God of Nothing
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- Aug 31, 2016
I preferred that one three post greentext that one anon did in the previous thread.Ending was simply meh, I am stronger than you because I care nigga he can rip you in half with his bare hands and has 1000s of years more combat experience than you.
It could go with the existing gimmick of everyone (except Yakub) is not a complete monster so why not just talk it over? and write Freddy Mercury fucking off after Mark points out he killed more Viltrumites than anyone else combined. Give him a sequel-hook quip like "Our empires will clash and the winner will lead New Viltrum to glory... eventually" or something.