Sure. The assertion on that page is that the WSUS offline update is out of date. The first bullet point is a basically a printout of the process being run which shows off the update version. The next three bullet points are complete noise, with the fifth - stating that the update version in question is old - is the only relevant thing you need.
Why were the other three bullet points included? What do you -think- they're saying? Do you think they're important just because they look important?
On page 21, why do you need to mention the fucking address path when you're talking about the content of the logs? It's completely useless, particularly since he's just telling you what's listed in the file itself. Without the original server (which you would only get in discovery), the path information is completely fucking useless.
I don't have an issue with that assertion, or with their having made that argument. It's simply that the middle three bullet points add no relevant information.
Bad infosec is a fixture of US elections across time, so while I would like for items like this to be resolved, it's not unique here. It's also probably going to be forgotten about, yet again, after this election and left to rot.