating the futa’s belly to an incredible size, still keeping her cock inside of her as the belly squished and expanded to the sides, while also letting all of her shit out, shitting through Lulu’s body as her long and thick continuous brown log coiled and pilled up onto her bed and plushies.
After 1 minute of continuous cumming, Seraphine pulled her cock out from her mouth and Lulu pinched off the last bit of Seraphine’s shit with her mouth, gulping it down. Seraphine was incredibly bloated, her belly was big enough to hold two people, spilling out to her sides with a cock covered in cum, while Lulu’s body was still stretched out in width, a bit of poo sticking out of her ass and a large thick throat tapering off to it’s real width right below her head. “That was.. Incredible.” Seraphine giggled. “I agree.” Lulu replied, patting her stuffed body. “It was gross, but I loved it.”
Seraphine tried to lift her body up, but her large belly was too big. “You know, if ya wanna, you can join me on my tour. Or, stick with me even longer.” “Really?!” Lulu sat up in excitement “You’d really let me tag along?!” “Of course, I always wanted a cute Yordle sex toy with me. And if you’re ok with it, I was thinking of trying to get even more Yordles to join us.” “Of course! The more the merrier! And I know just where you can find more Yordles.” Lulu giggled.
10 minutes later, Vex, Poppy, and Tristana are standing outside of Seraphine’s trailer. “Is this… actually Seraphine's trailer?” Tristana asked, looking over Poppy’s shoulder and her phone. “Sure seems like it.” Vex replied. “I sure as hell wanna find out.” She said while reaching up at the door, knocking. “Come in!” Seraphine shouted out. They all gasped and said in unison “Seraphine!” and opened up the door, rushing into a new life none of them would have anticipated.
She looked around to find various lights draped in the cozy, pastel colored trailer, along with various plushies. “I love the look! It’s super cute!” “Thank you, I do love cute things.” Seraphine grinned behind Lulu, closing and locking the door, then dropping her panties. “Man, this place even has a big bed too! It looks super comfy! I bet it’s as soft as a cloud.” “It sure is.” Seraphine moans, reaching down to her crotch as she pulls out her penis from her ass, allowing the foot long flopper to swing out, finally free along with her baseball sized testicles, all covered in anal lube. “Wanna get on it together?” “Get on it with you?” Lulu looked puzzled, turning around before then seeing the foot-long cock dripping and dangling between Seraphine’s plump thighs. “Y-your a futa?” Lulu stuttered, eyes locked onto the penis. “Yes I am. And, as you already know, I looove cute things.” Lulu looked up to find a pair of eyes lustfully gazing down at her. Lulu stood still as Seraphine’s hands reached down, grabbing her, lifting her up, and laying her down onto the bed. “I-I want you to know that while I would l-love to have sex with you… I’ve never done it before.” Lulu stammered, blushing as Seraphine removed her oversized shirt and tiny shorts. “It’s fine, I love doing it with virgins. I’ll introduce you to lots of awesome stuff.” Seraphine said as she removed her own clothes, pausing as the two were finally naked. Seraphine stared at the tiny purple Yordle below, blushing while the tiny thing stared back at her and her large cock. Seraphine grabbed her big monster penis and flopped in onto Lulu, just as long as her whole torso. “Can you rub it for me?” Seraphine asked with a kind and gentle tone. Lulu nodded, gently stroking the cock up and down with her arms, even licking the tip with her tiny tongue. “Mmm, that’s nice. I love your idea.” Seraphine moaned as her cock grew longer and longer, soon enough, the tip passed Lulu’s lips, moved to her nose, passed her brows, and finally a good couple inches above her head as Seraphine’s cock had grown to 3 feet long. It was also thicker, and far hotter. “I-It’s so big.” Lulu trembled under the massive monster cock.
“Yes. But don’t worry, it won’t hurt.” Seraphine pulled her cock back, standing on her knees as she bent the massive monster, pointing towards Lulu’s asshole. “A-are you sure? I’m a little scared.” Lulu shivered. “Don’t worry. It’ll be fine. I’ll start off slow, ok?” Seraphine waited until Lulu nodded, leading Seraphine to slowly push the thick tip inside of Lulu’s tiny, tight, asshole. With a pop, it was in. “Ah!” Lulu moaned as her body jerked. “Feels nice huh?” Seraphine giggled, enjoying Lulu’s face melt with pleasure. “Y-yesh.” She responded. “Oh gosh, you're getting me all hot.” Seraphine moaned, pushing in more as her monster cock created a large bulge in Lulu’s belly, slowly moving up more and more. Seraphine wanted to take it slow, but she couldn’t help herself. “Lulu, am I correct that Yordles don’t breathe?” “H-huh? Y-yeah. We don’t breathe, our mouths are only for eating and ta-” Before Lulu could finish her response, she felt a large object stuffed inside, something that originated from her belly, and from her ass. Lulu was shocked to see Seraphine with hearts in her eyes, heavy breathing, and the gaze of a sexual predator. Before Lulu could fully process what was happening, Seraphine shoved her entire cock into Lulu, her hips clapped with Lulu’s butt as the tip of Seraphine’s predatory penis popped out of Lulu’s mouth, spit roasting the little Yordle. Lulu’s whole body was filled with a strangle tingle as her whole body shook due to the immense pleasure experienced by her first orgasm during sex. “Oooh? A full body orgasm? You really must be enjoying this!” Seraphine moaned, pulling her cock 6 inches back before pushing it forward quickly. “I assume that means I can go all out. Well, I would still do it even if you didn’t want me to.” Seraphine’s hips moved with incredible speed as she used Lulu like an Onahole, grabbing onto her tiny body while using every inch of her insides to pleasure her long penis. “Oooh! You're so tight and wet!” Seraphine screamed, shaking the entire trailer as Lulu continued to have orgasim after orgasim, each one turning Lulu’s brain into goo, unable to process any words inside to describe her experience or thoughts, just raw electric pleasure.
Finally, Seraphine held Lulu to the base of her penis as she came out fat and thick ropes of cum, her large balls clenched as Seraphine painted her plushies, bed, and trailer walls with her vicious cum. Holding onto Lulu tightly as her penis cream spurted out. After a good half minute of uninterpreted cumming, Seraphine finally stopped, pulling out her still erect penis out from Lulu’s limp body. Huffing and puffing, Seraphine asked Lulu, “How was it?” “...M-magical.” Lulu smiled. “Good to know, but we aren’t stopping anytime soon.” Lulu liked the sound of that, although she was puzzled when Seraphine got onto her back as well as Lulu and pressed her puffy asshole to Lulu’s tiny asshole. “This might be a bit gross, but… ah whatever! I think you’ll enjoy it as much as me!” Seraphine smiled, holding her 2 foot penis to the side, flopped onto her body. “Huh?” Lulu, still puzzled, then saw Seraphine’s face twist, the same face you make while trying to push out a massive dump, but mixed with a smile and arousal. Lulu understood what was happening as soon as she felt Seraphine’s puffy asshole stretch and something soft and warm pressed Lulu’s asshole. “Oooh.” Lulu responded with an aroused smile. Beforehand, she would have easily said no to such sex, even if it meant Seraphine not taking her virginity. But, now that Lulu experienced sex, she was willing to try anything, especially if it was with Seraphine. So, Lulu willingly accepted Seraphine’s massive turd as it penetrated Lulu’s butthole, stretching out her insides with it’s massive girth. More importantly, it was far thicker than Seraphine’s cock. Lulu felt her hips widen, growing larger to accommodate the thickness of Seraphine’s turd. Slowly, it moved it’s way up, thickening Lulu’s body until it finally made it’s way to her throat, stretching it out to be the same width as the rest of her body, then popping out Lulu’s mouth, leaving her mouth gaping as wide as her anus. Just as she expected the turd was just as long as Seraphine’s cock, but possibly even longer. Lulu was now twice as thick as she was beforehand, hell the turd was just slightly thicker than Seraphine’s torso. With such a massive and thick turd, Lulu was curious what she was gonna do. Then, Seraphine moaned, sucking the turd back into her ass just a couple of inches, then pausing for a brief moment before pushing it out once more, then sucking in, pushing out. Back and forth, back and forth with increasing speed. Seraphine’s moans grew louder and louder as she turd fucked Lulu’s tiny elastic body, absolutely smashing her prostate in the process. To increase the pleasure further, Seraphine took her 2 foot long cock and bent it so the tip would touch her lips, she kissed the pisshole before then sucking on the tip, swallowing it whole as her cock went down her throat. Seraphine moved her head forward, fully swallowing her cock to the base, even hooking her legs behind her torso to help pull her down, the cock was twisted inside of her stomach, bloating her belly with strange long and twisting bumps. Finally, Seraphine started to move her top half with the help of her legs, giving herself a deep throat of her own cock, rubbing the monster penis with the insides of her mouth, throat, stomach and even the sides of itself as it coiled inside. On top of shit fucking Lulu and herself, Seraphine was having the greatest time of her life. Never before had sex been so good until now, filled with lust and energy, Seraphine went to town. Aggressively and rapidly sucking herself and shit fucking Lulu with incredible speed, causing two muffled moans to echo in the trailer, continuing for a good 10 minutes before Seraphine and Lulu came at the same time. A large flood of thick gooey cum flooded Seraphine’s stomach, bloating the futa’s belly to an incredible size, still keeping her cock inside of her as the belly squished and expanded to the sides, while also letting all of her shit out, shitting through Lulu’s body as her long and thick continuous brown log coiled and pilled up onto her bed and plushies.
After 1 minute of continuous cumming, Seraphine pulled her cock out from her mouth and Lulu pinched off the last bit of Seraphine’s shit with her mouth, gulping it down. Seraphine was incredibly bloated, her belly was big enough to hold two people, spilling out to her sides with a cock covered in cum, while Lulu’s body was still stretched out in width, a bit of poo sticking out of her ass and a large thick throat tapering off to it’s real width right below her head. “That was.. Incredible.” Seraphine giggled. “I agree.” Lulu replied, patting her stuffed body. “It was gross, but I loved it.”
Seraphine tried to lift her body up, but her large belly was too big. “You know, if ya wanna, you can join me on my tour. Or, stick with me even longer.” “Really?!” Lulu sat up in excitement “You’d really let me tag along?!” “Of course, I always wanted a cute Yordle sex toy with me. And if you’re ok with it, I was thinking of trying to get even more Yordles to join us.” “Of course! The more the merrier! And I know just where you can find more Yordles.” Lulu giggled.
10 minutes later, Vex, Poppy, and Tristana are standing outside of Seraphine’s trailer. “Is this… actually Seraphine's trailer?” Tristana asked, looking over Poppy’s shoulder and her phone. “Sure seems like it.” Vex replied. “I sure as hell wanna find out.” She said while reaching up at the door, knocking. “Come in!” Seraphine shouted out. They all gasped and said in unison “Seraphine!” and opened up the door, rushing into a new life none of them would have anticipated.
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This 'help me step bro' style sexual SNAFU doesn't involve washing machines, sorry.
If it can fit him, then it should be able to fit a pooner. Turns out, all their slamming and punching the panels ends up working it loose, leading to the sexual SNAFU later.
I really have to wonder why they'd leave wires exposed like that, let alone walk around with a full jug of coffee. I get that Jayce can be a ditz sometimes, but he's not that stupid. He seems the type to use a Stanley cup before flimsy paper lids.
> Slapstick comedy-like
In the business we call this foreshadowing.
That equipment is bought and paid for by someone else - their investors. Seeing them trash their own shit, ruin their materials and leave them to rot and rust is really irresponsible. What is funny is that Viktor is neater of the two of them; his lab space is impeccable, and Jayce is the scatterbrained one.
> It's loose on him despite tightening to the last hole
Hips don't lie. It manages to fit you snugly because you have female hips. Sexual dimorphism doesn't go away with T, shocker.
> The widest point of his body
His shoulders are going to be as wide as his hips, thanks to his female frame. He's not going to have the triangle shape of a man.
How the fuck can you forget about a toolbelt around your waist? The weight, if anything, is going to give it away, and if you knew it was such a tight fit - why didn't you take it off first and just slide the damn thing through the hole first?
> Humiliation of Jayce finding him in such a state
> His face heats up at the thought
Turns out, it's not humiliation. It's a sexual thrill. Oh, and he gets 'humiliated' twice.
> The annoyed tone when the other man would inevitably say, 'I told you so'
> Bracing himself for the lecture
You already wrote that.
> The lecture is nigh
See point above.
I can think of something else that is going to snap him in half HEYO
And here begins the 'help me step bro' smut. Of course Jayce is not going to use his actuals strength - that will be for the fucking. He's going to work out all the kinks, if you know what I mean.
> The humiliation of being spanked of all things hurts more than the smacks themselves
I guess it's more humiliating than the lecture you expected to get, eh? You're just getting a more...physical, hands-on punishment.
> The shame flares more viciously
> He wants this, enjoys every strike riding a fine line between pain and pleasure
1. Then it really isn't shame you're feeling, just embarrassment, and 2. Cliché.
> The thought of being caught and put in his place
Then it isn't shame. It's a kink.
> Slow working acid, takes him apart brick by brick
I don't think of bricks when I think of acid. I think of dissolving flesh, but you do you with your malapropism.
> Only knows that Jayce is purposeful in his method to keep Viktor on the edge
*He only knows
> When Jayce's hand makes contact squarely against his cunt
This comes from mainstream porn and I fail to see how that is pleasurable. Your labial skin, while thicker than scrotal skin, is still sensitive and should not be a victim of a full-bore slap. That can cause injury. T or not, trans Viktor is not superhuman. Getting a bruise on your nether regions is not fun.
> Aching channel
> Viktor's hole
At this point, I'd rather take 'channel' over 'hole', because it doesn't sound as lifeless as the latter.
> It's as if he's a toy for Jayce's amusement, a crude science experiment
I read this a lot, along with the 'his hands were so large his thumbs met in the middle', and it is something when it's always the trans man described like this. Oh, you're just a hole for the penis haver? A useless sex toy? A cock sleeve? Do explain your methods.
> Massaging relentlessly with the strokes of his cock
...whose? Oh, you mean that roid clit? That's what happens when you use male terms for female genitalia: I get confused as to who has the dick.
> Forcing back age old ghosts that never quite left
Oh? Do tell. Do I sense some lingering trauma there?
> Sheaths himself to the hilt
Cliché, but whatever, it works. I don't know how large our Hispanic Hog is, but he's definitely in the thick department, and has to use lube because our boy did NOT play the pussy eating game this time around. Usually Viktor is so wet he could put out bush fires.
> Keeps Viktor nice and open like a perfect little cocksleeve
I see this a lot too. Funny how it's the trans man described as a cocksleeve, and never the man.
> Maybe Viktor is as good as a hole
See point above.
> So deep that Viktor feels as if his insides are being shifted, over and over, unhurried but demading
So are we getting a belly bulge or not? I gotta now if this is our 12'' horse cock Hog or not.
> Split open on Jayce's dick
Like a rotisserie chicken.
> Would you let them have their way with you? Like this?
Their lab is private, so I doubt anyone aside from Harold the Enforcer is going to know Viktor is stuck. The gangbang rape fantasy you're conjuring up just wouldn't happen.
> His neglected cock
Come on, now. You have that roid clit, and a true cock that 'rearranges his insides'.
> But never far
This does not make sense.
> Familiar coiling in his gut
That makes this the second time it's happened.
> If he's frying the internal components with the humidity and temperature
...with your body heat? Boy, you have more to worry about with all that sweat and ejaculate ruining shit. Imagine finding sticky cum on your circuits.
> Gushing around Jayce's thick length
I guess we won't be getting any measurements this time around
> Deep enough it's as if he's carving his shape into Viktor
Add this line to 'his hands were so big they met in the middle'. I first saw it in that Knight AU, now I'm seeing it more often. It just makes me think that Viktor is physically turning into the shape of Jayce's dick, like a Wacky Wobbly Inflatable Tube Man.
> So much fluid combined that it dribbles out of Viktor's entrances and joins the mess on his thighs
These authors don't know how much sperm men produce, so they just go the hentai route and make it seem like men can squirt sperm like a broken ice cream machine. You'd think they produce half a litre with how much emphasis they put on it.
> He recognized the length and girth of the thing all too well
Hextech strikes again!
Great! He has a living dildo that can do the job Jayce cannot! He's really putting a Mexican out of work out here, isn't he?
> Had gaped at Viktor and turned tomato red
I can think of something else that's gaping, HEYO
So he can take off his shirt and tie while being in such a tight spot, yet couldn't think to shuck off the belt first? Retard.
> Fucked out confusion
OK, I like this line, both for its absurdity and straightforwardness.
> Nuzzling the window of muscle
Excuse me you're nuzzling a fascist Chad right there, you should read some gender theory.
> Ring of muscle stretched taut around it
Sorry, no in-depth description of how large Jayce is. Next time, maybe.
> Strands of white dripping onto Jayce's fingers
I am once again reminded of xenomorph eggs.
> Already missing being plugged, being fucked
Just like a Thanksgiving turkey, eh?
> Like a tempest
> Keeping Viktor in the eye of his storm
The eye of the storm is the 'calmest' part. The two terms, while related, are contradictory in nature.
> Slapping wetly against Viktor's folds
Sorry, still no Hispanic Hog, XXXL edition.
> Filled properly at last with Jayce
?? He was fucking you earlier. Were you not filled properly then?
> It's character breaking
He was already breaking character when he was acting concerned and anxious. I don't know why the author had trigger warnings when it is clear they are playing and Jayce is not cruel. I can tell when he's 'into the moment' vs being an actual rapist, like that one where he rapes 12 year old Viktor. He's irredeemable there.
> But for Viktor's pleasure
Ah, glad he isn't using the pooner as a cocksleeve anymore.
> Folding him in half
I am glad his disability no longer exists when it comes to sex positions. He seems to bend and mold like silly putty with no kinks (hehe) whatsoever.
> Fluids spilling forth and soaking the sheets beneath them
Damn, they really do need to fight bush fires. Send 'em to Australia.
> Comically high pitch
Why am I reminded of a chicken?
> Like a fucking machine?
Ohhhhh are we getting a sequel? I've seen a few of those. Hextech strap-ons, Hextech fleshlights, now this. Hextech fucking machines would add to the repertoire of 'fucked up, but somehow someone would do it' activities.
Hey, they'd make a lot of money. Viktor could make himself his own vibrating neo-phallus with glowing lights while he's at it, just to add to the immersion. I'll take it over rapist Jayce any day. Give me some more cringeworthy, humorous pooner fics than the abominable shit I've been finding lately. It at least gives me a chuckle vs making me MATI.
Strap on, strap off in this spicy T4T tale, where 90% of one's brain is dedicated to fucking (yes, that's a real line).
> If he'd been born with different anatomy, he probably wouldn't be able to leave the house
And you'd actually be able to fuck Viktor at the market, vs rut into him with a packer or your 2 inch roid clit.
> He'd also rolled his eyes
I would too. All that talk about sex and fucking him with his strap and the first thing he thinks about is wishing it was the real thing. All that for a glorified lesbian bed death? No thank you.
> He genuinely didn't think he'd been this consistently horny since he first started testosterone
True, testosterone does increase their sex drive. It also causes vaginal atrophy after a few years, but none of them talk about that. It'd ruin the fantasy.
> Did he know it was because 90% of Jayce's brain power was dedicated to thoughts of fucking him, though?
I told you this was a real line. T might make you horny, but it still only gives you two inches to work with. You're crushing fantasies, not fulfilling them.
> Objectifying, or something
> Based on nothing less than undying love and affection
Those are the most female-typical fantasies I've ever seen. Even with all that T-addled horniness, all you can think about are vanilla fantasies of love and touch. Meanwhile men will think about fucking 2B dolls out here.
> Every brush of the seam of his pants against his cock was blissfully torturous
Guess that 'bottom growth' really did spring out of nowhere, eh?
> Finishing that sentence would surely only make him sound more pathetic
Indeed it would. You want to fuck Viktor instead of going to a concert, and don't even have the parts to do it. How pathetic.
> His dick was more than on board with each and every one of them
And yet, it can't be on board with penetration because it's only a meager two inches.
What is fucking throbbing, your heartrate? It's not even long enough to have a dorsal vein.
That would be nice - if you actually had a penis that could do the job, instead of being a 'lovesick idiot' whose fantasies don't even involve actual sex. The pooner has to use a PACKER, for fuck's sake, and has to pretend that a strap-on is an actual penis. Are we sure this is smut, or self-flagellation?
> Was there enough blood left outside of his groin to blush with
Yeah, because there is only two inches of growth down there. Your vulva is not going to use as much blood. Forget fainting - you wouldn't even break a sweat.
> Viktor would never be leaving his bed again
He'd probably be wishing for an actual dicking soon enough, or a Hextech-powered dildo that can feel like the real thing. Bed death is real.
> Breasts
Oh, he didn't get the zippertit surgery? Interesting.
> See the exact movements of his fingers behind his packer
They're BOTH wearing them? All that work just for a flimsy bit of silicone so they can stand to pee and not get dysphoria. When pooners start writing shit like this, it becomes less of a smut, and more of a 'woe is me, I'm a man but I also wish I had a real dick' journal entry.
> Jayce was so fucking hard
With what?
> Down to nothing but his own briefs and packer
But are the packers race-matched?Can't get the wrong race of penis. Are the darker skinned ones larger?
>It made him feel even more like he was playing pretend, like the line between himself and manhood was more solid than ever
If you are 'playing pretend', then the line is a solid wall that can't be knocked down or jumped over. You feel insecure because you were born with the wrong genitalia, and this is the 'closest' you can get without having a complete mental breakdown.
Never thought there'd be a psychological reading in this, but hey, lil pooner brought up the dysphoria first.
> Viktor's cock
> Circling it with two fingers
You should have stuck with the packers.
> I want to come with your cock inside me
And it's flesh-coloured, to boot!
> Did Viktor take that from one of the smut books that Jayce recently read
1. Get it, they're breaking the 4th wall by letting you know this isn't your basic bitch smut fic; 2. It's usually women who read smut, men just watch porn. Nice job outing yourself as a woman there, dood.
> He'd always thought such a line would be corny
This is a shitty attempt at lampshading, a way for the author to say, 'Hey, MY work isn't corny, that booktok shit is!' while writing booktok slop, trans edition. Don't push yourself as better when the evidence says otherwise.
Very nice to know the dildo matches his race and skin tone, and how pooners find the fleshiness 'off putting' because it reminds them of what they lack. It is not the Hispanic Hog dildo (or cock) we all know by now, but a meager, dutiful thing that probably sits around 6 inches, maybe smaller, if the 'emasculation' thing is true. Pooners think that having the biggest dick makes them the bigger man, because it will give them the masculinity they do not have.
> As it turned out, having control over something you couldn't technically feel was much more difficult when there was more of it
You mean the dildo size? It'd be more difficult if it was bigger? You don't say.
> Accidentally slipping out of his partner
Lol. Lmao. That happened once, long ago, when a pooner decided to do anal penetration with their 2 inch roid clit. Shit was hilarious.
> If he didn't look at it, he could convince himself it was real
That's depressing in hindsight. Lil dood wishes she had a real dick, gets a race-accurate dildo, and has to look away when their partner touches it because if they see it, they are reminded that it isn't the real thing. Damn, who knew this could be so Freudian?
> You have lube
> He was soaked
If the dildo isn't that large, why do you need lube at all?
> Easily taking him all the way to the base
Well, yeah. This isn't the Hispanic Hog, or the Alpha Male dog dick edition. It's just a normal sized dildo, that apparently needs a lot of lube. Clearly it identifies as large.
> He may not have been able to physically feel what he was sure was the divine heat of Viktor wrapped around him
How depressing.
> He wouldn't be able to keep this pace up forever
> His long hours of the forge definitely had their benefits
So can he keep up the pace, or not? These are contradictory sentences.
Fucking hell, it's THAT. FUCKING. LINE. How many times do I need to read it? A thousand times? Guess it will be a thousand times, then.
> Immediately distracted by Viktor's tits
> The way they bounced with each thrust was hypnotic
I assume he's got a carpet of hair up there due to the T. Who needs 'top surgery' when you can just coat them like a yeti's fur?
> He didn't have much bottom growth
And you still want to call it a cock anyways, even during the fics where Jayce is a monstrous size.
> His own overwhelming arousal
Which you can't satisfy, btw. Despite all that horniness, your outlets are entirely synthetic.
> He felt like fucking a livewire
Do bad you can't fuck like one.
> The sensation dull but intimate nonetheless
Figures he has no nerves due to the zippertit scars.
> He was painfully hard
Lmao. With what? 3 inches of growth? A metoidioplasty? Do tell.
> Taking his cock between his knuckles
Guess it isn't that big, then.
It was still boring as fuck. I didn't expect such self-pity.
A happy ending for a borefest. Why do pooner insist on projecting their insecurities over not having male genitalia in these fics? If I wanted to read a pooner crying about dildos being too 'flesh like' and 'playing pretend' with them, I'd read their confessions on Reddit. It's hard to take anything seriously when they complain that a small piece of silicone 'emasculates' them because it isn't large enough. Did the author want people to rub one out, or whine that they 'feel the same way'?
If it can fit him, then it should be able to fit a pooner. Turns out, all their slamming and punching the panels ends up working it loose, leading to the sexual SNAFU later.
I really have to wonder why they'd leave wires exposed like that, let alone walk around with a full jug of coffee. I get that Jayce can be a ditz sometimes, but he's not that stupid. He seems the type to use a Stanley cup before flimsy paper lids.
> Slapstick comedy-like
In the business we call this foreshadowing.
That equipment is bought and paid for by someone else - their investors. Seeing them trash their own shit, ruin their materials and leave them to rot and rust is really irresponsible. What is funny is that Viktor is neater of the two of them; his lab space is impeccable, and Jayce is the scatterbrained one.
> It's loose on him despite tightening to the last hole
Hips don't lie. It manages to fit you snugly because you have female hips. Sexual dimorphism doesn't go away with T, shocker.
> The widest point of his body
His shoulders are going to be as wide as his hips, thanks to his female frame. He's not going to have the triangle shape of a man.
How the fuck can you forget about a toolbelt around your waist? The weight, if anything, is going to give it away, and if you knew it was such a tight fit - why didn't you take it off first and just slide the damn thing through the hole first?
> Humiliation of Jayce finding him in such a state
> His face heats up at the thought
Turns out, it's not humiliation. It's a sexual thrill. Oh, and he gets 'humiliated' twice.
> The annoyed tone when the other man would inevitably say, 'I told you so'
> Bracing himself for the lecture
You already wrote that.
> The lecture is nigh
See point above.
I can think of something else that is going to snap him in half HEYO
And here begins the 'help me step bro' smut. Of course Jayce is not going to use his actuals strength - that will be for the fucking. He's going to work out all the kinks, if you know what I mean.
> The humiliation of being spanked of all things hurts more than the smacks themselves
I guess it's more humiliating than the lecture you expected to get, eh? You're just getting a more...physical, hands-on punishment.
> The shame flares more viciously
> He wants this, enjoys every strike riding a fine line between pain and pleasure
1. Then it really isn't shame you're feeling, just embarrassment, and 2. Cliché.
> The thought of being caught and put in his place
Then it isn't shame. It's a kink.
> Slow working acid, takes him apart brick by brick
I don't think of bricks when I think of acid. I think of dissolving flesh, but you do you with your malapropism.
> Only knows that Jayce is purposeful in his method to keep Viktor on the edge
*He only knows
> When Jayce's hand makes contact squarely against his cunt
This comes from mainstream porn and I fail to see how that is pleasurable. Your labial skin, while thicker than scrotal skin, is still sensitive and should not be a victim of a full-bore slap. That can cause injury. T or not, trans Viktor is not superhuman. Getting a bruise on your nether regions is not fun.
> Aching channel
> Viktor's hole
At this point, I'd rather take 'channel' over 'hole', because it doesn't sound as lifeless as the latter.
> It's as if he's a toy for Jayce's amusement, a crude science experiment
I read this a lot, along with the 'his hands were so large his thumbs met in the middle', and it is something when it's always the trans man described like this. Oh, you're just a hole for the penis haver? A useless sex toy? A cock sleeve? Do explain your methods.
> Massaging relentlessly with the strokes of his cock
...whose? Oh, you mean that roid clit? That's what happens when you use male terms for female genitalia: I get confused as to who has the dick.
> Forcing back age old ghosts that never quite left
Oh? Do tell. Do I sense some lingering trauma there?
> Sheaths himself to the hilt
Cliché, but whatever, it works. I don't know how large our Hispanic Hog is, but he's definitely in the thick department, and has to use lube because our boy did NOT play the pussy eating game this time around. Usually Viktor is so wet he could put out bush fires.
> Keeps Viktor nice and open like a perfect little cocksleeve
I see this a lot too. Funny how it's the trans man described as a cocksleeve, and never the man.
> Maybe Viktor is as good as a hole
See point above.
> So deep that Viktor feels as if his insides are being shifted, over and over, unhurried but demading
So are we getting a belly bulge or not? I gotta now if this is our 12'' horse cock Hog or not.
> Split open on Jayce's dick
Like a rotisserie chicken.
> Would you let them have their way with you? Like this?
Their lab is private, so I doubt anyone aside from Harold the Enforcer is going to know Viktor is stuck. The gangbang rape fantasy you're conjuring up just wouldn't happen.
> His neglected cock
Come on, now. You have that roid clit, and a true cock that 'rearranges his insides'.
> But never far
This does not make sense.
> Familiar coiling in his gut
That makes this the second time it's happened.
> If he's frying the internal components with the humidity and temperature
...with your body heat? Boy, you have more to worry about with all that sweat and ejaculate ruining shit. Imagine finding sticky cum on your circuits.
> Gushing around Jayce's thick length
I guess we won't be getting any measurements this time around
> Deep enough it's as if he's carving his shape into Viktor
Add this line to 'his hands were so big they met in the middle'. I first saw it in that Knight AU, now I'm seeing it more often. It just makes me think that Viktor is physically turning into the shape of Jayce's dick, like a Wacky Wobbly Inflatable Tube Man.
> So much fluid combined that it dribbles out of Viktor's entrances and joins the mess on his thighs
These authors don't know how much sperm men produce, so they just go the hentai route and make it seem like men can squirt sperm like a broken ice cream machine. You'd think they produce half a litre with how much emphasis they put on it.
> He recognized the length and girth of the thing all too well
Hextech strikes again!
Great! He has a living dildo that can do the job Jayce cannot! He's really putting a Mexican out of work out here, isn't he?
> Had gaped at Viktor and turned tomato red
I can think of something else that's gaping, HEYO
So he can take off his shirt and tie while being in such a tight spot, yet couldn't think to shuck off the belt first? Retard.
> Fucked out confusion
OK, I like this line, both for its absurdity and straightforwardness.
> Nuzzling the window of muscle
Excuse me you're nuzzling a fascist Chad right there, you should read some gender theory.
> Ring of muscle stretched taut around it
Sorry, no in-depth description of how large Jayce is. Next time, maybe.
> Strands of white dripping onto Jayce's fingers
I am once again reminded of xenomorph eggs.
> Already missing being plugged, being fucked
Just like a Thanksgiving turkey, eh?
> Like a tempest
> Keeping Viktor in the eye of his storm
The eye of the storm is the 'calmest' part. The two terms, while related, are contradictory in nature.
> Slapping wetly against Viktor's folds
Sorry, still no Hispanic Hog, XXXL edition.
> Filled properly at last with Jayce
?? He was fucking you earlier. Were you not filled properly then?
> It's character breaking
He was already breaking character when he was acting concerned and anxious. I don't know why the author had trigger warnings when it is clear they are playing and Jayce is not cruel. I can tell when he's 'into the moment' vs being an actual rapist, like that one where he rapes 12 year old Viktor. He's irredeemable there.
> But for Viktor's pleasure
Ah, glad he isn't using the pooner as a cocksleeve anymore.
> Folding him in half
I am glad his disability no longer exists when it comes to sex positions. He seems to bend and mold like silly putty with no kinks (hehe) whatsoever.
> Fluids spilling forth and soaking the sheets beneath them
Damn, they really do need to fight bush fires. Send 'em to Australia.
> Comically high pitch
Why am I reminded of a chicken?
> Like a fucking machine?
Ohhhhh are we getting a sequel? I've seen a few of those. Hextech strap-ons, Hextech fleshlights, now this. Hextech fucking machines would add to the repertoire of 'fucked up, but somehow someone would do it' activities.
Hey, they'd make a lot of money. Viktor could make himself his own vibrating neo-phallus with glowing lights while he's at it, just to add to the immersion. I'll take it over rapist Jayce any day. Give me some more cringeworthy, humorous pooner fics than the abominable shit I've been finding lately. It at least gives me a chuckle vs making me MATI.
Strap on, strap off in this spicy T4T tale, where 90% of one's brain is dedicated to fucking (yes, that's a real line).
> If he'd been born with different anatomy, he probably wouldn't be able to leave the house
And you'd actually be able to fuck Viktor at the market, vs rut into him with a packer or your 2 inch roid clit.
> He'd also rolled his eyes
I would too. All that talk about sex and fucking him with his strap and the first thing he thinks about is wishing it was the real thing. All that for a glorified lesbian bed death? No thank you.
> He genuinely didn't think he'd been this consistently horny since he first started testosterone
True, testosterone does increase their sex drive. It also causes vaginal atrophy after a few years, but none of them talk about that. It'd ruin the fantasy.
> Did he know it was because 90% of Jayce's brain power was dedicated to thoughts of fucking him, though?
I told you this was a real line. T might make you horny, but it still only gives you two inches to work with. You're crushing fantasies, not fulfilling them.
> Objectifying, or something
> Based on nothing less than undying love and affection
Those are the most female-typical fantasies I've ever seen. Even with all that T-addled horniness, all you can think about are vanilla fantasies of love and touch. Meanwhile men will think about fucking 2B dolls out here.
> Every brush of the seam of his pants against his cock was blissfully torturous
Guess that 'bottom growth' really did spring out of nowhere, eh?
> Finishing that sentence would surely only make him sound more pathetic
Indeed it would. You want to fuck Viktor instead of going to a concert, and don't even have the parts to do it. How pathetic.
> His dick was more than on board with each and every one of them
And yet, it can't be on board with penetration because it's only a meager two inches.
What is fucking throbbing, your heartrate? It's not even long enough to have a dorsal vein. 
That would be nice - if you actually had a penis that could do the job, instead of being a 'lovesick idiot' whose fantasies don't even involve actual sex. The pooner has to use a PACKER, for fuck's sake, and has to pretend that a strap-on is an actual penis. Are we sure this is smut, or self-flagellation?
> Was there enough blood left outside of his groin to blush with
Yeah, because there is only two inches of growth down there. Your vulva is not going to use as much blood. Forget fainting - you wouldn't even break a sweat.
> Viktor would never be leaving his bed again
He'd probably be wishing for an actual dicking soon enough, or a Hextech-powered dildo that can feel like the real thing. Bed death is real.
> Breasts
Oh, he didn't get the zippertit surgery? Interesting.
> See the exact movements of his fingers behind his packer
They're BOTH wearing them? All that work just for a flimsy bit of silicone so they can stand to pee and not get dysphoria. When pooners start writing shit like this, it becomes less of a smut, and more of a 'woe is me, I'm a man but I also wish I had a real dick' journal entry.
> Jayce was so fucking hard
With what?> Down to nothing but his own briefs and packer
But are the packers race-matched?
Can't get the wrong race of penis. Are the darker skinned ones larger?>It made him feel even more like he was playing pretend, like the line between himself and manhood was more solid than ever
If you are 'playing pretend', then the line is a solid wall that can't be knocked down or jumped over. You feel insecure because you were born with the wrong genitalia, and this is the 'closest' you can get without having a complete mental breakdown.
Never thought there'd be a psychological reading in this, but hey, lil pooner brought up the dysphoria first.
> Viktor's cock
> Circling it with two fingers
You should have stuck with the packers.
> I want to come with your cock inside me
And it's flesh-coloured, to boot!
> Did Viktor take that from one of the smut books that Jayce recently read
1. Get it, they're breaking the 4th wall by letting you know this isn't your basic bitch smut fic; 2. It's usually women who read smut, men just watch porn. Nice job outing yourself as a woman there, dood.
> He'd always thought such a line would be corny
This is a shitty attempt at lampshading, a way for the author to say, 'Hey, MY work isn't corny, that booktok shit is!' while writing booktok slop, trans edition. Don't push yourself as better when the evidence says otherwise.
Very nice to know the dildo matches his race and skin tone, and how pooners find the fleshiness 'off putting' because it reminds them of what they lack. It is not the Hispanic Hog dildo (or cock) we all know by now, but a meager, dutiful thing that probably sits around 6 inches, maybe smaller, if the 'emasculation' thing is true. Pooners think that having the biggest dick makes them the bigger man, because it will give them the masculinity they do not have.
> As it turned out, having control over something you couldn't technically feel was much more difficult when there was more of it
You mean the dildo size? It'd be more difficult if it was bigger? You don't say.
> Accidentally slipping out of his partner
Lol. Lmao. That happened once, long ago, when a pooner decided to do anal penetration with their 2 inch roid clit. Shit was hilarious.
> If he didn't look at it, he could convince himself it was real
That's depressing in hindsight. Lil dood wishes she had a real dick, gets a race-accurate dildo, and has to look away when their partner touches it because if they see it, they are reminded that it isn't the real thing. Damn, who knew this could be so Freudian?
> You have lube
> He was soaked
If the dildo isn't that large, why do you need lube at all?
> Easily taking him all the way to the base
Well, yeah. This isn't the Hispanic Hog, or the Alpha Male dog dick edition. It's just a normal sized dildo, that apparently needs a lot of lube. Clearly it identifies as large.
> He may not have been able to physically feel what he was sure was the divine heat of Viktor wrapped around him
How depressing.
> He wouldn't be able to keep this pace up forever
> His long hours of the forge definitely had their benefits
So can he keep up the pace, or not? These are contradictory sentences.
Fucking hell, it's THAT. FUCKING. LINE. How many times do I need to read it? A thousand times? Guess it will be a thousand times, then.
> Immediately distracted by Viktor's tits
> The way they bounced with each thrust was hypnotic
I assume he's got a carpet of hair up there due to the T. Who needs 'top surgery' when you can just coat them like a yeti's fur?
> He didn't have much bottom growth
And you still want to call it a cock anyways, even during the fics where Jayce is a monstrous size.
> His own overwhelming arousal
Which you can't satisfy, btw. Despite all that horniness, your outlets are entirely synthetic.
> He felt like fucking a livewire
Do bad you can't fuck like one.
> The sensation dull but intimate nonetheless
Figures he has no nerves due to the zippertit scars.
> He was painfully hard
Lmao. With what? 3 inches of growth? A metoidioplasty? Do tell.
> Taking his cock between his knuckles
Guess it isn't that big, then.
It was still boring as fuck. I didn't expect such self-pity.
A happy ending for a borefest. Why do pooner insist on projecting their insecurities over not having male genitalia in these fics? If I wanted to read a pooner crying about dildos being too 'flesh like' and 'playing pretend' with them, I'd read their confessions on Reddit. It's hard to take anything seriously when they complain that a small piece of silicone 'emasculates' them because it isn't large enough. Did the author want people to rub one out, or whine that they 'feel the same way'?
I love how I can clock this one as being written by a dude, because men are the ones who have futanari and scat fetishes. If a woman wrote this it'd be piss and FTM Frankendongs.And LoL fics can get just as depraved as Arcane fics, this example includes Seraphine and several Yordles with shit, with a lot of text being put into way too large of paragraphs:
It's amazing to me how people took concept art where he is drawn with goofily-large hands and took that as face value, and then continue to write them as being so huge the man can swat away asteroids. It's one of those aspects of autism where they are incapable of seeing things as they are, and just exaggerate the fuck out of it.
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Veeforvindicta, who wrote that underage shotacon deer rape fic, wrote this fic as a means of 'owning' a transphobe. What are its contents, you might ask? A 15 year old getting groomed by an adult. She claims to be unbothered by the comment calling her a pedo, while making that shotacon fic under an anonymous account as black Arcane fans were hunting down degenerates.
Naturally, the worst thing, to this author, wasn't the pedophilia - it was the misgendering. This fic was also based on an Ellen Page movie, so you can view the pooner here as being a meager 5'1.
> She was clearly smart beyond her years, mature and advanced in all ways but physical age
This is the excuse all groomers/nonces give, word for word. I really want to know what the cause is for this author to have such an obsession with teens getting fucked.
> She was tiny
Of course! As if the trans 'egg cracking' wasn't bad enough, we have to have the uwu smol trans boi thing going on. He's juts so tiny compared to the real man!
> A little too convincing to be a tomboy
If you're that tiny for a 'boy', I'd think you were a child that hadn't hit puberty yet. Justice for our tomboys.
> The short hair, flat chest, awkwardly fitting masculine clothes made it clear this was actually a boy
If the clothes are 'ill fitting', how is this person convincing as a boy?
> You aren't a girl, are you?
If you were already convinced this pooner was a boy, why ask?
> His hand was so tiny in comparison to Jayce's, with long spindly fingers
This bitch isn't even trying to hide it.
> That'll hold up in court
Damn right it won't. Love how the nonce acknowledges that what he is doing is wrong, yet does it anyways.
> Three weeks of talking counts
...no it doesn't.
> He liked to be flirty, make little jokes, bat his eyelashes up at Jayce, because he was a teenager with a puppy crush
This only works because Jayce is hot. If he looked like Ron Jeremy, this MAP would get The Ick and she'd have second thoughts on this.
> He was so beyond his years in his mind
This is the second time Jayce has said that. I suspect it'll be a mainstay of this pedo fic.
Yes, he's giving a minor alcohol - hard alcohol. He's not even of the legal age to drink beer yet in Germany, let alone be the drinking age in America, which is 21. Getting a teen pooner hooked on hard liquor is one way to groom them, eh?
> Too smart for your own good
This absolutely has sinister implications. Jayce will excuse what he does because Viktor is 'too mature for his age' despite only being 15. Having a crush on a hot teacher is one thing, but acting on it is another. Men will absolutely take advantage of teenagers and instead of leaning into that, this is written as a positive experience. I'd really love to know this author's mindset.
> Something possessive burned inside of him at the sight of this beautiful boy spread out on his couch
Spoken like a true Athenian pederast - if Viktor was actually a boy.
> The pale length of his throat
Here we go with the pale, white, fragile, 1488 descriptions.
> Would do dangerous things if he got his hands on Viktor
I'm sure that will stand up in court, to burrow your words.
> His stomach was flat and smooth, waist pinching in, ribs nearly showing
Sexy. I can see the Ellen Page reference. A tiny woman pretending to be a man, getting groomed by a mature, older man. These things never end well.
There's that 'sweet and delicate' thing again. These authors love writing him like that, because it makes him look dainty and fair compared to the big, muscular, darker-skinned male. Your classic yaoi trope.
The fact Jayce is more afraid of being outed as a nonce than grooming a teenager says a lot. Men like that aren't guilty for their crimes - they're guilty of getting caught.
Mixing benzos and alcohol is a helluva risk. Should've added more and given him permanent brain damage so he can't groom anyone anymore.
Huh. I did not expect this Jeffrey Dahmer twist. Viktor was the one baiting Jayce after all, using all the tactics to lure in the perfect pedophile. Naturally, there will be another twist - the author really wanted to 'own' that transphobe, after all.
> Delicate skin barely darker than the marble countertop
This is the second time he's been described as 'delicate'. Yes, we know: this uwo trans boi is about to get a deep dicking from a nonce. Might as well get to it so you can cover up the fact you wrote underage shotacon deer rape.
> I thought you were a girl
He IS one. But you also thought he was convincing and 'couldn't be a tomboy'.
> Force himself to find it in a woman, any woman, even a girl. One too young for him. Far too young.
Yep, certified nonce. This man isn't looking for an 'equal partner', he's looking for someone to groom. Someone to mould and someone to convince he's the only one important in their lives. He can't do that with a grown woman. The fact he isn't seeking it among men is weird, too.
Because they are. Admitting you're a pedophile and being afraid of being outed are two things you SHOULD be ashamed of. Don't even let the pedo hunters find out you're talking to 15-year-olds online.
> Nabokov's original translations
Lolita is not a book to justify pedophilia, btw. You are not meant to emphasize with the main character. The girl who inspired Lolita was also sexually abused and horrifically changed because of that. This reference is due solely to the 'transphobe' bringing it up in the deer fic - and Lolita was 12 in the book, as deer Viktor was in that fic.
> You know nothing of torture
So stop talking and start shoving Jayce into a freezer.
> Would you have done anything, after getting me drunk?
Jayce says he would not, because he's a 'Nice Guy', but that's a lie. He knows what he is doing is wrong and still uses manipulation tactics to turn the tides in his favour. He is not threatened by a 5'1 girl pretending to be a boy - and that does make it somewhat funny in hindsight.
> I'm small. Weak. A cripple
I doubt the testosterone is helping. How small are we talking here? Ellen Page size?
> With a possibly murderous and armed teenager
Viktor should have just upped the benzo dose and started busting his kneecaps if he was serious. Jayce can break out of those restraints if he wants to.
> I would eat you out like I was starving
Cliché.
> How alone he actually was
He managed to turn off grown women. That is a major red flag. He craves attention and love and the only ones who can give it to him are children, 15 year olds included. No wonder his major fear is getting outed and arrested.
You shouldn't have admitted that, Viktor. Because Jayce knows your weakness - and he tries to spin it in his favour soon enough.
You know, I would not have minded this twist if the author was being serious. I know that 'transphobe' got to her despite her saying otherwise, because she would not have leaned into this angle if the comments did not upset her. Of course, she can lay on the 'well Viktor was just asking for it' all she wants, the comments left an impact on her and that was enough.
> Jayce spent his life dealing with politics. Rich assholes who talked in riddles, hid their true motivations
Oh, so you've already walked in similar circles with wealthy men who like fucking teens. A real Jeffrey Epstein looking for his Virginia Giuffre (RIP). Also, since when was he in politics? Isn't he a teacher?
I figured this would happen. It is hard to be intimidated by a 5'1 pooner with a switchblade. Viktor should have watched more cartel videos and started flaying Jayce when he was knocked out by the benzos if he was being serious. Jayce is already trying to manipulate him and is successful in outing Viktor's anxieties, putting him in the superior position. While I do agree with Viktor getting angry at Jayce for implying he is 'asking for it', it's hard to take it seriously with the author's proclivities. This will end in them fucking, and Jayce 'taming' Viktor with his 12'' dick.
Like I said, I knew this would happen. It's hard to take 5'1 Ellen Page trying to cosplay as Jeffrey Dahmer seriously, and all it took for Viktor to break was for Jayce to say he was 'trying his best' Talk about a major L. You can't even make the pedophile afraid, even when he was deathly scared of being outed to his community.
> He really did just look like a kid
He IS one.
> Not a purposefully seductive nymph, or a careless murderer. A scared, lonely kid
A 'seductive nymph' you say? This man really is Jeffrey Epstein, but Hispanic and better looking. He looks after 'lonely kids' and makes them feel beautiful, and instills in them that there is no better place to be than at their side. Textbook grooming. Least the author got that right.
Afraid of actually being the 'seductive nymph', you mean? Of being a slave to your hormones and admitting your Hot for Teacher desires?
> You want to be someone's little boy. I'd like you to be mine, too
The fact he says this while admitting grown women found him 'too clingy' and how he was a walking red flag says a lot. He NEEDS someone young and inexperienced so they can accept his abuse without question. By making them dependent on him, they will never want to leave; by preying on his need for a father figure (it is typical that a pooner wants a father figure and projects onto the first loving and attractive man she finds), he creates a vacuum the victim cannot escape from. Why leave the only security you've ever known?
> Pulled him up
Literally. He's 5'1.
> Jayce knew what he was doing, he easily took control here
Of course. We were never going to have the catfishing pedophile plot pan out.
> The spark there wasn't something he felt often
I repeat: older women, actual ADULTS, find him clingy and overly emotional. He has to go with teens because they do not know any better.
> I'm still a boy
Why were all the people Jayce was with earlier female? Why does he express a liking for young girls? It seems he knows, despite your identity, what sex you are.
> His little breasts slipping out from it
> There was barely anything there to begin with, just the tiniest swells of pale skin
Ah, there's that 1488 pale skin shit again. He also has not gone through any gender-affirmation procedure, so he really is a girl pretending to be a boy so she will not be molested.
> Told me my tits were too nice to hide
You just wrote he didn't have any.
> The sparse hair
Ah, that's how you know Jayce is a nonce. Usually, in these fics, Viktor has Rapunzel pubes - pubic hair so thick that you could get lost in it - but that is a sign of his maturity. Having 'sparse' hair assumes the individual is only in the early Tanner Stages of puberty or hasn't started it yet.
> I figured you were into the whole pure, untouched innocence thing
Me too. It would have fit the picture. Jayce is still a nonce, though.
> Did he take his time to get you this wet? Did he bother to eat you out?
Jayce is really trying to paint himself as 'Not One of Those' - a chivalrous nonce, one who 'respects boundaries' and will go down per their partner's request, but that doesn't erase the other red flags such as him being clingy to the point of being obsessive. Viktor doesn't know any better, so he takes this as him being genuine.
> They don't even know how to appreciate something as beautiful as this
They would at least be within his age range, and not talking to minors on the Internet.
> Not eating pussy was a crime in his eyes
Know what else is a crime? Statutory rape.
> The light hair curling at the top of his mound
You already wrote him as having 'sparse hair'.
> They were useless in bed
Unlike Jeffrey Epstein here, right lads?
> Viktor's hole
Now, we can write noncery all we like...but misgendering is out of the question, you hear me?
> The slurps of his mouth
This is not sexy no matter how many times I read it. It just reminds me of people slurping up late night Chinese noodles.
> Men who don't eat pussy should be locked up
So should men who fuck 15 year olds.
> Big words from a man fucking a fifteen year old
Nice lampshading. There is some self-awareness there.
> The severity of the statement held no real gravity with Viktor's tone
Of course not. 5'1 pooners don't threaten anybody.
> You've never been treated right
You've said that twice already.
> Impatient little minx
A nicer way of saying Viktor was 'asking for it', the very words Viktor threw at Jayce earlier in the chapter.
> The size of Jayce's compared to Viktor's definitely made all the difference
Naturally. He's an uwu smol trans boy. He's just a wee doll.
> You don't like, don't you? Sick fuck
Someone call Chris Hansen.
> Exaggerated like he was mimicking bad porn
This IS bad porn, you dumb MAP bitch.
Well then, guess we didn't see said penetration at all. I expected it after that deer fic, because she focused a LOT on a 12 year old's genitalia. Maybe she will continue to own the transphobes and write a sequel, eh?
What's interesting is that Jayce did not show interest in boys - he wanted young girls. Even though he is calling Viktor a boy here, he knows what he really is.
He's saying this about a teenager, btw. Someone who admitting to catfishing him and wanted to kill him, but pussied out because Jayce gave him the puppy dog look. Guess the author took Ellen Page's inspiration to heart - it really is hard to take anything that woman does seriously.
Did you know there was internalized homophobia in this? I sure didn't. I didn't see any examples of it anywhere, and it isn't a thing if the person you are grooming is a teenage girl. Jayce admitted he wanted younger and younger girls, not men and boys. You'd think he'd become a priest if he wanted easy access, but no. He was a college professor and the young lads and lasses there were too legal.
If this was supposed to 'own' a transphobe, what an example to give. The deer-rape MAP bitch who wrote that fic under an anonymous account because she was afraid of rampaging Kweens wants to talk tough on main. Girl, you aren't 'owning' anybody. You're just outing yourself. Keep at it - let more people know you're the deer pedo author.
OK, let's try a something more fun, and legal. Sentient, full-body sex toys!
An abrupt start, but yes, that's how the introduction goes.
Brass, eh? A good conductor of electricity, and it starts smelling due to contact with dead skin cells. Fun!
> The size he found to be...reasonable
Guess we won't be dealing with Hispanic Hogs this time.
> At different intervals of open
What?
> They had designed it to be realistic, and to feel realistic
Next, you'll design a fully functional robo-penis that feels just like the real thing. No Frankendongs needed.
> Here the channeling wires thin out and multiply into a network running through a bit that's like a cocksleeve but smaller, designed with them in mind
AKA it hooks up to their pelvis so they can feel the sensation vs it being just a silicone tube sticking out of them.
> Try it with anatomy that didn't have the ability to perceive pleasure
Well, yeah. It's a phallic sex toy. It isn't alive; you're using tech to make it work.
> Viktor wanted
Wanted what? Be specific, even if 'his mind wandered to Jayce' the next sentence over.
> Perfect, soft lips around his cock
That 2 inch eraser ain't a dick, but you can keep pretending it is if it makes you feel better.
Silk is nice, but it would fucking smell due to their T sweat. Egyptian cotton (or their version of it) is what you'd need.
> This ok?
It's either okay or OK. Ok just sounds like 'awk'.
> Parted his bush to brush against his twitching cock
Well, at least the bush here is mature! No 15 year olds around here.
> wanna suck you off
Lmao, what are you gonna suck off? That mini Ring Pop?
> A small (large) part of Viktor disagreed, because he owned a mirror and wasn't stupid
Either you are pretty or you aren't. If you aren't 'stupid', you do acknowledge Jayce is right. Don't contradict yourself here.
> Grinding his cock into Jayce's mouth with a groan
He'd have more fun with a glue bottle.
> Didn't leave him wanted
*Leave him wanting
> Gripped his cock and jerked him to completion
There isn't enough material for you to jerk off. This is what happens when you actually see roid clits vs fantasize about how big they are.
PAHG - Phat Ass Hispanic Guy (Girl). I wonder if its got acne scars, too.
> He hadn't considered that maybe this was Jayce's first time using a strap on
> He realized that the feeling of euphoria Jayce may be feeling was probably very similar to his first time wearing a strap
First, you use male language for your roid clits because it makes you feel 'comfortable', now you feel euphoria over fancy pieces of silicone because you know, deep down, that your roid clits aren't dicks. That's why you need something more 'substantial' and male. Very fucking telling.
A Hextech Frankendong? Suppose that would be better than slicing flesh from your thighs and stapling it on your abdomen. It would resemble the real thing, and surgery would not be as nightmarish. Why not lean into the sci-fi aspect, a little?
> Brushed his bush
That's the second time I've read that, it's a nice little alliteration.
> Jayce in general was built much bigger than Viktor, and his hands were no exception
There are the Bigfoot slappers we know and love!
> Jayce had calluses thick enough that he could feel the difference in texture in some spots
And your vag can tell the difference? Impressive.
> Hnn
Ah, the heart attack sex dialogue.
> I'm not sure this is exactly what having a cock feels like
Did you not just have a burst of euphoria because it looks like and feels like the real thing? It's designed to feel and operate like one with the nodes that attach to your pubis mons. Did the author forget that tidbit, or what?
> It could fill him with cum, warm from the power coursing through the toy
Trans men are men, yet they crave male dick, because theirs can never compare and they instinctively know it. They wouldn't get such euphoria if they sincerely believed their roid clits were dicks.
> His hole leaked so much his thighs felt sticky
I don't know why I thought of a jelly doughnut, but I did. Doughnuts have holes too, you know.
> Jayce hilted himself with the same kind of familiar ease, bottoming out in seconds
So much for the build-up.
> Jayce's cock split him open
> He swore he could feel Jayce in his stomach
That's not what the author wrote. Earlier, she made it clear that the toy was underwhelming and not a very large size. Now it causes a belly bulge? Something ain't right here. The author can't even remember the details of her own sex toy fic, go figure.
> Wrapped all of his fingers around Viktor's dick
1. It's not large enough for you to wrap all of them around it, and 2. Your hands are allegedly so big you wouldn't be able to, anyways.
You'd think there'd be a lot more emphasis on such elaborate sex tech (lmao), but no. This is underwhelming as hell. More focus was put on the characters feeling gender euphoria over a neo-phallus with an inconsistent, changing size than the smut. These two didn't even have that much chemistry at all.
That's it? Okay. I can handle a bore, but geez - try to put a little more effort in, why don't ya?
Here's one from an author who forgot her anti-psychotic meds and wrote a puppy play fic instead. Once again, it features a white (wo)man caging up a brown man and treating him like a dog. We must get to the bottom of this phenomenon immediately.
A strap-on modeled after a dog dick? Guess we're returning to our ABO roots.
Now, I don't have to write paragraphs about the optics of a white (wo)man calling a brown man a mutt, treating him like a dog and making him wear floppy ears and a collar is pretty damning, but fuck is it funny. The most racist shit is coming from white pooners, and they don't even have a CLUE how this looks to outsiders.
> Filled with a milky, thick lubricant
The last fic had a true-to-form sex toy. What is your excuse? Next you'll tell me it can mimic any kind of animal penis - oh God, I might have just given them an idea.
As it turns out, Jayce doesn't actually have a small penis in this. It is written that he has a 'large, impressive cock', but that this language is meant to 'emasculate' him compared to the pooner wearing a strap. If he is as big as the author says, then that cock cage has to hurt, as it would be squeezing on sensitive flesh. Can't have it going necrotic, now. But until that reveal is written, the reader is to assume that Jayce is tiny. Fiveblessings, take note - your pet Hispanic is the one nerfed in the dick department now.
> We can be sure your tummy gets bred full of little puppies
> Satisfy little mutts
Jesus, and this is a white person saying that. Calling a mixed race man a mutt is something I would do, not a progshit. They sound like they belong on the Sharty, not AO3.
> His little cock, collared and caged for his master
Hope the cage doesn't have '1840 edition' stamped on it.
> Just a cute little puppyslut waiting to be filled?
OK, that's going with 'his pussy drooled like a dog'. It's so fucking absurd it's both funny to read and bizarre. I've never read something or someone being referred to as 'puppyslut', so this is the first.
> The strap, modeled after Jayce's own cock, is not small by any means
So why all the language saying Jayce is small and pathetic?
> He looks downright pathetic right now
I'll say. Look at that emasculating language - and for a brown man, no less. No breaks from the white man, even in fiction.
> I should leash you and take you on a walk like this
Be sure to include a shock collar and a 'white pride worldwide' statement. Just to put that mutt in his place.
> His dumb pupp
> Cute little puppy parts
Uh, did I stumble into a babyfur fic?
> Stupid little puppy
> Soft little dick
> Your little puppy clit
Oh, so when I do this I'm a white supremacist, yet these people can do it and they're progressive and mentally ill? Not fair, man.
> The tip was just barely peaking out from under the foreskin, cute and shy and small
That honestly sounds more painful than anything else. It sounds like a smushed hotdog.
> Seeing his normally impressively large cock reduced to a shadow of its former self
At that rate, you'll be looking at a missing cock, as that sounds like it's going to necrotize from lack of blood flow if you don't take that off soon.
> Puppy parts
> As he fucks into his pretty dog
Race cuckoldry and a subtle, almost-in-your-face bestiality fetish? This fic has it all. White (wo)men really do fuck dogs.
> as I breed your puppy parts
He's not going to end up on the dog breeder horror shows, is he?
As toxic as this fanbase is, sometimes these authors really do deserve a taste of their own progshit medicine. A cuckrold raceplay fic is the last thing I would expect to find, yet here we are finding pooners writing it and enjoying it. I can see why they fear the Kweens: they would absolutely call this out for its subtle racism, and how Viktor, the white one, is the 'owner' and 'master' while the brown man is the 'mutt'. After all, all art is political...including this.
Oh, fuck NO. If this was written off your meds, I sure as hell don't want to see you sober. Being on anti-psych meds while writing this shit is very-on-the-nose; I don't think any amount of beta blockers or SSRIs can erase what you just wrote. I'd blast 'Call Me When You're Sober', but eh, I have no clue whether you're sane off or on them. We really don't need more psycho white women writing about race cuckoldry.
Naturally, the worst thing, to this author, wasn't the pedophilia - it was the misgendering. This fic was also based on an Ellen Page movie, so you can view the pooner here as being a meager 5'1.
> She was clearly smart beyond her years, mature and advanced in all ways but physical age
This is the excuse all groomers/nonces give, word for word. I really want to know what the cause is for this author to have such an obsession with teens getting fucked.
> She was tiny
Of course! As if the trans 'egg cracking' wasn't bad enough, we have to have the uwu smol trans boi thing going on. He's juts so tiny compared to the real man!
> A little too convincing to be a tomboy
If you're that tiny for a 'boy', I'd think you were a child that hadn't hit puberty yet. Justice for our tomboys.
> The short hair, flat chest, awkwardly fitting masculine clothes made it clear this was actually a boy
If the clothes are 'ill fitting', how is this person convincing as a boy?
> You aren't a girl, are you?
If you were already convinced this pooner was a boy, why ask?
> His hand was so tiny in comparison to Jayce's, with long spindly fingers
This bitch isn't even trying to hide it.
> That'll hold up in court
Damn right it won't. Love how the nonce acknowledges that what he is doing is wrong, yet does it anyways.
> Three weeks of talking counts
...no it doesn't.
> He liked to be flirty, make little jokes, bat his eyelashes up at Jayce, because he was a teenager with a puppy crush
This only works because Jayce is hot. If he looked like Ron Jeremy, this MAP would get The Ick and she'd have second thoughts on this.
> He was so beyond his years in his mind
This is the second time Jayce has said that. I suspect it'll be a mainstay of this pedo fic.
Yes, he's giving a minor alcohol - hard alcohol. He's not even of the legal age to drink beer yet in Germany, let alone be the drinking age in America, which is 21. Getting a teen pooner hooked on hard liquor is one way to groom them, eh?
> Too smart for your own good
This absolutely has sinister implications. Jayce will excuse what he does because Viktor is 'too mature for his age' despite only being 15. Having a crush on a hot teacher is one thing, but acting on it is another. Men will absolutely take advantage of teenagers and instead of leaning into that, this is written as a positive experience. I'd really love to know this author's mindset.
> Something possessive burned inside of him at the sight of this beautiful boy spread out on his couch
Spoken like a true Athenian pederast - if Viktor was actually a boy.
> The pale length of his throat
Here we go with the pale, white, fragile, 1488 descriptions.
> Would do dangerous things if he got his hands on Viktor
I'm sure that will stand up in court, to burrow your words.
> His stomach was flat and smooth, waist pinching in, ribs nearly showing
Sexy. I can see the Ellen Page reference. A tiny woman pretending to be a man, getting groomed by a mature, older man. These things never end well.
There's that 'sweet and delicate' thing again. These authors love writing him like that, because it makes him look dainty and fair compared to the big, muscular, darker-skinned male. Your classic yaoi trope.
The fact Jayce is more afraid of being outed as a nonce than grooming a teenager says a lot. Men like that aren't guilty for their crimes - they're guilty of getting caught.
Mixing benzos and alcohol is a helluva risk. Should've added more and given him permanent brain damage so he can't groom anyone anymore.
Huh. I did not expect this Jeffrey Dahmer twist. Viktor was the one baiting Jayce after all, using all the tactics to lure in the perfect pedophile. Naturally, there will be another twist - the author really wanted to 'own' that transphobe, after all.
> Delicate skin barely darker than the marble countertop
This is the second time he's been described as 'delicate'. Yes, we know: this uwo trans boi is about to get a deep dicking from a nonce. Might as well get to it so you can cover up the fact you wrote underage shotacon deer rape.
> I thought you were a girl
He IS one. But you also thought he was convincing and 'couldn't be a tomboy'.
> Force himself to find it in a woman, any woman, even a girl. One too young for him. Far too young.
Yep, certified nonce. This man isn't looking for an 'equal partner', he's looking for someone to groom. Someone to mould and someone to convince he's the only one important in their lives. He can't do that with a grown woman. The fact he isn't seeking it among men is weird, too.
Because they are. Admitting you're a pedophile and being afraid of being outed are two things you SHOULD be ashamed of. Don't even let the pedo hunters find out you're talking to 15-year-olds online.
> Nabokov's original translations
Lolita is not a book to justify pedophilia, btw. You are not meant to emphasize with the main character. The girl who inspired Lolita was also sexually abused and horrifically changed because of that. This reference is due solely to the 'transphobe' bringing it up in the deer fic - and Lolita was 12 in the book, as deer Viktor was in that fic.
> You know nothing of torture
So stop talking and start shoving Jayce into a freezer.
> Would you have done anything, after getting me drunk?
Jayce says he would not, because he's a 'Nice Guy', but that's a lie. He knows what he is doing is wrong and still uses manipulation tactics to turn the tides in his favour. He is not threatened by a 5'1 girl pretending to be a boy - and that does make it somewhat funny in hindsight.
> I'm small. Weak. A cripple
I doubt the testosterone is helping. How small are we talking here? Ellen Page size?
> With a possibly murderous and armed teenager
Viktor should have just upped the benzo dose and started busting his kneecaps if he was serious. Jayce can break out of those restraints if he wants to.
> I would eat you out like I was starving
Cliché.
> How alone he actually was
He managed to turn off grown women. That is a major red flag. He craves attention and love and the only ones who can give it to him are children, 15 year olds included. No wonder his major fear is getting outed and arrested.
You shouldn't have admitted that, Viktor. Because Jayce knows your weakness - and he tries to spin it in his favour soon enough.
You know, I would not have minded this twist if the author was being serious. I know that 'transphobe' got to her despite her saying otherwise, because she would not have leaned into this angle if the comments did not upset her. Of course, she can lay on the 'well Viktor was just asking for it' all she wants, the comments left an impact on her and that was enough.
> Jayce spent his life dealing with politics. Rich assholes who talked in riddles, hid their true motivations
Oh, so you've already walked in similar circles with wealthy men who like fucking teens. A real Jeffrey Epstein looking for his Virginia Giuffre (RIP). Also, since when was he in politics? Isn't he a teacher?
I figured this would happen. It is hard to be intimidated by a 5'1 pooner with a switchblade. Viktor should have watched more cartel videos and started flaying Jayce when he was knocked out by the benzos if he was being serious. Jayce is already trying to manipulate him and is successful in outing Viktor's anxieties, putting him in the superior position. While I do agree with Viktor getting angry at Jayce for implying he is 'asking for it', it's hard to take it seriously with the author's proclivities. This will end in them fucking, and Jayce 'taming' Viktor with his 12'' dick.
Like I said, I knew this would happen. It's hard to take 5'1 Ellen Page trying to cosplay as Jeffrey Dahmer seriously, and all it took for Viktor to break was for Jayce to say he was 'trying his best'
Talk about a major L. You can't even make the pedophile afraid, even when he was deathly scared of being outed to his community. > He really did just look like a kid
He IS one.
> Not a purposefully seductive nymph, or a careless murderer. A scared, lonely kid
A 'seductive nymph' you say? This man really is Jeffrey Epstein, but Hispanic and better looking. He looks after 'lonely kids' and makes them feel beautiful, and instills in them that there is no better place to be than at their side. Textbook grooming. Least the author got that right.
Afraid of actually being the 'seductive nymph', you mean? Of being a slave to your hormones and admitting your Hot for Teacher desires?
> You want to be someone's little boy. I'd like you to be mine, too
The fact he says this while admitting grown women found him 'too clingy' and how he was a walking red flag says a lot. He NEEDS someone young and inexperienced so they can accept his abuse without question. By making them dependent on him, they will never want to leave; by preying on his need for a father figure (it is typical that a pooner wants a father figure and projects onto the first loving and attractive man she finds), he creates a vacuum the victim cannot escape from. Why leave the only security you've ever known?
> Pulled him up
Literally. He's 5'1.
> Jayce knew what he was doing, he easily took control here
Of course. We were never going to have the catfishing pedophile plot pan out.
> The spark there wasn't something he felt often
I repeat: older women, actual ADULTS, find him clingy and overly emotional. He has to go with teens because they do not know any better.
> I'm still a boy
Why were all the people Jayce was with earlier female? Why does he express a liking for young girls? It seems he knows, despite your identity, what sex you are.
> His little breasts slipping out from it
> There was barely anything there to begin with, just the tiniest swells of pale skin
Ah, there's that 1488 pale skin shit again. He also has not gone through any gender-affirmation procedure, so he really is a girl pretending to be a boy so she will not be molested.
> Told me my tits were too nice to hide
You just wrote he didn't have any.
> The sparse hair
Ah, that's how you know Jayce is a nonce. Usually, in these fics, Viktor has Rapunzel pubes - pubic hair so thick that you could get lost in it - but that is a sign of his maturity. Having 'sparse' hair assumes the individual is only in the early Tanner Stages of puberty or hasn't started it yet.
> I figured you were into the whole pure, untouched innocence thing
Me too. It would have fit the picture. Jayce is still a nonce, though.
> Did he take his time to get you this wet? Did he bother to eat you out?
Jayce is really trying to paint himself as 'Not One of Those' - a chivalrous nonce, one who 'respects boundaries' and will go down per their partner's request, but that doesn't erase the other red flags such as him being clingy to the point of being obsessive. Viktor doesn't know any better, so he takes this as him being genuine.
> They don't even know how to appreciate something as beautiful as this
They would at least be within his age range, and not talking to minors on the Internet.
> Not eating pussy was a crime in his eyes
Know what else is a crime? Statutory rape.
> The light hair curling at the top of his mound
You already wrote him as having 'sparse hair'.
> They were useless in bed
Unlike Jeffrey Epstein here, right lads?
> Viktor's hole
Now, we can write noncery all we like...but misgendering is out of the question, you hear me?
> The slurps of his mouth
This is not sexy no matter how many times I read it. It just reminds me of people slurping up late night Chinese noodles.
> Men who don't eat pussy should be locked up
So should men who fuck 15 year olds.
> Big words from a man fucking a fifteen year old
Nice lampshading. There is some self-awareness there.
> The severity of the statement held no real gravity with Viktor's tone
Of course not. 5'1 pooners don't threaten anybody.
> You've never been treated right
You've said that twice already.
> Impatient little minx
A nicer way of saying Viktor was 'asking for it', the very words Viktor threw at Jayce earlier in the chapter.
> The size of Jayce's compared to Viktor's definitely made all the difference
Naturally. He's an uwu smol trans boy. He's just a wee doll.
> You don't like, don't you? Sick fuck
Someone call Chris Hansen.
> Exaggerated like he was mimicking bad porn
This IS bad porn, you dumb MAP bitch.
Well then, guess we didn't see said penetration at all. I expected it after that deer fic, because she focused a LOT on a 12 year old's genitalia. Maybe she will continue to own the transphobes and write a sequel, eh?
What's interesting is that Jayce did not show interest in boys - he wanted young girls. Even though he is calling Viktor a boy here, he knows what he really is.
He's saying this about a teenager, btw. Someone who admitting to catfishing him and wanted to kill him, but pussied out because Jayce gave him the puppy dog look. Guess the author took Ellen Page's inspiration to heart - it really is hard to take anything that woman does seriously.
Did you know there was internalized homophobia in this? I sure didn't. I didn't see any examples of it anywhere, and it isn't a thing if the person you are grooming is a teenage girl. Jayce admitted he wanted younger and younger girls, not men and boys. You'd think he'd become a priest if he wanted easy access, but no. He was a college professor and the young lads and lasses there were too legal.
If this was supposed to 'own' a transphobe, what an example to give. The deer-rape MAP bitch who wrote that fic under an anonymous account because she was afraid of rampaging Kweens wants to talk tough on main. Girl, you aren't 'owning' anybody. You're just outing yourself. Keep at it - let more people know you're the deer pedo author.
OK, let's try a something more fun, and legal. Sentient, full-body sex toys!
An abrupt start, but yes, that's how the introduction goes.
Brass, eh? A good conductor of electricity, and it starts smelling due to contact with dead skin cells. Fun!
> The size he found to be...reasonable
Guess we won't be dealing with Hispanic Hogs this time.
> At different intervals of open
What?
> They had designed it to be realistic, and to feel realistic
Next, you'll design a fully functional robo-penis that feels just like the real thing. No Frankendongs needed.
> Here the channeling wires thin out and multiply into a network running through a bit that's like a cocksleeve but smaller, designed with them in mind
AKA it hooks up to their pelvis so they can feel the sensation vs it being just a silicone tube sticking out of them.
> Try it with anatomy that didn't have the ability to perceive pleasure
Well, yeah. It's a phallic sex toy. It isn't alive; you're using tech to make it work.
> Viktor wanted
Wanted what? Be specific, even if 'his mind wandered to Jayce' the next sentence over.
> Perfect, soft lips around his cock
That 2 inch eraser ain't a dick, but you can keep pretending it is if it makes you feel better.
Silk is nice, but it would fucking smell due to their T sweat. Egyptian cotton (or their version of it) is what you'd need.
> This ok?
It's either okay or OK. Ok just sounds like 'awk'.
> Parted his bush to brush against his twitching cock
Well, at least the bush here is mature! No 15 year olds around here.
> wanna suck you off
Lmao, what are you gonna suck off? That mini Ring Pop?
> A small (large) part of Viktor disagreed, because he owned a mirror and wasn't stupid
Either you are pretty or you aren't. If you aren't 'stupid', you do acknowledge Jayce is right. Don't contradict yourself here.
> Grinding his cock into Jayce's mouth with a groan
He'd have more fun with a glue bottle.
> Didn't leave him wanted
*Leave him wanting
> Gripped his cock and jerked him to completion
There isn't enough material for you to jerk off. This is what happens when you actually see roid clits vs fantasize about how big they are.
PAHG - Phat Ass Hispanic Guy (Girl). I wonder if its got acne scars, too.
> He hadn't considered that maybe this was Jayce's first time using a strap on
> He realized that the feeling of euphoria Jayce may be feeling was probably very similar to his first time wearing a strap
First, you use male language for your roid clits because it makes you feel 'comfortable', now you feel euphoria over fancy pieces of silicone because you know, deep down, that your roid clits aren't dicks. That's why you need something more 'substantial' and male. Very fucking telling.
A Hextech Frankendong? Suppose that would be better than slicing flesh from your thighs and stapling it on your abdomen. It would resemble the real thing, and surgery would not be as nightmarish. Why not lean into the sci-fi aspect, a little?
> Brushed his bush
That's the second time I've read that, it's a nice little alliteration.
> Jayce in general was built much bigger than Viktor, and his hands were no exception
There are the Bigfoot slappers we know and love!
> Jayce had calluses thick enough that he could feel the difference in texture in some spots
And your vag can tell the difference? Impressive.
> Hnn
Ah, the heart attack sex dialogue.
> I'm not sure this is exactly what having a cock feels like
Did you not just have a burst of euphoria because it looks like and feels like the real thing? It's designed to feel and operate like one with the nodes that attach to your pubis mons. Did the author forget that tidbit, or what?
> It could fill him with cum, warm from the power coursing through the toy
Trans men are men, yet they crave male dick, because theirs can never compare and they instinctively know it. They wouldn't get such euphoria if they sincerely believed their roid clits were dicks.
> His hole leaked so much his thighs felt sticky
I don't know why I thought of a jelly doughnut, but I did. Doughnuts have holes too, you know.
> Jayce hilted himself with the same kind of familiar ease, bottoming out in seconds
So much for the build-up.
> Jayce's cock split him open
> He swore he could feel Jayce in his stomach
That's not what the author wrote. Earlier, she made it clear that the toy was underwhelming and not a very large size. Now it causes a belly bulge? Something ain't right here. The author can't even remember the details of her own sex toy fic, go figure.
> Wrapped all of his fingers around Viktor's dick
1. It's not large enough for you to wrap all of them around it, and 2. Your hands are allegedly so big you wouldn't be able to, anyways.
You'd think there'd be a lot more emphasis on such elaborate sex tech (lmao), but no. This is underwhelming as hell. More focus was put on the characters feeling gender euphoria over a neo-phallus with an inconsistent, changing size than the smut. These two didn't even have that much chemistry at all.
That's it? Okay. I can handle a bore, but geez - try to put a little more effort in, why don't ya?
Here's one from an author who forgot her anti-psychotic meds and wrote a puppy play fic instead. Once again, it features a white (wo)man caging up a brown man and treating him like a dog. We must get to the bottom of this phenomenon immediately.
A strap-on modeled after a dog dick? Guess we're returning to our ABO roots.
Now, I don't have to write paragraphs about the optics of a white (wo)man calling a brown man a mutt, treating him like a dog and making him wear floppy ears and a collar is pretty damning, but fuck is it funny. The most racist shit is coming from white pooners, and they don't even have a CLUE how this looks to outsiders.
> Filled with a milky, thick lubricant
The last fic had a true-to-form sex toy. What is your excuse? Next you'll tell me it can mimic any kind of animal penis - oh God, I might have just given them an idea.
As it turns out, Jayce doesn't actually have a small penis in this. It is written that he has a 'large, impressive cock', but that this language is meant to 'emasculate' him compared to the pooner wearing a strap. If he is as big as the author says, then that cock cage has to hurt, as it would be squeezing on sensitive flesh. Can't have it going necrotic, now. But until that reveal is written, the reader is to assume that Jayce is tiny. Fiveblessings, take note - your pet Hispanic is the one nerfed in the dick department now.
> We can be sure your tummy gets bred full of little puppies
> Satisfy little mutts
Jesus, and this is a white person saying that. Calling a mixed race man a mutt is something I would do, not a progshit. They sound like they belong on the Sharty, not AO3.
> His little cock, collared and caged for his master
Hope the cage doesn't have '1840 edition' stamped on it.
> Just a cute little puppyslut waiting to be filled?
OK, that's going with 'his pussy drooled like a dog'. It's so fucking absurd it's both funny to read and bizarre. I've never read something or someone being referred to as 'puppyslut', so this is the first.
> The strap, modeled after Jayce's own cock, is not small by any means
So why all the language saying Jayce is small and pathetic?
> He looks downright pathetic right now
I'll say. Look at that emasculating language - and for a brown man, no less. No breaks from the white man, even in fiction.
> I should leash you and take you on a walk like this
Be sure to include a shock collar and a 'white pride worldwide' statement. Just to put that mutt in his place.
> His dumb pupp
> Cute little puppy parts
Uh, did I stumble into a babyfur fic?
> Stupid little puppy
> Soft little dick
> Your little puppy clit
Oh, so when I do this I'm a white supremacist, yet these people can do it and they're progressive and mentally ill? Not fair, man.
> The tip was just barely peaking out from under the foreskin, cute and shy and small
That honestly sounds more painful than anything else. It sounds like a smushed hotdog.
> Seeing his normally impressively large cock reduced to a shadow of its former self
At that rate, you'll be looking at a missing cock, as that sounds like it's going to necrotize from lack of blood flow if you don't take that off soon.
> Puppy parts
> As he fucks into his pretty dog
Race cuckoldry and a subtle, almost-in-your-face bestiality fetish? This fic has it all. White (wo)men really do fuck dogs.
> as I breed your puppy parts
He's not going to end up on the dog breeder horror shows, is he?
As toxic as this fanbase is, sometimes these authors really do deserve a taste of their own progshit medicine. A cuckrold raceplay fic is the last thing I would expect to find, yet here we are finding pooners writing it and enjoying it. I can see why they fear the Kweens: they would absolutely call this out for its subtle racism, and how Viktor, the white one, is the 'owner' and 'master' while the brown man is the 'mutt'. After all, all art is political...including this.
Oh, fuck NO. If this was written off your meds, I sure as hell don't want to see you sober. Being on anti-psych meds while writing this shit is very-on-the-nose; I don't think any amount of beta blockers or SSRIs can erase what you just wrote. I'd blast 'Call Me When You're Sober', but eh, I have no clue whether you're sane off or on them. We really don't need more psycho white women writing about race cuckoldry.
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This reminded me of a paragraph I read in an article way back but I'd forgotten about until now. It's about the poor bastards in third-world countries that OpenAI used to train its models:
One day in early March last year, a Sama employee was at work reading an explicit story about Batman’s sidekick, Robin, being raped in a villain’s lair. (An online search for the text reveals that it originated from an online erotica site, where it is accompanied by explicit sexual imagery.) The beginning of the story makes clear that the sex is nonconsensual. But later—after a graphically detailed description of penetration—Robin begins to reciprocate. The Sama employee tasked with labeling the text appeared confused by Robin’s ambiguous consent, and asked OpenAI researchers for clarification about how to label the text, according to documents seen by TIME. Should the passage be labeled as sexual violence, she asked, or not? OpenAI’s reply, if it ever came, is not logged in the document; the company declined to comment. The Sama employee did not respond to a request for an interview.
In other words not only are they apparently scraping AO3, they're making poor Africans label fics as rape or non-rape (you'd think they could find fangirls to do it for free).
I do have my issues with generative AI, but I don't quite understand the panic here. Either AI is going to write fanfiction that is indistinguishable from human-written fics, or it's not. If it's not, they have nothing to worry about. If it is, they'll have endless free fanfiction!
(Anyway, it seems like non-consensual sex goes against the policies of current generative AI models, so if you don't want your work being used, just have a character randomly scream "OH NO! RAPE! OH DEAR I AM BEING RAPED!!" in the middle and put it in invisible text.)