Army medics have pretty much seen everything: faces getting blown off by IEDs, and yes, even cocks blown to pieces. And since trans men are indeed allowed in the US military now (and UK military), the medics are going to know you're trans. Not to worry, though - this injury is not bad, not terrible, and will swiftly be replaced by excessive amounts of pubic hair shaving. No, I'm not fucking kidding.
Glad to see Ghost is suffering from that T-induced pooner rage. A shame it doesn't threaten anyone else - well, unless you're schoolchildren.
Anytime I read about genitalia being 'plucked' it makes me think they're being plucked like the strings of a guitar or that they can be removed like tweezing the eyebrows. It's not a good verb to use when you're trying to be sexy.
Plus, this fic was beta'ed, and yet it has some weird word choice. 'Breathlessly questioned his deft fingers'? Why are you questioning them if you were brought to orgasm? Is there an invisible question mark appearing behind your head at the performance? If your fingers are deft, why are they being questioned? This is what happens when your beta readers are your fellow troon friends - they won't catch these mistakes, even when they are fellow autists. They just happen to be the wrong kind of autists.
Now, as mentioned earlier, there's a lot of talk about shaving pubic hair in this, and the author isn't even consistent with w
hat colour the pubic hair is, either. Here, the pooner is worried about getting her crotch shaved, even when real men don't give a shit either way. This pubic hair is a source of pride for the pooner, like a Rapunzel trap snatch she can attach her pride to. And no, they don't even bother cleaning the wound. You'd think that would be the first issue. OH AND THEY'RE DRY SHAVING HOLY FUCK
So, we know that Ghost's bush is so thick his pubis mons, labia, and 'cock' - read: clitoris - cannot be seen. The bush is described as a 'reddish brown' despite Ghost being a dirty blonde (yes I am well aware that pubic hair can be darker than your normal hair, but it's within the same shade), and now it is described as 'dark', as if it's a dark brown. I cannot believe I am having a discussion over fucking pubes, but this is what this fic is talking about, so...
You got that
fat fucking bush because of testosterone, and Soap is coated in hair like some pooners tend to be. And no, it doesn't give you a 'manly, bear' look, it just makes you look like Sasquatch. I am coming after you with hot wax and industrial shrink wrap tape, and I am sure a gay man is sure to agree.
Now, that said...Ghost says that his 'cock' cannot be seen inside the pube thicket, and that it gets nice and full after it's shaved. How big is it, you might ask? Well, going off of usual measurements of 'T dicks'...you get, on average, 1-3 inches! Maybe 4, if you're lucky. To normal men, that's a micropenis - or the average Indian man's penis. Such a thing to be proud of, and in 'gay porn' no less!
Yes, I'm sure people are salivating over the fact that a 'man' is going to give head to a three inch clit. Sexy. The entire purpose of porn is that it's an exaggeration of f
antasy, and no one is going to get off knowing this is how big trans men get. Well, unless you're part of the clique and are too retarded to tell the truth.
I also do not know why Ghost is harping over something so trivial as pubic hair - that's also a feminine coded thing. It would only take 2-3 months for it to grow back, faster if you have coarse hair. You probably would be told to trim it anyways
if it's getting caught in your goddamn zipper.
Oh, and I forgot: they just casually rip the scab-not-scab off, and it has 'pinkish blood', which usually means arterial blood. The author probably meant reddish-brown blood, which means the wound is partially sealed.
Fucking ouch. You never rip a new scab off. Try using mineral oil - AFTER YOU CLEAN THE DAMN THING! You want that shit to get infected? Good luck trying to tell the army medics about your Rapunzel pubes and how special they are when you got necrotizing fasciitis in there. If the scab is big enough to stick your fingers inside, even metaphorically, g
et those fucking stiches.
> Full, bare glory
> Standing proud
> Bulbous, pink head peeking out from foreskin
You'd be forgiven if you thought this was between men. Pooners love using male terms for male anatomy for their poonerized characters. What she means by 'foreskin' is 'prepuce', aka the clitoral hood. It's not a foreskin. And remember, always, that these 'proud cocks' are only three inches big
Beta readers will not catch every mistake you make, so don't feel bad if you don't have one. Sometimes they'll approve weird-ass lines like 'things slipping perverse depravity from his mouth' which, read aloud, takes several tries to make sense. You could've just used 'perverse depravity slipping from his mouth' or simply 'depraved things' as 'perverse' and 'depravity' are synonyms. See? Now I'm getting really autistic.
Yes, I'm sure your three inch cock is throbbing so hard...within that ugly-ass scab you didn't clean. BTW, Soap is fucking himself on Ghost's
filthy boots with pubic hairs on the ground. Disgusting. And no, I don't know anyone who dreams about a three inch cock (so HUGE, man), peeking out of a pooner's T-riddled body.
There's a mention of the Adonis belt, which is more pronounced in men. It can be found in women, but you need 15-20% body fat for that. Men have a more prominent one because of reduced fat and the way their body processes it. The author thought she could make pooner Ghost a Real Dood, but I know better.
> Thick folds of his foreskin
Not a foreskin, you retarded little autist. Can't even get the proper kind, ffs. Anyways, I'd like you to know that Ghost got Soap to 'choke' on his fingers - which will inevitably be longer and thicker than that 'thick' roided out clit these retards call a cock. How can it be 'arched and straining' w
hen it's stuck underneath the clitoral hood? The clitoris is NOT A FUCKING PENIS, YOU FUCK
Also, I hope someone cleans up those spit-soaked pubes on the floor. Someone get me a mop and a vacuum.
Look at these lil doods picking each other up and throwing each other around...when they can't even beat the weakest men in grip strength tests, lmao.
I am once again asking that beta readers do better. "Gliding under the moon in the middle of a forest" - well you aren't really gliding, because the trees would be blocking the moonlight and you'd be tripping on undergrowth. Unless you mean a 'field in the middle of the forest' or a 'clearing in the middle of the forest'? Damn fucking right this is mystical; your three inch dick ain't shit to actual gay men. They'd laugh at you until you have a mental breakdown.
Never thought I'd read Soap having Lizzo's vagina, but hey, anything is possible. Also, 'proud' and 'slight' are two words you don't want to use together. If you have a 'proud' dick, that shit is gonna show. If you have a T-dick, it's going to be 'slight'. Nice clockable language there, dood.
Yes, do tell me how you're going to achieve that with a three inch penis. Tell me how one pooner is going to fill up another with equipment even your basic Korean woman would laugh at. The casual admission Ghost is actually a virgin because no one wants to fuck a T-dick is rather telling, don't you think?
Now, when I say this shit gets worse...it gets worse. I abused the highlighter function due to how ridiculous this gets.
Yes, the vagina can do some magical things once it's properly aroused. However, on T, it just so happens to dry out so badly it starts bleeding and cracking. That's one thing you will never read in these fics - it would destroy the fantasy. Pooners love to gatekeep the realities of their 'healthcare' so I'll leave you with these hate facts so you'll never be fooled again.
I'd also like to reiterate that, on average, the 'T-dick' only gets 1-2 inches long. That's not including girth, which isn't that much bigger. I use three inches because I'm feeling generous, and even with metoidioplasty, you get four inches. How does it feel knowing that the smut you're reading features 'dicks' that are smaller than your average Indian man? That's gotta hurt. It also calls into question the 'heavy and throbbing' description, because, earlier in the story, it was 'barely seen' behind those Rapunzel pubes. Heavy and throbbing makes me think eight inches or more; this makes me want to take out the tape measure and channel my inner Korean (I am not Korean).
"Staring up at him like he's something to wonder about" - get a new beta, retard. He's already in wonder staring up at you, while I'm here with the calipers. Time to take some measurements.
You cannot 'gorge (him)self', or make obscene slurping noises on a bit of genitalia women normally laugh at. There's a reason why toys are used. I wouldn't call it a 'life source', I'd call it humiliation.
Again...how are you choking around a literal micropenis (and it isn't even that!) I've had suckers that have been bigger. I'm sure there's licorice that's bigger, too.
The bit about Ghost taking a big ole whiff of Soap's soaked underwear reminds me of 'Call Me By Your Name' where Elio does the same thing with Oliver's swim trunks. It's fucking weird, AND that underwear has not been washed IN DAYS. I do not care if you are male or female - TAKE A GODDAMN SHOWER AND WEAR CLEAN UNDERWEAR BEFORE DOING THIS. YOU WILL STINK TO HIGH HEAVEN.
I'm also loving the implication that Soap is tinier than Ghost is, even when they're both on T and T dicks roughly get around the same size. Squeezing it just sounds like it hurts, because the roided out clit doesn't have the same network of muscle and nerves as actual dicks do. One would think this would lead to a boot to the face.
(And they still haven't addressed that gaping wound next to Ghost's T-dick that is leaking blood everywhere. Imagine the smell.)
Pooners really give themselves away when they constantly talk about feeling 'safe'. It's always about safe spaces and checking in with them. Almost as if...they're a fucking woman who never lost that female socialization, and end up sounding more womanly than your stereotypical California Valley Girl. Sucks to suck.
I'd go stupid, too, because this 'dood' is telling me it's a big and throbbing dick when it's ti
nier than your average Indian. It wouldn't be 'pretty', it would just look like an embarrassing micropenis
because it is one. This isn't just suspension of disbelief, it's requiring you to believe that testosterone actually gives transman penises comparable to those of actual men.
Again with the pubic hair fetish. In your field, I'd worry more about pubic
lice than huffing days old musk that would stink to high heaven (and T does make pooners stink). Use some soap (no pun intended) you dirty little bitch.
(And pinching a roided out clit sounds painful. How sexy.)
"Victory of the violence." What, are you writing Medieval poetry? This doesn't sound as pretty as you think it does.
Now, time for some T-dick size discourse. We already know that they barely get 3 inches big. So how, exactly, is Ghost 'sheathing himself' inside, when he'd barely penetrate an aroused vagina? The tidbit about 'kiss(ing) the cervix' is a giveaway too, because you have to be pretty long and endowed for that, and have the woman sufficiently aroused so as not to hurt her. Here, this is a microdick barely penetrating a vagina (that's magically dripping, despite years-long usage of T) and we are supposed to believe this pooner is in so deep and is so thick they're nearing the cervix. Even the 'monsterfucker' fandom is more believable and I cannot believe I am saying that.
These people have not showered in days, mind you. They are still coated in gunpowder, blood, grime, and whatever else they encountered on their mission. AKA they fucking s
tink. You're huffing BO like an Indian huffing a white woman's scent, buddy. And
licking him there like he's a dog? Fucking gross, you better chug that Listerine, asshole.
Ah yes, the 'full access' term when you have a literal micropenis. You know, the thing actual men loathe having and cry over? It sure is easy to take w
hen you are barely larger than your pinky finger.
This is the first time I've ever heard 'cocklet', and it does not evoke the mental image this retarded pooner wants me to. It's almost embarrassing to read aloud, because no man would have pride in that term. But a pooner fetishizing a man's body that she can never have sure would.
Now, as for the language used, 'milking' the cock here would imply that there's sperm to be had. There isn't, because these are two women. This is a T4T 'breeding' fic with no sperm and no possibility of getting pregnant. It's just flat out stupid to read. The pregnancy thing is merely a fetish, because pooners, despite their hatred of Andrew Tate and men like him, have tradwife fantasies that would make him blush. They'd love nothing more than to be 'bred full and safe' in their little home with the white picket fence. You cannot achieve that with a 3 inch roid clit that does not produce sperm and d
oesn't even go in all the way. How the fuck are you 'pounding' into someone w
hen you're barely inside?
Le sigh. This language only works
if the one doing the fucking actually has a penis and testicles. You know, male anatomy? Because you're just scissoring with your roid clits, and the 'cum' is vaginal secretion that magically hasn't dried out from all the years of T abuse. How can you possibly mark someone up and 'disfigure' them w
hen that heavy and throbbing penis you claim to have isn't even bigger than your pinky finger? That's what happens when you have autism like me. You notice one thing, then another, and then it all starts going to shit.
I have said this before, and I'll repeat it ad nauseum: describing the vagina as 'hole' is terribly unsexy. When it's two men, it's fine, because the anus is the only hole they are using. Women have four - urethra, vagina, anus, and Bartholin's glands. Words have meaning, and 'hole' is unsexy when 'entrance' will suffice.
As for me? I wouldn't be crying on that roid clit. I'd be crying at the sight of it. Heavy and throbbing my ass.
It's not a real penis; you will never impregnate anyone. Not even an Indian woman would be fooled by it. Phallic worship exists for a reason, and that is not a phallus. I've seen erasers bigger than that thing you call 'heavy and throbbing'. Pump you full of what? Vagina juice? That's not going to stick?
The 'come inside' sentence is only hot w
hen it involves an actual penis. That is capable of ejaculating sperm. That roid clit isn't connected to any testicles, so w
ho the fuck are you impregnating? 'Breeding' implies use of sperm. You cannot breed if you are both effectively sterile, try the fuck again.
Ah yes, three inches being 'fully inside'. Again, there are erasers bigger than that.
What fucking load? That shit ain't gonna stick! It's gonna slip right out because it isn't the same consistency.
"Get all kinds of things inside him" - Well, knowing the roid clit is 1-2 inches on average, you're gonna need a bigger dildo.
This is one of the weirdest smut fics I've ever read, totally delusional. Lots of talk about pubes and breeding, despite neither producing sperm. My suspension of disbelief has been nuked from orbit.
BTW the open wound was bleeding the entire time, large enough to need stitches, and there are still pubes on the bathroom floor. Meaning their bed is going to be coated in blood, pus, pubes and T-orgasm. I hope there's enough Oxi-clean to get the stains out.
