<2022-09-06T06:02:30.000Z> Tactical: >writing more fatgang hellhound stuff
<2022-09-06T06:02:48.000Z> Tactical: eternal fatgang living rentfree in my brain
<2022-09-06T07:26:00.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: lmao
<2022-09-06T07:26:13.000Z> Tactical: i have now entered a new zone of autism
<2022-09-06T07:26:24.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: its not even about fat for me, just moderately chubby happy housewife... ah~
<2022-09-06T07:26:52.000Z> Tactical: I am very inspired right now
<2022-09-06T07:44:02.000Z> Tactical: damn it
<2022-09-06T07:44:25.000Z> Tactical: I wrote a few paragraphs of a "dark" hellhound story and I don't really feel the magic here
<2022-09-06T08:38:42.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: meh, that story didn't really do it for me; especially with the direction that the original writer was wanting to take it
<2022-09-06T08:39:03.000Z> Tactical: I liked the writing a ton and it appealed directly to me
<2022-09-06T08:39:13.000Z> Tactical: but I did not like the idea the ending was moving towards or the depiction of the society
<2022-09-06T08:40:15.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: did make think of writing my one story about the disgruntled vet, so I did that
<2022-09-06T08:40:40.000Z> Tactical: frankly the only part i did not like was the fact the main character complained so much but never did anything
<2022-09-06T08:41:34.000Z> Tactical: idk
<2022-09-06T08:41:44.000Z> Tactical: good writing and hit me right in the feels but obviously not monstergirl canon
<2022-09-06T09:22:58.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: You can focus on the dark aspects in a similar way that Hitchcock did for various things: apprehension and terror caused by the unknown
<2022-09-06T09:22:14.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Otherwise it comes off as edgy or overly goofy imo
<2022-09-06T09:24:43.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Will the MC be killed and eaten by the demonic dog woman? He doesn't know, and neither should the audience. Ham up her description in terms of how she's both beautiful and monstrous; so when she threatens or teases, is it because she really does want to eat him or does she mean something more... inappropriate? 
<2022-09-06T09:24:50.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Idk, that's how I view it anways
<2022-09-06T09:18:33.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Ever watch princess bride? Guy captured by a hellhound who keeps telling him that she'll kill him and eat him tomorrow, but never does.
<2022-09-06T09:18:08.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: You could make it dark via mamono standards typically, while putting a bit of comedy fluff on it
<2022-09-06T09:19:53.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Don't try to push the concept too hard for certain subject matter, otherwise it just doesn't come off as right. You have  dark without it being too much, just have to frame it right in terms of monstergirls
<2022-09-06T18:39:59.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Originally he was apparently planning for the guy to go postal and kill the kids 
<2022-09-06T18:40:27.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: One the best incidents of writefag correction I'd ever seen
<2022-09-06T18:40:39.000Z> Tactical: UH
<2022-09-06T18:41:04.000Z> Tactical: I enjoy a bit of grit but going postal and killing kids in a monstergirl story is just deranged
<2022-09-06T18:41:32.000Z> Tactical: I thought he was building up to some fight between him and his wife, maybe relapsing into the resistance or something and it becomes some Bladerunner shit
<2022-09-06T18:41:40.000Z> Tactical: not going fucking postal
<2022-09-06T18:44:34.000Z> Tactical: frankly that pisses me off since it seems just bad
<2022-09-06T18:53:19.000Z> Tactical: Thanks now I'm pissed off
<2022-09-06T18:53:56.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: yeah
<2022-09-06T18:53:58.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: I know
<2022-09-06T18:54:06.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: it was a whole shitfest
<2022-09-06T18:55:01.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: A better "edgy" situation would have been like what you were saying and refering to it as a "divorce", while his wife would be deciding that he needed rape correcion
<2022-09-06T18:56:43.000Z> Tactical: Haha
<2022-09-06T18:57:25.000Z> Tactical: Like frankly if you wanted to make it cool, have the protag join the resistance and battle his wife in some cool action, whatever
<2022-09-06T18:57:47.000Z> Tactical: But this just seems retarded edgy like GoT and immediately shifts my opinion to the protag being retarded
<2022-09-06T18:58:18.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: yeah
<2022-09-06T18:58:29.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: its why I can't like it imo
<2022-09-06T18:59:34.000Z> Tactical: Did he say why he wanted it to be retarded?
<2022-09-06T19:01:05.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: He thought it would play out better for a PTSD story, the thing is though: Vets with ptsd overwhelmingly don't kill people, let alone their own kids
<2022-09-06T19:07:58.000Z> Tactical: I don't get why we need to tell a PTSD story with monstergirls 
<2022-09-06T19:09:04.000Z> Tactical: I enjoy the characters feelings of not being as cool as his wife and impressing his kids etc etc, but the plot should have him resolve that 
<2022-09-06T19:09:17.000Z> Tactical: Not lead to some sicko fantasy
<2022-09-06T19:10:23.000Z> Tactical: Franky I'd be more than happy to rewrite that work and shift it to a man gaining his wife and kids respect, that's a much more heartwarming story
<2022-09-06T19:11:03.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Or having the guy healing from ptsd...
<2022-09-06T19:14:38.000Z> Tactical: We all have our preferences EXCEPT FOR THE KID AND WIFE DYING
<2022-09-06T19:20:17.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: I know
<2022-09-06T19:22:07.000Z> Tactical: I'm pretty sure the dude abandoned his story after being flamed for the 3rd Part
<2022-09-06T19:24:58.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: he did, I was there when it happened lmao
<2022-09-06T19:25:31.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Either he didn't get the point of Mamono or was there to stir shit, he seemed earnest enough so Im guessing the former
<2022-09-06T19:26:31.000Z> Tactical: Oh did he cope and get mad?
<2022-09-06T20:42:05.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Nah, he kept pushing back for awhile but I think they got through to him
<2022-09-06T20:57:03.000Z> Tactical: Noice
<2022-09-07T00:19:38.000Z> Tactical: Fat fox needed
<2022-09-07T00:25:27.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Chubby fox wife... could be nice 
<2022-09-07T00:25:55.000Z> Tactical: Elftummy is a bad influence
<2022-09-07T00:27:21.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Lmao
<2022-09-07T04:54:04.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: whats a good resource for NJP?
<2022-09-07T05:53:59.000Z> Tactical: What do you mean
<2022-09-07T05:54:36.000Z> Tactical: If you wanna get in touch with them you should ask SuperLutheran or email one of the TRS guys
<2022-09-07T06:00:57.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: ah, nah then
<2022-09-07T06:02:02.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: So they dont have a proper website or reference place for their actual stances or more then?
<2022-09-07T06:02:05.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: sad,
<2022-09-07T13:51:34.000Z> Tactical: They do yeah
<2022-09-07T13:53:28.000Z> Tactical: nationaljusticeparty.com/
<2022-09-07T14:19:29.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: I think jewgle is hiding that site lmao
<2022-09-07T16:33:36.000Z> Tactical: Probably, they don't want you to know about the NJP hellhound party program
<2022-09-07T16:51:58.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Yeah
<2022-09-07T16:51:58.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Yeah
<2022-09-09T07:44:35.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: new greentext
<2022-09-09T14:07:43.000Z> Tactical: Where
<2022-09-09T14:27:58.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: https://varishangout.net/notice/ANNh9N1zNPHbT5RQbA
<2022-09-09T15:12:31.000Z> Tactical: So true
<2022-09-10T05:32:00.000Z> Tactical: so cute
<2022-09-14T08:41:14.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: https://varishangout.net/notice/ANY8tl2oDql27DlKc4
<2022-09-22T22:38:54.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Hey was there a specific tutorial you used for WordPress? Been trying to set mine up for awhile but can't figure it out lmao
<2022-09-22T22:53:51.000Z> Tactical: I just messed around for a while
<2022-09-23T04:48:57.000Z> SpurgAnon@varishangout.net: Damn