🌟 Internet Famous The Mysterious Mr. Enter / Jonathan Rozanski's "Growing Around" - IndieGoGo Campaign Failed, John going off the deep end, "Turning Red" is ignorant about 9/11 (later retracted)

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AlexGroans said:
Updates from his DA:
First one is a rant on "Copyright Deadlock", which is pretty exceptional.
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3 Reasons why the Copyright Deadlock is stupid by MrEnter on DeviantArt

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Second, is this attempt at a title card.
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Title Card - Brave New Girl by MrEnter on DeviantArt

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As usual, it's color vomit with jagged linework that just looks all wrong, complete with Enter's favorite of crossdressing kids. Flaws of note include:
>Shadows and lighting are mismatched in a way that makes it look like a studio set, rather than a lawn
>Left of the flag isn't fully colored in
>The colors are sometimes not within their lines. Noticeable on the flag
>Sally's right arm is significantly longer than her left
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Please, if you're going to draw, get a proper drawing program Enter. Open source ones are free, and paid ones start at $20.
Also, it's an "It's all a dream" episode.
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Enter's tarded.
The YouTube deadlock technique is for when someone uploads a YouTube video THEY KNOW will get claimed no matter what (like if they're uploading footage of a Nintendo game). So instead of Nintendo getting 100% of the uploader's ad revenue, they add unrelated copyrighted material from other companies. Sure, all the money still goes to corporations and not the uploader no matter what, but at least Nintendo will get less then they would if it wasn't deadlocked.

Also, stop making title cards for TV shows that don't exist, it's embarrassing.
 
Manly-Chicken said:
Enter's tarded.
The YouTube deadlock technique is for when someone uploads a YouTube video THEY KNOW will get claimed no matter what (like if they're uploading footage of a Nintendo game). So instead of Nintendo getting 100% of the uploader's ad revenue, they add unrelated copyrighted material from other companies. Sure, all the money still goes to corporations and not the uploader no matter what, but at least Nintendo will get less then they would if it wasn't deadlocked.

Also, stop making title cards for TV shows that don't exist, it's embarrassing.
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Since he fills the scripts with a bunch of pictures, he might as well just make this a web picture book series, which is essentially all it is at the moment. At least then title cards can be the cover page.
 
I think the best part about the title card he posted is that the script for that episode hasn't even been posted to his DA

Side note: I still find this poll on his DA funny
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8777BB5 said:
Also if this episode gets made I would love to see the fit one of his ripoffs would throw over this being a dream episode (Those in the Cartoon Sperg community really hate "It was all just a dream" episodes)
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Probably because most of the time it's just lazy writing rather than doing something interesting, or with actual consequences. I know when I was growing up they were my least favorite episodes, except for when they were extremely outlandish and established the dream angle right from the start, and even that's not a guarantee.
 
MysticMisty said:
Probably because most of the time it's just lazy writing rather than doing something interesting, or with actual consequences. I know when I was growing up they were my least favorite episodes, except for when they were extremely outlandish and established the dream angle right from the start, and even that's not a guarantee.
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Dream episodes are always cop outs. “Let’s go ahead and raise the stakes dramatically and then take it all away so we don’t have to worry about changing the status quo for future episodes.” They’re almost always terrible, except when they get meta and start pulling inception levels of mindfuckery
 
Piga Dgrifm said:

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wow this is bad.
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I say this with complete seriousness, and without any condescension or sarcasm laced upon my lips: the made-up show Handi-Quacks from Family Guy was better than this. At least there the song didn't make my eardrums bleed, and I could understand what the hell they were singing about. Hell, even there they were able to make it so the ducks' mouths moved, instead of just zooming in on inconsistent artwork and concept images. Whereas this opening...

It's like if someone saw that one Parry Gripp song from Hazbin Hotel, and they said: "Yeah that: just sing fast LIKE THAT. DO THAT." with no regards to pacing or rhythm.



Now granted, I at least saw a storyboard in there (a single one at the beginning but it's there), so they have someone who's able to storyboard a (kite) transition well enough I guess.

Mhm, yeah, that's one sick-ass kite transition. Oh yeah also: they've been able to make storyboards this whole time and have done nothing with that!?

Handi-Quacks was written to be as simple and as terrible of a show pitch as possible for the sake of a joke. GA is a "real" show he's trying to create. Congrats, Enter: you somehow made a worse intro than the one featuring a bunch of fake terribly-drawn duck cripples.
 
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