Shucks! I missed the 100 mark! Curse it. That goes to show how...popular, this particular page is. Then again, I HAVE been busy.
OK! 2 points about this BESIDES that it is
NOT SAFE FOR WORK (NSFW WARNING!): 1; THIS IS NOT PORN! There ARE ways to pull off a good sex scene WITHOUT it becoming Porn (like how movies do it or Mass Effect; what I call "Cinematic Sex Scenes"), and dA of ALL places should realize this! 2; part of spite and part of humor, for all of you "Moral Guardians" that want to shun creativity and all that, I've decided to
fuck play with your heads. If you listen to "The Assumption Song" (Try this:
[link]), you'll see that at first, it SEEMS like something "pornographic", but ACTUALLY, it's NOT! Like that song, I get "creative" with this idea of screwing with y'all.
Despite the lack of effect "word-of-mouth" had for me...
If you think I have potential either with me as a writer and/or this series as a story, PLEASE Spread the Word about it! ALSO, if you decide to make "Fan Art" of it; I'd appreciate credit. Under that banner, I WILL Feature you! BUT, if you claim This Series as your own, 
Let's see if I can make a literate version WITHOUT raising any MORE flags than I already did. 
One Wild Ride: "Making Love"
I think it's clear that we ALL know what the two of those lovebirds are up to! That requires NO explanation! (Need a hint? Listen to THIS song: [link])
She squeaked in sharp pain as he just stabbed a dagger into the peach. He heard the thumping from upstairs, and he looked up with this "What the HELL" expression.
Right now, "The Man" was riding "The Woman" like a horse, going at it all-out! She smiled and moaned sharply like something from an 80s love ballad. Then someone was going to flick on the power to the computer; actually Gabriel booting up the home's Computer Systems & Server. He tapped into the Surveillance Cameras only to go to "THAT one", of ALL the ones around the house! He blushed with an awkward smile, and thought, "Oops; wrong channel..." Her moans of love could be heard on the computer. He's smiling out of embarrassment and not joy.
From Jay's perspective (you might want to rotate your heads 90 degrees until I can figure out how to square that away...), he stared into her face as she was squeaking and the thumping continued. (I tried to make this VERY first-person. If you try and think about how people appear coming towards you AND factor in how peripheral vision comes into play...I hope this feels realistic.)
With some thwacking, he was whipping his package with his ear-buds. (Yes, I was referring to Adam as "he" here, as part of my attempt to screw with your heads. ) He remembered the LAST time he walked into their room when he heard "strange noises" coming from there, so he told himself, "I am NOT going in there!"
Sadistic thoughts were racing around in Jay's head as he was SERIOUSLY getting into the groove (In case you can't comprehend all the symbols in that thought bubble, there's a jellyfish, a knife, fire, and a feather. HOW exactly do any of those items relate to THIS?! I leave this to YOUR imaginations!)! Amanda was squeaking and squealing, but only now did she start chirping cries of pain...Well, it certainly SOUNDED like pain, but could she have feigned it to get a better rise out of them? What's up with this?! You'll see NEXT week! Here's a hint: he is NOT abusing her, or else she would've been fighting him and the entire mood would be broken...not to mention some PROFOUND emotions!
She was reaching the "Breaking Point" (That's my term for "climax" because, based on my research, a female reaching climax starts to scream in a way that makes my Intelligence acknowledge as "MAKE IT STOP!" It's kind of like the sounds made from female video game characters when their HP reaches 0.)
Finally, she cries out "Ah, AH, AAHH-" (Illustrative note: No she is NOT crying down there! That is actually the FIRST time we get to see her irises; or "eye color"...AND it's the first time we see that detail at all!). All wide-eyed and sweet, she finally flinches up and yells at the top of her lungs almost like a reflex! She shimmies as much as possible, but only she can feel what this is like.
Meanwhile, inside she is getting squirted by toothpaste so she can brush her teeth (Casey is now "She". Just like before, I'm messing with you! ).
If you think this is dirty, you can go **** yourself.
Her moans of love could be heard on the computer. He's smiling out of embarrassment and not joy.
