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Drugs, somnophilia, and five beta readers later, and we get this tongue-tied action involving considerable uses of the word 'baby' and an ode to pretty pink genitalia.
Well, herbal medicine has the 'original' drug per se, you just need a bunch of them to get the same amount in a pill. Pharmaceuticals are concentrated versions of the drug.
> Make sure his delicate, sensitive skin wasn't breaking into hives
Oh, what would we do if our pale, delicate lil pooner was harmed? Give more sedatives, obviously, and sneak into their bedroom via the fire escape. It's OK because he's doing it for love.
> He had to take care of Viktor
I thought transmen could take care of themselves?
> He wasn't some sick bastard who'd been drugging his crush to look at his body or do things to it
You are a sick bastard drugging his crush to look at his body and do things to it.
> Was his pussy wet at night?
Vaginas are naturally lubricated; that's how they are. No, it doesn't mean we're 'ready to go' at a moment's notice. Leave it to a weirdo stalker to wonder if the FTM has the Rapunzel pubes.
> He didn't need Viktor finding out about this through fucking town gossip
If he does, and you don't suffer any consequences, what does that say about society? That a man, and a rich one at that, can get away with anything because he's rich and attractive. If Jayce was ugly, no one would be masturbating to this.
> Glued to Viktor's pale legs
Such beautiful white skin. We love our white boys, don't we?
> Making sure his cock had room to inflate
And he's got a Wacky Wobbly Inflatable Tube Man down there.
> Enclosed his entire hand around Viktor's fine-boned ankle
Really leaning into the uwu so fragile thing, aren't we? He's always so prone, delicate and fragile, despite these authors insisting you better respect them because they're disabled. They'd probably be the first to freak out if a man did this to them.
> The heat in the air carrying the scent of his fresh, clean pussy
Look at that. He really is clean shaven down there. No Rapunzel pubes this time.
> He also wished he could slobber all over his briefs
What is it with these dog descriptions? First it was 'pussy drooling like a dog' and now this.
> He looked at his pussy with heart-shaped pupils
We aren't in a cartoon, retard.
> Light pink beneath his creamy white thighs
What is this obsession with white skin and a pink vagina? These girls are more obsessed with white skin than the Groypers are.
> Either side of a tight, small hole that was more like a slit
Now we have an obsession with virginal pussy. Better yet - it isn't men writing this, but women.
> How that hole would be stretched out by his thick fingers
Let me guess. The 'his hands wrapped around his waist' is going to be used in this.
> Like some sort of creep
Nigga, you ARE a creep. You only got a pass because you're hot.
> It was so neat and felt untouched
Again with the virginal obsession.
> He had such a pretty pussy, so clean and groomed and delicate
You already wrote that.
> He watched the slow peeking out of Viktor's clit from under the hood and continued to lick over it a few times, trying to coax the little bud out
It's already out.
> You have the most perfect pussy I've ever seen
You wrote that twice already.
> That this wasn't just for Jayce, but for Viktor too
He can't consent, though. He's knocked out.
> A man obsessed, starved
Ah, this cliché.
> So add pervert to his long list of attributes. Who cared?
I love the unintended hilarity of this writing: you have a darker skinned man, also able bodied and hot, taking advantage of the disabled trans man. Anything is possible when you're sexy.
> His cock was swollen now, the bud peeking out from under the hood almost shyly
It was already peeking out.
> He petted around Viktor's hole with his middle finger to check
He's still unconscious, btw. But don't worry, he eventually forgives Jayce because he likes it and Jayce is just too hot.
> He gathered the drool in his mouth and let it fall off his tongue
There's that dog allegory again. They drool more than St. Bernards.
> Little droplets of saliva and pussy juice were sliding down his pink folds
Guess you could call it PASSION FRUIT eh?
> A tongue on his cunt, a dick in his pussy, balls in his mouth
> Another good look at that pink, swollen pussy
This author sure is obsessed with pink vulvas.
> Jayce fucked his hand erratically
Whose hand? His? With what, his dick?
> Wishing it didn't have to be so secretive
It doesn't? You can just ask. You don't need to sexually assault someone.
Now we discover that Viktor has put the pieces together, and decides he's not offended at all, actually. Sexual assault can be forgiven if the guy doing it is hot and desirable, and you're the poor little white girl - trans man, in this case- salivating over a huge dick.
To answer his question: no, a better revenge would be to shove the biggest dildo you can find up his ass, right against his prostate, and drug him AND tie him there and watch as his complains and struggles under the strain. He would like oral; he wouldn't like that kind of sexual torture. Fair is fair.
Of course he isn't angry! You can get away with anything if you have a 10-12'' dick. He's just mad he wasn't awake to reciprocate!
> He'd expected something rough, vile and malicious
He's hot so it's OK.
> His thin wrist held in a firm grip
Don't forget, these people are the same ones complaining about ableism, while writing Viktor like he's a stick bug. I will never take their faux offense seriously.
> How can an act so intrinsically violent be performed so gently?
Because he's hot. If Jayce looked like a regular Mexican, it wouldn't be so sexy. Women like reading about hot men with big dicks doing questionable things - better yet if it's on a 'virginal', petite white girl. Every basic bitch fantasy can be found here.
> Embarrassment or shame didn't have any place here anymore
Of course not. Because Jayce is hot.
> But to be explored the way Jayce had been exploring him, to be undressed and looked at and studied..it was pleasant
Again, it's because he is hot. Women like hot men doing this. If he was a drug-addicted homeless man, they'd be shrieking about rape.
> Those pink, capable lips. That square chin. That strong nose. He is so unbelievably handsome.
See point above. Chad Thundercock can get away with anything.
>Instead of asking like a normal person
Indeed, and that isn't addressed either. People just gobbled it up because - again - it's a hot man doing it. If Jayce looked like Cyraxx with rotting teeth they'd be getting The Ick and complaining.
> While he rolled his tongue against Viktor's clit hood, encouraging his clit to come out to play
What's it going to play? Table tennis with the Hispanic Hog?
> Force him to wrap his lips around his cock and suck
Who's sucking off who now?
> He ate pussy like a starving beast
Cliché.
Ah, we're really leaning into the virgin aspect, eh? Makes it so much hotter: the white (wo)man getting plowed by a well-hung Hispanic.
Cute how his toes curled twice, and his pussy pulses twice.
> Like he was a just-learning puppy who was going to be given into trouble
Five betas, and none of them caught 'given into trouble' should be 'getting into trouble'.
> No matter how much he wished Jayce would be the one to double down and press him into the mattress
You cannot tell me this is not your basic bitch female fantasy, just with the trans tag. It fits every single box.
> Felt his pussy tremble as he watched it
See point above. His 'virginal pussy' trembles at the sight of a big penis. Go figure.
> Revealing the hung cock he always suspected was there. Thick with a rippling vein on top, balls heavy below him
Just like a breeding bull. Just like a Snickers bar.
> He felt more like a slut than ever
Thought you were a virgin? At least Jayce thought so. Guess we're leaning into the Madonna/Whore complex.
> He felt like a fiend, unwilling to let Jayce leave until his load was inside him
Because fuck the fact you were assaulted, right? Gotta get that big load because your pussy is calling for it.
> Taking him as deep as his mouth would allow and pumping his hand up and down the rest of his impressive cock
I'm surprised we didn't get a deepthroating scene. Maybe next time.
> He'd never been so fucking full
> Feeling gut-deep
> So good, so big
Huh, no, 'you're so deep I can feel you in my lungs'? Shocker. Are we betting on 10'' or 12'' for this one?
> Like you wanted it too
He did after the fact, not before, because he was totally unaware of it. But it's fine to have your would-be rapist admit this because he's hot and after he promises to 'breed (his) pussy'. You wouldn't get the same reaction if he was average-sized, now would he?
> I'd still feel you. So big
OK I'll go with 11''.
> Stretched out against its will
How? It's doing what it was meant to do, and you just wrote he took it just fine. You don't get to walk that back after all the pussy pulsing!
> Their pubes damp with slick and cum
I thought Viktor was clean-shaven? Five betas and you forgot that?
Well, well. Jayce takes some accountability. It doesn't erase what he did, but at least he feels regret. He's only half of a rapist, you know. Naturally, Viktor forgives him because 1: he's hot 2. he has a massive dick and 3. he's good at sex. You think this works in real life? Surprisingly, yes.
Well at least he'd be consenting this time around, rather than be drugged out. Jayce broke into Viktor's apartment and did that; Viktor wasn't in a position where he was semi-conscious, realized it was Jayce, and was OK with it (that would be proper dub con but at least Viktor IS AWARE of what's being done). He was knocked out after being drugged.
This is a fic that hammers home the fact that women will forgive serious crimes provided the man involved is hot. The author explicitly mentioned that Jayce had a Chad jawline and a big dick, so what do you think the reaction would be if he looked like a homeless, drug-addicted Mexican? It wouldn't be as hot, because hot men tickle the pussy, and when the pussy gets tickled you get shit like this.
Thanks for admitting the obvious: everything is forgivable if you are hot and have a big dick. All that shit said about women's erotic fiction is real - and we have people like this to thank for admitting the obvious.
Do you remember Mo Meat Mo Problems? That has a sequel too! After getting yeeted through the universe, they end up in their cottagecore fantasy and an omega has to deal with their period cramps - er, 'heat'. Your tradwife fantasy, but with ABO, unfolds here.
Ahhh there're the pale, perfect hands we know and love! They're never blistered or with broken nails, but so perfect they could be the hands of a model!
> He got his partner back, his mate, and that was supposed to be the end
Viktor can't decide whether Jayce is his mate or not, because the author forgot that she wrote this sentence. You'll see in a minute.
> When he first woke up after being healed, Viktor thought it was intentional
No worries, he gets it back. Viktor does bring up this rejection and how that unfolds is a doozy.
> His waist thinner than Viktor used to know it
Huh, thought Viktor had the thin waist.
> They do not near each other
*Go near
> To know if I am too warm?
> Viktor huffs, his cheeks warm
What is warm down there?
> Amazing even
> The idea of sleeping beneath tons of blankets sounds amazing
Redundant.
We find out that Viktor is going back to his 'secondary gender', which you cannot escape from, either by augmentation or by self identification, because that's Just Biology. He is undergoing a pseudo period where, instead of menstruation, he produces an obscene amount of slick and builds a nest to entice an alpha for fucking. This is written with serious intent.
When she writes a puddle, she's being serious - omegas really do produce some kind of pseudo-vaginal fluid like they're a burst water main. This makes it easier for the alpha - who predictably has a large penis - to insert it and 'breed' the omega, as they are solely there to reproduce. Who does that remind you of?
> That isn't quite true
Viktor is referring to Jayce blasting a hole in his chest. He later has a mental breakdown over this memory, when he isn't 'gushing slick' as his body prepares him for that 12'' Mexican Man Meat.
> Soaking the walls with the smell of (an) omega in heat
Literally. It's like spraying Febreeze and emptying the bottle.
> Jayce used to be his mate
I thought he was? Oh right, we retconned that.
> He knows he is - was - his mate
You already wrote that.
> His alpha hurt him and betrayed him so many times, but that one -
> Can I hold your hand?
Wow. What a way to deal with a traumatic memory: a single sentence asking to hold someone else's hands. I'd be telling the guy to fuck off.
> Slowly extending his bony hand
Did he escape Auschwitz? He's got some meat in his hands, what the fuck?
What is the solution, you might ask? A good and deep fucking! Coming soon in a few chapters, you'll watch the Hispanic Hog in action. That omegan pink pussy doesn't stand a chance against that Snickers bar!
> He isn't mated, not anymore
You first said Jayce was your mate, then he wasn't, and then had to reiterate that he wasn't. Which is it? You've said this four fucking times already.
> The presence of the alpha is unsettling but
But he's handsome and has a big dick. He'll fuck the trauma right out of you.
I'll say. It will only get worse from here. I'll post the second chapter later - for now, I'm burnt out.
One thing I got from reading this chapter is this: Viktor as an omega is utterly helpless and so pathetic to the point it's better to just euthanize him. All he does is whine, cry and beg for Jayce to 'breed him' and all Jayce can do is pace like a wild animal denied their prey. The author wrote that they are no longer mates, yet Jayce still thinks they are mates, and the author forgot that their mating bond was broken...you get the drill.
> He isn't his mate
No shit, you've said that six times already.
> Being the pale skin and constellation of freckles
Ah, where would this fandom be without the love of that pale skin?
> Making his head spin and mouth fill with drool
These people really are dogs.
> His pale thighs, licking up every last bit of slick
And Viktor is a NY water main, leaking shit everywhere.
> Every instinct in his body demanding he care for his omega to be stopped
What a gentleman.
> It's cruel, and yet Jayce would never dare say anything in protest
It's fine, Viktor later whines 'alpha alpha' like a broken record and demands that he fuck him anyways.
Again with the 'bony, delicate' shit. Viktor is a man and is fully capable of taking care of himself. These people love infantilizing him despite saying that they have the right to do it because they're fat deaf and disabled or some shit. I don't care. Stop doing this shit, you dumb heifer.
> S'not safe
You're not being hunted like Bambi's mom, calm the fuck down.
> No one would care if they were
So why is Viktor afraid of going to jail, then?
> There's no reason to be embarrassed, not with me
He's literally spraying himself all over the walls like he's spraying estrus. Next thing you'll know, hunters will be using that shit to lure out wolves.
> His delicate fingertips
Fuck off. They really love the uwu delicate man here, don't they?
> The sweet scent of heat begging for Kayce to fuck him and breed him
And there goes his character development: he only exists as a hole to fuck and a vessel to pop out kits like he's a rabbit.
> He can't have everything he's afraid and longed for splayed out in front of him like a sick fantasy
It's Just Biology Bro, I gotta breed bro, I gotta dump my load in that omega pussy yo
> Jayce is going to knot his pants at this point
You mean knot IN his pants? Because the other suggests he's tying his pants into a knot.
Look at that. Poor Viktor, our poor omega, begs for the Alpha to breed him and the stalwart alpha refuses because he loves him too much
> He needs to comfort him and protect him and fuck him and make him happy
And that's all he's good for. Nothing like shoving people in a gendered role - but hey, it's ~transgressive~ if it's ABO.
Where is Viktor, you might ask? Trapped in the closet with R. Kelly narrating his life.
Oh for fuck's sake. I despise this characterization. They are literally acting like children! He didn't leave you - YOU TOLD HIM TO LEAVE.
> He had not wanted to be alone
He has spent the last chapter wanting to be alone, before that gets retconned and he wants that alpha dick. Tale as old as time.
> Viktor asked him to knot him instead of doing so
Because Jayce was afraid of doing something wrong. Viktor initially didn't want him there, changed his mind, and then decided he wanted Jayce to knot him. These people cannot decide what to do with their lives at all.
> He could become heat sick
This was already addressed in Chapter 1. There should not be so much focus on it.
> Perhaps if he had his full strength, he could have fought Jayce off
Laughably untrue. He's skin and bones - he couldn't even fight off a windchime in a stale breeze. Omegas are always weak and pathetic, and this hammers that point home.
> That was the Hexcore and neither of us were in our right minds
Jayce made the decision to kill Viktor. That wasn't the Hexcore, that was a directive from Mage Viktor which he fulfilled. Girl can't even get her own lore right.
> Resists the urge to sigh in relief in a carefully scoops Viktor up into his arms
Along with bad English, Jayce had already done that a sentence prior. Not to mention that 'escape attempt' was dumb as fuck, as Viktor's scent is everywhere and the cottage was small; there would have been no means of escape especially without a lamp in pitch darkness.
The author continues to show her intelligence by giving a person with a fever an ice-cold bath - the fastest way to drive that person into shock. Well done.
> He doesn't know what to do
You already asked this in Chapter 1. Your solution was to give your omega a heart attack from not using LUKEWARM WATER.
> If you would have taken me back as your mate
> It was never me who rejected you
Plot twist: it was the Hexcore! Forget all those moments of Viktor being afraid and wanting to be left alone - he just needs his alpha to knot him and breed him and take care of him because he's just so helpless Have you died from the cringe yet?
Great. More terrible characterization and bemoaning over broken mating bonds. Why couldn't the fucker just die in the ice-bath? Would've saved a lot of trouble.
Coming Home now has 9100 bookmarks as of this writing, 34k kudos, and 871k hits. It is the most popular fic in the fandom. However, some black Arcane fans noticed what I did: that Mel was the Token Black Bitch and have noted that the author, Beth, is absolutely intolerant towards shipping Viktor with women.
Since I have read the entire fic, a quick summary: Viktor forgives Jayce after endless gaslighting, and cried over a wedding scrapbook and Jayce had in order to entice him back. They broke up because Jayce sold their patent while Viktor was deathly ill, and forced him to sign away his intellectual property rights. The author forgot her own fucking plot point and it became THE fic everyone was shitting and pissing themselves over. Beth curates every single comment, so even simple comments like the ones above would get deleted.
Finally, some sense!
Well, herbal medicine has the 'original' drug per se, you just need a bunch of them to get the same amount in a pill. Pharmaceuticals are concentrated versions of the drug.
> Make sure his delicate, sensitive skin wasn't breaking into hives
Oh, what would we do if our pale, delicate lil pooner was harmed? Give more sedatives, obviously, and sneak into their bedroom via the fire escape. It's OK because he's doing it for love.
> He had to take care of Viktor
I thought transmen could take care of themselves?
> He wasn't some sick bastard who'd been drugging his crush to look at his body or do things to it
You are a sick bastard drugging his crush to look at his body and do things to it.
> Was his pussy wet at night?
Vaginas are naturally lubricated; that's how they are. No, it doesn't mean we're 'ready to go' at a moment's notice. Leave it to a weirdo stalker to wonder if the FTM has the Rapunzel pubes.
> He didn't need Viktor finding out about this through fucking town gossip
If he does, and you don't suffer any consequences, what does that say about society? That a man, and a rich one at that, can get away with anything because he's rich and attractive. If Jayce was ugly, no one would be masturbating to this.
> Glued to Viktor's pale legs
Such beautiful white skin. We love our white boys, don't we?
> Making sure his cock had room to inflate
And he's got a Wacky Wobbly Inflatable Tube Man down there.
> Enclosed his entire hand around Viktor's fine-boned ankle
Really leaning into the uwu so fragile thing, aren't we? He's always so prone, delicate and fragile, despite these authors insisting you better respect them because they're disabled. They'd probably be the first to freak out if a man did this to them.
> The heat in the air carrying the scent of his fresh, clean pussy
Look at that. He really is clean shaven down there. No Rapunzel pubes this time.
> He also wished he could slobber all over his briefs
What is it with these dog descriptions? First it was 'pussy drooling like a dog' and now this.
> He looked at his pussy with heart-shaped pupils
We aren't in a cartoon, retard.
> Light pink beneath his creamy white thighs
What is this obsession with white skin and a pink vagina? These girls are more obsessed with white skin than the Groypers are.
> Either side of a tight, small hole that was more like a slit
Now we have an obsession with virginal pussy. Better yet - it isn't men writing this, but women.
> How that hole would be stretched out by his thick fingers
Let me guess. The 'his hands wrapped around his waist' is going to be used in this.
> Like some sort of creep
Nigga, you ARE a creep. You only got a pass because you're hot.
> It was so neat and felt untouched
Again with the virginal obsession.
> He had such a pretty pussy, so clean and groomed and delicate
You already wrote that.
> He watched the slow peeking out of Viktor's clit from under the hood and continued to lick over it a few times, trying to coax the little bud out
It's already out.
> You have the most perfect pussy I've ever seen
You wrote that twice already.
> That this wasn't just for Jayce, but for Viktor too
He can't consent, though. He's knocked out.
> A man obsessed, starved
Ah, this cliché.
> So add pervert to his long list of attributes. Who cared?
I love the unintended hilarity of this writing: you have a darker skinned man, also able bodied and hot, taking advantage of the disabled trans man. Anything is possible when you're sexy.
> His cock was swollen now, the bud peeking out from under the hood almost shyly
It was already peeking out.
> He petted around Viktor's hole with his middle finger to check
He's still unconscious, btw. But don't worry, he eventually forgives Jayce because he likes it and Jayce is just too hot.
> He gathered the drool in his mouth and let it fall off his tongue
There's that dog allegory again. They drool more than St. Bernards.
> Little droplets of saliva and pussy juice were sliding down his pink folds
Guess you could call it PASSION FRUIT eh?
> A tongue on his cunt, a dick in his pussy, balls in his mouth
> Another good look at that pink, swollen pussy
This author sure is obsessed with pink vulvas.
> Jayce fucked his hand erratically
Whose hand? His? With what, his dick?
> Wishing it didn't have to be so secretive
It doesn't? You can just ask. You don't need to sexually assault someone.
Now we discover that Viktor has put the pieces together, and decides he's not offended at all, actually. Sexual assault can be forgiven if the guy doing it is hot and desirable, and you're the poor little white girl - trans man, in this case- salivating over a huge dick.
To answer his question: no, a better revenge would be to shove the biggest dildo you can find up his ass, right against his prostate, and drug him AND tie him there and watch as his complains and struggles under the strain. He would like oral; he wouldn't like that kind of sexual torture. Fair is fair.
Of course he isn't angry! You can get away with anything if you have a 10-12'' dick. He's just mad he wasn't awake to reciprocate!
> He'd expected something rough, vile and malicious
He's hot so it's OK.
> His thin wrist held in a firm grip
Don't forget, these people are the same ones complaining about ableism, while writing Viktor like he's a stick bug. I will never take their faux offense seriously.
> How can an act so intrinsically violent be performed so gently?
Because he's hot. If Jayce looked like a regular Mexican, it wouldn't be so sexy. Women like reading about hot men with big dicks doing questionable things - better yet if it's on a 'virginal', petite white girl. Every basic bitch fantasy can be found here.
> Embarrassment or shame didn't have any place here anymore
Of course not. Because Jayce is hot.
> But to be explored the way Jayce had been exploring him, to be undressed and looked at and studied..it was pleasant
Again, it's because he is hot. Women like hot men doing this. If he was a drug-addicted homeless man, they'd be shrieking about rape.
> Those pink, capable lips. That square chin. That strong nose. He is so unbelievably handsome.
See point above. Chad Thundercock can get away with anything.
>Instead of asking like a normal person
Indeed, and that isn't addressed either. People just gobbled it up because - again - it's a hot man doing it. If Jayce looked like Cyraxx with rotting teeth they'd be getting The Ick and complaining.
> While he rolled his tongue against Viktor's clit hood, encouraging his clit to come out to play
What's it going to play? Table tennis with the Hispanic Hog?
> Force him to wrap his lips around his cock and suck
Who's sucking off who now?
> He ate pussy like a starving beast
Cliché.
Ah, we're really leaning into the virgin aspect, eh? Makes it so much hotter: the white (wo)man getting plowed by a well-hung Hispanic.
Cute how his toes curled twice, and his pussy pulses twice.
> Like he was a just-learning puppy who was going to be given into trouble
Five betas, and none of them caught 'given into trouble' should be 'getting into trouble'.
> No matter how much he wished Jayce would be the one to double down and press him into the mattress
You cannot tell me this is not your basic bitch female fantasy, just with the trans tag. It fits every single box.
> Felt his pussy tremble as he watched it
See point above. His 'virginal pussy' trembles at the sight of a big penis. Go figure.
> Revealing the hung cock he always suspected was there. Thick with a rippling vein on top, balls heavy below him
Just like a breeding bull. Just like a Snickers bar.
> He felt more like a slut than ever
Thought you were a virgin? At least Jayce thought so. Guess we're leaning into the Madonna/Whore complex.
> He felt like a fiend, unwilling to let Jayce leave until his load was inside him
Because fuck the fact you were assaulted, right? Gotta get that big load because your pussy is calling for it.
> Taking him as deep as his mouth would allow and pumping his hand up and down the rest of his impressive cock
I'm surprised we didn't get a deepthroating scene. Maybe next time.
> He'd never been so fucking full
> Feeling gut-deep
> So good, so big
Huh, no, 'you're so deep I can feel you in my lungs'? Shocker. Are we betting on 10'' or 12'' for this one?
> Like you wanted it too
He did after the fact, not before, because he was totally unaware of it. But it's fine to have your would-be rapist admit this because he's hot and after he promises to 'breed (his) pussy'. You wouldn't get the same reaction if he was average-sized, now would he?
> I'd still feel you. So big
OK I'll go with 11''.
> Stretched out against its will
How? It's doing what it was meant to do, and you just wrote he took it just fine. You don't get to walk that back after all the pussy pulsing!
> Their pubes damp with slick and cum
I thought Viktor was clean-shaven? Five betas and you forgot that?
Well, well. Jayce takes some accountability. It doesn't erase what he did, but at least he feels regret. He's only half of a rapist, you know. Naturally, Viktor forgives him because 1: he's hot 2. he has a massive dick and 3. he's good at sex. You think this works in real life? Surprisingly, yes.
Well at least he'd be consenting this time around, rather than be drugged out. Jayce broke into Viktor's apartment and did that; Viktor wasn't in a position where he was semi-conscious, realized it was Jayce, and was OK with it (that would be proper dub con but at least Viktor IS AWARE of what's being done). He was knocked out after being drugged.
This is a fic that hammers home the fact that women will forgive serious crimes provided the man involved is hot. The author explicitly mentioned that Jayce had a Chad jawline and a big dick, so what do you think the reaction would be if he looked like a homeless, drug-addicted Mexican? It wouldn't be as hot, because hot men tickle the pussy, and when the pussy gets tickled you get shit like this.
Thanks for admitting the obvious: everything is forgivable if you are hot and have a big dick. All that shit said about women's erotic fiction is real - and we have people like this to thank for admitting the obvious.
Do you remember Mo Meat Mo Problems? That has a sequel too! After getting yeeted through the universe, they end up in their cottagecore fantasy and an omega has to deal with their period cramps - er, 'heat'. Your tradwife fantasy, but with ABO, unfolds here.
Ahhh there're the pale, perfect hands we know and love! They're never blistered or with broken nails, but so perfect they could be the hands of a model!
> He got his partner back, his mate, and that was supposed to be the end
Viktor can't decide whether Jayce is his mate or not, because the author forgot that she wrote this sentence. You'll see in a minute.
> When he first woke up after being healed, Viktor thought it was intentional
No worries, he gets it back. Viktor does bring up this rejection and how that unfolds is a doozy.
> His waist thinner than Viktor used to know it
Huh, thought Viktor had the thin waist.
> They do not near each other
*Go near
> To know if I am too warm?
> Viktor huffs, his cheeks warm
What is warm down there?
> Amazing even
> The idea of sleeping beneath tons of blankets sounds amazing
Redundant.
We find out that Viktor is going back to his 'secondary gender', which you cannot escape from, either by augmentation or by self identification, because that's Just Biology. He is undergoing a pseudo period where, instead of menstruation, he produces an obscene amount of slick and builds a nest to entice an alpha for fucking. This is written with serious intent.
When she writes a puddle, she's being serious - omegas really do produce some kind of pseudo-vaginal fluid like they're a burst water main. This makes it easier for the alpha - who predictably has a large penis - to insert it and 'breed' the omega, as they are solely there to reproduce. Who does that remind you of?
> That isn't quite true
Viktor is referring to Jayce blasting a hole in his chest. He later has a mental breakdown over this memory, when he isn't 'gushing slick' as his body prepares him for that 12'' Mexican Man Meat.
> Soaking the walls with the smell of (an) omega in heat
Literally. It's like spraying Febreeze and emptying the bottle.
> Jayce used to be his mate
I thought he was? Oh right, we retconned that.
> He knows he is - was - his mate
You already wrote that.
> His alpha hurt him and betrayed him so many times, but that one -
> Can I hold your hand?
Wow. What a way to deal with a traumatic memory: a single sentence asking to hold someone else's hands. I'd be telling the guy to fuck off.
> Slowly extending his bony hand
Did he escape Auschwitz? He's got some meat in his hands, what the fuck?
What is the solution, you might ask? A good and deep fucking! Coming soon in a few chapters, you'll watch the Hispanic Hog in action. That omegan pink pussy doesn't stand a chance against that Snickers bar!
> He isn't mated, not anymore
You first said Jayce was your mate, then he wasn't, and then had to reiterate that he wasn't. Which is it? You've said this four fucking times already.
> The presence of the alpha is unsettling but
But he's handsome and has a big dick. He'll fuck the trauma right out of you.
I'll say. It will only get worse from here. I'll post the second chapter later - for now, I'm burnt out.
One thing I got from reading this chapter is this: Viktor as an omega is utterly helpless and so pathetic to the point it's better to just euthanize him. All he does is whine, cry and beg for Jayce to 'breed him' and all Jayce can do is pace like a wild animal denied their prey. The author wrote that they are no longer mates, yet Jayce still thinks they are mates, and the author forgot that their mating bond was broken...you get the drill.
> He isn't his mate
No shit, you've said that six times already.
> Being the pale skin and constellation of freckles
Ah, where would this fandom be without the love of that pale skin?
> Making his head spin and mouth fill with drool
These people really are dogs.
> His pale thighs, licking up every last bit of slick
And Viktor is a NY water main, leaking shit everywhere.
> Every instinct in his body demanding he care for his omega to be stopped
What a gentleman.
> It's cruel, and yet Jayce would never dare say anything in protest
It's fine, Viktor later whines 'alpha alpha' like a broken record and demands that he fuck him anyways.
Again with the 'bony, delicate' shit. Viktor is a man and is fully capable of taking care of himself. These people love infantilizing him despite saying that they have the right to do it because they're fat deaf and disabled or some shit. I don't care. Stop doing this shit, you dumb heifer.
> S'not safe
You're not being hunted like Bambi's mom, calm the fuck down.
> No one would care if they were
So why is Viktor afraid of going to jail, then?
> There's no reason to be embarrassed, not with me
He's literally spraying himself all over the walls like he's spraying estrus. Next thing you'll know, hunters will be using that shit to lure out wolves.
> His delicate fingertips
Fuck off. They really love the uwu delicate man here, don't they?
> The sweet scent of heat begging for Kayce to fuck him and breed him
And there goes his character development: he only exists as a hole to fuck and a vessel to pop out kits like he's a rabbit.
> He can't have everything he's afraid and longed for splayed out in front of him like a sick fantasy
It's Just Biology Bro, I gotta breed bro, I gotta dump my load in that omega pussy yo
> Jayce is going to knot his pants at this point
You mean knot IN his pants? Because the other suggests he's tying his pants into a knot.
Look at that. Poor Viktor, our poor omega, begs for the Alpha to breed him and the stalwart alpha refuses because he loves him too much
> He needs to comfort him and protect him and fuck him and make him happy
And that's all he's good for. Nothing like shoving people in a gendered role - but hey, it's ~transgressive~ if it's ABO.
Where is Viktor, you might ask? Trapped in the closet with R. Kelly narrating his life.
Oh for fuck's sake. I despise this characterization. They are literally acting like children! He didn't leave you - YOU TOLD HIM TO LEAVE.
> He had not wanted to be alone
He has spent the last chapter wanting to be alone, before that gets retconned and he wants that alpha dick. Tale as old as time.
> Viktor asked him to knot him instead of doing so
Because Jayce was afraid of doing something wrong. Viktor initially didn't want him there, changed his mind, and then decided he wanted Jayce to knot him. These people cannot decide what to do with their lives at all.
> He could become heat sick
This was already addressed in Chapter 1. There should not be so much focus on it.
> Perhaps if he had his full strength, he could have fought Jayce off
Laughably untrue. He's skin and bones - he couldn't even fight off a windchime in a stale breeze. Omegas are always weak and pathetic, and this hammers that point home.
> That was the Hexcore and neither of us were in our right minds
Jayce made the decision to kill Viktor. That wasn't the Hexcore, that was a directive from Mage Viktor which he fulfilled. Girl can't even get her own lore right.
> Resists the urge to sigh in relief in a carefully scoops Viktor up into his arms
Along with bad English, Jayce had already done that a sentence prior. Not to mention that 'escape attempt' was dumb as fuck, as Viktor's scent is everywhere and the cottage was small; there would have been no means of escape especially without a lamp in pitch darkness.
The author continues to show her intelligence by giving a person with a fever an ice-cold bath - the fastest way to drive that person into shock. Well done.
> He doesn't know what to do
You already asked this in Chapter 1. Your solution was to give your omega a heart attack from not using LUKEWARM WATER.
> If you would have taken me back as your mate
> It was never me who rejected you
Plot twist: it was the Hexcore! Forget all those moments of Viktor being afraid and wanting to be left alone - he just needs his alpha to knot him and breed him and take care of him because he's just so helpless
Have you died from the cringe yet?
Great. More terrible characterization and bemoaning over broken mating bonds. Why couldn't the fucker just die in the ice-bath? Would've saved a lot of trouble.
Coming Home now has 9100 bookmarks as of this writing, 34k kudos, and 871k hits. It is the most popular fic in the fandom. However, some black Arcane fans noticed what I did: that Mel was the Token Black Bitch and have noted that the author, Beth, is absolutely intolerant towards shipping Viktor with women.
Since I have read the entire fic, a quick summary: Viktor forgives Jayce after endless gaslighting, and cried over a wedding scrapbook and Jayce had in order to entice him back. They broke up because Jayce sold their patent while Viktor was deathly ill, and forced him to sign away his intellectual property rights. The author forgot her own fucking plot point and it became THE fic everyone was shitting and pissing themselves over. Beth curates every single comment, so even simple comments like the ones above would get deleted.
Finally, some sense!
They're usually referring to pecs, but if they're explicitly referring to the zippertits, it's usually the visceral fat they're grabbing.
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How convenient.
No wonder he can wrap his lips around it. It's an inch long!
Someone doesn't have good internal logic.
