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sweater_supremacy said:
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Let's play teacher and grade this piece of shit. Since it's really short, let's say 10 points off for every error out of a possible 100. So okay, you ready? Here we go.

Well first of all, congratulation's spelled wrong. But it's not even a simple typo; two letters in two different places are wrong, which probably means they really didn't know how to spell it. So that's 20 points off for that, just because it's such an atrocious misspelling. But then why isn't it plural? You don't usually say "Congratulation!”, you say "Congratulations!". So technically that's nothing to do with the spelling; it's a different error altogether. So that's another 10 points for that. Then, "You've completed a great game"? Well that's just simply wrong; 20 points for that statement. Even if it was a great game, it shouldn't have to announce it. So then you have a punctuation error, because the next sentence begins with "and". Then you've got an extra O in "prooved". And proved what? "Proved the justice of our culture"? So it's saying that "you proved, that our culture has justice"? I dunno. "Now go and rest our heroes!", instead of "Now go and rest," comma, "our heroes!", it's telling you to go... rest our heroes.

Okay, well, sorry to say, but we had to take off 90 points. But hey, a score of 10% means that there's still hope. But wait. Is there any reason that there's one exclamation mark here and then there's three up there? That's another 10 points off for lack of consistency with a total score of 0. F-. It should've said, "Congratulations! You had the patience to sit through this awful game. You proved your nerdiness. Now go fuck yourself!"
 
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The Angry Video Game Nerd said:
Let's play teacher and grade this piece of shit. Since it's really short, let's say 10 points off for every error out of a possible 100. So okay, you ready? Here we go.

Well first of all, congratulation's spelled wrong. But it's not even a simple typo; two letters in two different places are wrong, which probably means they really didn't know how to spell it. So that's 20 points off for that, just because it's such an atrocious misspelling. But then why isn't it plural? You don't usually say "Congratulation!”, you say "Congratulations!". So technically that's nothing to do with the spelling; it's a different error altogether. So that's another 10 points for that. Then, "You've completed a great game"? Well that's just simply wrong; 20 points for that statement. Even if it was a great game, it shouldn't have to announce it. So then you have a punctuation error, because the next sentence begins with "and". Then you've got an extra O in "prooved". And proved what? "Proved the justice of our culture"? So it's saying that "you proved, that our culture has justice"? I dunno. "Now go and rest our heroes!", instead of "Now go and rest," comma, "our heroes!", it's telling you to go... rest our heroes.

Okay, well, sorry to say, but we had to take off 90 points. But hey, a score of 10% means that there's still hope. But wait. Is there any reason that there's one exclamation mark here and then there's three up there? That's another 10 points off for lack of consistency with a total score of 0. F-. It should've said, "Congratulations! You had the patience to sit through this awful game. You proved your nerdiness. Now go fuck yourself!"
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this makes me very happy thank you
 
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