MarvinTheParanoidAndroid
This will all end in tears, I just know it.
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The problem with a Raditz redemption arc is that it'd be very difficult due to him being so openly duplicitous & arrogant, begging for mercy & showing none when it's given to him. Piccolo Jr. was "evil" in that he wanted simple revenge against Goku but was himself not a two-faced opportunist, even showing up to a martial arts tournament for a fair fight with Goku.Thing is, there's an official Raditz lived storyline. It's a part of the What-If Saga in Budokai Tenkaichi 2. It's actually fairly well made too.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=28tjvlbKpWs
However, Masako has nearly no idea how writing side characters exactly work. He makes them borderline Gary-Stus, where they take over so much screentime that it feels like they almost became the main stars.
His Raditz story (which I read till around the Beerus Saga) basically cucks Vegeta around out of all his moments, Raditz is practically jammed in them instead of Vegeta. This is even more prevalent in the Nappa story where Vegeta is the equivalent of Yamcha, all the while when Nappa:
This was all just Nappa's What-If alone. The Raditz one is a mixed bag.>Comes with Trunks in his Saga as Future Nappa
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>Fuses with Gohan to make Naphan
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>Turns LSSJ only because he's swole, & MasakoX is lazy.
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>Takes over Vegeta's whole arc about meeting his long lost brother, by putting Vegeta aside like some background NPC, in his own arc.
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One thing I don't have a pic for, but at the time of Buu Saga, Tien & Chaotzu become Babidi's lackeys.
Now that's not a bad thing in it's own, however it only works when it's natural. Like, a character who you want to see more of cause you like it is natural (I feel this for Yamcha & Krillin), VS a character that gets an oversaturated amount of screentime, & that on top of story being biased to them.
You can make it happen but it would have to be fully driven by Raditz's self interest, the cost of which is Piccolo is no longer Gohan's mentor & Raditz gaslights Goku's death onto Piccolo (after Raditz has apparently killed him so Piccolo can't rebuff his half-truths (Piccolo has a fakeout death so Goku can come back)) as a form of manipulation to save his own skin from Vegeta & Nappa for losing them a chance at immortality with the Dragon Balls.
In the end, Piccolo's role in the story gets supplanted entirely by Raditz and Gohan has a semi-warranted hostility toward Piccolo, until Raditz dies in an impulsive self sacrifice (fully role swapping with Piccolo) and coughs up the full truth to Gohan, telling him he's a true Saiyan warrior & how proud he is of his nephew before croaking. Gohan has mixed feelings, having bonded with a gaslighting liar & misjudging the green man who only killed Goku incidentally in a botched attempt to defeat the genocidal invader he calls his uncle.
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