💥 Trainwreck Onision / James Gregory Jackson / Gregory James Daniel/Jackson/Avaroe - Edgy king of the tweens, Vegan with deformed dick, Pedo, Destroying the Environment. Serial Domestic Abuser, Served the wrong Chris Hansen.

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Sorry this is a little late getting posted, but life has been a bowl of kumquats today.

Chapter 8

I went with the consensus and returned to whining -- it worked well for this chapter.
 
voiceguy said:
Sorry this is a little late getting posted, but life has been a bowl of kumquats today.

Chapter 8

I went with the consensus and returned to whining -- it worked well for this chapter.
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The emotional detachment from the entire incident could have been an interesting way to explore suppressing grief as a poor coping mechanism.

But it's Onision, and he can't fucking write.
 
I hate having to be picky about such a serious subject as school shootings, but was I the only one who thought the P.E. teacher's speech was used only as expedition? This is probably due to poor writing.

I really wish Onision did more research and improved his writing on such a serious issue.
 
And the chapters keep on coming:

Chapter 9

As you listen to the closing, you'll begin to notice that reading this dreck is starting to get to me.
 
voiceguy said:
And the chapters keep on coming:

Chapter 9

As you listen to the closing, you'll begin to notice that reading this dreck is starting to get to me.
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Listening to this, I wonder if Onision has ever actually had a conversation with a human being.
 
Sigyn said:
I'm going to pray for you when you get to the sex scene.
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There's a sex scene?

Ugh. It's like Onision looked up a list on every single cliche, cringeworthy fanfic trope and dumped them into his story. All he needs to do now is inexplicably save the world and my eyes will roll directly out of their sockets.
 
Concerning the Sex scene.
how old are these characters again?
because they all sound like middle schoolers to me
 
Oglooger said:
Concerning the Sex scene.
how old are these characters again?
because they all sound like middle schoolers to me
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They're 17. They have nothing to flesh them out but just remember that these are two minors living in his mom's house while his mom's sugar daddy pays for the bills. Stuff keeps going down and no one acts like a proper adult and calls his mother who is living with her boyfriend and just letting two unsupervised 17 year olds live their lives. Fun fact, did you guys know that Onision's mom was cited for illegally raising chickens?
 
ThunderCavalier said:
There's a sex scene?

Ugh. It's like Onision looked up a list on every single cliche, cringeworthy fanfic trope and dumped them into his story. All he needs to do now is inexplicably save the world and my eyes will roll directly out of their sockets.
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You sweet summer child.
EDIT: The horror, no really. All of those things and more. I feel dirty trying to read it.

obtuse said:
They're 17. They have nothing to flesh them out but just remember that these are two minors living in his mom's house while his mom's sugar daddy pays for the bills. Stuff keeps going down and no one acts like a proper adult and calls his mother who is living with her boyfriend and just letting two unsupervised 17 year olds live their lives. Fun fact, did you guys know that Onision's mom was cited for illegally raising chickens?
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Gregs mom is pretty crazy too. She always went on about how he was an Indigo child, which probably boosted his ego to where it is today. I'll see if can find sources. I think its in his videos where she appears, though.
 
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Sigyn said:
The horror, no really. All of those things and more. I feel dirty trying to read it.
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Don't lower yourself to his standards, let me do that for you. Speaking of which:

Chapter 10

In this one, even the President behaves like a teen doofus. You always read book critics saying that characters in some books are too one-dimensional. The book's characters have zero dimensions. The impossibility of that feat will be hard for any other author to compete with.
 
voiceguy said:
Don't lower yourself to his standards, let me do that for you. Speaking of which:

Chapter 10

In this one, even the President behaves like a teen doofus. You always read book critics saying that characters in some books are too one-dimensional. The book's characters have zero dimensions. The impossibility of that feat will be hard for any other author to compete with.
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I like the George W. Bush voice. :)
I'm probably being nit-picky, but it's kind of weird that Onision doesn't say which president this is. He doesn't even use a fictional name. I don't know, I'm probably over thinking this. It just seems weird that the president's only called "Mr. President."
 
Kataomoi00 said:
I like the George W. Bush voice. :)
I'm probably being nit-picky, but it's kind of weird that Onision doesn't say which president this is. He doesn't even use a fictional name. I don't know, I'm probably over thinking this. It just seems weird that the president's only called "Mr. President."
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Because to specify them would be to imply he knows who the president is right now. All he cares about is his little fantasy world; the rest is just background noise.

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Greg answers "How true is STA?" linked from: http://36.media.tumblr.com/d3adaf150a7d918a15759d730f573257/tumblr_nmvn498aQ51r1kiq7o1_1280.png

So he's pining over a girl he used to know and had his wife edit the book. This would be funny if it weren't so tragic.
Also, This is linked so would someone please archive or save it for posterity? Thanks.
 
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Kataomoi00 said:
I like the George W. Bush voice. :)
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I wanted to do Reagan, but I doubt onionhead knows who that is.

@Sigyn -- I noticed he claims to be pansexual, though I'm not sure if he means he'll have sex with anything human or that he considers himself to be all things sexual. Based on some of what I've seen of him, I'm leaning toward the latter.
 
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