🍽️ حلال Connor Bible - Everyone's Favorite Molly Ringwald loving, adoption hating, aspiring writer and bellybutton fucker

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Which Connor is the most amusing?

  • Semi-Motivated Connor, aka "I've written 200 words on my new story and took a walk with my grandma."

    Votes: 127 13.2%

  • Depressed Connor, or "Give me one reason why I shouldn't blow my brains out."

    Votes: 73 7.6%

  • Edgy Rebel Without a Cause Connor, or "Shut the fuck up you stupid motherfuckering faggots!"

    Votes: 529 55.0%

  • Smug Pseudo-Intellectual Connor or "I've read Bret Easton Ellis, you guys!"

    Votes: 232 24.1%
  • Total voters
    961
Ruin said:
Well I tried being nice but since he's being a cock anyway I guess I'll drop his new draft of RE so everyone can laugh at it.
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Its better than the last one. Now its just really boring instead of being entertainingly inept.
 
@CatParty he's still at it :story:

If you want Molly to talk to you dude you should probably send her more notes. She probably gets so many she skims over some of them.
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Fuck Canada you're keeping all the Molly's from us
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So just as as a suggestion @Connor Bible , if you want to both get in shape and get writing I might suggest taking a short walk around the neighborhood just for exercise and to think up story ideas. It's a great way to relax and clear your mind when you're feeling down. I also like to make a list of everything I plan to do in a daily planner, just to keep myself on track with projects.
Why do I ever bother being helpful Connor wont even look at this
 
r00 said:
Its better than the last one. Now its just really boring instead of being entertainingly inept.
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Yeah, but it's still inept. Not only from a story telling POV but from a technical POV as well.

The structure is messed up, the characterization might as well not exist and there's to much "telling" and not enough "showing". It might be a bit of an improvement over the last version but that doesn't change the fact that it's still second grade fanfiction.
 
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